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Old 2004-01-25, 12:25   Link #1
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FanArt Kabuto, critic, comment, please..

As no one seemed to want critic/comment the Zabuza she drew I thought I post newer pic she drew on christmas.
So tell her what is wrong and what is not or something like that..
I'll make sure she reads what you have said.

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Old 2004-01-25, 12:34   Link #2
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nothing wrong at first glance
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Old 2004-01-25, 14:00   Link #3
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its perfect but maybe ther is a problem with the forhead..... if it was a bit larger.... i meen, i think its a little short and so it look a little scushed in the paper
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Old 2004-01-25, 14:37   Link #4
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Originally Posted by Genesis
As no one seemed to want critic/comment the Zabuza she drew I thought I post newer pic she drew on christmas.
So tell her what is wrong and what is not or something like that..
I'll make sure she reads what you have said.
Wrong? You mean this wasn't done by the animators?

You're kidding, right? It looks perfect to me.

Well, maybe the collarbone looks just a teensy bit... wrong. But, it could be just my imagination. I mean, I'm studying this really, really hard looking for flaws, but seriously.... excellent work.
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Old 2004-01-25, 14:45   Link #5
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calavera: I'm not sure what you mean "so it look a little scushed in the paper ". if you could explain little? Especially word scushed, never heard..
Thank you.
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Old 2004-01-25, 14:58   Link #6
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Looks awesome ^_^
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Old 2004-01-25, 15:02   Link #7
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Oh I like it. Cell shading looks like it came right out of the the anime.
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Old 2004-01-25, 15:08   Link #8
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you didnt just cut this out of an episode did you, lol, it seriously looks kick ass great work
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Old 2004-01-25, 15:27   Link #9
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i dont know how to explain it raelly well.... u see, the hair should disapear on the top right part of what the papper should be... right now i feel as if the head was shorter of what it should be

for the rest it's just perfect
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Old 2004-01-25, 15:32   Link #10
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Calavera: Thank you for clearing up ^^
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Old 2004-01-25, 16:34   Link #11
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wow as usual......and as usual.....we want your friend to get an account here!!
if not, then pass on to her that i love her stuf....its very simple and very nice....
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Old 2004-01-25, 16:53   Link #12
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its awsome, but I have a suggestion :P

If she already dosnt do this, she should try doing everything at a higher rez, then when shes done, reduce it to the size she wants, that might make some of the black lines smoother, or i could be wrong o.O

And yes, she needs to get an accont.
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Old 2004-01-25, 17:01   Link #13
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mundain: she actually does do them in higher res and then reduces their size (though some of the works have gone wrong with the lines because of few mistakes but all the new ones are done in high res).
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Old 2004-01-25, 17:03   Link #14
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EXCELLENT!! like all her other drawings i've seen... almost like a screenshot only mistake might be the thing that calavera mentioned, but i think most can't see it unless someone tells what to look..
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Old 2004-01-25, 17:10   Link #15
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Looks great the onl thing that I see that makes it look slightly imperfect are the black lines on the cheek arent perfect for some reason. Other then that, nearly no imperfections.
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Old 2004-01-25, 20:59   Link #16
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As no one seemed to want critic/comment the Zabuza she drew I thought I post newer pic she drew on christmas.
So tell her what is wrong and what is not or something like that..
I'll make sure she reads what you have said.

why not draw the entire kabuto in some original pose? why only a face shot? couldnt you have been MORE creative?

im gonna say it again, it looks straight up copied from an episode.
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Old 2004-01-25, 22:29   Link #17
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why not draw the entire kabuto in some original pose? why only a face shot? couldnt you have been MORE creative?

im gonna say it again, it looks straight up copied from an episode.
Most people who are still learning only do the face. Plus, thats a damn big picture, it'd be pretty hard to scan something....full-body with those dimensions .

On a side note: please don't quote with img tags, it only wastes space in the thread.
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Old 2004-01-26, 05:15   Link #18
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This one happened to be face yes. But there are lots of work with more than just faces ^^
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Old 2004-01-26, 08:58   Link #19
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all of the drawings are ripped out from episodes indeed, I clicked around in some episodes and i found EXACTLY the same poses of the characters, cging and everything is exactly the same. you have either printed them out, drawn over them and scanned them, or directly ripped them out of the episodes.
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Old 2004-01-26, 10:37   Link #20
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all of the drawings are ripped out from episodes indeed, I clicked around in some episodes and i found EXACTLY the same poses of the characters, cging and everything is exactly the same. you have either printed them out, drawn over them and scanned them, or directly ripped them out of the episodes.
The ear looks off, so that's my guess.
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