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Old 2013-05-12, 12:18   Link #43161
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Indeed, it drift somewhere and no real aim... well not like my fic is better.
Me is worst. I reach the point where people just ignore me.

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(Main)Female OC is rare(I can only recall only a handful of fic with a female main lead) so I still wanted to do one but just don't have the mood to do it.

I think it will work even with Nemo (male OC) in the story. He is just a Janitor after all.

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The female Main protagonist's style is deliberately similar to Fuyuki(Generation Shift) in many ways yet different because she is more geared towards Iaijutsu and her style focus on one decisive strike while Fuyuki incorporate multiple light strokes after one heavy blow.

Her IS sheath sword to charge and release one powerful strike and it is the predecessor to Yukihana but without energy absorb or barrier void ability.

Not like it matter since it is powerful enough to take out most IS with one Hit.

Might name her Orimura Mafuyu......

The 'Orimura' has different Kanji.

probably have her joking about Ichika being related to her by blood...
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Old 2013-05-12, 12:22   Link #43162
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Well, to be fair, he kinda has to kill himself otherwise he couldn't reincarnate and he wouldn't be born because he wasn't killed......I have a headache.
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Old 2013-05-12, 12:30   Link #43163
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It really feels weird but Nagiko(I think her name is) really seems fit for elder harem
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Old 2013-05-12, 12:45   Link #43164
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Just be sure not to make them "Shallow love interests": I.E, they have nothing to them other than "I love Ichika". I did this on purpose for "The Soldier and the Bride", but to be fair, it goes both ways: Both Laura and Ichika are defined with their bond for one another.
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Old 2013-05-12, 12:48   Link #43165
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Now this is the problem. How do I make them fall in love with him. To everyone but Chifuyu and Tabane, he's just that domestic man that cleans up after them and the cute little brother of Chifuyu. Well at least without going through the serious arcs.
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Old 2013-05-12, 19:08   Link #43166
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It's Nagisako

Being D-list fodder I don't even SURE to feature her in my fic.

On the issue of "Shallow love interest", I invoked this per canon origin and gradually moving out (Madoka is the worst one in the regard). So far, Lingyin is on the top list, followed by Madoka, Houki and Cecilia need their arc, but putting Cecilia on the spotlight is hard >.<

(Thankfully Tate and probably Kanzashi as love interest is skipped outright)

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Me is worst. I reach the point where people just ignore me.
Ah, sorry, but your world building is too extensive and constantly changed, hard to comment when what I think is "Where to begin this???"

For what I remember now, it's the story of a male janitor (?) with (his?) plushie robot
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Old 2013-05-12, 20:09   Link #43167
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I find Nagisako's type is a nice contrast to Yamada. Enthusistic, realist meganekko meets timid, idealistic megnekko.
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Old 2013-05-12, 21:55   Link #43168
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Wait, so Mother's Day in the US was today... Who would Ichika give a 'mother's day gift to? Chifuyu? ... or would she refuse it? XDD

Spoiler for Bah, it's late and I can't think of anything... T^T:
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Old 2013-05-12, 23:14   Link #43169
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"So... you getting Your sister anything for mother's day?"

"Wha-? No! She's my sister. Why would I get her a mother's day present?"

"Well she has been taking care of you. providing for the home. Sending you to school. You know. Stuff."

"There is that. But she's still my sister. I don't need a special day to show her that I appreciate her. I do so everyday."

"Ooooh. sounds like someone's a siscon!"

"Shut up!"

AT THE SAME TIME AT ANOTHER PLACE

"So Chifuyu-san, you plan to get Ichika something for mother's day?"

spits out coffee, "Wha-? He's my brother! Why would I get anything for him on mother's day? He's not even female!"

"Well, looking back, he does mother you a lot."

"Look here. I provide for the house, I send him to school. I make sure nobody butts in to our affairs and protect the home."

"Sounds more like a husband to me."

"Oh really? What does a mother do?"

"Cooks your food, draws your bath, cleans the house, chides you to stop bad drinking habits, always reminds you not to get into trouble. Sees you off at the door everyday as you go to work."

"That's not a mother. That's what Ichika--... Oh god..."

"Exactly."
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Old 2013-05-12, 23:16   Link #43170
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@demino

High-tier material right there.
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Old 2013-05-12, 23:20   Link #43171
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Okay, mother's day everyone give flowers and presents to Ichika

EVERYONE
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Old 2013-05-12, 23:22   Link #43172
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More in the archive.

The Second Male

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Old 2013-05-12, 23:22   Link #43173
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Well that escalated quickly

Inspired by Tempest really.
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Old 2013-05-12, 23:26   Link #43174
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Mine was gonna be funny, but then it started going into the 'non-funny' area and I stopped... Gyah, I got work in a few hours... *forces self to sleep*
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Old 2013-05-12, 23:34   Link #43175
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"Hello, is this Charlotte Dunois?" A voice asked timidly.

"Uhuh, what do you need?" I replied, as politely as I could.

"I'm Charles, your half-brother… And father instructed me to call you, to tell you to pick me up tomorrow, from the airport… Is it okay?" The voice was deep, but soft…


Scratch that, waiting for the next chapter!

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Old 2013-05-12, 23:59   Link #43176
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Well the male IS pilot haters hve quieted down.
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Old 2013-05-13, 00:02   Link #43177
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Replaced by indifference it seems

My reaction describe them in general, only I find interesting thing after reading more than the title itself.
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Old 2013-05-13, 00:03   Link #43178
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Dafuq? Either way, he's a fan of vocaloid, that's good enough for me.
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Old 2013-05-13, 00:07   Link #43179
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Of course, my screwed logic said this lead to INCEST IS WIN-

*SHOT*
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Old 2013-05-13, 00:11   Link #43180
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Zero, Shouldn't it be Twincest instead?

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On another side, which narrator you find most easiest to describe battles? Also a battle in the 2nd chap is going too far?
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