2007-07-12, 12:35 | Link #301 | |
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Grr I thought I was going to get that yesterday oh well, i get page 16
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And yes the wing thing is kinda weird, maybe I should just erase that part Thanks for the comments!!!
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2007-07-13, 02:39 | Link #306 | |
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I did try to get the brightness down tho:
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2007-07-13, 19:24 | Link #308 |
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Ahhh, so her shirt inside is inherently white. I always thought that her shirt inside had vertical lines so I was expecting to see those. ^^
Anyway, how about try playing around with brightness contrast? Also, just noticed that the edges of her wings are clipped. I think you should also try completing those, as in manually re-drawing the clipped part. |
2007-07-14, 00:13 | Link #311 | |
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2007-07-14, 03:13 | Link #313 |
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Lol Shana-chan, you managed to slip Spanish into the comment no? haha good thing I kinda know Spanish
Yea I agree the contrast is a bit way overboard, soo here's my attempt to bring it down =3 Tell me what you guys think plz:
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2007-07-14, 04:00 | Link #314 | |
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As I said though the only fault is the clouds near the edge =/ But keep it up
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2007-07-14, 20:25 | Link #318 |
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The outer borders of her hair blend too much into the background imo. Maybe you can choose a blending that is only about one pixel wide.
Finally dropping the Ayu banner is a good decission I think. You would have been working another 12 days on it, and people would still complain Let me wish you much success for your new project (the sources seem to be far more promising ).
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2007-07-14, 21:01 | Link #319 | |
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