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[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Ashaman

This is only half of what I'd usually like to release, but I wanted to put this out there now before I go to bed. After I finish this segment tomorrow or whenever, I'll post this and the first two sections on FF.net.

BTW, part one can be found on page 15 on this forum, and part 2 on page 16.

We've really been getting some attention here, haven't we (most of it outerself's fault)

Spoiler for ToumaxYuriko fic part 3:

“So,” Touma began slowly, “who else knows that you’re really a girl?”

Now fully dressed and looking like a boy again, Touma was escorting Accelerator out the door, looking for Last Order.

The white haired girl threw Touma a small glare, but answered anyway. “Just this Frog Faced doctor I know. Last Order may suspect, but I’m not sure. If anyone else knows, I don’t have a fucking clue. Now shut up about it!” she spat out.

“Hai, hai,” Touma said placatingly.

The female Accelerator just growled in response.

But then, Touma suddenly let out a little laugh. “I just remembered a random thought I just had. For some reason, I thought you would be a girl transferring into my class under the name Suzushina Yuriko.”

Accelerator stopped suddenly. “That name…” she mumbled. “It’s not a bad name,” she finally said as she set off again.

“Accelerator! Misaka cheers as Misaka spots her saviour and embraces him tightly round the middle. Oh, and Misaka’s other saviour Misaka notes as Misaka’s happiness grows.”

These were the words the little girl known as Last Order let out as she spotted and hugged Accelerator, and then Touma.

“Wha, Last Order?” Touma frowned in confusion.

“I’m taking care of her. Got a problem with that?” Accelerator challenged, her voice back to being a low gravelly growl.

“Really? I’m glad,” Touma gave her a soft smile. “I heard a lot of good things form Last Order about her guardian; she really cares about you.”

“Stop it Misaka shyly demands, holding Misaka’s cheeks to cover up Misaka’s embarrassment.”

“Tch,” Accelerator replied softly.

“Misaka has a question Misaka states as Misaka turns to the first saviour of the Sister’s. Misaka and the Sisters would like your contact details so that even the Misaka overseas can speak to you Misaka asks hopefully as Misaka attempts to give you the puppy dog eyes.”

Gazing into Last Orders earnest gaze, Touma couldn’t find it within himself to say no.

She took the details gratefully, silently sending them all over the world via the Misaka network.

“Now that the business as well as lucky encounters are over with, Misaka wishes to declare her intention to return home as Misaka rubs her hungry stomach.”

“C’mon you little brat,” Accelerator said, beginning to walk away.

However, just before she reached the exit, she turned back to look at Touma.

With a “Tch” she continued walking. It would have been nice to spend more time with that guy. He was interesting.


Once Touma had seen the duo of Last Order and Accelerator off, he turned to head back to class.

However, before he’d taken two steps, he had mail on his phone.

He flicked it open as he walked, finding an unknown number had sent him a message, reading “This Misaka would like to thank you, please come to Seven Heaven at 6pm. Misaka 16757.”

Touma was just about to send a message back when he noticed more messages had arrived, all from unknown numbers.

100, 200, 250 mails, more and more piled up.

This was to be expected, though Touma had no way of knowing this. After all, 9978 teenage girls had just obtained the number of their saviour, and each one wanted to offer him their thanks.

LOL at the Misaka emails, although I assume number 10032 would be the one closest to Touma compared to the others. xD

I hope you plan on uploading this to FF.net soon, because it's going to be hard searching through threads to find the previous chapters.

[Flere821]

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

I thought the increased amount of collapse of eastern fantasy fanarts would have been an indication. I guess I am the unofficial artist, but I noticed my drawing skills have improved (albeit a little, but still better than none)
But honestly, with the amount of wording, you can turn your fic into a novel.

Well yes, you've mentioned before you like this - I was just surprised there are people apart from you who also like my fic lol

And my fic as a novel? I highly doubt that, as my fic is only around 50k words at the moment. I've seen other fics with 344k (Kyon Big Damn Hero), 458k words (NGE nobody dies), and finally 756k words (Shinji and Warhammer 40000) - I'm a long way off from getting this fic into a novel, even a Light Novel

And yes, there will be fight scene/s in the next chapter of CoEF, though writing fight scenes aren't exactly my strong point IMO. I'll try and make it entertaining

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Originally Posted by Ashaman

This is only half of what I'd usually like to release, but I wanted to put this out there now before I go to bed. After I finish this segment tomorrow or whenever, I'll post this and the first two sections on FF.net.

BTW, part one can be found on page 15 on this forum, and part 2 on page 16.

We've really been getting some attention here, haven't we (most of it outerself's fault)

Spoiler for ToumaxYuriko fic part 3:

“So,” Touma began slowly, “who else knows that you’re really a girl?”

Now fully dressed and looking like a boy again, Touma was escorting Accelerator out the door, looking for Last Order.

The white haired girl threw Touma a small glare, but answered anyway. “Just this Frog Faced doctor I know. Last Order may suspect, but I’m not sure. If anyone else knows, I don’t have a fucking clue. Now shut up about it!” she spat out.

“Hai, hai,” Touma said placatingly.

The female Accelerator just growled in response.

But then, Touma suddenly let out a little laugh. “I just remembered a random thought I just had. For some reason, I thought you would be a girl transferring into my class under the name Suzushina Yuriko.”

Accelerator stopped suddenly. “That name…” she mumbled. “It’s not a bad name,” she finally said as she set off again.

“Accelerator! Misaka cheers as Misaka spots her saviour and embraces him tightly round the middle. Oh, and Misaka’s other saviour Misaka notes as Misaka’s happiness grows.”

These were the words the little girl known as Last Order let out as she spotted and hugged Accelerator, and then Touma.

“Wha, Last Order?” Touma frowned in confusion.

“I’m taking care of her. Got a problem with that?” Accelerator challenged, her voice back to being a low gravelly growl.

“Really? I’m glad,” Touma gave her a soft smile. “I heard a lot of good things form Last Order about her guardian; she really cares about you.”

“Stop it Misaka shyly demands, holding Misaka’s cheeks to cover up Misaka’s embarrassment.”

“Tch,” Accelerator replied softly.

“Misaka has a question Misaka states as Misaka turns to the first saviour of the Sister’s. Misaka and the Sisters would like your contact details so that even the Misaka overseas can speak to you Misaka asks hopefully as Misaka attempts to give you the puppy dog eyes.”

Gazing into Last Orders earnest gaze, Touma couldn’t find it within himself to say no.

She took the details gratefully, silently sending them all over the world via the Misaka network.

“Now that the business as well as lucky encounters are over with, Misaka wishes to declare her intention to return home as Misaka rubs her hungry stomach.”

“C’mon you little brat,” Accelerator said, beginning to walk away.

However, just before she reached the exit, she turned back to look at Touma.

With a “Tch” she continued walking. It would have been nice to spend more time with that guy. He was interesting.


Once Touma had seen the duo of Last Order and Accelerator off, he turned to head back to class.

However, before he’d taken two steps, he had mail on his phone.

He flicked it open as he walked, finding an unknown number had sent him a message, reading “This Misaka would like to thank you, please come to Seven Heaven at 6pm. Misaka 16757.”

Touma was just about to send a message back when he noticed more messages had arrived, all from unknown numbers.

100, 200, 250 mails, more and more piled up.

This was to be expected, though Touma had no way of knowing this. After all, 9978 teenage girls had just obtained the number of their saviour, and each one wanted to offer him their thanks.

YES!! I wholeheartedly support this idea! Is it gonna be ToumaxYuriko? And lol at the SISTERs spamming Touma with mail.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Flere821

Well yes, you've mentioned before you like this - I was just surprised there are people apart from you who also like my fic lol

And my fic as a novel? I highly doubt that, as my fic is only around 50k words at the moment. I've seen other fics with 344k (Kyon Big Damn Hero), 458k words (NGE nobody dies), and finally 756k words (Shinji and Warhammer 40000) - I'm a long way off from getting this fic into a novel, even a Light Novel

And yes, there will be fight scene/s in the next chapter of CoEF, though writing fight scenes aren't exactly my strong point IMO. I'll try and make it entertaining

Well, I guess that's where beta readers can assist right? If so, maybe other fanfictions can contain descripted fight scenes that you can use as a reference?

@yukiro: I guess even in Academy City, there needs to be a better spam folder lol?

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Ashaman

This is only half of what I'd usually like to release, but I wanted to put this out there now before I go to bed. After I finish this segment tomorrow or whenever, I'll post this and the first two sections on FF.net.

BTW, part one can be found on page 15 on this forum, and part 2 on page 16.

We've really been getting some attention here, haven't we (most of it outerself's fault)

Spoiler for ToumaxYuriko fic part 3:

“So,” Touma began slowly, “who else knows that you’re really a girl?”

Now fully dressed and looking like a boy again, Touma was escorting Accelerator out the door, looking for Last Order.

The white haired girl threw Touma a small glare, but answered anyway. “Just this Frog Faced doctor I know. Last Order may suspect, but I’m not sure. If anyone else knows, I don’t have a fucking clue. Now shut up about it!” she spat out.

“Hai, hai,” Touma said placatingly.

The female Accelerator just growled in response.

But then, Touma suddenly let out a little laugh. “I just remembered a random thought I just had. For some reason, I thought you would be a girl transferring into my class under the name Suzushina Yuriko.”

Accelerator stopped suddenly. “That name…” she mumbled. “It’s not a bad name,” she finally said as she set off again.

“Accelerator! Misaka cheers as Misaka spots her saviour and embraces him tightly round the middle. Oh, and Misaka’s other saviour Misaka notes as Misaka’s happiness grows.”

These were the words the little girl known as Last Order let out as she spotted and hugged Accelerator, and then Touma.

“Wha, Last Order?” Touma frowned in confusion.

“I’m taking care of her. Got a problem with that?” Accelerator challenged, her voice back to being a low gravelly growl.

“Really? I’m glad,” Touma gave her a soft smile. “I heard a lot of good things form Last Order about her guardian; she really cares about you.”

“Stop it Misaka shyly demands, holding Misaka’s cheeks to cover up Misaka’s embarrassment.”

“Tch,” Accelerator replied softly.

“Misaka has a question Misaka states as Misaka turns to the first saviour of the Sister’s. Misaka and the Sisters would like your contact details so that even the Misaka overseas can speak to you Misaka asks hopefully as Misaka attempts to give you the puppy dog eyes.”

Gazing into Last Orders earnest gaze, Touma couldn’t find it within himself to say no.

She took the details gratefully, silently sending them all over the world via the Misaka network.

“Now that the business as well as lucky encounters are over with, Misaka wishes to declare her intention to return home as Misaka rubs her hungry stomach.”

“C’mon you little brat,” Accelerator said, beginning to walk away.

However, just before she reached the exit, she turned back to look at Touma.

With a “Tch” she continued walking. It would have been nice to spend more time with that guy. He was interesting.


Once Touma had seen the duo of Last Order and Accelerator off, he turned to head back to class.

However, before he’d taken two steps, he had mail on his phone.

He flicked it open as he walked, finding an unknown number had sent him a message, reading “This Misaka would like to thank you, please come to Seven Heaven at 6pm. Misaka 16757.”

Touma was just about to send a message back when he noticed more messages had arrived, all from unknown numbers.

100, 200, 250 mails, more and more piled up.

This was to be expected, though Touma had no way of knowing this. After all, 9978 teenage girls had just obtained the number of their saviour, and each one wanted to offer him their thanks.

And now I go into the Infectious Diseases exam with a bloody smile plastered all over my face.

[SuzushinaYuriko]

If Accel's gonna be a girl in this fic, then how can she sound like a guy when she's talking? I understand that she can probably manipulate the sound waves from her mouth to sound like a guy somehow, but what about when her powers are turned off?

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

If Accel's gonna be a girl in this fic, then how can she sound like a guy when she's talking? I understand that she can probably manipulate the sound waves from her mouth to sound like a guy somehow, but what about when her powers are turned off?

But the thing is that her powers are always "on", because she can manipulate her AIM field. Much like how Mikoto is always emitting small electric fields unconsciously.

[Flere821]

I've posted a new chapter of Collapse of Eastern Fantasy on Fanfiction.net, though this is just due to me feel like making that one chapter and I'm still working on Vol22 for the time being.

Link for Chapter 13 here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6070670/...astern_Fantasy

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Flere821

I've posted a new chapter of Collapse of Eastern Fantasy on Fanfiction.net, though this is just due to me feel like making that one chapter and I'm still working on Vol22 for the time being.

Link for Chapter 13 here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6070670/...astern_Fantasy

YAY! time to start reading!

[outerelf]

Title: A Certain Genderbent Magical Index
Rating: T
Summery: Kamijou Touka, meet Kamijou Touma. With these two unfortunate people meeting, the battle of the century is about to take place. Magicians will clash, fires will burn, and plans will be ruined. Perhaps. "Just as planned-"

Confused by the unreasonable demands, Touma asked of the two middle-scholars, "Just what sort of scum do you take me for, huh?"

"The worst kind EVER!"

[tsunade666]

thanks for another one!!!

reminds me of the first few sentence on that fan fic. When Aleister just said "just as planned" and the girl motoharu or motoka said "don't lie" XD

[SuzushinaYuriko]

Yay, another chapter! I noticed there were some spelling errors, like "wounded" instead of "sounded" and "Imuto" instead of "Imouto". Other than that, it's good. I especially liked the Tsuchimikado section at the beginning, and think I'm starting to like Touka more than Touma because she actually yelled at Makoto to quit annoying her on a daily basis instead of just taking it like Touma does with Mikoto.

[Miraluka]

Funny, that was funny .

I was busy but is enough worth to read .

EDIT:
Don't forget that Tsuchimado has a verbal tic, nya.

[outerelf]

Originally Posted by tsunade666

thanks for another one!!!

reminds me of the first few sentence on that fan fic. When Aleister just said "just as planned" and the girl motoharu or motoka said "don't lie" XD

Motoka said "Don't lie." XD She's a sassy one, that she is.

Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Yay, another chapter! I noticed there were some spelling errors, like "wounded" instead of "sounded" and "Imuto" instead of "Imouto". Other than that, it's good. I especially liked the Tsuchimikado section at the beginning, and think I'm starting to like Touka more than Touma because she actually yelled at Makoto to quit annoying her on a daily basis instead of just taking it like Touma does with Mikoto.

Oh whoops- I'll be sure to keep an eye on that for my other chapters.

Touka can yell because Double Standards of today allow her to yell at Makoto, while if Touma yells at Mikoto he'll be looked down on. Which is too bad. But just wait until you see the next part of their fight

Originally Posted by Wilfriback

Funny, that was funny .

I was busy but is enough worth to read .

EDIT:
Don't forget that Tsuchimado has a verbal tic, nya.

Thanks for taking time out of your day to read! I'll remember the verbal tic next time


p.s. I'm not certain whether or not I should apologize for revitalizing the fanfic thread. You guys were the ones asking for stories however.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by outerelf

Motoka said "Don't lie." XD She's a sassy one, that she is.



Oh whoops- I'll be sure to keep an eye on that for my other chapters.

Touka can yell because Double Standards of today allow her to yell at Makoto, while if Touma yells at Mikoto he'll be looked down on. Which is too bad. But just wait until you see the next part of their fight



Thanks for taking time out of your day to read! I'll remember the verbal tic next time


p.s. I'm not certain whether or not I should apologize for revitalizing the fanfic thread. You guys were the ones asking for stories however.

Why would we apologise? We NEEDED the increased fics, even if they are outrageously funny.

[outerelf]

Title: A Certain Genderbent Magical Index
Rating: T
Summery: Kamijou Touka, meet Kamijou Touma. With these two unfortunate people meeting, the battle of the century is about to take place. Magicians will clash, fires will burn, and plans will be ruined. Perhaps. "Just as planned-"

One of the students knelt down, hands clasped together, and began to pray. "Lord, please help us this day to survive two Fukiyose. Amen."

a/n: Quite truthfully, that line is my absolute favorite line I've written so far. XD The forum of late seems to be slowing down with fewer topics to talk about, so I thought I'd throw this in.

[Ashaman]

Wait. Were both Tsuchimikado's there at the end, being chased by Accel and Yuriko, or just one?

Gotta laugh at the Aogami's dodging skills.

I'm surprised though. Someone mentioned food in front of Index and she didn't even care.

[Miraluka]

Originally Posted by Ashaman

Wait. Were both Tsuchimikado's there at the end, being chased by Accel and Yuriko, or just one?

Gotta laugh at the Aogami's dodging skills.

I'm surprised though. Someone mentioned food in front of Index and she didn't even care.

Well, it wouldn't be the first time
During the civil war on England, there was a "competition" between Index and Agnese, both are a big eater.
Obviously Index won but because Agnese was outclassed by the former and Index didn't finished eating because she was full and still there was a lot of food left O_o!!!! <--- For a moment I thought: " hey, thats not Index!"

[SuzushinaYuriko]

"Lord, please help us this day to survive two Fukiyose. Amen."

lol.

I hope the Tsuchimikado pair gets a chance to calm Accel/Yuriko down and explain the situation, or else the city is gonna be gone. Seriously, I wonder what kind of power the Aogami pair has...there's no possible way anyone can touch those wings and not get hurt...

[Flere821]

Getting the whole class genderbended and crossing over? What happened to the portal that was just in an side alley? Does everyone in Academy City take that shortcut or something? >.>

Genderbending may be good, but I think with this many characters showing up it's kinda overkill... just my opinion though. There should be a balance between too little and too much.

Still, Stiyl's remarks towards each other was good IMO =) Looking forward to more Touma/Touka along with Mikoto/Makoto interactions. (May I request Mikoto being bit*h-slapped in the face by Touka and Makoto getting the same treatment Touma gave to Accelerator in the face? For some reason those two irritate me in this fic)

Or go the other direction and have a BL moment with Touma and Makoto, along with a Kuroko+Mikoto+Touka yuri love triangle xD