Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Having confused half the OC-thread (and still confusing them) and having even chaos say that I'd, and I quote, 'make a good woman' apparently so.

Wait a minute!

Somebody actually thought Keroko-kun was female? Wasn't it pretty obvious that he was a he from the picture?
I read the profile to write this. I never even considered Keroko-kun as female.

Originally Posted by Satashi

*has to say it*
Everyone is gay for Keroko. *runs*

There's something so very wrong, but right there

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

In other news...
I know I'm very late on sbtb piccies, and some requested pictures are backed up as well...my apologies again.

To make it up to you, I've been talking with Satashi and we've decided to make the "Emerald chapter" of SbtB a joint fanfic/doujinshi. I guess that would make it a sort of graphic novel-ish type thing? XD

Anyway...expect it early April ^_^

G-graphic novel Emerald?!

That is made of so much win that I can't even describe it with words.
This is not the perverted part writing. (I think)

Edit: Second in a row!

Um... This one is dedicated for all those writers spicing our daily lives.

[krisslanza]

Yaaaay hugs!
Yeah I need hugs.
...
And money. Money would be nice too. *Shifty look*

I think I might type up some short today. Maybe. If I feel motivated to do it.

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by mercurianangel

Yes, I'm still alive (barely)... though I still have 3 more tests this week plus finals all next week. T_T


@Gillian: Ask and you shall recieve 0: 3
Expect ChinaDress!Fate in the near future
@Evil Rick: Nifty idea! I look forward to more~

In other news...
I know I'm very late on sbtb piccies, and some requested pictures are backed up as well...my apologies again.

To make it up to you, I've been talking with Satashi and we've decided to make the "Emerald chapter" of SbtB a joint fanfic/doujinshi. I guess that would make it a sort of graphic novel-ish type thing? XD

Anyway...expect it early April ^_^

You take care of yourself during your tests. I know the feeling too well.

doing a joint fanfic/doujinshi for SbtB is going to be awesome. As long as you take your time when you have it it will be alright.

Now i should have been writing reviews or doing something schoolwork constructive during my free time. Instead i picked up on doing more Landscaper!Fate...

Here is another installment. Remember this is going out there.

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

Landscaper!Fate

“Shrubs”

Fate stretched herself out in the truck while heading to their next job. Eying the newbie that was eying her she smacked him across the head before turning her attention to the driver.

“So Chrono, where are we going today?”

“Today we are going to the Takamachi residence. Seems like you little stunt two weeks ago didn’t piss them off so its part of our normal rotation now.”


Looking back at the kid sitting bitch in the truck more curiosity perked the blonde. “So why are we dragging this Gomer around?”

“He is cutting the banks,” Fate rolled her eyes at that thought, “while you get a chance to do what you wanted last time.”

“Oh” she looked at Chrono with a grin.

“Yea, you’re trimming the hedges and when we’re done we’ll help clean up.”

“Well that’s better than fighting a mower.”

The rest of the trip was made in relative silence. Once they pulled up to the property Fate jumped out and went to the back of the truck to get her stuff. The boy followed Chrono closely as they made their way to the trailer that carried their tractor and mowers.

“Hay,” the boy whispered at Chrono, “that girl is kind of hot.”

“Yea and you’re not getting any action from her. Dream all you want but she got her eyes on that same thing we do.”

The boy looked at him with a puzzled face. After a few moments Chrono couldn’t take it any more.

“She’s a dyke. She wants a piece of some female ass.”

“Oh.”

“Hay you, new guy.” Fate hoped out of the back of the truck with her hedgetrimmer in hand. “If you break my mower I’m shoving my boot up your ass.” Not waiting for a reply she made her way to her first set of hedges.

“Does she hate me?”

“No” Chrono hopped up on the trailer to start up his tractor, “She just gets anal around new guys because they tend to wimp out. Don’t worry, if you stick it out we’ll anoint you with 2-cycle oil and dub you one of us.”

= = = = = =

Fate took a break to wipe the sweet off her brow and look over at the new guy. He still couldn’t hold his mower right and was flipping it over for the fifth time that Fate could count. Sighing she turned back to her own work. ’At least he isn’t missing spots.’ Continuing the careful treatment of the ornamental shrubs the landscaper felt like eyes were staring at her. Finally annoyed by the feeling she stopped and looked around seeing that there was a pair eyes, blue ones, staring at her. That girl from the window was standing about six feet from the base of her ladder looking at the blonde. Fate turned around and looked down on the properly dressed girl. For a moment the girl just looked back but then started to fidget and blush a little.

“What are you doing?” the girl finally spoke up.

Oh that was way too easy, but Fate remembered some of the stern lectures she got from her boss about perverted behavior. Choosing her most professional voice she replied to the girl.

“I’m cleaning up theses hedges. The design in them is too detailed for using the trimmers so I’m doing it by hand” She added a little snip from her hedge shears to add to the point.

The girl paused for a moment letting Fate returned to her work. Once she got up some courage she questioned the blonde again. “I’ve never see a girl do this kind of work before.”

A buried nerve got struck in Fate’s brain. “Well Princess, not every girl can sit around on their ass and have everything handed to them. Like me, some of us have to work in our lives.”

The blue eyed one looked down for a minuet until she decided to run off into her house. After watching her go inside Fate returned to her work with a single curse word.

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Bridget is a male character that wears a dress in an anime. and he looks VERY VERY much like a girl. that's where "trap" came from in this situation. The slogo "Everyone is gay for bridget" came up on the 'net.

Not to mention that OC already has Bridget in the Nanohaverse- courtesy of me...

you would have to search for it though... meh too lazy for linkie- or later i'll give it.

Meh... managed to find it quickly

Have a Bridget!

*dodges GN Undine Oar and Yoyo*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

Fate stretched herself out in the truck while heading to their next job. Eying the newbie that was eying her she smacked him across the head before turning her attention to the driver.

“So Chrono where are we going today?”

“Today we are going to the Takamachi residence. Seems like you little stunt two weeks ago didn’t piss them off so its part of our normal rotation now.”

Looking back at the kid sitting bitch in the truck more curiosity perked the blond. “So why are we dragging this Gomer around?”

“He is cutting the banks,” Fate rolled her eyes at that thought, “while you get a chance to do what you wanted last time.”

“Oh” she looked at Chrono with a grin.

“Yea, you’re trimming the hedges and when we’re done we’ll help clean up.”

“Well that’s better than fighting a mower.”

The rest of the trip was made in relative silence. Once they pulled up to the property Fate jumped out and went to the back of the truck to get her stuff. The boy followed Chrono closely as they made their way to the trailer that carried their tractor and mowers.

“Hay,” the boy whispered to Chrono, “that girl is kind of hot.”

“Yea and you’re not getting any action from her. Dream all you want but she got her eyes on that same thing we do.”

The boy looked at him with a puzzled face. After a few moments Chrono couldn’t take it any more.

“She’s a dike.”

“Oh.”

“Hay you, new guy.” Fate hoped out of the back of the truck with her hedgetrimmer in hand. “If you break my mower I’m shoving my boot up your ass.” Not waiting for a reply she made her way to her first set of hedges.

“Does she hate me?”

“No” Chrono hopped up on the trailer to start up his tractor, “She just gets anal around new guys because they tend to wimp out. Don’t worry, if you stick it out we’ll anoint you with 2-cycle oil and dub you one of us.”

= = = = = =

Fate took a break to wipe the sweet off her brow and look over at the new guy. He still couldn’t hold his mower right and was flipping it over for the fifth time that Fate could count. Sighing she turned back to her work. ’At least he isn’t missing spots.’ Continuing her careful treatment of the ornamental shrubs she felt like eyes were staring at her. Finally annoyed by the feeling she stopped and looked around seeing that there was a pair of blue eyes staring at her. That girl from the window was standing about six feet from the base of her ladder looking at her. Fate turned around and looked down on the properly dressed girl. For a moment the girl just looked back but then started to fidget and blush a little.

“What are you doing” the girl finally spoke up.

Oh that was way too easy, but Fate remembered some of the stern lectures she got from her boss about her behavior. Choosing her most professional voice she replied to the girl.

“I’m cleaning up theses hedges. The design in them is too detailed for using the trimmers so I’m doing it by hand” She added a little snip from her hedge shears to add to the point.

The girl paused for a moment letting Fate returned to her work. Once she got up some courage she questioned the blond again. “I’ve never see a girl do this kind of work before.”

A buried nerve got struck in Fates brain. “Well princess, not every girl can sit around on their ass and have things handed to them. Like me, some of us have to work in our lives.”

The blue eyed one looked down for a minuet until she decided to run off into her house. After watching her go inside Fate returned to her work with a single curse word.

Landscaping Fate Landscapes.

What can I say? I'm actually really interested in this. Fate's a total jerk, but for some reason it's funny. Wonder what went on in her life to make her like that? Probably hanging around so many guys all the time.

But seriously, this is the first one in a long time where I'm smiling and going "Dang I can't wait until a next part comes out."

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Now i should have been writing reviews or doing something schoolwork constructive during my free time. Instead i picked up on doing more Landscaper!Fate...

Here is another installment. Remember this is going out there.

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:

Fate stretched herself out in the truck while heading to their next job. Eying the newbie that was eying her she smacked him across the head before turning her attention to the driver.

“So Chrono where are we going today?”

“Today we are going to the Takamachi residence. Seems like you little stunt two weeks ago didn’t piss them off so its part of our normal rotation now.”

Looking back at the kid sitting bitch in the truck more curiosity perked the blond. “So why are we dragging this Gomer around?”

“He is cutting the banks,” Fate rolled her eyes at that thought, “while you get a chance to do what you wanted last time.”

“Oh” she looked at Chrono with a grin.

“Yea, you’re trimming the hedges and when we’re done we’ll help clean up.”

“Well that’s better than fighting a mower.”

The rest of the trip was made in relative silence. Once they pulled up to the property Fate jumped out and went to the back of the truck to get her stuff. The boy followed Chrono closely as they made their way to the trailer that carried their tractor and mowers.

“Hay,” the boy whispered to Chrono, “that girl is kind of hot.”

“Yea and you’re not getting any action from her. Dream all you want but she got her eyes on that same thing we do.”

The boy looked at him with a puzzled face. After a few moments Chrono couldn’t take it any more.

“She’s a dike.”

“Oh.”

“Hay you, new guy.” Fate hoped out of the back of the truck with her hedgetrimmer in hand. “If you break my mower I’m shoving my boot up your ass.” Not waiting for a reply she made her way to her first set of hedges.

“Does she hate me?”

“No” Chrono hopped up on the trailer to start up his tractor, “She just gets anal around new guys because they tend to wimp out. Don’t worry, if you stick it out we’ll anoint you with 2-cycle oil and dub you one of us.”

= = = = = =

Fate took a break to wipe the sweet off her brow and look over at the new guy. He still couldn’t hold his mower right and was flipping it over for the fifth time that Fate could count. Sighing she turned back to her work. ’At least he isn’t missing spots.’ Continuing her careful treatment of the ornamental shrubs she felt like eyes were staring at her. Finally annoyed by the feeling she stopped and looked around seeing that there was a pair of blue eyes staring at her. That girl from the window was standing about six feet from the base of her ladder looking at her. Fate turned around and looked down on the properly dressed girl. For a moment the girl just looked back but then started to fidget and blush a little.

“What are you doing” the girl finally spoke up.

Oh that was way too easy, but Fate remembered some of the stern lectures she got from her boss about her behavior. Choosing her most professional voice she replied to the girl.

“I’m cleaning up theses hedges. The design in them is too detailed for using the trimmers so I’m doing it by hand” She added a little snip from her hedge shears to add to the point.

The girl paused for a moment letting Fate returned to her work. Once she got up some courage she questioned the blond again. “I’ve never see a girl do this kind of work before.”

A buried nerve got struck in Fates brain. “Well princess, not every girl can sit around on their ass and have things handed to them. Like me, some of us have to work in our lives.”

The blue eyed one looked down for a minuet until she decided to run off into her house. After watching her go inside Fate returned to her work with a single curse word.

thx for the continue

hope with your school stuff it works out

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Landscaping Fate Landscapes.

What can I say? I'm actually really interested in this. Fate's a total jerk, but for some reason it's funny. Wonder what went on in her life to make her like that? Probably hanging around so many guys all the time.

But seriously, this is the first one in a long time where I'm smiling and going "Dang I can't wait until a next part comes out."

Oh i know what would make Fate a jerk...
Some of it is because she hangs out with guys at work...
Other things you will have to wait for that have a little tint of epicness to it when it arrives.

I had picked up something else to work on before Landscaper!Fate but with what time i have I'll focus on this.

[Gillian]

@Junkedcat
Can you tell us, how old are your Nanoha and Fate in your Landscaper!Fate fic or maybe mentioned it in an other part?

would be nice

thx

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by Gillian

@Junkedcat
Can you tell us, how old are your Nanoha and Fate in your Landscaper!Fate fic or maybe mentioned it in an other part?

would be nice

thx

Yea i didn't mention that before. They are about 20 years old. Old enough to be considered adults yet Nanoha is young enough to be under daddy's care. Their relative age would have been picked up later on based on what i have floating in my head, but telling you now is no big deal.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Bridget is a male character that wears a dress in an anime. and he looks VERY VERY much like a girl. that's where "trap" came from in this situation. The slogo "Everyone is gay for bridget" came up on the 'net.

It's is like Kagerou and Satashi-nyan said.

Everyone is gay for Keroko and GAR for Kha.

*RUNS AT LUDICRIOUS SPEED*

[AshLikeSnow]

Originally Posted by Kirika-chan

@AshLikeSnow : I didn't tell you, but I read all of your work, and it's really good too ^^ several persons already made a fic with this story (Nanoha's accident) but you're the only one that I really like your story ^^
Your descreptions of Fate's feelings are good, really.

So, can't wait for your next (Satashi and Ash ^^)

Thanks you for your opinion and love, I'm living off of those ~ lol

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

*Looks at the chard remains of a fire that took place during an impromptu movie night and the sleep afterwards*

Oh my...

There are too many things that i have to agree with that the fire brigade touched on.

*hangs fire gear up..*

Anyways, AshlikeSnow and Evil Rick, expect a PM from me commenting about your stories. Sam... you may get yours in a PM too... Today is not lending itself to free time.

Definitely looking forward to it Junked And omg. Your Lanscaper Fate is like.. so made of wtfpwn!! She could get wet for me any day >: lol

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by AshLikeSnow

Definitely looking forward to it Junked And omg. Your Lanscaper Fate is like.. so made of wtfpwn!! She could get wet for me any day >: lol

We corrupted Ash-chan in only like one week! Wow, that's a new record for us! Next thing you know, she'll be going "Satashi, can I read your lemon?"

I like your story too, Ash=chan ^^ keep it up, a lot are supporting you!

~**~

I tapped my pencil boredly as the school lesson continued on. I knew everything that was being taught, having learned it several years ago by myself. Despite this I still payed attention to what was being said. Not so much for myself but for Nanoha, who has been rather irritable lately. The past few days she has been very easily angered during my tutoring sessions, snapping at me whenever she didn't understand something. I've known her long enough to be sure it wasn't her normal small fits, but rather something bigger. It wasn't hard to piece it together; in fact I knew about it for a while now. Her clothes stunk, her breath was tinted with it despite always chewing gum and putting on perfume. I made several offers to her to tell me if she had a problem but she never took me up on it. I think she finally realized she did have one and is trying on her own to stop it. I turned my gaze over to her and found her bouncing her leg, a habit she has had for years. Whenever something bothers her to a point where she puts it aside she would always do that. Constantly complaining about a headache, not able to focus, snapping easily, chewing gum constantly... Nanoha, I know what your problem is. Why don't you let us help?

Saved by the Bell XVII
By: Satashi

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Satashi

We corrupted Ash-chan in only like one week! Wow, that's a new record for us! Next thing you know, she'll be going "Satashi, can I read your lemon?"

Make sure you reply like how you always do!

[krisslanza]

So we're trying to corrupt the newcomers now?
I just remembered I have to read the new chapters of SbtB

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by krisslanza

So we're trying to corrupt the newcomers now?
I just remembered I have to read the new chapters of SbtB

no, you need to share your story with us

Make sure you reply like how you always do!

"Are you over 18?"
"No"
"Okay, here you go."

[krisslanza]

Which story?
I have a lot

[Satashi]

Teaser? Me? NEVER!

Spoiler for I'm right here!:

“Come on! I'm right here!” Thunder pounded in her ears, eyes dilating as black slime seeped from her pores. “That's right... That's right! I'm here! Come find me!” Slowly the world came into focus, eyes staining yellow. “I'm right he-” The sound of a tuning fork wavered, changing to a low gong. “Wha...Whats... I can't... move...” Blue fire flickered across her vision, increasing her desire to fight. “Tri-Edge...” Her nails turned to claws, back sprouting satanic wings. “No! No this isn't right!” The girl stumbled back, gripping her head and crying out. “This isn't right! Something is wrong!”

“It's right,” The Azure Flame walked forward slowly. “You're on a mission remember?”

“Mis...mission...?” Nanoha shook her head, clawing at her hair as her transformation was completed.

“We were sent to terminate The Terror of Death, remember? For the crime of slaughtering thousands.”

“Kill....The Terror of Death...?” Nanoha's hand twitched, voice losing it's emotional tone. “That's right... the TSAB sent us...I remember now.”

Kite smiled. “I'm wounded, I can no longer fight.”

“I'll handle this.” Nanoha looked up, eyes flickering as she gripped her fist, turning towards the group that was too shocked to act. “Fate Testarossa... I'm here for you.”

“Na... Nanoha...?” Fate took a step back. “Wai...wait...”

Nanoha frowned. “Wait!? Did you wait when you killed those people!? When you slaughtered them!?”

Yuuno put up a shield just in time to block an attack. “She's brain washed!”

“Stop this!” Fate ran forward, only to be backhanded to the ground and pounced on.

“I'll avenge them all!” Nanoha raised her clawed hand to strike Fate's chest. “I'll kill you myself!”



I randomly saw Angel's Skeith picture so I wanted an excuse to show off her work again

[Momo Chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Teaser? Me? NEVER!

Spoiler for I'm right here!:

“Come on! I'm right here!” Thunder pounded in her ears, eyes dilating as black slime seeped from her pores. “That's right... That's right! I'm here! Come find me!” Slowly the world came into focus, eyes staining yellow. “I'm right he-” The sound of a tuning fork wavered, changing to a low gong. “Wha...Whats... I can't... move...” Blue fire flickered across her vision, increasing her desire to fight. “Tri-Edge...” Her nails turned to claws, back sprouting satanic wings. “No! No this isn't right!” The girl stumbled back, gripping her head and crying out. “This isn't right! Something is wrong!”

“It's right,” The Azure Flame walked forward slowly. “You're on a mission remember?”

“Mis...mission...?” Nanoha shook her head, clawing at her hair as her transformation was completed.

“We were sent to terminate The Terror of Death, remember? For the crime of slaughtering thousands.”

“Kill....The Terror of Death...?” Nanoha's hand twitched, voice losing it's emotional tone. “That's right... the TSAB sent us...I remember now.”

Kite smiled. “I'm wounded, I can no longer fight.”

“I'll handle this.” Nanoha looked up, eyes flickering as she gripped her fist, turning towards the group that was too shocked to act. “Fate Testarossa... I'm here for you.”

“Na... Nanoha...?” Fate took a step back. “Wai...wait...”

Nanoha frowned. “Wait!? Did you wait when you killed those people!? When you slaughtered them!?”

Yuuno put up a shield just in time to block an attack. “She's brain washed!”

“Stop this!” Fate ran forward, only to be backhanded to the ground and pounced on.

“I'll avenge them all!” Nanoha raised her clawed hand to strike Fate's chest. “I'll kill you myself!”



I randomly saw Angel's Skeith picture so I wanted an excuse to show off her work again

Ah! That's pretty interesting, though I don't really get it

I've missed out on so much here, with the keroko and the oc's, and the landscapes and the corruption (am i next? )

and the skeith. isn't that the weird robot thing that puts Sora in a coma at the end of .hack//sign? (those were the days....)

I dunno. Anyway, I won't be on for like, a week. I have state tests ( they're for sophmores but us freshman do practice ones) and a science fair project (I HATE SCIENCE HORIZONS. NO MORE HONORS SCIENCE CLASSES FOR ME!!!!)

But I'll be waiting for all those fics once these things are taken care of ^^

~Momo

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

Ah! That's pretty interesting, though I don't really get it

I've missed out on so much here, with the keroko and the oc's, and the landscapes and the corruption (am i next? )

and the skeith. isn't that the weird robot thing that puts Sora in a coma at the end of .hack//sign? (those were the days....)

I dunno. Anyway, I won't be on for like, a week. I have state tests ( they're for sophmores but us freshman do practice ones) and a science fair project (I HATE SCIENCE HORIZONS. NO MORE HONORS SCIENCE CLASSES FOR ME!!!!)

But I'll be waiting for all those fics once these things are taken care of ^^

~Momo

It's from one of my fanfics, 6th Division.

But for hack:

Kite killed Skeith. Skeith came back in //SIGN to Data drain Sora, who went into a coma for several odd years. He work up and later joined "the world: R2" as "Haseo" and can summon skeith to help him fight.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Teaser? Me? NEVER!

Spoiler for I'm right here!:

“Come on! I'm right here!” Thunder pounded in her ears, eyes dilating as black slime seeped from her pores. “That's right... That's right! I'm here! Come find me!” Slowly the world came into focus, eyes staining yellow. “I'm right he-” The sound of a tuning fork wavered, changing to a low gong. “Wha...Whats... I can't... move...” Blue fire flickered across her vision, increasing her desire to fight. “Tri-Edge...” Her nails turned to claws, back sprouting satanic wings. “No! No this isn't right!” The girl stumbled back, gripping her head and crying out. “This isn't right! Something is wrong!”

“It's right,” The Azure Flame walked forward slowly. “You're on a mission remember?”

“Mis...mission...?” Nanoha shook her head, clawing at her hair as her transformation was completed.

“We were sent to terminate The Terror of Death, remember? For the crime of slaughtering thousands.”

“Kill....The Terror of Death...?” Nanoha's hand twitched, voice losing it's emotional tone. “That's right... the TSAB sent us...I remember now.”

Kite smiled. “I'm wounded, I can no longer fight.”

“I'll handle this.” Nanoha looked up, eyes flickering as she gripped her fist, turning towards the group that was too shocked to act. “Fate Testarossa... I'm here for you.”

“Na... Nanoha...?” Fate took a step back. “Wai...wait...”

Nanoha frowned. “Wait!? Did you wait when you killed those people!? When you slaughtered them!?”

Yuuno put up a shield just in time to block an attack. “She's brain washed!”

“Stop this!” Fate ran forward, only to be backhanded to the ground and pounced on.

“I'll avenge them all!” Nanoha raised her clawed hand to strike Fate's chest. “I'll kill you myself!”



I randomly saw Angel's Skeith picture so I wanted an excuse to show off her work again

So is part of the 6th Division storyline? Would be pretty fun if it was.

Btw: Sata-chan, referring to an above post of yours:

Apparently, Cadia is a far safer place for newbies, huh? At least there we don't corrupt people. We just teach them the ways of the Bluecheesium