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[outerelf]

Originally Posted by Wilfriback

My guess:

Touma -> Touko <--- actually that name exists.
Accel -> Yuriko <--- the author ... really
Mikoto -> Makoto
Kuroko -> Kurono
Motoharu -> Motoka
Kaori -> Kaoru(?)
Stiyl -> Stella



"Komacho" looks the same as Komoe

... I think that I fail at names, because Makoto still looks like a girls name XD Oh well. Thanks for the guesses. I'll hurry up and finish with my yaoi story, and get writing on this one.

Once again, I'll ask if anyone have any other characters they'd like to see. Because I assure you it's going to be utter bedlam.

*Edit: We got several more characters:

Lessar
Itsuwa
Fukiyose

.... You know what- just give me as many genderbent names as you can possibly get. I'll do my best to work them all in. Saten, Uihara, anyone. This fic is going to be insanity to the extreme!

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Ooh, another chapter. It was pretty cute, nothing too forced or awkward like most fanfics of this type usually are. I do feel pretty bad for Touma, though.



I have thought about a few ideas involving Touma and Yuriko. Such as an alternate ending in volume 3 where Touma learns her true reasons for going along with the experiment.

Spoiler for yuriko fic ideas:

Something like, if she refuses, the experiment will go on no matter what she does since the administration is backing it up, and her agreeing to it means that it would keep the deaths at the minimum 20000, so she has to keep up a facade to try and scare the SISTERs away as a last resort.

You could additionally delve into her dark past and reveal it somehow, preferably not entirely by her telling him because that would make it seem like she's trying make herself look sympathetic. If you want to make her suffer even more then throw in an abuse or rape factor that was triggered by a scientist who started at an early age when she didn't have any powers or when they were a low level and she couldn't fight back. This broke her down psychologically and lets him bypass her powers and break her whenever he wants because she truly believes she deserves it.

However, the abuse/rape angle is thrown in way too much in fanfiction as an element used for cheap sympathy and an excuse for character development. Use sparingly, if at all.

Touma preaches first and says or does something which triggers a rampage where she proceeds to beat him nearly to death because she knows he doesn't understand. Either Touma loses and she lets him live and then he somehow breaks into a major institute carrying out the researchto try to stop it, finds out about her dark past (if you want to use the abuse/rape thing then have Touma witness her abuse in the middle of it as a punishment for letting a witness go), and then KO's all the scientists out of shock and rage, OR Touma then proceeds to defeat her there to BREAK HER ILLUSION and stop the experiment. Both would trigger a flag. However, the "Touma saves Girl X and Girl X proceeds to fall in love with Touma" thing is getting SO old, plus he doesn't really seem to have any feelings for the girls he save...

Or, you could go as close to the original with Touma just beating her and her developing the same relationship with Last Order, but have her develop a crush over time on "that one guy who managed, against all odds, to defeat me and change my life forever".

Just throwing these out there if you want to use a few elements from it. I did go overboard with writing a bit. These really aren't that good though.

Well...Yuriko's relationship with Last order doesn't really have to change, seeing as how I always saw Accelerator-Last order relationship as a sibling relationship. So yea, the dark past sounds pretty good and I guess Yuriko would become the big sis to LO.

I guess we really have no need to make Yuriko become a cripple, as that kind of tarnish her image. We could have her develop an inferiority complex after the defeat against Touma and somehow get the two together as she faces her past.

Although a crack idea could be that since Yuriko's apartment is trashed (except her girl stuff lol). She could be assigned to a dorm, although unfortunately for her and Touma's luck, she is relocated to Touma's dorm (and both will have to feed the glutton) xD

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Coming up with these names are hard.

Lessar: Lesso? Lessario?
Itsuwa: It's unknown whether this is his/her first or last name, so wouldn't it be fine to keep it the same?
Seiri: Sei? Seitaro? Seisuke?
Ruiko: no idea Call him Saten as always.
Index: Would still be Index since it's not necessarily a girl's name
Shiage: Shiko? Shiki? Shiho? Shiri?
Aogami Pierce: Would still be the same since "blue hair and piercings" isn't specifically male
The Queen: The King, of course.
Aisa: Aitaro? Aihiko? Aitaka?
Hyouka: Hyousuke? Hyouya? Hyouta?
Awaki: It actually sounds like this would be okay as a male name, but maybe that's just me...
Uiharu: Uisuke? Uitaka? Uikazu?

[MeisterBabylon]

Uiharu Kazuki. Like Saten Rui.

[outerelf]

Thank you all for your genderbent names! I'll use them when I write this fic. Without further ado, I present you with chapter 5:

"Accelerator." Touma's mind stopped working, and he uttered the first words that rose to his mind. "You look pretty cute like a girl."

"I'll kill you."

[SuzushinaYuriko]

You know, every time I read this fic, I have this huge Kuroko-esque grin on my face for some reason.

You put my idea to good use. I'm impressed.

Spoiler for more from the depths of a fujoshi's mind:

What I picture happening in the next chapter. He'll go attack Touma, Touma will say or do something that will make him even more embarrassed ("DON'T LOOK!! JUST DIE!!!") and demolish a large chunk of the building to throw stuff at him. He will then proceed to attempt murdering Touma again (and fail). After everything's over, Accel will realise that it wasn't actually Touma's fault and that he just caused loads more problems for him. He'll stutter out an apology at the hospital with a deredere face that will make Touma's heart skip a beat and make him question his sexuality.

[outerelf]

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

You know, every time I read this fic, I have this huge Kuroko-esque grin on my face for some reason.

You put my idea to good use. I'm impressed.

Spoiler for more from the depths of a fujoshi's mind:

What I picture happening in the next chapter. He'll go attack Touma, Touma will say or do something that will make him even more embarrassed ("DON'T LOOK!! JUST DIE!!!") and demolish a large chunk of the building to throw stuff at him. He will then proceed to attempt murdering Touma again (and fail). After everything's over, Accel will realise that it wasn't actually Touma's fault and that he just caused loads more problems for him. He'll stutter out an apology at the hospital with a deredere face that will make Touma's heart skip a beat and make him question his sexuality.

So close! I've actually got the rest of the story written out, so I can tell you that up to the 'murder Touma' everything is correct. But I can work in some of the rest of yours. It'll only take some minute adjusting.

[Miraluka]

About the new names:

Itsuwa = Itsuki.

Shiage can be.... wait! Yaoi fic? It wasn't a genderswap fic? *head explodes like Tsuchimikado*

I even got the genderswaps versions... D:

Spoiler for Click here:

[outerelf]

Originally Posted by Wilfriback

About the new names:

Itsuwa = Itsuki.

Shiage can be.... wait! Yaoi fic? It wasn't a genderswap fic? *head explodes like Tsuchimikado*

No, no, the story I'm *currently* writing is a yaoi fic between Accel and Touma.

The genderbent version I will write after I finish my yaoi fic. In the genderbent version, there will be no pairings except harem pairings that will be fighting each other

(Does that mean she's now a magician/esper hybrid?)

[Flere821]

^ *clap clap* Suzumiya Haruhi reference? Nice

And anyone can tell me how to get Google translate onto that Jap-version of the fanfic earlier? Or anything that could translate it, really.

Having the Genderbent characters meet themselves... hmm, sounds good, but I was really just going for a genderbent version like the Suzumiya spinoff when I first thought about it lol.

Still, it'll be interesting to see how Touma and Touko will meet up together, sigh and says "Fukou da" together - and if like I said Touko is like a 'Onee-sama' type then weeeell...

Anyone up for a Touko x Kuroko pairing? xD

Not to mention Touma likes onee-san types...

[Marcus H.]

Jap-version of the fanfic earlier?

Which one?

[Master Assassin]

The one I mentioned a page ago.

@ Flere821: IIRC the title of the page when I opened it was something like:

(Touma) "Fukou da." (Touko?Touka?) "Fukou dawa."

Which makes me seem to think Touka speaks like an ojou-sama (what's with the "-wa" at the end of that)...

[blitz1/2]

it's nice to see this thread full of life

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Originally Posted by Wilfriback

About the new names:

Itsuwa = Itsuki.

Shiage can be.... wait! Yaoi fic? It wasn't a genderswap fic? *head explodes like Tsuchimikado*

I even got the genderswaps versions... D:

Spoiler for Click here:

...holy crap, I think these pictures are starting to pull me into the yuri side... NO!! MUST THINK BL THOUGHTS!!

Love how fem Kakine dotes on Yuriko, and how Yuriko used fem Gunha to shield herself. I think I'd like male Mikoto better than female Mikoto, and fem Gunha looks pretty awesome.

And yes, BL and genderbending have revived this thread. About time.

[shmaster]

Originally Posted by outerelf

Thank you all for your genderbent names! I'll use them when I write this fic. Without further ado, I present you with chapter 5:

"Accelerator." Touma's mind stopped working, and he uttered the first words that rose to his mind. "You look pretty cute like a girl."

"I'll kill you."

Phwahaha, I love the vending machine part. And at last, the trap occurred. Though, the last portion felt a bit rushed, I was expecting Touma to lose his mind first.

Though I wonder what Toiuma is going to think of himself once he calms down and realized that his first thought upon seeing the trap Accel is that he is cute. Phwahahahah!!

Finally, you might want to watch out for the typos.

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

And yes, BL and genderbending have revived this thread. About time.

Perhaps we should shout "JUST AS PLANNED!!"??

[MeisterBabylon]

HELL NO!!

*remains in denial for liking ToumaYuriko fic*

[outerelf]

Originally Posted by shmaster

Phwahaha, I love the vending machine part. And at last, the trap occurred. Though, the last portion felt a bit rushed, I was expecting Touma to lose his mind first.

Though I wonder what Toiuma is going to think of himself once he calms down and realized that his first thought upon seeing the trap Accel is that he is cute. Phwahahahah!!

Finally, you might want to watch out for the typos.

The vending machine part was more of a 'I can't resist sticking this in then anything else. And just what do you mean you were expecting Touma to loose his mind first? It's supposed to seem a little rushed because if you leave Touma alone too long then people move into the "Friends Only" category, notice? The girls are moving fast to make certain that Touma at least gets the idea of 'Accel is acceptable'

Touma is going to be wondering what he's thinking

I wasn't aware my spelling was that atrocious. I thought I got the typos this chapter around.

[tsunade666]

........................I'm not sure if I should be lurking here anymore................... The fan fiction thread is turning into a grimoire and it's poisoning my mind.....


OH NOOOO'S!!!

[outerelf]

Chapter 6 of A Certain Albino and Idiot:

Touma reflected it was perhaps the most hypocritical thing he had ever done to take off running before someone finished their monologue, but he wasn't concerned about such things. His life was far more important.

I admit to having some fun with this chapter Also, I suppose I should warn you all now, this isn't a long fic. This is just about making the first step of 'Maybe liking each other'.

[Ashaman]

Ha ha, awesome.

poor Touma though.

Why do you call it chap 6? It seems to be chap5 to me.