2012-11-30, 22:35 | Link #38443 |
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@ Eras
Sounds like Dan and Ichika actually... @ Demi WAT ----------------------------------- At least you don't channel Meister like me, I was writing a draft about Ichika being assigned bodyguard to a group of Idol... who happened to be a Sentai-like group fighting crime (They're undercover, of course, so they can't kick too much ass). Note that Ichika don't get his I.S. (=sentai costume) until later in the story (typical sixth, white-colored ranger natch), spending a lot of time as badass normal.
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2012-12-01, 00:59 | Link #38445 |
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Noope, it's all full canon character (yeah, the Idol is, INTERNATIONAL Idol organization). My Inspiration is more like Symphogear than anything, but rather than a fatherlike old guy, the badass normal is the noob bodyguard (who happens to be raised by Gurkhas, go figure)
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2012-12-01, 02:23 | Link #38447 |
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Simply put, it was a gambit by Tabane to break the group dynamic (deconstruction of harem?), Ichika being Ichika, he was there as unwitting pawn.
When emotion become your source of power, you're screwed up all the way. :| (Note that all the at the same time, I write an original story with pretty similar foundation, but very different concept)
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2012-12-01, 03:29 | Link #38448 |
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I see...
I realized something. In a world of nutcases like IS, wouldn't they need a straightman to make things funny? and I also think its wierd that they didn't make a straightwoman so to speak. Charlotte could have been that, but she was swept off with the loonies. |
2012-12-01, 03:54 | Link #38449 |
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No, I.S. dictates that each and every main character have bad childhood. THINK OF THE DRAMA! -_-
Sarcasm aside, you'll be hardly straight man if you're screwed to hell and back. The closest one is Ichika, and even then... too oblivious. EDIT: i'm confident with my writing style now (grammar aside), now I'd just need someone to consult the plot...
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2012-12-02, 08:07 | Link #38454 |
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And I'm BAAAAACK. Hopefully long enough to actually finish what I started. :s
Robotics;Notes gave me quite a few ideas regarding Risette/Tenmoku Uchigane's Hyperalignment mode. *whirls around at maximum crack speed*
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2012-12-02, 19:36 | Link #38456 | ||
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Holy shit, and I think I can channel your insanity, crack for the crack god!
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2012-12-02, 21:49 | Link #38458 | |
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2012-12-02, 22:00 | Link #38459 |
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Up to your choice really, since the Silverbacks ARE the main characters, being a sidestory and all, but you might already read some of the review complaining the lack of canon character's appearance.
I myself have no problem with that, some of my non-I.S. stories are like yours, almost detached off the main plot. Maybe Stratos wanted a plot like Front Mission 4, where Daryl and Elsa (the two main characters) are linked through the intertwined worldwide plot than direct interaction. Likewise, Saga frontier 2, Wil and Gustav only met once in a mission, and that's about it. There's a trope for that. (FM4 actually got one of the best/worst, these two did speak with telephones, but that's about it, they NEVER met at all)
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