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Yachiyo · 2011-10-24, 06:03

Teehee, back

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 06:06

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Originally Posted by Yachiyo

Teehee, back

Whatever you do, don't look at the previous pages! They contain more noir and angst material.

Yachiyo · 2011-10-24, 06:08

Well I don't plan to read 4 pages behind, since I left at page 204 yesterday

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 06:13

@ Yachiyo - Any updates on your fic? I'm almost done with Ran's

@ Agetreme - Do you mind if I re-write the draft you posted? I'll re-write it to a version to what would happen if Qiya wasn't there.

Yachiyo · 2011-10-24, 06:17

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Yachiyo - Any updates on your fic? I'm almost done with Ran's

@ Agetreme - Do you mind if I re-write the draft you posted? I'll re-write it to a version to what would happen if Qiya wasn't there.

Updates? I just published it yesterday

I'll take a rest for a while ^_^

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 06:26

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Originally Posted by Yachiyo

Updates? I just published it yesterday

I'll take a rest for a while ^_^

I forgot that not everyone here has Zero's speed

@ Meister - Will you write the Yamada draft or will I? I'd prefer to read at this point since I'm writing too many drafts and I'm still working on Maximillians cat fight

MeisterBabylon · 2011-10-24, 06:29

When I get round to it, sure.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 06:38

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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

When I get round to it, sure.

Sweet!

Looking forward to it! Good luck on your exams!

Yachiyo · 2011-10-24, 06:43

@Eratas add some colors to your profile ^^

HasuMasu · 2011-10-24, 06:43

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"...I was surprised you agreed to that."
"What? Is it because I don't seem like a girl to you?"
"You don't have to be defensive, I just thought you were too shy for that sort of thing."
"I guess it really is weird for me to weird a maid outfit..."
"...not nearly as weird as it would be for Laura."
"She has a feminine side too you know."
"Why do I get the feeling there's a hidden meaning behind that..."
"*sigh* I wonder if he will..."
"Well you won't be the only one looking like a maid there, so you're competition just got more difficult by a factor of 2."
"..."
"Oh come one, girls look much cuter smiling."
"...the girl you like hardly ever smiles you know?"
"That has a-a-absolutely nothing to do with this!!"
"*giggles* Oh Adam, your reaction is too cute."
"*puffs cheeks*"

Well, that's it for my sample dialogue between
Adam and Charlotte, this is just dialogue for now
so no narration or thoughts yet, I just wanted
your thoughts on this right away since I plan for
them to be talking to each-other often.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-24, 06:44

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Originally Posted by Yachiyo

Updates? I just published it yesterday

I'll take a rest for a while ^_^

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

I forgot that not everyone here has Zero's speed

Ahem....

Now I understand why I can update so fast.... because my college pressed me to do so... tonight.... 4 papers......gonna... type....

agetreme · 2011-10-24, 06:48

@Eratas

I don't mind though.....

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 06:50

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Ahem....

Now I understand why I can update so fast.... because my college pressed me to do so... tonight.... 4 papers......gonna... type....

You might wanna read the previous 2 pages, Agetreme's OC list and new story plans are there. Warning: May cause need for brain bleach after reading.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-24, 06:52

^ No offense for agetreme, but I just have a brain beach after reading your OC profile.

Dysfunction Junction much?

EDIT: WE TROPERS ARE A LEGION, YOUR NINJA-ING IS THE SAME AS MINE!

Yachiyo · 2011-10-24, 06:55

BRB I'll play Prototype for a while ^^

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 07:00

@ Yachiyo - Be sure not to eat too much civilians

@ Zero - Irish nearly gets raped too

I'm gonna write a draft on what would happen if it wasn't stopped. Could you read it when it's out?

HasuMasu · 2011-10-24, 07:02

*John Smith submits a formal request for comments on the dialogue.*

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-24, 07:07

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Originally Posted by Yachiyo

BRB I'll play Prototype for a while ^^

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Yachiyo - Be sure not to eat too much civilians

Well, just don't get too picky, those shady people deserved to be eaten...

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero - Irish nearly gets raped too

I'm gonna write a draft on what would happen if it wasn't stopped. Could you read it when it's out?

Well, no comment....almost-rape scene happens in Madoka's backstory, though she's not the victim. Just post it and see if Blitz can....ah... enhance it.

agetreme · 2011-10-24, 07:11

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Dysfunction Junction much?

I think I just prove my point that you don't need to be a child solider or a war be mess up......

Cipher: "Why can't I have a normal Harem like Ichika?"

Agex: "They are not your harem in the first place." -_-|||

Eratas123 · 2011-10-24, 07:13

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Well, just don't get too picky, those shady people deserved to be eaten...

Well, no comment....almost-rape scene happens in Madoka's backstory, though she's not the victim. Just post it and see if Blitz can....ah... enhance it.

It's not almost-rape in mine, it's actual rape

It's mostly dealing with the aftermath of the incident. Irish is already unstable so this happening is gonna push him over the edge.

So can you read it? Its my revenge for all those sugar injections

@ Treme - Cipher reminds me of Sugisaki Ken

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Yachiyo - Any updates on your fic? I'm almost done with Ran's @ Agetreme - Do you mind if I re-write the draft you posted? I'll re-write it to a version to what would happen if Qiya wasn't there.

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ No offense for agetreme, but I just have a brain beach after reading your OC profile. Dysfunction Junction much? EDIT: WE TROPERS ARE A LEGION, YOUR NINJA-ING IS THE SAME AS MINE! __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Yachiyo - Be sure not to eat too much civilians @ Zero - Irish nearly gets raped too I'm gonna write a draft on what would happen if it wasn't stopped. Could you read it when it's out?

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