2012-02-01, 09:19 | Link #20441 |
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Just focus more on the gospel and asking on how to grip the reader. If you can't, tell me and I'll make one for you.
@ Senpai - Could you please do me a favor? If you can, please go to fanfic.net and see if you can access chapter 4 of Future Imperfect. I need to know if it's just me.
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2012-02-01, 09:54 | Link #20449 |
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Remember: Don't let your biases affect how you write. I'm struggling to portray Tabane in a good light no matter how much I wanna strangle her in real life.
Side note - By the way, why did you choose an Eldritch as the antagonist?
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2012-02-01, 10:02 | Link #20452 |
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Something to distract the TLR side of the business from interfering with PT related business.
In fact, the ONLY reason humanity survive so far is I.S. related technology. There's actually three different portrayal depending on WHEN the Eldritch arrive. - 1969: Humanity vanish. - 1999: About 6 billions dead, the rest is able to struggle - 2009: Random attacks that causes relative few (as in, hundreds to thousand) death and collateral damage :|
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2012-02-01, 10:28 | Link #20454 |
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Since I decide to make Forbidden Core a Crack fic.....
Wiener Driver.... A machine that can only pilot by male. It is two times larger than IS and all its weapon is two time longer and larger. Its creator really love his Vienna sausage. --- Now Serious stuff for the dark fic Title of the story: IS: Extreme Shift, Fubuki. Fubuki is a Extreme Shift (Guess whose IS). Extreme Shift (Limit Break): Spoiler for Extreme Shift:
Edit: Question: What will happen if I add one more love interest into Ichika's harem? One without Yandere or tsundere tendency?
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2012-02-01, 10:54 | Link #20458 |
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I don't know to be honest, but highly probable considering Houki and Rin spend minutes underwater and doesn't described/look wet.
Certain fires, such as caused by oil flood, will got worse if there's rain, even worse if the wind is strong. Most fire however indeed subdued, especially if it's windless, heavy rain.
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2012-02-01, 10:58 | Link #20460 |
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Alright, that solves Ichika's problem. Does the only thing the shield of the IS protect the wearer itself? Can it be used to defend attacks for other people by using yourself as a human shield?
How strong does the rain have to be? It starts lightly drizzling at the start of the chapter till it gets to the point that it's near storming by the end of the arc. This is also part of an empathic environment since the time is night time and the lightning helps them see one another during the fight. @ Treme - That's the things you plan to add, but what's the overall plot? Throwing more enemies at the main cast isn't a plot.
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