To Aru ... Fanfiction Discussion Thread

[omega253]

.... Huh.... Didn't think of it like that....

Ah well.

[SmokinFerret88]

To Love Ru is awesome though....plus there's nothing wrong with an ecchi driven plot, especially when it involves Touma and the lost list of girl's after him.

[omega253]

Yeah, but in this case, I've found an honestly valid excuse to have literally almost every female on the magic side to jump Touma's bones.

Too bad that Kreutzev's womb got damaged by Gabriel's Telesma.....

Or we can just have some screwy magic BS take care of that.

[omega253]

Right, there was something else I wanted to do. While I'm typing up my new chapter of To Ascend, I got worried about something. I put in the first part of the chapter focusing on Accelerator and I'm worried about whether or not I got Accelerator's characterization and past right. He just got curb-stomped by my OP!Touma, so he's going to be a bit OOC.

I'm posting that bit of the chapter, so you people here on Anime-Suki can critique the piece so I can approve it as part of Chapter 9

Spoiler for Accelerator Segment:

Accelerator’s red eyes opened as he found himself in a white room. He peered monotonously at the ceiling.

‘Unfamiliar ceiling…’ The albino thought with neutrality.

He looked around a bit and saw that the white room was, in fact, a hospital ward. Accelerator frowned in confusion wondering what he was doing in it. Feeling something on his cheek, he reached up and found, to his shock, that there was a bandage there. The esper gave a small poke at the cloth and found himself wincing at the pain.

‘Wait a minute, pain?’ Accelerator was confused.

He was the Strongest and literally could not remember the last time he had felt pain. His Vector Field often stopped anything from harming him, unless….

Red eyes widened as the Number One felt the memories of his defeat to that strange boy come rushing back. Rage filled his entire being.

He was supposed to be the Strongest. The Number One. The Untouchable.

He was the Accelerator and he had been defeated?

When he had first obtained his vector manipulating ability, many scientist and researchers (Both in and out of Academy City) had attempted to get a closer look, wanting to obtain the privileges and honor that came with getting results from such a rare specimen.

Specimen.

Some of those morally-bankrupt bastards hadn’t even considered him as a human. When all of their proposals had been rejected by the General Superintendent of Academy City, they had been angry. So angry in fact, that some had sent teams of professional mercenaries to either kidnap or eliminate the young Accelerator.

They never stood a chance.

Even at a young age, the albino’s ability had developed to where bullets could be subconsciously deflected off of his Vector Field. At first, he had been horrified by the fact that he was causing so much blood to be spilt. But as time went on and more assassins were unintentionally slaughtered by Accelerator, he had become fairly apathetic.

Then Kihara Amata stepped in.

The man was horrid. But he was possibly one of the most brilliant men in the world, considering his research and calculations concerning Accelerator’s vectors. In fact, the crass scientist had been something of a horrible influence on the boy, considering his crass language, blatant disregard for the fellow human being, and his cynical attitude altogether.

Accelerator had not been sure what to think when he had been asked to participate in the Level 6 Shift Project. At first, he had been skeptical in thinking that Level 6 could be reached through constant battling.

But the scientists would not let him go until he killed the gir- clone. Those Sisters had just been soulless clones. They had just been fleshy dolls that could be produced at the press of a button and the cost of 180,000 yen each.

At least, that was what Accelerator had convinced himself of to absolve the guilt.

It had been difficult to kill the first one. To the albino’s horror, the killing had somehow grown easier and a small, demented part of him had begun to enjoy it. He had tried to mock and taunt the clones to make them feel fear and actually seem human. He had tried hard to uncover the humanity in the Sisters, but it just would not work.

As the experiment progressed, Accelerator had felt like he had become an irredeemable monster. In fact, he still felt like that.

Then Railgun got involved. After figuring out what was being done with her DNA, the poor naïve girl had tried to stop the experiment. But it wouldn’t work. The Dark Side of Academy City was too vast and overwhelming for one girl (Even if she was a Level 5) to defeat.

After seeing the original article himself, he’d tried to strike terror into her to make her stop her foolish intervention and make sure she didn’t become too plunged into the Darkness like him. But she had come back and this time, she had brought Mental Out and a teleporter. The fight had been almost hilariously one-sided.

A redirection of electricity to stop the Railgun. A quick grab and deflection at the vectors of the eleventh dimension to stop those needles (Clever, but still not nearly enough.) that the teleporter had launched. Then finally the AIM disruption to stop Mental Out.

It had been all-too-easy.

After dodging the lethally sharp needles that she had originally thrown. the teleporter had asked him why he needed more power when he was already the Number One. The albino had practically seen red at that point and had triggered a powerful explosion to severely injure the girls.

Accelerator wanted to become so strong that the notion of bringing injury to him would be considered blasphemy.

Then that strange boy had appeared.

He had appeared normal enough. Spiky black hair, black school uniform, curious look on his face. He seemed like the typical innocent Level 0 high-school student.

The boy who had seemed ‘normal enough’ had deflected his blood-flow reversal. Nobody had been able to deflect him, even Kihara had only been able to reverse his AIM with precise calculations and movement. It had been impossible, even if the boy’s shoulder had been dislocated in the process. Most of the time, the close-range attacker’s joints were smashed into completely wrong directions.

Accelerator had been angry. His rage had increased to the intensity of a white-hot sun. Every single day of his life, the albino had always won his battles in a single stroke. This asshole had managed to do something that he had thought was impossible.

He had tried to spill the spiky-haired boy’s blood again and had experienced pain. Accelerator had never thought that he would ever feel that much pain in his entire life. The pain had engulfed his entire body and somehow had dispelled his AIM field. His indestructible field of vectors had been nullified.

For the first time in his life, his shield of vectors had been dispelled and the physically-deteriorated boy underneath had been completely unveiled.

After falling unconscious (Damnit, that had been weird.), he woke up again to hear that one of the people near him talk. When he had heard them say ‘Accelerator’ and ‘weak’, his slighty-delirious and unhinged mind had interpreted it in the worst way possible.

At the very least he now know how to use the vectors in the air. But it didn’t soothe the damage that had been inflicted to his admittedly large ego one bit.

After the dark-haired boy had managed to disperse the tornado (He still had trouble believing that.) and launch the plasma storm away with a kick (Seriously, what the hell.), the albino had been incapacitated for the last time and felt defeat for the first time.

Defeat.

It was –or had been, at the very least- a foreign concept to Accelerator. Now that he had tasted it for the first time, it was odd. He felt his rage disperse and be replaced by an uncertain hollowness. The albino could no longer say that he was the Strongest. That title belonged to whoever the hell that dark-haired boy was.

“What am I supposed to do now?” Accelerator questioned to nobody, still staring at the ceiling with a broken look in his eyes.

He saw a clean stack of clothes folded neatly on the nearby empty visitor’s chair and tried to get up. The albino winced, feeling some pain in his torso. Accelerator lifted up the disinfected, hospital-issued shirt to reveal a pale and skinny stomach that was covered in bandages.

“Ah, you’re awake.” A jovial voice said, startling Accelerator out of his introspective thoughts. He looked at the source of the voice, seeing an old man with a white coat (Secretly, he felt the urge to slaughter whenever he saw white coats because they reminded him of those morally-bankrupt scientists.) with his facial features resembling that of a certain amphibian mascot.

What was that mascot’s name again? Gokita? Gakuka? Gekota! That was it. He couldn’t understand why he managed to remember that trivial detail. Once again, Accelerator was snapped out of his internal rambling by the doctor.

“You took quite a bit of damage in that little scuffle of yours.” Heaven Canceller chuckled, making the esper stare at him incredulously.

“Little scuffle? What the hell….” Accelerator growled quietly with his right eyebrow twitching at the words of the doctor. He frowned as a question was brought up in his head. “How long have I been out?”

The doctor blinked at his question and responded. “Oh, only a couple of hours. Coincidentally, it isn’t even the afternoon of the day after you were brought in.”

Accelerator narrowed his eyes and nodded with a frown. “Where is he? The guy who beat me. I need to see him.”

Heaven Canceller raised an inquisitive eyebrow at his question. “Ah, Kamijou-kun? He’s on a vacation.”

“A….. vacation?” Accelerator asked, feeling baffled. Maybe a celebration to enjoy the fact that he had defeated the Number One, the albino could understand, but a vacation?

“The news that you have been defeated has been leaked. The General Superintendent is trying to cover it up, but gossip can’t be stopped.” Heaven Canceller explained, his attitude becoming serious.

“Leaked?” Accelerator murmured, alarmed by the information. “How much time has it had to spread?”

The doctor grimaced. “Since you’ve been unconscious.” At that, Accelerator soon mirrored the older man’s expression.

The esper groaned, bringing a hand up to palm his face. “And here I thought I could finally get some relaxation. I can see why the guy who defeated me needs a ‘vacation’. How long do you think before it dies down?”

Heaven Canceller deadpanned at him. “My field of expertise is medicine, not sociology. You might want to ask someone else on that.” Normally, Accelerator would kill the person who dared to take such a tone with him, but his heart just wasn’t into it after losing.

The doctor continued to speak. “You will be in here for quite a bit while your ribs are recovering. They had fractured after the blunt force trauma that Kamijou-kun had delivered to you. Either he needs to hold back more, or you need to drink more milk.” Heaven Canceller joked with a mirthful glint in his wizened eyes, the serious atmosphere being dispelled with ease.

Accelerator clicked his tongue, glaring at the doctor. “Tch, I don’t need to drink more milk, asshole.” He muttered the insult quietly.

“Then why do I hear that you have only been drinking canned coffee?” Heaven Canceller asked dryly, making the albino squirm uncomfortably. Deciding that the question didn’t need to be answered, the doctor went over to the door, sliding it open.

“Try to get some rest. It might even help that crabby little attitude of yours.” The frog-faced man joked one last time before leaving and closing the door behind him, leaving Accelerator alone in the silent hospital ward.

“…Kamijou, huh….” Accelerator mused quietly, and then got a small, trivial fact in his head. He frowned and made a small translation of the name ‘Kamijou’ in his head. The albino was a veritable genius in all types of education, so Japanese name interpretation would be easy for him.

His eyes widened as he came to a conclusion on what exactly the name meant. Accelerator could only chuckle at the absurdity of its meaning.

“The person superior to God, eh?...” He chuckled darkly with a small grin that he couldn’t stop from growing on his face. “Heh, it’s only fitting of the person who defeated me.”

With that, his rage and ego were soothed, if only a tiny bit.

That's just about it. Did I get Accelerator's character fairly well or did I screw everything up?

Please let me know.

[Mr.Kyon]

Spoiler for World's End:

World’s End

Crack, crack, crack—the predictable sounds of bones snapping. There’s no reason to care: it’s a symphony he’s heard before over and over again. And it’s gotten tiresome, like listening to white noise. Before him, a gang of pretentious hooligans cry and weep, trying to nurse their wrist, leg, arm—or whatever they broke. He hadn't looked when they struck; it was too pathetic of a spectacle.

It isn’t even worth a glance. “Are you done now?” he mutters in a weary voice.

No comprehensible answer. Typical. The shit I put up with, he thinks as he steps away from the mess of cut sinew, tears and blood below. At least, at night, he doesn't need to endure the accusing stares of onlookers. Without a care in the world, he walks away, leaving yet another mess for the authorities to clean up.

•••

He goes back to his dorm with a slightly stiff gait. As he ascends the stairs, he sees one of his many nameless neighbors—his recollection of names is horrendous—who notices a distinct look in his eyes. At least he isn’t wrought with fright at the mere sight of them, unlike the rest.

“So… another gang tried their luck?” the neighbor asks tentatively.

“Hm-hm,” he says in a monotone voice. A short silence follows.

When he moves up the steps, his neighbor speaks up, “You want to… I donno, go out drinking sometime? Only if you want to. I know you like to be left alone because—but…” The neighbor scratches the back of his head, the right words not coming to him. There’s tangible awkwardness from the neighbor’s lack of tact.

He could’ve told him they are both underage and left it at that. But instead he shakes his head and answers, “It’s not my thing.” For some reason, his neighbor seems disappointed. Was he expecting him to say yes?

“Oh, OK,” the neighbor says with his hands deep in his pockets. “Um, I’ll be going now.”

Before the neighbor leaves, he asks with a strong voice, “What’s your name again?”

Surprised and unsettled by the sudden question, the neighbor veers his head towards him and babbles quickly, “—zura. It’s Hamazura I mean.”

“Hm. I’ll remember that name.”

Unsure of the intent behind those words, Hamazura shakes his head sheepishly and goes down the flight of stairs as he does the opposite.

•••

He enters his room, yawns and lies down; or rather, he lets himself flop on his bed like a lifeless body. He fishes out from his back pocket a lighter and a pack of cigarettes, and proceeds to indulge himself. By the time the cigarette’s length becomes non-existent and the stench of chemicals and tobacco fills the room, the annoying itch in his soul is a doused ember. And that’s when he notices, as he squishes the cigarette butt into the ashtray on his nightstand—

“So you’re a smoker?” a distinctly mild-mannered voice says, almost in a taunting tone. In the hallway stands a shadowy figure that inspects him. “That’s the first time I’ve seen you with that trait, Accelerator.”

You can guess where this is going. COUGH NT8 SPOILERS COUGH. Hopefully this goes smoothly and I can get this fic going, because it's going to be insanely good crack. At least I've decided on a style and I'm not going to be autistic/OCDing over it

[omega253]

..... When did your crack stores fill again?

And Accelerator's neighbor being Hamazura, huh.....

Okay, then. There is something I need to do now.

Mr. Kyon is back.

Back with CRACK!

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by omega253

Too bad that Kreutzev's womb got damaged by Gabriel's Telesma.....

What! Do! You! Mean! DAMAGED!!!!!! Kruetzev is UNTOUCHED!!!! its like a freaking virgin mary. She got an angel on her womb without any intercourse so ITS 100% UNTOUCHED GOODS!!!!!

[omega253]

......Sorry to offend you, tsunade.....

But I meant about how in canon, the telesma in Kreutzev rendered her incapable of giving birth.

Nobody told me how my Accelerator segment was.....

I need an outside opinion on whether or not Accelerator was in character after waking up from being curb-stomped by my OP!Touma.

[allfictions]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Spoiler for World's End:

World’s End

Crack, crack, crack—the predictable sounds of bones snapping. There’s no reason to care: it’s a symphony he’s heard before over and over again. And it’s gotten tiresome, like listening to white noise. Before him, a gang of pretentious hooligans cry and weep, trying to nurse their wrist, leg, arm—or whatever they broke. He hadn't looked when they struck; it was too pathetic of a spectacle.

It isn’t even worth a glance. “Are you done now?” he mutters in a weary voice.

No comprehensible answer. Typical. The shit I put up with, he thinks as he steps away from the mess of cut sinew, tears and blood below. At least, at night, he doesn't need to endure the accusing stares of onlookers. Without a care in the world, he walks away, leaving yet another mess for the authorities to clean up.

•••

He goes back to his dorm with a slightly stiff gait. As he ascends the stairs, he sees one of his many nameless neighbors—his recollection of names is horrendous—who notices a distinct look in his eyes. At least he isn’t wrought with fright at the mere sight of them, unlike the rest.

“So… another gang tried their luck?” the neighbor asks tentatively.

“Hm-hm,” he says in a monotone voice. A short silence follows.

When he moves up the steps, his neighbor speaks up, “You want to… I donno, go out drinking sometime? Only if you want to. I know you like to be left alone because—but…” The neighbor scratches the back of his head, the right words not coming to him. There’s tangible awkwardness from the neighbor’s lack of tact.

He could’ve told him they are both underage and left it at that. But instead he shakes his head and answers, “It’s not my thing.” For some reason, his neighbor seems disappointed. Was he expecting him to say yes?

“Oh, OK,” the neighbor says with his hands deep in his pockets. “Um, I’ll be going now.”

Before the neighbor leaves, he asks with a strong voice, “What’s your name again?”

Surprised and unsettled by the sudden question, the neighbor veers his head towards him and babbles quickly, “—zura. It’s Hamazura I mean.”

“Hm. I’ll remember that name.”

Unsure of the intent behind those words, Hamazura shakes his head sheepishly and goes down the flight of stairs as he does the opposite.

•••

He enters his room, yawns and lies down; or rather, he lets himself flop on his bed like a lifeless body. He fishes out from his back pocket a lighter and a pack of cigarettes, and proceeds to indulge himself. By the time the cigarette’s length becomes non-existent and the stench of chemicals and tobacco fills the room, the annoying itch in his soul is a doused ember. And that’s when he notices, as he squishes the cigarette butt into the ashtray on his nightstand—

“So you’re a smoker?” a distinctly mild-mannered voice says, almost in a taunting tone. In the hallway stands a shadowy figure that inspects him. “That’s the first time I’ve seen you with that trait, Accelerator.”

You can guess where this is going. COUGH NT8 SPOILERS COUGH. Hopefully this goes smoothly and I can get this fic going, because it's going to be insanely good crack. At least I've decided on a style and I'm not going to be autistic/OCDing over it

And he's baaaaaaaaaaaaaacck!!

[tsunade666]

Originally Posted by omega253

......Sorry to offend you, tsunade.....

But I meant about how in canon, the telesma in Kreutzev rendered her incapable of giving birth.

What really? I don't remember that I remember Vasillisa teasing Kreutzev being virgin mary but never the incapability of giving birth.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!

[omega253]

Like I said, we could just have some screwy magical healing BS take care of that, lickity split.

[allfictions]

Originally Posted by tsunade666

What really? I don't remember that I remember Vasillisa teasing Kreutzev being virgin mary but never the incapability of giving birth.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!

Don't worry, you still have Othinus

[omega253]

Originally Posted by allfictions

Don't worry, you still have Othinus

And now I want to make a fic about Kuudere Othinus competing with Index for Touma's attention......

And the recently-posted fanart of Othinus (especially the one that Mahaya made) is making this urge stronger.

[Miraluka]

If Othinus meets Index wouldn't the former criticize the latter for not using her power? I would make an interesting situation where Othinus lends "a hand" to Index by making the remote control usesless and with its consequences on the Anglican Church freaking out due to Index having no restrains anymore.

[omega253]

Originally Posted by Wilfriback

If Othinus meets Index wouldn't the former criticize the latter for not using her power? I would make an interesting situation where Othinus lends "a hand" to Index by making the remote control usesless and with its consequences on the Anglican Church freaking out due to Index having no restrains anymore.

Well, why not? If you want to write that, then by all means go ahead!

This thread needs more diversity!

I already had my OP!Touma do something to that effect with the Imagine Breaker (if you ask how, then I will answer with this: the Imagine Breaker is just weird like that) to Index.

But I want to see how you would make Othinus release Index's limits.

And I never said that my fic idea was serious. I made a super-short snip about Othinus fighting Suzushina Yuriko over Academy City's ruins for Touma. And then I had a genderbent Aleister Crowley join in.

Meanwhile, Touma himself was just going 'what the fu-'.

Yeah, my mind works in strange ways.....

Anyway, if you want to write a snip/fic about Othinus destroying Index's limitations, then do it!

[allfictions]

Hey, who else get fanfic ideas with this?

Images

Hamazura Brigade....all grown up

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[omega253]

Please don't put any more ideas in my head.

I'm dealing with a whole bunch of them as is:

My current fic, To Ascend.

Catgirl!Kanzaki.

Female Fiamma of the Right stalking Touma.

Othinus stalking Touma.

Kanzaki and Touma being childhood friends and having a marriage contract between them.

Othinus and Touma are childhood friends.

Time-Looping fic: Crazy!Touma and Thor being bros and screwing everybody's plans over for shits and giggles.

Touma accidentally has Mugino become a masochist for him.

*end list.... For now*

And those are the ones that have concrete standing in my head!

Edit: I now have more dangerous ideas.

Kumokawa Seria is a closet pervert and has to constantly restrain herself from jumping Touma's bones.

Brunhild Eiktobel is a Depraved Bisexual who wants Kanzaki and develops an interest in Touma after hearing that he somehow got Kanzaki to wear a Fallen Angel Ero Maid Outfit for him.

[Ilidsor]

Originally Posted by omega253

Touma accidentally has Mugino become a masochist for him.

...I...

I kind of want to read this...

[allfictions]

Originally Posted by omega253

Please don't put any more ideas in my head.

I'm dealing with a whole bunch of them as it is

Well then, I guess A Certain Grown-Up Spinoff is mine to take.

[omega253]

Originally Posted by Ilidsor

...I...

I kind of want to read this...

I wrote a super-mini snip for Masochist!Mugino a little whole ago.

Here's the link to the post with the snip.

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...postcount=4446

And here's a post to my 'Othinus, Suzushina Yuriko, and genderbent Aleister Crowley fighting for Touma' snippet. It's also super short.

http://forums.animesuki.com/showpost...postcount=4662

Enjoy.