SOTM 2009 - August (Scale/Perspective) - Entry Thread

[Risa chan]

Yeah sorry about that. But yeha you have understand, i like this version better Good job. ^^

[KholdStare]

Originally Posted by Furuno

@KholdStare :
Whoa that's some very good animation! But I guess you might need to improve the readability of the text, maybe some glow/stroke effect?

Thanks for the recommendation. I just found out that glow really sucks on low-color gifs, but I did the best I can:



C&C?

[escimo]

First draft.
I wonder if this fits the criteria?

[Solace]

It took me a moment to focus on it, but yes it fits the criteria.

[Cierra]

how about this one?

[Endrance]

Originally Posted by Cierra

how about this one?

I like it...the rain makes it look like there's a storm in the clouds

[White Manju Bun]

Originally Posted by Cierra

how about this one?

Im not Solace but to me even though Beatrice is close to us the viewer it seems more of a side view to me then a scale. The animated rain is nice though.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Katocchi

First Draft ..



CnC ???

You know, all that text at the left side make it kinda 'boring' to see. XP

Originally Posted by Terrestrial Dream

Well the signal lost part and static part was put int there as if it was a view of from a camera. Though I guess I might only need the static part.

Maybe, I might not need a better way for the loop.

It is bit fast, I should flow it down to makes it more like floating it in space.

Would this be bit better?

Anyhow still need to fix this a lot.

The static still doesn't convince me, looks a bit fast and it "breaks" the animation.

Originally Posted by ganbaru

A new version, made the render less yellow-ish and cleaned a little her hair.




C&C anyone ?

The rendering work on the upper hair looks a bit rough.

Originally Posted by Furuno

Question : Is this eligible for entry? If it's OK then this will my be entry until I've updated it. "Perspective" is just kinda confusing...

The shade on the lower part of the girl make her look like if she were a giant.

Originally Posted by Risa chan

C&C anyone

Do prefer this one better, the "wine" color gives it a great feeling of depth.

Originally Posted by KholdStare

Thanks for the recommendation. I just found out that glow really sucks on low-color gifs, but I did the best I can:



C&C?

Doesn't the animation looks a bit rough?

Originally Posted by escimo

First draft.
I wonder if this fits the criteria?

You know? It took me a while to figurate what it was, perhaps it has too many efects (all the lights and shades mainly) maybe a bit less efects would make it look better.

Originally Posted by Cierra

how about this one?

The animation is good, but the colors look a bit saturated with 'red' and it looks a lso very dark.

I have to agree with Manju that it looks more like a sideview rather than a perspective sig.

[Furuno]

@KholdStare :
Seems better for the text now...

Version 0.2, I'm changing the perspective, brighten Mii-chan's lower side, using darker overlay color for the character and moving the text :



Or is this one better?

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Furuno

Well, this is way far more better than your previous one, it catchs the idea of perspective very well and the sig itsels is nice!

[Frailty]

I tweaked my entry
now with border, text and added some c4d's


C&C

[ganbaru]

@KholdStare I am not the best for juge animation but somethi ng seem wrong with this one.
@ Escimo I still don't know what on your sig after staring at if ofor a few minute
@ Furuno you should go with the second sig, it's a better one and it fit more the theme.
@ Fraility I am not sure than it's the best place for placing your text.

[escimo]

Thanks for the comments. Second draft. Hope this is a bit clearer on what it's supposed to be.

[Kana Futayo]

I'm back! (sort of ) I'm still out of town though.
A very quick draft. Does this qualify? CnC appreciated.

[Furuno]

@Frailty :
Maybe it's just me, but it seems that I read the text as "Towards the Flight".

Well, I guess I should change my entry then... Here's the updated version, resized to my new 360x120 px standard :


C&C is much appreciated...

[LKK]

@ Frailty: I agree with ganbaru about the placement of the text. Where it is now diminishes the pespective effect. It halts my eye traveling down the tunnel. Maybe if you placed it at the bottom on the sig on the same horizontal level as the person?
@ Moonie: I think it qualifies.

[escimo]

Third draft. Toned down the lighting and got rid of the text.

[Frailty]

replaced the text as ganbaru&LKK said
sharpened the lightened part a bit


@Furuno
it's just Light
the character before L is kinda like a design, it's a leaf-like brush I used

[LKK]

Originally Posted by Frailty

replaced the text as ganbaru&LKK said
sharpened the lightened part a bit

I like this placement better. The sharpening helps a lot too.

[NorthernFallout]

Text needs rework, but I was somewhat uncertain if it qualifies. To me it does have grand scale but that might be me... some of it was lost due to size.