Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Alright then. Btw, can I drop the Rachel part of her name? Need to differentiate her from Rachel Browning. I've been modifying OCs a little here and there to make the whole package better.

Sure lol. It is kinda hard to keep track after 2 weeks of exams.

[MeisterBabylon]

Alrighty.



Btw, I'm going for a semi-self-contained AU of the entire thread, because by trying to tie everything together some things will change and directly retcon someone else.

I'm also trying to put most of the girls into 1-2 regardless of where the original author assigned them, so basically that's the entire Standard Student list - Shura (in another class) + Sarah + Yoko + agex's 3 girls + Minori making about 20/30 girls in class being named.

Add Rin that's 21 girls.

Add the rest of my unprofiled OCs who are students in 1-2, Ginjyo and Tsubomi, the current total is 23/30 of 1-2 being named.

Just need to hunt for 7 more and I'm set. Maybe I'll go modify the "Shadow Mirror" OCs to be cute little students, and purhaps dig up some unused buried ones. I could modify the Moespeda guy into a girl too.

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Alrighty.



Btw, I'm going for a semi-self-contained AU of the entire thread, because by trying to tie everything together some things will change and directly retcon someone else.

I'm also trying to put most of the girls into 1-2 regardless of where the original author assigned them, so basically that's the entire Standard Student list - Shura (in another class) + Sarah + Yoko + agex's 3 girls + Minori making about 20/30 girls in class being named.

Add Rin that's 21 girls.

Add the rest of my unprofiled OCs who are students in 1-2, Ginjyo and Tsubomi, the current total is 23/30 of 1-2 being named.

Just need to hunt for 7 more and I'm set. Maybe I'll go modify the "Shadow Mirror" OCs to be cute little students, and purhaps dig up some unused buried ones. I could modify the Moespeda guy into a girl too.

Swapping her name to "Rachelle", pronounced as "Rac-chel-le". Shortened to "Chell-chan" or, unique to Karon, "Jelly-tan".

Of course, the joke of "Her name is Jelly but her chest is nowhere like one" applies.

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by Dragonkid11

I wonder why just about everyone have their OC in class 1-2...

Oh,right,it's just not normal for class 1-1 to get so much transfer student...XD

Minori's a boy... apparently, Meister has a plan to Genderbend him so that the 1-2 class of his may still follow the rule of "one man only, that's Max"... *shivers*, still, doesn't stop you from writing your own fan-fic and portray him as you intended him to be. I'll see if he can pop up in my own Fan-fic at one time (although it'll be later with Ed when they arrive in a slice of life chapter).

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Spoiler for Kari and Lena:

This pic is a mess. Couldn't get the details done properly with a mechanical pencil and most features are either too sharp or badly shaded. And my scanner cropped out the pantyshot. Dammit.

I was thinking of putting Kari right behind Lena so she could watch over that wolf which sleeps like a pig.

KKKAAAWWWAAAAIIIII!!!!

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Just need to hunt for 7 more and I'm set. Maybe I'll go modify the "Shadow Mirror" OCs to be cute little students, and purhaps dig up some unused buried ones. I could modify the Moespeda guy into a girl too.

I'd be against cross-bending Enrique Espada, because he's the one that plays a major part into Sophia's heel-face turn (well, they're both heels, although FORCED heels at the beginning... Sophia laters turns face with the help of my OCs and joins back Omega Division and enters ISA, *not before an epic battle and some holy crap beating, and an earlier mentioned incident of some class 1-2 students being taken hostage...)

Guess I'll have quite a lot of choices as potential hostages here.... hehe.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Ah well... I'm busy. Someone go do the compiled seating including Huang Lingyi/Rin (I alternated between spellings), and I'll go rewrite 1.3 according to it.

Feel free to place Karon anywhere, but try to place Jinyu beside Helena? Put Sarah and Yoko in there. Also, place SaintX's Ange and Monique in there somewhere as well; I'm using them in 1-2 for obligatory twins.

Thanks a bunch guys.

@Keroko: The violent reflexes was more of a spur of the moment thing. Innocent sleeper is not innocent kinda thing.

Granted that would change with the agreed seating arrangement...




EDIT: Because of the number of characters, I'll only be focusing on a few each time. But I will eventually feature all of them.

Already helped a bit on that as you've seen...

IS:SS OC List (UPDATED)... after much sueing from SaintX... XD

I've broken the subdivision of chars by class or what they're doing in that story...
Characters that are next to each other usually mean that they're... room mates.

Any objections, and I'll happily edit.
Please voice out why you prefer to pair up some chars though, so we have an idea of what you're trying to achieve...

OH YES, Just click (or hang your mouse over? not sure) on the yellow shaded areas that I put in to get the name of the student... saves you from going back and what student corresponds to which number. Google docs is TOO awesome.



EDIT: Meister... Astrid's got SILVERISH pinky hair, just like the pic in her profile... :O

Added a small entry to Astrid's profile... for those too lazy to go and check:

Spoiler for Added entry:

Since she has arrived at ISA, she was told by her parents to read the book “Improving social relationships with others”, in hope that she might open up. However, it has only added to her confusion of how to interact with people... she still carries it around though and consults it whenever she doesn’t know how to act with her classmates or fellow students, which more than often leads to... interesting/hilarious situations.

[Asuras]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Spoiler for IS: Shooting Star - Shift 1.3:

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First representation for a character goes to me eh? She was characterized well with the stoic words and simple sentences, but remember, she has a speech impediment to a degree. Sometimes Alice will leave key words out and continue without realizing such things.

[Terminator98]

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Swapping her name to "Rachelle", pronounced as "Rac-chel-le". Shortened to "Chell-chan" or, unique to Karon, "Jelly-tan".

Of course, the joke of "Her name is Jelly but her chest is nowhere like one" applies.

What about Richelle?
I know someone who's called like that, and it's a pretty unique name...

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

What about Richelle?
I know someone who's called like that, and it's a pretty unique name...

Sounds too ojou. She is from a military family, not exactly very rich and posh.

Besides that name can be pronounced in various ways to add incredible humour.

With regards to unique names, I know of a fujoshi by the name of Marisa. And she likes cosplay too.....as obviously you-know-who.

[Keroko]

One more small note, Helena's 'ear attachments' (so to speak) are the mechanical attachments you see in her profile pic, not actual cat ears.

Kinda like Shinonono's mecha-bunny ears, if you will.

[Kyral]

Originally Posted by Keroko

One more small note, Helena's 'ear attachments' (so to speak) are the mechanical attachments you see in her profile pic, not actual cat ears.

Kinda like Shinonono's mecha-bunny ears, if you will.

*donk*

Ah.... and there it was... my third drawing mistake... -.-

[Keroko]

In your defense, at the time of that drawing we were rather vague about it.

[MeisterBabylon]

At the time of Shift 1.3's filming, it still wasn't that clear, either!

Ah well, at least it's being rewritten.

@Saintess: Cerul? Achieves the result you want, is unique, and is a cute shortening of Cerulean I've encounter at paediatric ward a couple of days ago.


Also, I'm only crossbending characters I recognized to be someone from the shadow mirror universe and not our joint projects lol!

Also, you forgot Elena. Last I checked, she was female.

[Asuras]

I would suggest "Rochelle" but that seems to 'black.'

All due respect to blacks.

Despite my reluctance to continue my own fanfiction on aliens, would it be too much to implement an AXF-AIS user into someone else's plot? Her role would be minimal of course, likely an overshadowing character that may or may not turn out to be a problem. But I'd like to see one. Anyone willing? 'No' is a perfectly reasonable answer. No obligations.

[Terminator98]

Rivals in the same class?
I thought you wanted to avoid that... Plz confirm.

After some discussion with a certain person who pointed out some flaws on the logic with Belial's functioning, slightly changing some stuff and adding stuff to his profile.

Thou shall be notified when it's complete.

[Asuras]

Rivals? With who? I don't recall (could just be me) saying "no rivalry" with my OC's. I mean, Shura and Alice hate each other in fact.

I meant more of a "Quick" Antagonist of sorts. Or maybe just one of those disliked side characters that the main team competes with from time to time.

Like Kongou Mitsuko from TAMNI. Except with more badassery involved.

[Terminator98]

K.. updated Belial.

OD-EXIS-01 "Belial" (Updated)

Mostly changed some of the techno babble.

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Asuras

Despite my reluctance to continue my own fanfiction on aliens, would it be too much to implement an AXF-AIS user into someone else's plot? Her role would be minimal of course, likely an overshadowing character that may or may not turn out to be a problem. But I'd like to see one. Anyone willing? 'No' is a perfectly reasonable answer. No obligations.

Does this mean that someone is using a alien-themed IS? Or an actual alien?

I wanted to explore this topic, and as a basis I borrowed your AXF creature and gave her a completely different origin. Long story short, she's an IS core that matured under a couple of scientists and learnt how to manifest and operate herself without a pilot. Her human form is almost completely silvered over, like something born from mercury, and her IS form is that machine. Details still need to be sorted out, especially on whether canon will be accomodating for her existence.

Originally Posted by Asuras

I meant more of a "Quick" Antagonist of sorts. Or maybe just one of those disliked side characters that the main team competes with from time to time.

Like Kongou Mitsuko from TAMNI. Except with more badassery involved.

Priscilla and Tsubomi have a Asuna/ClassPres mechanic going too.

[Terminator98]

Wait a second... this comes to give us the question... WHO THE HELL is class 1-2's representative? Is it officially Lin or... is she just china's representative candidate?

edit: If there comes an Alien IS, wouldn't it be wise pairing her up with Shizuko? ZOMBIES AND ALIENS FTW!

[Saint X]

L/Rin is both Chinese and Class Rep

[MeisterBabylon]

Rin is 1-2's class rep, probably decided because she was absent and had a personal. For Asuna/ClassPres mechanic, I meant "openly enemies but secretly good friends".

Originally Posted by Terminator98

edit: If there comes an Alien IS, wouldn't it be wise pairing her up with Shizuko? ZOMBIES AND ALIENS FTW!

While my idea isnt exactly about aliens, it is about a lifeform that is fundamentally different from the rest of the planet's, and her artificiality forms the platform which I'll explore the meaning of life. In that plan, I did consider Shizuko and Lal being fine bedfellows.

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

@Saintess: Cerul? Achieves the result you want, is unique, and is a cute shortening of Cerulean I've encounter at paediatric ward a couple of days ago.

Are you sure that is a female name?