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2012-01-16, 08:07 | Link #18403 |
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I remember the building is an abandoned hospital right? I'm not sure if they're bother to do it...
But then again, that'll make a good punch for Ichika's usual, idealistic self. Anyway, I knew you're annoyed but it's still up to Age's choice.
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2012-01-16, 08:09 | Link #18404 |
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Is it just me or are most (especially Japanese)male OCs seems to be following a trend of having an "I" as the first letter of their name/surname?
...and I just realized that my male OC's name also starts with an "I" ._.
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2012-01-16, 08:14 | Link #18406 |
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The only reason they bothered to do it is because Irish is in the same building as them. They know how tenacious he can be when he's fighting so they used it as a last resort to kill him. Viktor's smart: He tried to isolate the three people (Irish, Joshua, and Michael) who he knew would disagree if they found out about the bombings and made it so that they'd have a hard time surviving. Michael took a hell of a lot of abuse before getting killed and he knows if any of them arrange to reach the bombs then the plan fails. Overkill is the only way they thought they could kill them.
Side note - Why are you fine with reading Shadow rom-com, but not Daydreams? @ Stratos - Mine starts with I, but his "name" is a nationality
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2012-01-16, 08:27 | Link #18410 | |
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Also, for the readers, though I posted the answer here a few times back, I put up a question at the end of Chapter 6 for any other readers that don't come to this thread often, or at all.
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2012-01-16, 08:27 | Link #18411 |
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The rom com is either a. to show the boys are buttmonkeys or b. to show how horrific being abuttmonkey is.
So yeah. The rest is normal shiptease though, so at the least 1/3 of them are deconstructed.
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2012-01-16, 08:33 | Link #18412 |
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Problem: How do you do Rom-com when it's first person view and the pov bearer is someone like Irish? He'd make it sound like everything happening was factual and boring.
Regular version: Her face blushed a bright red and she let out a small squeak as my hands squeezed her breasts by accident. Irish version: Her face looked like it became covered in blood and she seemed to make sounds akin to a mouse squeaking. Did it hurt? I squeezed her chest by accident, but I didn't think it would be painful.
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2012-01-16, 08:47 | Link #18414 |
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Prologue delayed to to various distraction....
I think I will turn the prologue into fairytale version of both Ignis' and Alex's backstory.... Because Cipher has one and it is only fair if I give them both the same treatment. Edit: It allow me to put them into ISA without overly long explanation.
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2012-01-16, 09:00 | Link #18417 |
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@ Senpai - At what height is it possible not to kill yourself by jumping?
@ Box - No offense, but could you please stop mentioning canon in your reviews when the fic itself already breaks canon in half? I really don't need to hear about how the IS isn't affected by recoil while you ignore the fact that there are future kids running around and you don't make a single comment about that.
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