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PeppstaR · 2004-02-20, 04:28

Here's my character again in another style.

I'll post it up again once it's colored.

Asura · 2004-02-20, 04:46

ok, seems my tired eyes may be playing games with me.. but i kinda note that her right shoulder looks too big, and that her right arm seems to be at a not so comfy angle.... but you're the artist..

... 2hrs sleep before i got to go back to work @ 4.

Mundain · 2004-02-20, 07:43

I like it, shoulder dosnt look bad to me, looks like shes leaning it this way in kinda an over done sexy walk thing. (that that over done is bad, its just not how normal people walk :P this is anime of corse ) Are you gonna color this one as well? I wanna see it colored

Raxial · 2004-02-20, 09:57

yeah, I'd like to see it colored as well, you do a really good job with that.

Tboz · 2004-02-20, 15:42

Agree with Mundain there, the curvature of her bodyline doesn't look real. It doesn't look like a natural pose. Everything else is good.

PeppstaR · 2004-02-20, 15:57

Thanks for the feedback guys.

Yeah, if you look at her hip line, it's angled to where her right (our left) is dropped and her shoulder on the same side is raised to give that "sexy walk thing" effect.

I will be coloring this soon, maybe this weekend.

PeppstaR · 2004-02-20, 15:59

BTW- Asura... good to see you around again ^_^

Mr_Anonomis · 2004-02-20, 17:32

man, that's a nice drawing... she looks really really sexy..yeah, that's really cool

Luly_Sugar · 2004-02-20, 21:27

I like your draw ^^ she looks very cute to me

FrOzE BLadE · 2004-02-20, 22:30

wow this is nice. i like the eyes. there seems to have life in it.

get_a_life · 2004-02-20, 23:19

thats hot. it would be hotter if i could see her legs too. yup, the whole thing. but yeah its pretty sexy. but dont you think shes leaning back a bit too much? yeah i know its a whole stylized pose but i think if you alter the amount of lean it would be perfect and the rest of the legs too.

Asura · 2004-02-21, 03:16

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Originally Posted by PeppstaR

BTW- Asura... good to see you around again ^_^

domo. though i'm around, i may not be posting any new stuff. overloaded @ work and waay too tired by the time i got home.

wao · 2004-02-21, 05:12

It's a nice style, I like your lines and stuff... (I simply can't do lines like that o_O)

Of course, I would kill to have such a thin waist. Gawd... does anything outside of Barbie dolls have such thin waists? o.o

Like Asura said, the shoulder on the left (from this POV - it's her right shoulder really) looks a bit out of place, but it is possible, if you picture it... yeah... aesthetically it may look a bit odd, but it's perfectly fine. Doesn't have to be a generic pose either.

The only real suggestion I have is, to make her sexier, you might want to give her a bit of a bust-lift

The left breast (from this POV) is a little saggy, IMO. But yeah.

It's a great pic overall. Gee, I wish I'd put in the effort to draw again.

Goldenducky · 2004-02-21, 05:59

personally i think it looks pretty good but isnt she a tad to skinny?
kinda reminds me of that aeon flux thing but its just her stomach

overall though she looks awesome
WAY better then i could do

7hor · 2004-02-21, 15:10

That's incredible...*is envious*

Splur · 2004-02-21, 15:40

woah woah...wow!
amazing...perfect!

Vulkar · 2004-02-21, 19:16

very nice, Peppstar. I really like this style a lot, maybe even better than any previous ones.

Tzurial · 2004-02-21, 19:25

I like this one alot! IMO much better than your last style attempt (though that one was good too!) What I really like about this picture are the breasts, the problem with your last one was that they seemed to defy the laws of gravity while these are much more realistic! Kudos, shes very sexy

xFordainedxx · 2004-02-22, 01:11

it looks like mari cary and thats why i hate it

pose looks like one of her dumbass poses that just pisses me off thinking about it

PeppstaR · 2004-02-22, 20:59

Thanks for the comments.

As for the rest of her legs... it's already to the edge of the paper. I would work it out on a larger sheet, but I'm too lazy.

Mari Cary? That porn star that ran for governor?

Anyways, I'll post the color version soon.

2004-02-20, 04:28	Link #1
PeppstaR AG Art Studios Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: San Francisco Age: 47	Working with new styles again Here's my character again in another style. I'll post it up again once it's colored.

2004-02-21, 15:40	Link #16
Splur Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Canada... Age: 36	woah woah...wow! amazing...perfect! __________________

2004-02-20, 04:46	Link #2
Asura should i stay longer? Join Date: May 2003 Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)	ok, seems my tired eyes may be playing games with me.. but i kinda note that her right shoulder looks too big, and that her right arm seems to be at a not so comfy angle.... but you're the artist.. ... 2hrs sleep before i got to go back to work @ 4.

2004-02-20, 07:43	Link #3
Mundain They call me stew Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: North Carolina. USA Age: 36	I like it, shoulder dosnt look bad to me, looks like shes leaning it this way in kinda an over done sexy walk thing. (that that over done is bad, its just not how normal people walk :P this is anime of corse ) Are you gonna color this one as well? I wanna see it colored

2004-02-20, 09:57	Link #4
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	yeah, I'd like to see it colored as well, you do a really good job with that.

2004-02-20, 15:42	Link #5
Tboz Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003	Agree with Mundain there, the curvature of her bodyline doesn't look real. It doesn't look like a natural pose. Everything else is good.

2004-02-20, 15:57	Link #6
PeppstaR AG Art Studios Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: San Francisco Age: 47	Thanks for the feedback guys. Yeah, if you look at her hip line, it's angled to where her right (our left) is dropped and her shoulder on the same side is raised to give that "sexy walk thing" effect. I will be coloring this soon, maybe this weekend.

2004-02-20, 15:59	Link #7
PeppstaR AG Art Studios Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: San Francisco Age: 47	BTW- Asura... good to see you around again ^_^

2004-02-20, 17:32	Link #8
Mr_Anonomis El Diablo Blanco! Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Chicago, Il Age: 35	man, that's a nice drawing... she looks really really sexy..yeah, that's really cool

2004-02-20, 21:27	Link #9
Luly_Sugar Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Brazil/ Poa Age: 45	I like your draw ^^ she looks very cute to me

2004-02-20, 22:30	Link #10
FrOzE BLadE Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 35	wow this is nice. i like the eyes. there seems to have life in it.

2004-02-20, 23:19	Link #11
get_a_life hentai! banzai! Join Date: May 2003 Location: pasadena, ca Age: 39	thats hot. it would be hotter if i could see her legs too. yup, the whole thing. but yeah its pretty sexy. but dont you think shes leaning back a bit too much? yeah i know its a whole stylized pose but i think if you alter the amount of lean it would be perfect and the rest of the legs too.

2004-02-21, 05:12	Link #13
wao OK. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The Fields of High Attus Age: 34	It's a nice style, I like your lines and stuff... (I simply can't do lines like that o_O) Of course, I would kill to have such a thin waist. Gawd... does anything outside of Barbie dolls have such thin waists? o.o Like Asura said, the shoulder on the left (from this POV - it's her right shoulder really) looks a bit out of place, but it is possible, if you picture it... yeah... aesthetically it may look a bit odd, but it's perfectly fine. Doesn't have to be a generic pose either. The only real suggestion I have is, to make her sexier, you might want to give her a bit of a bust-lift The left breast (from this POV) is a little saggy, IMO. But yeah. It's a great pic overall. Gee, I wish I'd put in the effort to draw again.

2004-02-21, 05:59	Link #14
Goldenducky Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: over the river and through the woods	personally i think it looks pretty good but isnt she a tad to skinny? kinda reminds me of that aeon flux thing but its just her stomach overall though she looks awesome WAY better then i could do

2004-02-21, 15:10	Link #15
7hor Full Metal Physicist Join Date: Dec 2003	That's incredible...is envious

2004-02-21, 19:16	Link #17
Vulkar Lost in Time and Space Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Burlington, VT USA Age: 40	very nice, Peppstar. I really like this style a lot, maybe even better than any previous ones.

2004-02-21, 19:25	Link #18
Tzurial in silent opposition Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: oh...I've been there	I like this one alot! IMO much better than your last style attempt (though that one was good too!) What I really like about this picture are the breasts, the problem with your last one was that they seemed to defy the laws of gravity while these are much more realistic! Kudos, shes very sexy

2004-02-22, 01:11	Link #19
xFordainedxx Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: edmonton Age: 36	it looks like mari cary and thats why i hate it pose looks like one of her dumbass poses that just pisses me off thinking about it

2004-02-22, 20:59	Link #20
PeppstaR AG Art Studios Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: San Francisco Age: 47	Thanks for the comments. As for the rest of her legs... it's already to the edge of the paper. I would work it out on a larger sheet, but I'm too lazy. Mari Cary? That porn star that ran for governor? Anyways, I'll post the color version soon.