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markesellus · 2008-09-28, 15:33

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Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

*sighs* Okay, Quack!Fate is finally featured in an ff.net near you:
Quack!Fate

Favorite the living heck out of it. :3

Also finished the fifth Omake CYOA chapter of SC2. D: Which was harder then I thought. =_= 9000 bugger words...

Spoiler for Ch. 5- The generic start:

=_= The individual Omakes can be found here: Ch. 5

Yes, linkage instead of quotage... You'd just be snipping it all over the place anyway...

Muahaha! I picked F and it was quite interesting.

But I'm probably going to read through all the scenes anyway for the fun of it.

I will go favorite the living hell out of Quack!Fate now.

Laith · 2008-09-28, 17:07

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 12:

Spoiler for decision 12:

Spoiler for R/S:

Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance.

Laith · 2008-09-28, 17:09

And "From the Past" update. Last one before chap 1

Spoiler for 0.4:

And i ask of all of you, should i post my stories on FFN for the enjoyment of others?

BPHaru · 2008-09-28, 17:25

Quote:

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for decision 12:

B
Let's see if Nanoha can fight in her current state.

Cuídense y sigan sorniendo

Evil Rick · 2008-09-28, 18:02

A grammar question guys

The correctr frase is

"Did you missed me""
or
"Do you missed me?"

NorthernFallout · 2008-09-28, 18:04

^ Actually...
"Did you miss me?"
or
"Have you missed me?" I think works too.

TheShinySword · 2008-09-28, 18:04

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Originally Posted by Evil Rick

A grammar question guys

The correctr frase is

"Did you missed me""
or
"Do you missed me?"

*correct phrase

Neither actually

missed is like when you miss a target
it can be either Did you miss me or do you miss me
Did you miss me would mean they returned do you miss me would mean they're still away

Knight of L-sama · 2008-09-28, 18:34

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

A grammar question guys

The correctr frase is

"Did you missed me""
or
"Do you missed me?"

If you're speaking in Quack!Fate language, "Did you missed me?" might work, but for everyone else... as the others said, "Do you miss me" or "Did you miss me" depending on the tense you want. :3

markesellus · 2008-09-28, 18:38

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Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 12:

Spoiler for decision 12:

Spoiler for R/S:

Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance.

Oh noes Nanoha! Well I'm interested to see how Nanoha will fare against Signum. B

Quote:

Originally Posted by Laith

And "From the Past" update. Last one before chap 1

Spoiler for 0.4:

And i ask of all of you, should i post my stories on FFN for the enjoyment of others?

Well I can't wait for chapter one. This was funny, poor Zafira. I think you should put them up on FF.net. People will like it and I can keep track of stories I like better.

Though you might have to explain how Crossroads works and everything.

@EvilRick:Yay grammar!

Seraph42 · 2008-09-28, 19:00

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Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 12:

Spoiler for decision 12:

Spoiler for R/S:

Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance.

A Show them what for

Evil Rick · 2008-09-28, 19:20

Ahh... thanks Guys

Spoiler for VK2 Preview:

Seraph42 · 2008-09-28, 19:30

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Ahh... thanks Guys

Spoiler for VK2 Preview:

Yes. Yes I did miss you

Lots

markesellus · 2008-09-28, 20:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Ahh... thanks Guys

Spoiler for VK2 Preview:

D: D: D: D: D: D: D: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Ella is really really creepy. But I guess that will make VKII more exciting.

Evil Rick · 2008-09-28, 20:51

Fallen

Spoiler for Chapter 17:

TheShinySword · 2008-09-28, 21:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Fallen

Spoiler for Chapter 17:

Hmm Mr. Long the business man. :3 interesting take on Mr. Long

Vivio Testarossa · 2008-09-28, 22:50

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Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 12:

Spoiler for decision 12:

Spoiler for R/S:

Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance.

Hmm the chapter does seem a bit on the short side...

Hiria · 2008-09-29, 00:28

Quote:

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 12:

Spoiler for decision 12:

Spoiler for R/S:

Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance.

B for moooore magiic!!

OrderNorChaos · 2008-09-29, 04:02

Quote:

Originally Posted by Laith

Crossroads

Spoiler for part 12:

Spoiler for decision 12:

Spoiler for R/S:

Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance.

I am selecting A for re-enactment.

TheShinySword · 2008-09-29, 06:14

I pick A because I can

Laith · 2008-09-29, 18:53

A= 4
B= 3

And thank you guys you are so nice... just joking.

Spoiler for Crossroad X01 Alicia:

...Vita vs Nanoha won... that is going to be hard to write (totally not ripping off the pwning at A´s beggining.)

Page claim for grammer... i meant gramar... i meant... ah whatever.

Edit here: Posted first part of A Chained Life in FFN

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4566688/1/A_chained_life

2008-09-28, 17:07	Link #9622
Laith Even if it just for a bit Author Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Cold Storage Age: 32	Crossroads Spoiler for part 12: “My apologies but we have no intention of surrendering the girl,” the valkyrie spoke, as she unsheathed Bardiche, her sword. “And we are not going out without a fight either,” The knight mimicked the action. There… are… too… many… of… them… I… hate… using… this… Master? Zwei… run with… the princess… and the… girl… to a safe… place… Okay Zwei understands. Master please take care. I… will… Zwei... “This way please,” the little girl said to the princess. Knowing what will happen if she didn’t obeyed the Tome of the Night Sky, the princess followed her as fast as she could. “Erio, Caro protect the princess and the Tome of the Night Sky, don’t let them hurt her, got it?” “Yes, Lord Fate.” The two myrmidons quickly ran behind the princess. “Don’t think we are letting you get away,” the red haired yelled at them “Soldiers followed them.” “Yes, sir,” the soldiers started to enter the passage. “Holy light open up my path to freedom…” the knight spoke, making her sword bright intensely. As the first soldier moved his sword to attack the knight ended her sentence “Divine Buster.” The light that had been stored in the sword was liberated as a ray of light pierced through the soldier and continued until the end of the passage, leaving the lifeless bodies in its path. Most of the soldiers were caught in the attack only four were spared by it. Well… that… was… ea- Suddenly she felt pain in her body and fell to the floor. The use of magic had already caught up with her, as she felt that the pain came from her chest. “Lady Takamachi, are you alright?” Fate asked without looking at her. It was obvious what was happening to Nanoha, as she had used more magic that she could handle thanks to the weakness that the darkness had brought. Her linker core was starting to show signs of overuse. I… miscalculated… my… strength… “Don’t… worry… Lord… Fate,” the brunette said. Although prey of her fear for the darkness and the pain from her chest, she could still be of use to protect the others. “Shamal, Zafira pursue the girl, try not to kill the princess she may have some use in the future. As for the myrmidons kill them if they become too troublesome,” Signum said calmly, as if the soldiers hadn’t been killed in front of her. “Vita, you and I will keep this two occupied.” “At last you do something right Signum,” Vita said, excited at the prospect of a fight. The other two just nodded and passed Fate and Nanoha, without any trouble at all. The two knights of the church focused all their attention in the two in front of them. Spoiler for decision 12: A) A battle between hammer and sword B)A battle between light and fire Spoiler for R/S: Yuuno 5 - Why are they taking so long?/ Fate 4 - She is good Alicia 5 - Is she alright? Erio 2 - So she is a Lumino mage... Caro 4 - Please rest a little Old sis/ Vita -2 - Idiot person Shamal -1 - My, my she looks pale Zafira -1 - The enemy Signum 0 - ... Can someone be so nice to stop the poll at 24.00 hrs after this post if i havent returned? Thanks in advance. __________________ Inexistant Time: My ranting place.・・・Fenruer Intun FanFiction Profile.

2008-09-28, 17:09	Link #9623
Laith Even if it just for a bit Author Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Cold Storage Age: 32	And "From the Past" update. Last one before chap 1 Spoiler for 0.4: A blue wolf was staring at a red haired kid that was in front of him. Zafira, the name of the wolf, was part of the wolkenritter. Unlike his companions, he had stayed at the base as he had felt that something bad would happen today. The visit of the familiar was unexpected and annoying, as she didn’t let him continue to sleep, but certainly not the bad thing. “Oi Zafira” the girl, who had two little dog ears and a tail, poked the wolf. The wolf didn’t react to the poking, expecting that if he didn’t show any sign of noticing her she would leave. Unfortunately the little red headed didn’t stop, making the wolf groan. “Za- ffi- ra-” The little girl sang as she continued to poke the wolf. “...What do you want?” the wolf growled at the insistence of the girl. He barely opened his red eyes to look at the girl, who was staring at him. “How are you?” the useless question was asked, perhaps to annoy more the wolf or really born from the curiosity of the red headed. Whatever it was only one thing was sure. Nothing could be more annoying. At least nothing from this time... And i ask of all of you, should i post my stories on FFN for the enjoyment of others? __________________ Inexistant Time: My ranting place.・・・Fenruer Intun FanFiction Profile.

2008-09-28, 18:02	Link #9625
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	A grammar question guys The correctr frase is "Did you missed me"" or "Do you missed me?" __________________

2008-09-28, 18:04	Link #9626
NorthernFallout The Interstellar Medium Author Join Date: May 2008 Location: [SWE] Age: 34	^ Actually... "Did you miss me?" or "Have you missed me?" I think works too. __________________

2008-09-28, 19:20	Link #9631
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	Ahh... thanks Guys Spoiler for VK2 Preview: __________________

2008-09-28, 20:51	Link #9634
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	Fallen Spoiler for Chapter 17: Techno - Union battle Ship "SHE'S_DEAD" Toxipoth said to himself With all the smoke still filling the room, Toxipoth had his avarage temperature visor, like the vision of a Snake, in the room, the only thing he was spoting, was a little figure droped on the floor, the corpse of Vita Outside the ship, the battle between the W.P.A forces and the Techno - Union soldiers were still taking place "I'D_BETTER_GRAB_HER_CORPSE_AND_GET_OUT_OF_HERE,_A LTHOUGH_SHE'S_DEAD._I_CAN_STILL_GET_THE_INFORMATIO N_OUT_OF_HER_BRAIN" Toxipoth started to walk in direction to the death mage, laughing, enjoing his coward triumph "AT_LAST..._THE_MASTER_LIGHT_WILL_BE_OURS!" He added, only at this point, Toxipoth noticed that something was wrong Suddenly, the little corpse started to... Spin? "WHAT_THE...?!" It was truly spining, faster and faster "WHAT'S_GOING_ON?!" All the smoke who was filling the room, was pushed away by a strong blow, finally, the room was clean of it and Toxipoth coulkd see what was happening "NO!_IMPOSIBLE!" "Graff Eissen!" Vita screamed, spining with the rocket of Garff Eissen [Explosion!] The device replyed, it stoped spining and it charged against Toxipoth, who was petrificated "NO!_NOOOOOO!!!!" the robot managed to scream before VCita's hammer impacted him Vita falled over her knees, vomiting blood over the remain pices of Toxipoth who were still smoking "I... must... get out..." She added, tring to stand up, with all the streenght she had left, using Graff Eissen, Vita made a hole in the ship to the exterior, she just jumped and falled, through the battle outside, all the planes though she was justy pices of the battle ship who were falling, Vita managed to see how the Techno - Union battle ship exploted in a big ball of Fire, she then just closed her eyes and keeped falling into the heart of a big jungle. ---------------------------------------------------- City of Dairou "So... wath's next?" Vivio asked to Karil who was cherfully peting Abe "Before answering that I'll aske you again... Do you really want to continue Vi? To kill this mens?" Vivio remained silent for a second, then she replyed "Yes..." Karil, remained a few seconds silent, she then pated Vivio on her back "Don't worry Vi, I'll be with you" Vivio just smiled "Okay then" Karil sadi while looking for something in her bag, she then pulled out a magasine and gave it to Vivio "Your first objetive is this man, Mr. Long" Karil said, pointing at the figure on the mgasine The title of the magasine was "Forbes" a big note below who said "Mr. Long, one of the richest mens in the universe!" and finally a picture of the so called Mr. Long, it was a male figure who was wearing a metalic helmet with the shape of a Dragon, long white hair and glowing red eyes, a very fine (and expensive) elegant costume in black "This is Mr. Long?" Vivio asked "Yes, he doesn't look like Bill Gates or Carlos Slim right?" "Heh yeah... uhmm... why does he wears that helmet?" "I don't know, no one has seen his true face, ever!" "And why he's so rich?" "He's the head of Long Enterprises, the bigest factory of weapons in the history... but, what noone knows, is that he's a member of the Brotherhood of Death, a terrible cult, leaded by really bad mens" "Those mens want to hurt Vita?" Vivio asked "Not only Vita... you see, the leders of the Brotherhood, the ones that you must kill, are persons who hurts others, for example, many of the weapons Long fabricate, are bought by terrorists and traficants, Now you understeand?" "I see... well then!" Vivio standed up "We must begin, were can I find this, Mr. Long?" "We must go to Long Enterprices, we will take the road to the Silver City, we'll find Long enterprices there!" After that, Vivio and Karil, headed to the North, it was gonna be a day or two for them to arrive to Silver City ---------------------------------------------------- Botan Jungle A furius rain was falling Over the Botan Jungle, the sky was as dark as a cave, thunders falled from the sky making a horrible noise Vita was draging Graff Eissen trough the wet land, her cloths were a mess, her body was covered but her own blood, sweet and now cold water from the rain, she was exhausted, she was injuried "It doesn't hurts..." She said Next to a big tree, Vita let her body fall, her face hited the mud "...it doesn't hurts..." She said again tring to stand up without succes, her arms were so week, that she couldn't move them anymore "...It... doesn't... hurts..." She said again, this time with her eyes filled with tears "...what... is... hapening... what is the... Master Light!?" Yelling this question to the skies, Vita used all the strenght she had left, and falled into a deep sleep, with the rain falling over her broken body __________________

2008-09-29, 06:14	Link #9639
TheShinySword Master of the Shiny Crack Author Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: In a cave	I pick A because I can

2008-09-29, 18:53	Link #9640
Laith Even if it just for a bit Author Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Cold Storage Age: 32	A= 4 B= 3 And thank you guys you are so nice... just joking. Spoiler for Crossroad X01 Alicia: She was the princess of the Belkan Empire. It was expected of her to act with sufficient class as her position in society required her to do so. She hated to act like this because it wasn’t her. To fake laughter, to fake smiles, to fake tears if it was necessary. “Please sister stop clinging to me,” her twin sister spoke to her. It was another thing that she hated. Her sister had grown cold thanks to her training in the church. It had been her fate, ironically, as the younger sibling. “But Sis, we haven’t been together in a long time,” the princess said, not letting go the arm of her sister. “And, and you always arrive without telling me. And, and,” tears started to form in the eyes of the princess. “You leave without telling me, so I… I-” the rest of the sentence was cut thanks to the sobs that came from the princess. Her sister only patted her head, trying to calm down the princess. Their reunions were like this as they were sporadic. --- “What troubles you my dear Alicia?” Her mother asked. She was combing the hair of the princess. It was one of those precious moments for the princess when her mother, the Empress of the Belkan Empire, had enough free time to be with her. “Nothing mother,” the princess lied. She didn’t want to trouble her mother. After all she had enough problems with her ongoing invasion. “Are you sure?” her mother asked. She was genuinely worried for her daughter. “Yes mother,” the princess lied once again. It was no easy task to not say her troubles to her mother, as she had always done. It was a bad idea to bottle up her troubles and her emotions but she had to do it for the sake of her mother. --- It had been three long years since the war had started. It had been two years since she “requested” the help of the church to fight alongside the empire. It had been one year since the last time she had met with her sister. It had been two months since the last time she had spoken properly with her mother. It had been one week since she realized that she started to become what she hated. She prayed for something to change her life. The Goddess had heard her pray, but as many knew, the superior beings always answered the calls in mysterious ways. “My apologies your highness but please come with us,” a silver haired woman with red eyes asked her. She was supposed to meet with the priestess in the church, but in her way her carriage had been stopped by unknown persons. “To where if I can ask?” the princess was in a position where asking question was foolishly, yet she did it. It was not because she wasn’t scared, as she was but she could hide it behind her mask that she had created, it was because she needed the piece of information to be rescued. “There is an abandoned fortress in the border of Paltina. That´s where we are going,” the silver haired woman answered. If the princess could think without the fear, she would notice that this was a trap, that they had told her on purpose. But alas her thoughts were clouded by the fear. --- She had sent a message to her sister as fast as she could. She was now held in the library as a hostage, as cliché as it seemed. The princess was captured and now a knight in shining armor will rescue her from the claws of the evil ones. A noise of a book falling awakened from her thoughts. Walking slowly to where she heard the noise, she saw the unthinkable. A blonde girl, no more than six years old, with a red eye and a green eye was trying to reach a book, higher that she could reach. Looking at the frustration of the girl, the princess took the book and gave to the child. “This is what you wanted, right?” she asked. Instead of hearing a shy yes, the girl just nodded. “Want me to read it for you?” a nod came from the blonde. Taking the girl´s hand she walked into a table that was near her. She read the book to the girl who heard everything with much interest. “What´s your name?” the princess asked while they walked searching for another book to read. The girl was in her arms as she needed to see which book she wanted to hear. The girl shook her head instead of talking. “You don’t have one? My, that is not possible,” the girl stared at the princess as she stopped walking. “You want to have a name?” a nod “How about… Vivio?” the name just came to her. The girl nodded. “Okay Vivio, which book you want to read now?” the girl pointed to a purple book in a bookshelf. It was in the highest part, so she couldn’t reach it. “Sorry, but I can´t read that to you. I can’t reach it,” to prove her point she stretched her hand “See?” the girl nodded sad at the negative of the princess. “Let´s pick another one ok?” --- “Why do they to throw me in here?” the princess asked to no one. She was in the dungeons as they have decided to change her location. “At least we are together” she said to Vivio. The girl was scared by the darkness surrounding them. “Don’t worry, I am here with you, nothing bad will happen okay?” the girl nodded, trembling by the fear. “Here let me tell you about my family okay?” the girl nodded again. --- Alicia Testarossa, princess of the Belkan Empire, sister to Fate, valkyrie of the Holy Church of the Goddess would meet the girl that would change her destiny, a girl that was interesting to her. She would soon meet Lady Nanoha Takamachi. ...Vita vs Nanoha won... that is going to be hard to write (totally not ripping off the pwning at A´s beggining.) Page claim for grammer... i meant gramar... i meant... ah whatever. Edit here: Posted first part of A Chained Life in FFN http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4566688/1/A_chained_life __________________ Inexistant Time: My ranting place.・・・Fenruer Intun FanFiction Profile. Last edited by Laith; 2008-09-29 at 19:11.