2012-01-05, 08:37 | Link #16562 | |
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Also, I'm quite interested about the part where only personals get recognition... Then again, it doesn't really affect the students in a negative manner, does it? Because it's hard to believe a school where there isn't one person who would be jealous about another having a higher standing.
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2012-01-05, 08:38 | Link #16563 |
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Deconstruct it, have Irish puke and weakened, THEN they knew not to do it and change the method.
Yes, they can be bough anywhere. You can also order them from any optic shop. @Stratos The students get jealous of Ichika get his I.S. from the get go, also the fuss that is Houki and Akatsubaki, but that's about it, not much. in Sacred Twins, the rivalries between students are serious business, even if they're friend with each other (and some simply aren't really friendly... such as Louise ). Culminating with Ichika mowing through a horde of second year student because he's appointed as Vice-president and is under Tatenashi, and has to fight Charles because he support Louise, Tate's rival.
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2012-01-05, 08:38 | Link #16564 |
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@eratas: That's exactly what they can't accept the current system (except the engineer. She's just annoyed because they won't let her build her own stuff). You're either rep candidate, military, or development. berserker girl thought she could just fly around in the IS. arrogant lazy genius cannot take orders and the screw-up is pretty self-explanatory.
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2012-01-05, 08:43 | Link #16565 |
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@ Stratos - Do you see any non-personals get screen time or significant roles? Didn't think so. Also, no one really shows signs of jealousy, but that's because they're too busy having wet dreams about Ichika Most people don't really treat IS' seriously and treat it like getting an earring or a new fashion trend.
@ Demi - The system's not changing bceause it can't be changed. The cores are limited so pouting about it won't change anything. @ Senpai - Why would they be so worried? He's not complaining about it and he looks no different no matter what he eats anyway. Also, change the method how? Coercing or threatening him didn't work. Side note - Can you take Maya scolding anyone seriously? When I imagine it in my head, I just start laughing for some reason.
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2012-01-05, 08:51 | Link #16568 | |||
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1. They might give up later 1.b. Ichika will call on him out for wasting decent food (add some humor) 2. Otherwise, have Maya or Tatenashi get rid of their bubbly side and threat to ban him from mission if he not treat his health well. (add some dramatic humor too) 3. a combination of above Your choice See above, remember that Maya is not 100% ditzy moeblob, she's a professional teacher and combat instructor, also his mother figure later.
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2012-01-05, 08:57 | Link #16570 |
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@ Senpai - Would him choosing a specific food/diet and sticking to those foods count as a solution? Like he eats sushi for every meal everyday?
Side note - How? Go tranquil fury like Charlotte does and take of her glasses for added effect? @ Demi - I know that. The problem being the ending will be a major shaggy dog ending if nothing changes at all.
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2012-01-05, 08:58 | Link #16571 |
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@ Demi
Maybe you meant brutal deconstruction about teenager's carefree nature, curiosity, and mischief? @ Eras Probably a variation of sushi with different composition so he can have balanced diet... while tastes almost the same. Side note - the scary shiny glasses for example, or taking off the glasses. Both will work in tandem with her voice become 'straighter' and deeper.
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2012-01-05, 09:12 | Link #16573 |
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If the chef is creative enough then yes, even cheap, homemade sushi can be good (shop-made sushi is often expensive), it's not like Irish will complain if it has something he accustomed to (meat, fish, eel, crab, SHARK!) even if it has a lot of rice or vegetable (including nori = dried seaweed that wrap entire sushi).
Besides, being formed in small shape means they can be eaten quickly and Irish don't need to waste any, just pick and eat according to his need. Side note - adding more humorous drama indeed.
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2012-01-05, 09:17 | Link #16575 |
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@ Senpai - Then I guess he'll be eating sushi for the early to mid oarts of the series till his body adjusts Ichika's probably gonna monologue how unheakthy that is when they're eating together.
Side note - Number 4 in his list of phobia's: Maya when she's pissed Side note 2 - Just wondering: His pale skin and white hair was a combination of both the skull suit and his stressful lifestyle. Would his body get back to normal after the story ends and he stops going on missions? I'm going to sleep since school is early tom. See ya guys later
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2012-01-05, 09:23 | Link #16576 |
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@ Eras
Yes, Ichika definitely will comment, but said that it's better than being picky about food and waste the rest. Side note - Side note 2 - took years, and by years, I mean very variable. Irish might stay like that until he's in mid and late twenties! Probably gained several cm but his body don't change that much, just some muscles and little fat. Good nite @ Flame I often called such color silvery white, sparky under the lights, not sparky under the shadow.
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2012-01-05, 09:49 | Link #16578 | |
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And yes, they remain as friends. ST@RZ's overarching theme is [Where are they now?], and that includes humanity as a whole. In a galaxy, far, far away... While the gender flaw in IS control has never been fixed (that's like telling some straight people that they are going to be gay for a few years, from the IS' perspective), men have access to decent Condensor units. And with more and more male ISpers born every day, this problem is on the decline. Approaching from the other end is Karon. She distilled her unique sword & gun fighting style and IS subsystem manipulation into a set of pilot techniques called Rouran Jutsu and have spent the last decade teaching them. She encouraged the mentorship system which worked so well for her, and now it is not uncommon to have Graduates take on Apprentices during the final year of training. Most of all, these techniques are what gives ISpers their main advantage over the mundane, and Karon taught them to everyone. IS use is still restricted, but it is no more restricted than a soldier and his gun is kept apart from the lay population. Boys and girls who choose to become pilots attend the same IS schools; the guys are given Condensors and the girls IS; with IS so common, recharging Condensors is very easy. Very small Condensor units power whole cities, and several large ones sustain whole colonies that have mushroomed across the Solar System. Balance to the IS has never been at such a peak. Against this backdrop, the new idols begin their training...
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2012-01-05, 10:45 | Link #16579 |
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Okay.... Time to get serious.
I plan to junk everything (threw old ideas into recycle bin and retype everything) and start from zero again.... (only to re-use some ideas too good to throw away) No more revision to the old story again!! Really sick of it, might as well be going around in circle..... A new beginning can only be start from destruction! I will be making a new OC list (To increase the surprise level by not letting people know their full details) and more new plots. (Hopefully this time, a real story that can catch people's attention....)
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