Zhan Long [Manhua][WN]

[s.a.w..]

Thanks for the info!

[ndiezel]

Originally Posted by jaydreadzz

Spoiler for Cheat Already Broken the Game Balance in my POV:

Mc Weapon is such a cheat "only weapon can evolve to high class rank"

Spoiler for XD:

" only player have a flying skill "

Wait, what? There were elves that could fly, if I'm not mistaken.

[zhinou]

Originally Posted by jaydreadzz

Spoiler for Cheat Already Broken the Game Balance in my POV:

Mc Weapon is such a cheat "only weapon can evolve to high class rank"

Spoiler for XD:

" only player have a flying skill "

What chap is that im at chap 100++ and he still does not get evolving weapon and flying skill?

[s.a.w..]

I would appreciate if anyone who has read farther could give some spoilers as to the direction of Xiao Yao and Lian Wan Er's game character's growth. Things like stat growth alterations, neat skills, and job titles. After all his first job change was so interesting...

[eulataguhw]

Originally Posted by s.a.w..

I would appreciate if anyone who has read farther could give some spoilers as to the direction of Xiao Yao and Lian Wan Er's game character's growth. Things like stat growth alterations, neat skills, and job titles. After all his first job change was so interesting...

Stats growth alteration? I'm currently at 180 and between Xiao Yao and Wan Er, only Xiao Yao has a job transfer.

Spoiler for spoiler:

As of now, they're the top few players in the whole game. At this point, Xiao Yao's equip + skills allows him to 1 v many. Even Wan Er's normal attack dmg to Xiao Yao when he uses his newly gotten ring's ability which boost his defense for a short period is merely 1/11 of his HP and Wan Er has higher dmg than Xiao Yao whose dmg is the highest for his class already. I have yet to see him PK in this state though, but from the looks of it... he can 1 sec ko anyone combo-ing with his Conqueror Bee.

Xiao Yao has also job change to his 2nd tier. Now he's called 龙域守陵人 = Dragon Domain Tombkeeper (Seriously, I've no idea whether to use Region or Domain for 域)

Also, Wan Er has a SSS skill called Mind Reading. Details are below, took this from chapter 121 - A self created SSS grade skill
【Mind Reading（SSS Grade）】：omniscient，allowing one to read the thoughts of the target so as to allow one to formulate the correct tactic against the target. Active Ability. Does not require any items. User：？？

Also, currently I only remember and saw 2 Hidden Job user, one of whom is Xiao Yao.

[s.a.w..]

Originally Posted by eulataguhw

Stats growth alteration? I'm currently at 180 and between Xiao Yao and Wan Er, only Xiao Yao has a job transfer.

Spoiler for spoiler:

As of now, they're the top few players in the whole game. At this point, Xiao Yao's equip + skills allows him to 1 v many. Even Wan Er's normal attack dmg to Xiao Yao when he uses his newly gotten ring's ability which boost his defense for a short period is merely 1/11 of his HP and Wan Er has higher dmg than Xiao Yao whose dmg is the highest for his class already. I have yet to see him PK in this state though, but from the looks of it... he can 1 sec ko anyone with his Conqueror Bee.

Xiao Yao has also job change to his 2nd tier. Now he's called 龙域守陵人 = Dragon Domain Tombkeeper (Seriously, I've no idea whether to use Region or Domain for 域)

Also, Wan Er has a SSS skill called Mind Reading. Details are below, took this from chapter 121 - A self created SSS grade skill
【Mind Reading（SSS Grade）】：omniscient，allowing one to read the thoughts of the target so as to allow one to formulate the correct tactic against the target. Active Ability. Does not require any items. User：？？

Also, currently I only remember and saw 2 Hidden Job user, one of whom is Xiao Yao.

Cool! Thanks.

Spoiler for Ability...:

How is mind reading supposed to work? It might work on monsters with AIs but against a player... Also Xiao Yao declared that he was going to make a SSS rank skill... Does he at the point you're at, does he make any skills, and how does skill making work? I definitely cannot imagine how one would go about making a mind reading skill, I mean at least with how their world works the sword waves is grounded in"reality"...

[eulataguhw]

Originally Posted by s.a.w..

Cool! Thanks.

Spoiler for Ability...:

How is mind reading supposed to work? It might work on monsters with AIs but against a player... Also Xiao Yao declared that he was going to make a SSS rank skill... Does he at the point you're at, does he make any skills, and how does skill making work? I definitely cannot imagine how one would go about making a mind reading skill, I mean at least with how their world works the sword waves is grounded in"reality"...

Spoiler for spoiler:

Nope, currently Xiao Yao is still stuck with his S Grade Skill. As for Wan Er's case... well, it's because IRL she has the ability to Mind Read people as well ( her father knows she has that ability as well) ... It seems that the game system allows you to create the special ability you have in real life as well. For Wan Er it's the Mind Reading ability, and Dong Cheng Yue's older brother, Dong Cheng Lei has a natural strength beyond normal human so when he was lv 17, the game system created a passive skill that adds Level * 2 to Strength for him.

So yeah... mind reading... simply reads their thoughts since when Xiao Yao think about dirty stuff about Wan Er IRL, most of the time she knows and not just because it's guesswork, she seem to know the details as well.

[s.a.w..]

That's so cool...

[jaydreadzz]

Originally Posted by zhinou

What chap is that im at chap 100++ and he still does not get evolving weapon and flying skill?

Spoiler for well:

The Mc gained a high class weapon [Emperor Class with a bug effect, in every kill he's weapon gain 1% addition attack with no limit. because of the effect many player complain cos its like a Godlike Imba Weapon Effect. So the game developer change the effects with a limitation of 50%, 100%, 150% additional attack but in the bright side he's weapon can evolve [ currently in 800+chapters his weapon is Saint Class

Spoiler for about that:

as you all know the Mc is a Human race char , the race doesn't have fly ability, in the Mc sixth tier class-up, the job provide flying skill

[Valky]

Originally Posted by eulataguhw

Spoiler for spoiler:

Nope, currently Xiao Yao is still stuck with his S Grade Skill. As for Wan Er's case... well, it's because IRL she has the ability to Mind Read people as well ( her father knows she has that ability as well) ... It seems that the game system allows you to create the special ability you have in real life as well. For Wan Er it's the Mind Reading ability, and Dong Cheng Yue's older brother, Dong Cheng Lei has a natural strength beyond normal human so when he was lv 17, the game system created a passive skill that adds Level * 2 to Strength for him.

So yeah... mind reading... simply reads their thoughts since when Xiao Yao think about dirty stuff about Wan Er IRL, most of the time she knows and not just because it's guesswork, she seem to know the details as well.

His original skill which he created at the start is SS though.

[bearzerger]

Originally Posted by s.a.w..

I would appreciate if anyone who has read farther could give some spoilers as to the direction of Xiao Yao and Lian Wan Er's game character's growth. Things like stat growth alterations, neat skills, and job titles. After all his first job change was so interesting...

Spoiler for growth:

After his change from healer Xiao Yao does progress the "regular" way in his job. As for neat skills let's just say both of them are awash with those. He eventually has so many SS and SSS ranked skills you can't remember them all. Close range, long range, mass destruction, support, healing, stealth, flight, reality marble you name it he can do it. Wan Er eventually becomes something called a God Hermit by GT which is essentially some kind of super assassin. She's the ultimate assassin who's still within the common limits of the game while Xiao Yao is a completely broken cheat ass character in the end. Which isn't a surprise considering that's what always happens in this genre.

[bakato]

So how's romance in later stages?

[Richocet]

Originally Posted by bearzerger

Spoiler for growth:

After his change from healer Xiao Yao does progress the "regular" way in his job. As for neat skills let's just say both of them are awash with those. He eventually has so many SS and SSS ranked skills you can't remember them all. Close range, long range, mass destruction, support, healing, stealth, flight, reality marble you name it he can do it. Wan Er eventually becomes something called a God Hermit by GT which is essentially some kind of super assassin. She's the ultimate assassin who's still within the common limits of the game while Xiao Yao is a completely broken cheat ass character in the end. Which isn't a surprise considering that's what always happens in this genre.

So is this still going on?

[eulataguhw]

Originally Posted by Valky

His original skill which he created at the start is SS though.

Ah yes... forgot about that.

Considering what I read from you guys, it seems Xiao Yao's current stats, equip and ability data given by the author seems to be cheat level. lol.

[Hiyono]

I know this has been said before, but DO NOT read icarus' version of Zhan Long. It's a disgrace. Out of curiosity, I decided to TLC just the very first paragraph of his latest offering, chapter 30:

Originally Posted by original Chinese text

"寒风中，一抹血色匕首从阴暗中探出，直接划过了上将白起的喉咙，这26级的狂战士一脸骇然，已然明白自己 被偷袭了，前方，是一个漂亮女刺客，一身泛光皮甲，手里提着赤血匕，不是别人，正是月倾浅，布拉格的内定副 盟主！"

Originally Posted by icarus' alleged translation

In the midst of fighting, Admiral Bai Qi felt the touch of a cold dagger edge striking at his throat. With a look of dismay, he realize that there was an Assassin attacking him under [Stealth]! When the Assassin came out of her [Stealth], it revealed the beautiful deputy chief of Prague – Yue Qing Qian. This beautiful Assassin move with such grace and swiftness while attacking with her Blood Dagger that Admiral Bai Qi didn’t have a chance to counter attack!

Putting aside the random inaccuracies ("寒风中" means "amid a cold wind" not "in the midst of fighting"; that's just one of many), that last line is literally COMPLETELY MADE UP. It's not in the source text at all! (It's not in the following line either, I checked). Forget guesslation, this is literally fanfiction.

[s.a.w..]

Is it possible that there are multiple versions? Perhaps one of the sources is old? Because comparing the two translations there are significant differences such as: Xiao Yao flirting with the hotel secretary, Dong Cheng Yue going with Xiao Yao and Wan Er or watching them leave the party, as well as details regarding the prostitute.

[eulataguhw]

People are still using Admiral for the Great Generals of the Warring State Period?

From what I can see from, Icarus' version has some difference to the original text. He took out some part and add in some part...

"寒风中，一抹血色匕首从阴暗中探出，直接划过了上将白起的喉咙，这26级的狂战士一脸骇然，已然 明白自己 被偷袭了，前方，是一个漂亮女刺客，一身泛光皮甲，手里提着赤血匕，不是别人，正是月倾浅，布 拉格的内定副 盟主！"

If I were to translate directly, it would be something like

Amid the cold wind, a bloody-coloured dagger appeared from the dark and slashed the throat of General Bai Qi. This Lv26 Berserker has a look of dismay and understood that he has been ambushed. In front of him is a beautiful assassin wearing a shiny leather armour and wield a bloody dagger. She is none other than the deputy chief of Prague - Yue Qing Qian

Like what Nandesuto said, the last line

This beautiful Assassin move with such grace and swiftness while attacking with her Blood Dagger that Admiral Bai Qi didn’t have a chance to counter attack!

didn't even exist in the original chinese text.

[DemiDomo]

^fan fiction.

[Diocar]

Aren t you ppl over reacting? I would like to know how many other translators have their work checked out against the raws like you are doing now. Even more interesting would be to see how many of their translations are actually 100% acurate...
This hate vibe towards icarus is starting to be ridiculous! If the guy wants to do a bad quality translation of zan long what is the problem? Anyone who reads his work sees he isn t competing with gravity, he is a newbie translator trying to do speedy translations that even he says aren very acurate.
In my opinion if gravity ppl were smart they would use his work as a draft for theirs. No matter what ppl might say it would make them spend much less time per chapter and would be a smart way to do things, seeing as icarus isn t interested in cooperating with them.
However gravity folks rather whiny about icarus translating chapters that they have already translated several days ago but however haven t yet published. And even more intringuing is them saying today that their next chapter that should already be almost done for some days still has a lot of work to be done...

[eulataguhw]

I'm actually more interested in where he got those extra details from... I hope I'm not reading a different source that has lesser details.

Even if I'm bad at translation, and may be no much better than MTL, the very least I could do is to retain the original story. It's the least respect I can give to the author and the work itself.

@Those who read far enough...

Spoiler for A Qns:

is the romance between Wan Er and Xiao Yao going to flow at the speed of Tonari no Kashiwagi-san level?