2012-07-17, 08:06 | Link #34184 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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@ Demi
I'd say other I.S. can detect them, but at limited range and accuracy. Even Core Network is not foolproof, as all I.S. can just turned off their connection to network temporarily. @ Eras Up to you. --------------------------------------- Just a little more info (it's okay if nobody cares) Riko Yuuki, in this verse, Rito's twin sister (with similar personality to boot). Both suffered great damage to her nerve system thanks to being infected by disease of extraterrestrial origin. They managed to evade death or being turned into vegetable, but only Rito managed to heal perfectly. Riko lost her ability to use her leg, and even extensive therapy she followed for years only managed to restore her leg to limited walking capacity. Some complication made them ended up in Swiss, and even though she has near-S rank aptitude and has great talent being a pilot, physical limitation forced her to wait until consideration was made to allow her join the program. (Furthermore, she also unable to access OOA due to nanomachine in her body interferes with the system, to the point that sometimes her rank drop to B region)
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2012-07-17, 08:30 | Link #34190 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Not mentioned in the story:
The White Unit piloted by "Little Orimura" is called Nishiki (mk2). Tabane will appear in the story with slightly different personality. Kuu might appear? As a joke: "Little Orimura" is a charmer but yet is oblivious to love? Still working on little Orimura's name (wanting to differentiate him from Ichika) Ichika Natsu Akito Fuyuki (Currently this is my choice, will change depending on opinion)
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2012-07-17, 08:35 | Link #34191 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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OC fighting OC with canon characters watching.
Or canon character fought along OC and then you can show how they are good. "Show don't tell" indeed @ Stratos Charlotte noted that stealth mode aren't perfect, I.S. can still feel each other's presence. The closer the more accurate.
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2012-07-17, 08:40 | Link #34192 |
Titans Test Team Pilot
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: The Elysium
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Singapore transfer students:
Spoiler for Scene:
@Zero For some reason, I felt some Predator vibes from that... As for the method of showing how good an OC is, I'll run with the second option.
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2012-07-17, 08:53 | Link #34194 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Current list of character in Rewrite:
Orimura Fuyuki Orimura Senju Orimura Chifuyu(?) Shinonono Houka Shinonono Tabane Claire Alcott Yang Fang ling Laura Bodewig Caroline Duna Carlene Duna Sarashiki Otona (Older) Sarashiki Hibiki (Younger)
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2012-07-17, 09:06 | Link #34197 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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Just want an opinion:
IS are superior at long range and dog fights. Kamen Rider is superior at melee range. Infinite Cosmos has the best of both making them superior to rider in ranged and dogfight capability as well as overpowering other IS in CQC. Does this concept sound reasonable enough to make both relevant? |
2012-07-17, 09:10 | Link #34199 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Quote:
Edit: I admit: To actually make the story less mind-screwing.... (there is an explanation for it) if you like a full blow Mind rape (same name as canon), I can do it....
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2012-07-17, 09:13 | Link #34200 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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We are probably the most hardcore thread thus far... considering the active posters only hit about... 8? Or is it just 5?
Making Ichika adapt a fighting method opposite of what is being taught to him would be completely out of character or not? I was planning instead of having him always pulling moves to conserve energy. He adapts a simplistic logic that borderlines idiocy. "If I lose more energy that longer the fight lasts. Then I'll make it short." |
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