2008-01-15, 13:12 | Link #201 | ||
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I'll try as soon as I can ^^ Quote:
and call me "He" or "she" whichever you want, I'll go with either. Edit: Woot woot!
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2008-01-15, 13:24 | Link #202 |
Sleep beneath the flowers
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How many page claims have you gotten Satashi-sama? Really? You have some crazy knack for getting them
And well... I do my best to describe OCs! The only thing you don't know about Rune is like... Her full past! ... Because I haven't gotten that far yet. I hate making bios
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2008-01-15, 13:26 | Link #203 | |
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Haha, that's kinda helpful make a bio so I can link to it XD Oh, and Saint X, I read that chapter actually but never reviewd lol. I recall that I liked it, specially Yuuno. edit: Teaser for upcoming chapter of Saved by the Bell: Spoiler for Every teen's worst nightmare:
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2008-01-15, 13:46 | Link #204 |
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*Shudder of utter horror* The dreaded... "Talk". No one ever looks forward to that
Aww but Bios are booooooring. But I guess it is one of those nessecarry evils... I'll put finishing Rune's bio 3rd on my list of things to do. 1 is School of Lyrical and 2 is Arc-en-Ciel: Ashes unto Dust :P (To a point. I think I can skim by a few chapters without her past... To far back anyway)
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2008-01-15, 13:48 | Link #205 | |
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2008-01-15, 15:07 | Link #206 |
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Special Copypasta from the OC, a (good) crack OCxSubaru idea that i'm pushing for my next Fanfic after AlternateS I- which i'm planning already.
- several ideas are from already established dimensions shows, so bear with it. - it's just a sample anyway, so far Spoiler for AlternateS II Sample Arc: The First Fusion Pt. 1:
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2008-01-15, 16:11 | Link #207 | ||
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@Saint X: should I add that to your archive as a teaser post or anything?
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2008-01-15, 17:48 | Link #209 | ||
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2008-01-15, 20:13 | Link #210 |
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Does er... Someone have like a link to as how dating works under this "Class K" (Though I hear it is Class S) thing works? I need to know before I can really write anything more in School of Lyrical... *Has no dating experience*
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2008-01-15, 21:10 | Link #213 |
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Well I know that much :P
I mean like... Is it a test date of like the real thing? >.> I need to know like... You know... How much of a 'real' date is it. Go out for candlelit dinners and all that? XD Try and end with a kiss? :P
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2008-01-15, 21:22 | Link #214 | |
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for example...... If Subaru and Nanoha did it. I think they would go to a movie, have a nice romantic dinner, and end the date at teh doorstep with a "was it fun?" if Nanoha/Fate did it They would probably go to movie, romantic dinner, then go somewhere else ( look at the stars or something to unwind form their hectic lives) then probably end up kissing at the end. It all depends on the people. Basically ask yourself this: Are your characters close enough to kiss on a pretend date? the date's relation toa "real" one is how close the two friends are.
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2008-01-15, 21:24 | Link #215 |
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Hmmmm I see, I see. Thanks Satashi-sama.
I was about to leave and feared I wouldn't be able to do much writing since I didn't know exactly how 'real' this practice date is Well off I go! I'll see about finishing the next chapter in a few days or so...
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2008-01-15, 21:58 | Link #216 | ||
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Granted, it's not crap, but it isn't making me hang on the edge either... ...but don't feel bad. I've been reading anime ffs since I was in highschool, and am a pretty jaded reader. Ask Aaron. Quote:
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2008-01-15, 22:04 | Link #217 | |
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Nanoha wants them to be small, like the size of her fist. Nya. ~~~~~~~~ Archive updates will take place tomorrow. ~~~~~~~~ I was writing tonight and realize that I just rambled. I'm not very happy with it right now, as it's 3,000 words already and 60% of it is just Nanoha and Fate talking on the phone. Granted, I worked in something hilariously funny for the people who requested something, but still... This chapter may end up being really long if I don't take out this random stuff...
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2008-01-15, 22:30 | Link #218 | |
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but length rarely matters as long as it's good, and most people count hilarious as 'good'
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2008-01-15, 22:30 | Link #219 |
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<sighs, thinks>
Let me think... Your writing style is solid: both descriptive and concise, and you obviously know enough of the English language that you don't need to keep using the same words over and over again. Characterization, for what I've seen, is pretty much spot on - there're a few inconsistencies, but they are hugely minor compared to what you've gotten RIGHT. Your genre usage is good, as well: when you want to be funny, when you want to be serious, you are. Your stuff IS kinda difficult to read, format wise, but that's FF.net's fault and not yours. Frankly, the main idea that I have for improving is more EPIC source material. I went thru your 6th Division stuff, and it's good. You focus on everyday events, and that's good. Things like the ARIA franchise have made it HUGE doing just that kind of thing... ...but the problem is that they'll never win any awards. To my experience, people read fanfiction for one of two reasons... 1) As the song goes, "you wanna be where you can see, our troubles are all the same - You wanna be where everybody knows your name." Or what I call the Cheers Syndrome - that even the heroes we look up to have the problems we do. This is why people write high school and other such stories. 2) To dive into epic and fantastic worlds where the fate of many lies in the hands of a few. Or what I term the Lord of the Rings Syndrome - seeing the heroes kick ass, look cool doing it, fight against an evil foe, and ultimately win the day. You do #1 like no one else I know - but a good author can do 1 & 2 with equal ability. The only improvement I can suggest is - Less of 1, more of 2. Do keep this in mind, though: The authors on my shelf are some of the following: Tom Clancy Clive Cussler Jack DuBrul James Clavell Umberto Eco And other such persons. <nods> Okay. <laughs> Sorry, "nya" is sort of a general, all-purpose phrase, the meaning of which depends on HOW it's phrased. It's something that I picked up from my fiancee - she normally used it when she was irritated, but I ended up spamming it for so many things that she dropped it and found herself a new all-purpose phrase. Here, "nya" is like "okay." I'll try and make it's usage more apparent... |
2008-01-15, 22:43 | Link #220 |
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Well, besides the two you mentioned, people also might want to read FF for romance, additional background, character developement (for shafted people IE hayate), and sometimes even for tragedy...
...But your two reasons tend to be the main selling points of many series and movies outside of fanfiction as well, for they ARE good things to have in just about anything
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