2011-06-01, 04:54 | Link #1282 |
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Kyon, meet kha; kha meet kyon.
You two will get along just fine... kha is somewhat the sempai in crack before you kyon, in many ways- you are already a junior-kha.. As for me, I continue write all the normal kinds of story....>.> you know, christmas, valentines...
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2011-06-02, 01:09 | Link #1286 |
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Alright everyone, remember when I said I'll write a fanfic for Touma and Shokuhou (in the LN thread)? I've started it, and I'd like some feedback before I put this up on fanfic net. Namely, how plausible is this scenario? (I'm assuming everyone have looked at Railgun chapter 41 and/or know what's happened in it)
Title: Minds, Memories and Misfortune Spoiler for Synopsis:
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2011-06-02, 01:46 | Link #1287 | |
Portable Dude Mk. II
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Well, I think this will be enough for a start. We will have to see the story as it unfolds for a better review, as I think I can't give enough for insights based on these alone.
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2011-06-02, 03:55 | Link #1288 | |
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I like this. I think it has a lot of potential, especially when I feel that Misaki doesn't really have a lot of experience regarding males. I think. I really feel you should go ahead with this, it's awesome. Hopefully, even Misaki will not be immune to the Kami-yan disease and we can have a threesome! Fufufu... |
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2011-06-02, 09:25 | Link #1293 |
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Misaki touches Touma triumphantly. "Aha! With this... eh!?" She couldn't feel anything. Nothing at all. It was as if her powers could not work on Touma at all.
Touma stared blankly at the strange Ojou-chan that had latched on to his arm like an octopus. "Erm, Miss? What are you doing?" "What do you think you're doing to MY idiot!" Mikoto roared indignantly. "Oi, when did I become 'your' idiot!?" Oh my, I can just see that happening now. |
2011-06-02, 11:22 | Link #1294 | |
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2011-06-02, 12:08 | Link #1295 | |
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W-Wait, why are you burning down your harddrive Flere?! Did I say something?! Is my go-ahead that misfortunate?! Anyways, tiny mistake I spotted
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2011-06-04, 03:35 | Link #1297 |
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Sorry for the double post, My Shokuhou fanfic is now up on fanfic net with a chapter past the prologue.
Link here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune Enjoy |
2011-06-04, 04:02 | Link #1298 | |
Portable Dude Mk. II
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I like how Misaki is reacting to the horror that is in Touma's memories, and I'm still reading through the chapter.
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2011-06-04, 06:34 | Link #1299 | |
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2011-06-04, 08:11 | Link #1300 | |
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Now onto the mind thing. Isn't ars magna a field type of spell? like field ritual spell? it did distorts your view of reality by making the thoughts of the user true but isn't that diffeernt from what Misaki is doing? plus if mind attacks or mind reading works on Touma then the telepathy girl in vol 6 should be able to go through to him by telephathy.
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