Nanoha Fanfic Discussion

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

Well they might judge you as a bit of a pervert maybe...
But I found it very funny. XD Looks like Subaru still idolizes Nanoha

Eh, I am a little bit, but for the most part, I really only add that in for kicks and laughs. If I'm serious about anything sexual I seperate it into it's own story. I've done 3 lemons before but none of them are graphic at all; I think the most perverted statement ever was in that short when Subaru said what she did looking at Nanoha. If I'm serious about it, I'd prefer only mature people to read it, so I don't get any stupid request for pwp lemon scenes.

[krisslanza]

3 lemons eh? I only seen one Which was so much better then any PWP or lemon I've seen before.

And everyone is a pervert in some fiber of their being... =o I know I am, no need to lie to myself

[Fuyu no Sora]

krisslanza is right. Everybody is a bit of a pervert (I dare anyone to deny it ) but it's okay. There's nothing wrong with that ^^ For the most part, it works really well (At least with me . Every time I read those shorts, I end up howling with laughter or rolling on the floor XD!) So I'll say: Keep up the good work ^^

[Satashi]

^_^ thankies.

I'm gonna start on redemption soon I think, I've got some playfulness out of my system.

Spoiler for First thing you'll see in redemption:

Violin

[krisslanza]

A Violin eh? XD
On a off-topic note, what are all the titles for the knights? I only recall Vita (Iron Knight) and Signum (Blade Knight)... Right?

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

^_^ thankies.

I'm gonna start on redemption soon I think, I've got some playfulness out of my system.

Spoiler for First thing you'll see in redemption:

Violin

Yay! ^^ Thanks Satashi-san ^^ I'm really fond of the small instrument ^^

Originally Posted by krisslanza

A Violin eh? XD
On a off-topic note, what are all the titles for the knights? I only recall Vita (Iron Knight) and Signum (Blade Knight)... Right?

Signum: Blazing Flame General.
Vita: Scarlet Iron Knight.

.......Or so I believe Are there titles for all four Wolkenritter?

[krisslanza]

They say them all in ep... 12 or 13 when they all attack the out of control Book of Darkness defense program. I just can't remember them. XD

[FlareKnight]

Well I thought it was a good funny short. Could almost see Subaru and Teana's heads exploding from embarrassment . Subaru even fingering out Teana was pretty hilarious. I do feel bad for Bardiche for some reason...

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I don't really like that short :P almost didn't post it >.<

I don't like them at all either, but even if I prefer to read other kind of fics, I enjoyed your last 2 SNLs posted here (or it was only 1 divided in 2 parts?),
I don't know, I don't like to see them being so perv.
Your NxF lemon was an exception, it was just cute ^_^

Originally Posted by Satashi

^_^ thankies.

I'm gonna start on redemption soon I think, I've got some playfulness out of my system.

Spoiler for First thing you'll see in redemption:

Violin

Wait, and my Chello? =(

Saludos, Haru

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

Wait, and my Chello? =(

Saludos, Haru

Do you mean the Cello or are you talking about the Violonchelo (<--Spanish)? (same instrument, but in different languages its pronounced and written slightly different)

And you also mean about that cute pic with Nanoha and Fate playing respectively the Violin and the Cello, correct? I love that pic ^^

[Satashi]

*opens up episodes and finds it* Here you go,

Shielding Guardian Beast, Zafira
Shamal, the knight of the Lake

Wait, and my Chello? =(

I don't mind giving Fate a Cello in an SNL skit, but in 6th D she simply logically doesn't have time to learn how to play it.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

*opens up episodes and finds it* Here you go,

Shielding Guardian Beast, Zafira
Shamal, the knight of the Lake

So they did have titles Had forgotten ><

Originally Posted by Satashi

I don't mind giving Fate a Cello in an SNL skit, but in 6th D she simply logically doesn't have time to learn how to play it.

So true.... A shame really, but it's natural. Cello seems difficult to play anyway. It goes with the "F clef" instead of the "G clef" that's used for the Violin *shrugs*

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

I don't mind giving Fate a Cello in an SNL skit, but in 6th D she simply logically doesn't have time to learn how to play it.

Yes, I knew she actually don't have enough time for nothing, but maybe she knew how to play Cello from before, like from one of Alicia's memory, or she can learned it when she was younger from a random character who knew how to play it for no apparent reason, like Tsuruya or Kyon I mean Amy or Chrono. I think you could have better ideas about hot to make it possible, but I don’t know if you want to include it.

Saludos, Haru

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by BPHaru

"Yes, I knew" = "Yes, I know"

"don't have enough"= "didn't have enough"

"don't have enough time for nothing" = "didn't have enough time for anything" , double negative.

"or she can learned " = "Or she could have learned" or "Or she learned"

Those are good ideas, and I really wouldn't mind her knowing how to play, but adding too much fictinal stuff at once can lead to making things unbeleiveable. Just one of the Ace of Aces knowing how to play an instrument is highly unlikely, as Nanoha really did nothing but train, eat, and sleep growing up.

In 6th D, Fate loves listening to music, so I think it'd make more sense for her to listen to Nanoha play rather than make her own. (Kind of like myself, I can't stand silence, and I have an mp3 player with me everywhere I go. I sleep with music playing in the background and my playlist on my comptuer is almost 15 days long lol. But I have no desire to create music myself)

[Edit] Since Redemption is starting to be made, thought I'd share something about it as well as a slight teaser of hints of what is going to happen coming up

Spoiler for I can save them...:

"I can save them!"

'No! Calm down! Calm down, you're getting out of control!'

"Let me protect your friends! I won't allow anything to hurt you anymore!"

Nanoha fell forward, barly catching herself as black mist started enveloping her body. 'No, please! Not like this! I don't want to kill them!'

"I'm tired of seeing you hurt! I'll burn in hell for my actions if that's what it takes! Let me out! I won't stand by and watch them DIE"

The mage looked at the spazzing girl in front of him with a passive glare. "Are you quite done?" He asked mono toned.

"Move!" Nanoha slung out her arm, looking up with yellow flecked eyes. "Get out of my way," The echoing sound of a tuning fork rang around them. "Or," Her voice dropped, snarling as fangs showed around her lips. "I'll eat you alive!"

Spoiler for Data...:

'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! ' Three orange strips came out from Skeith's wrist, turning quickly as red and green hexagons appeared between them. 'Stop! Stop! Stop!' Once formed, a black ball of energy manifest at her clawed hand. 'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop!

"Data..."Skeith's voice dripped with Venom. "...Drain"

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Satashi

[Edit] Since Redemption is starting to be made, thought I'd share something about it as well as a slight teaser of hints of what is going to happen coming up

Spoiler for I can save them...:

"I can save them!"

'No! Calm down! Calm down, you're getting out of control!'

"Let me protect your friends! I won't allow anything to hurt you anymore!"

Nanoha fell forward, barly catching herself as black mist started enveloping her body. 'No, please! Not like this! I don't want to kill them!'

"I'm tired of seeing you hurt! I'll burn in hell for my actions if that's what it takes! Let me out! I won't stand by and watch them DIE"

The mage looked at the spazzing girl in front of him with a passive glare. "Are you quite done?" He asked mono toned.

"Move!" Nanoha slung out her arm, looking up with yellow flecked eyes. "Get out of my way," The echoing sound of a tuning fork rang around them. "Or," Her voice dropped, snarling as fangs showed around her lips. "I'll eat you alive!"

Spoiler for Data...:

'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! ' Three orange strips came out from Skeith's wrist, turning quickly as red and green hexagons appeared between them. 'Stop! Stop! Stop!' Once formed, a black ball of energy manifest at her clawed hand. 'Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop!

"Data..."Skeith's voice dripped with Venom. "...Drain"

Ha. Reminds me of the Haseo/Skeith versus Khun/Magus fight. Hopefully, this won't be too traumatizing for Nanoha. By the way, are you planning on converting more of the G.U. avatars and implementing them in 6th Division?

[BPHaru]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Those are good ideas, and I really wouldn't mind her knowing how to play, but adding too much fictinal stuff at once can lead to making things unbeleiveable. Just one of the Ace of Aces knowing how to play an instrument is highly unlikely, as Nanoha really did nothing but train, eat, and sleep growing up.

In 6th D, Fate loves listening to music, so I think it'd make more sense for her to listen to Nanoha play rather than make her own. (Kind of like myself, I can't stand silence, and I have an mp3 player with me everywhere I go. I sleep with music playing in the background and my playlist on my comptuer is almost 15 days long lol. But I have no desire to create music myself)

Well, it's your decision, it only depends on the characterization you want for the Fate on your Universe, I think both playing an instrument would be cuter than only one, but I don’t know what the other people would prefer.

Repost:


Saludos, Haru

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Ha. Reminds me of the Haseo/Skeith versus Khun/Magus fight. Hopefully, this won't be too traumatizing for Nanoha. By the way, are you planning on converting more of the G.U. avatars and implementing them in 6th Division?

Spoiler for answer:

"How do you plan to fight something that can call on these 'avatars' to increase their power!?"

Yuuno stopped walking and turned around to face Fate. "We'll get our own."

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for answer:

"How do you plan to fight something that can call on these 'avatars' to increase their power!?"

Yuuno stopped walking and turned around to face Fate. "We'll get our own."

ACK!!!:
T-that many?!
Just when you thought nothing could get worse than Scaglietti...
Knowing G.U. has spoiled me more than I expected. Thanks, Satashi!

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

ACK!!!:
T-that many?!
Just when you thought nothing could get worse than Scaglietti...
Knowing G.U. has spoiled me more than I expected. Thanks, Satashi!

Not set in stone yet, this is only one possibility. I may end up not using it as to make Nanoha's Avatar be that much more important.

But since you know GU, yeah, that's what they're fighting :P

[Fuyu no Sora]

Since I don't know G.U. I don't have the slightest idea what you're talking about and I don't want to find out before the time comes



@Satashi-san: .........That's one heck of a long playlist I like both listening to music and making it :P That's why I love the Violin, I'm currently practicing "Air (for the G string)" from Bach ^^