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Master Assassin · 2010-12-08, 09:22

It's hard to discern which part covers the actual story and what wasn't. Seeing the place of its origin is 2ch, there are some others (most likely not the author of the story) butting in making it hard to tell what is the author's actual story and what isn't.

MrTerrorist · 2010-12-08, 12:20

I'm currently doing 3 fanfics and want your opinion about it.

Spoiler for The Kamijou Twins:

I finally got idea about doing a fanfic about Touka, Touma's female gender bend counterpart.

After investigating a strange explosion at a unknown lab, Komoe and Yomikawa finds an injured girl who claims to known them before passing out. Later, Komoe and Yomikawa calls Touma to the hospital to identify the girl who after interviewing her calls herself Touka Kamijou. At first the teachers think she's related to Touma but both Touma and Touka don't know each other. To make it weirder, Touka is confused why Komoe and Yomikawa don't recognize her and yet she knows everything about the both of them including the rooftop incident, the Sherry Cromwell incident and Index. Heaven Canceler arrives and reveals to Touma and the teachers that Touka DNA is an almost matches with Touma's which leaves everyone confuse. But after interviewing her, HC realizes that Touka is a female Touma from an alternative dimension and believes the lab explosion that happen in both their worlds cause an inter-dimensional portal to open and send her to their world. With the person in charge of that lab mysteriously disappeared, Touka is stuck in their world. So for the time being, they all agree to a cover story that Touka is Touma's long lost twin sister and will be transferring to Touma's high school while HC and Yomikawa tries to find the one who cause the portal and help Touka return to her world.

The fanfic will be both adventure and comedy with the adventure part focusing on Touma and Touka working together to try finding the Professor responsible for the portal and facing adversaries against them. The comedy however will be about an awkward Touka's trying to fit in Touma's world where her friends and the people she know are Touma's while still pretending to be his "twin sister". Another funny part will be the interaction between the Kamjou's and learn how different both of them treat their friends in their world (e.g. While Touma does nothing when Index wants food or bites him, Touka has no calms of berating or even hitting Index!) Also while both Kamijou's share the same bad luck, Touka has a much worse luck in her Unwanted Harem as unlike Touma who does nothing to his Harem, Touka "took the initiative" with some of the girls in her harem which lead to some unfortunate jealousy and multiple-timing! To make it more awkward, she may have went "further" with one of girls in her world and feels awkward meeting that girl's counterpart in Touma's world.

Spoiler for Senpai and Kohai: Two Teleporters tale:

Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic.

"Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers"

Your opinions please.

PS: I would love to see the fanfic where Team ITEM are Touma's adopted sisters translated.

Ashaman · 2010-12-08, 13:33

Quote:

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

I'm currently doing 3 fanfics and want your opinion about it.

Spoiler for The Kamijou Twins:

I finally got idea about doing a fanfic about Touka, Touma's female gender bend counterpart.

After investigating a strange explosion at a unknown lab, Komoe and Yomikawa finds an injured girl who claims to known them before passing out. Later, Komoe and Yomikawa calls Touma to the hospital to identify the girl who after interviewing her calls herself Touka Kamijou. At first the teachers think she's related to Touma but both Touma and Touka don't know each other. To make it weirder, Touka is confused why Komoe and Yomikawa don't recognize her and yet she knows everything about the both of them including the rooftop incident, the Sherry Cromwell incident and Index. Heaven Canceler arrives and reveals to Touma and the teachers that Touka DNA is an almost matches with Touma's which leaves everyone confuse. But after interviewing her, HC realizes that Touka is a female Touma from an alternative dimension and believes the lab explosion that happen in both their worlds cause an inter-dimensional portal to open and send her to their world. With the person in charge of that lab mysteriously disappeared, Touka is stuck in their world. So for the time being, they all agree to a cover story that Touka is Touma's long lost twin sister and will be transferring to Touma's high school while HC and Yomikawa tries to find the one who cause the portal and help Touka return to her world.

The fanfic will be both adventure and comedy with the adventure part focusing on Touma and Touka working together to try finding the Professor responsible for the portal and facing adversaries against them. The comedy however will be about an awkward Touka's trying to fit in Touma's world where her friends and the people she know are Touma's while still pretending to be his "twin sister". Another funny part will be the interaction between the Kamjou's and learn how different both of them treat their friends in their world (e.g. While Touma does nothing when Index wants food or bites him, Touka has no calms of berating or even hitting Index!) Also while both Kamijou's share the same bad luck, Touka has a much worse luck in her Unwanted Harem as unlike Touma who does nothing to his Harem, Touka "took the initiative" with some of the girls in her harem which lead to some unfortunate jealousy and multiple-timing! To make it more awkward, she may have went "further" with one of girls in her world and feels awkward meeting that girl's counterpart in Touma's world.

Sounds interesting, though the idea of Touka being into girls and more... aggressive is a bit iffy. Still sounds pretty good though. I'd read it.

One nit pick. Why would Komoe be investigating? Just easier to say Yomikawa was inves, and later calls Komoe when the girl says Komoe is her teacher.

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Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Spoiler for Senpai and Kohai: Two Teleporters tale:

This does sound very interesting, and would love to see it done

Quote:

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic.

"Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers"

Your opinions please.

PS: I would love to see the fanfic where Team ITEM are Touma's adopted sisters translated.

Sounds like a comedy, though I'm trying to figure out who the Level 5's would be. I get the feeling that the most obvious would be wrong...

And I want to see that ITEM one too... Though the comment about Misaka being unlucky makes me cringe. Unlucky how? Not getting Touma (fine) or being brutally beaten by ITEM for trying to get close to their brother (not fine)

PS. Are you a boy or a girl? With the whole MrTerrorist, I'd assumed boy, but then I caught sight of you mentioning your Yaoi vision and am now confused. Or were you only joking and making it sound as though you like Yoai, or are you a guy who likes it or are you a girl who has a very misleading name... Argh, I'm just curious. Sorry if I offended you.

Master Assassin · 2010-12-08, 18:36

All right, it's in the

Quote:

Character A: <blahblahblah>
Character B: <blahblahblah>

format. Well, as I said, since it's from 2ch, it's hard to tell which parts are actually part of the story and what isn't. Some posters simply jumped in... (and frankly, it's quite tiring seeing nobody contributing to the discussion, chipping in just to say "<character name here> kawaii!" etc

) So I'm "filtering" these posts at my own interpretation of what's part of the story.

... anyway. This is quite a rough translation, so excuse me for some translation mistakes. Also pardon me for the frequent T/L notes I keep inserting there.

Spoiler for ITEM's beloved "bro" 1st parter:

I'll just leave this here for the time being. Anyone who wants to read the original can go here.

SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-12-08, 19:11

Quote:

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic.

"Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers"

Your opinions please.

Is it a stalker for each Level 5? Because if there's Mikoto in it, Kuroko and Etzali both fit the stalker roles.

Sounds interesting.

blitz1/2 · 2010-12-08, 19:17

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Originally Posted by Soul Assassin

All right, it's in the

format. Well, as I said, since it's from 2ch, it's hard to tell which parts are actually part of the story and what isn't. Some posters simply jumped in... (and frankly, it's quite tiring seeing nobody contributing to the discussion, chipping in just to say "<character name here> kawaii!" etc

) So I'm "filtering" these posts at my own interpretation of what's part of the story.

... anyway. This is quite a rough translation, so excuse me for some translation mistakes. Also pardon me for the frequent T/L notes I keep inserting there.

Spoiler for ITEM's beloved "bro" 1st parter:

I'll just leave this here for the time being. Anyone who wants to read the original can go here.

Poor Touma, but if he goes gar against his sis, then Mugino better start praying.

Master Assassin · 2010-12-08, 19:23

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Poor Touma, but if he goes gar against his sis, then Mugino better start praying.

Like I said... Touma spoils his "sisters" way too much in this fic

He'll block her attacks, but he won't return her a hit.

... Oh snap, this fic is WINCEST indeed.

MrTerrorist · 2010-12-08, 19:37

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Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Is it a stalker for each Level 5? Because if there's Mikoto in it, Kuroko and Etzali both fit the stalker roles.

Sounds interesting.

Yes. I give you a hint who's the other stalker so you might guess who the stalker is stalking.

Here's the hint: Blonde.

Master Assassin · 2010-12-08, 20:17

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Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Yes. I give you a hint who's the other stalker so you might guess who the stalker is stalking.

Here's the hint: Blonde.

... *cough cough*

Spoiler for Uh.:

SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-12-08, 20:20

Would Mikoto and Mugino get along? (assuming stalker is Frenda) They did have a pretty intense fight with each other before...

Master Assassin · 2010-12-08, 21:39

2nd page coming up.

... Geh, if there's one thing I don't like about Toaruverse, it'll be the fact that each of the characters have their way of speaking which includes some verbal tics I can't translate very well.

That and this fic... I just don't know what ties in the story anymore. It feels like some others are just adding to the story on their own. Sooo not-in-sync.

Spoiler for 2nd:

kaizerknight01 · 2010-12-09, 00:34

was listing to this bgm http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hNEcBbzX2m4&NR=1

Spoiler for short fanfic:

Flere821 · 2010-12-09, 01:33

I've recently got into the 'My little sister can't be this cute' novel series, and I have a question - has there been anyone trying to write a fanfic that put sis-con sargeant Motoharu into that setting? I for one am interested in just what kind of snarking Kyousuke can give to Motoharu

Or maybe even Maika dragging Kirino down the forbidden path... *slaps self in face before really going off the deep end*

all_flying · 2010-12-09, 05:32

I've make a fanfic already. Still unfinished tho, looking a way to connect between the story. Anyone interested, please enjoy http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452408/...ace_and_Vortex

And please review it. I take any critiques, thought, suggestion, or excoriation (by any means of course)

SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-12-09, 17:46

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452999/1/Days_of_Darkness

Finally got around to reading this. Nice job, Chaos, it's pretty interesting.

Chaos2Frozen · 2010-12-10, 00:41

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Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452999/1/Days_of_Darkness

Finally got around to reading this. Nice job, Chaos, it's pretty interesting.

Thanks

I'm thinking of making Index the main character for the next chapter.

Master Assassin · 2010-12-11, 05:33

Oh great. To think this did not happen yet... I'm so laughing over myself for this.

Spoiler for D::

The ending was kind of abrupt, I wished the author could do more but meh. Not going to push it too much. At least it was a fun read

Chaos2Frozen · 2010-12-12, 04:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flere821

I've recently got into the 'My little sister can't be this cute' novel series, and I have a question - has there been anyone trying to write a fanfic that put sis-con sargeant Motoharu into that setting? I for one am interested in just what kind of snarking Kyousuke can give to Motoharu

Or maybe even Maika dragging Kirino down the forbidden path... *slaps self in face before really going off the deep end*

I had a thought once to put both Kyousuke and Tsuchimikado and a bunch of other characters in a skit for [Days of Darkness] where they attend this 'help session' for siscons, you know like for the alcholics when they go-

"My name is Joe."

"Hi Joe."

"I'm an Alcholic"

-And they carry on from there only this one is for siscons.

SuzushinaYuriko · 2010-12-12, 16:06

That's a great idea. DO IT!

Flere821 · 2010-12-12, 20:13

Lol, I sincerely doubt Kyousuke will go to one of those meetings of his own will... good idea nonetheless

Though just as a heads up:

Spoiler for Some info on Kyousuke - LN spoilers ahead:

Hopefully you can incorporate some of those into your skit - it's a shame really that Maika doesn't have long hair though, just think of how Motoharu will react to Kyousuke's actions then xD

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Master Assassin Portable Dude Mk. II Artist Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights. Age: 35	It's hard to discern which part covers the actual story and what wasn't. Seeing the place of its origin is 2ch, there are some others (most likely not the author of the story) butting in making it hard to tell what is the author's actual story and what isn't. __________________ I like to run portable on my dude, so I ran while running runs in my portably portable, dude-like dude. --- This line over here is a placeholder. ----

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MrTerrorist Takao Tsundere Cruiser Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Classified	I'm currently doing 3 fanfics and want your opinion about it. Spoiler for The Kamijou Twins: I finally got idea about doing a fanfic about Touka, Touma's female gender bend counterpart. After investigating a strange explosion at a unknown lab, Komoe and Yomikawa finds an injured girl who claims to known them before passing out. Later, Komoe and Yomikawa calls Touma to the hospital to identify the girl who after interviewing her calls herself Touka Kamijou. At first the teachers think she's related to Touma but both Touma and Touka don't know each other. To make it weirder, Touka is confused why Komoe and Yomikawa don't recognize her and yet she knows everything about the both of them including the rooftop incident, the Sherry Cromwell incident and Index. Heaven Canceler arrives and reveals to Touma and the teachers that Touka DNA is an almost matches with Touma's which leaves everyone confuse. But after interviewing her, HC realizes that Touka is a female Touma from an alternative dimension and believes the lab explosion that happen in both their worlds cause an inter-dimensional portal to open and send her to their world. With the person in charge of that lab mysteriously disappeared, Touka is stuck in their world. So for the time being, they all agree to a cover story that Touka is Touma's long lost twin sister and will be transferring to Touma's high school while HC and Yomikawa tries to find the one who cause the portal and help Touka return to her world. The fanfic will be both adventure and comedy with the adventure part focusing on Touma and Touka working together to try finding the Professor responsible for the portal and facing adversaries against them. The comedy however will be about an awkward Touka's trying to fit in Touma's world where her friends and the people she know are Touma's while still pretending to be his "twin sister". Another funny part will be the interaction between the Kamjou's and learn how different both of them treat their friends in their world (e.g. While Touma does nothing when Index wants food or bites him, Touka has no calms of berating or even hitting Index!) Also while both Kamijou's share the same bad luck, Touka has a much worse luck in her Unwanted Harem as unlike Touma who does nothing to his Harem, Touka "took the initiative" with some of the girls in her harem which lead to some unfortunate jealousy and multiple-timing! To make it more awkward, she may have went "further" with one of girls in her world and feels awkward meeting that girl's counterpart in Touma's world. Spoiler for Senpai and Kohai: Two Teleporters tale: This fanfic is based on episode 6 & 7 in the 2nd season and the subtle Les Yay i saw between Kuroko and Awaki. You know what i'm talking about . The premise of the fanfic is still the same just like ep 6 & 7 but the difference being Awaki and Kuroko have meet before years ago as Awaki was Kuroko’s senpai and was her coach in teaching Kuroko how to use her powers (This was before Awaki's accident that made her fear her powers). Kuroko admired Awaki and called her "My beloved Onee-sama" and Awaki adored Kuroko and called her "My Sweet Imouto". (You can guess where this is going.) However their training stops as Awaki was forced to leave Kuroko for some reason (Which later chapters will reveal) which left Kuroko devastated and wondering why she did that. The two meet again during the Remnant arc where both are surprise to learn they are enemies for the Remnant. Both of them are conflicted as not only do they still have feelings for each other but they’re still loyal to their respective organizations (Kuroko's Judgment, Awaki's Syndicate). This fic will be a little dark, angsty and violent too. Now this one i currently working right now and is my favorite. Unfortunately, i still doing a preview of it but i give you the title of my 3rd fanfic. "Two Level 5's Shopping trip + Two stalkers" Your opinions please. PS: I would love to see the fanfic where Team ITEM are Touma's adopted sisters translated. __________________

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SuzushinaYuriko SHSL Lurker Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Academy City	Would Mikoto and Mugino get along? (assuming stalker is Frenda) They did have a pretty intense fight with each other before... __________________

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Master Assassin Portable Dude Mk. II Artist Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights. Age: 35	2nd page coming up. ... Geh, if there's one thing I don't like about Toaruverse, it'll be the fact that each of the characters have their way of speaking which includes some verbal tics I can't translate very well. That and this fic... I just don't know what ties in the story anymore. It feels like some others are just adding to the story on their own. Sooo not-in-sync. Spoiler for 2nd: Touma: I'm back~ Touma: Hm? Men's shoes...? Touma: Hey, Saiai... Saiai: Ah, Onii-chan... welcome back. Hamadzura: Urk, Kamijo--no, onii-chan! No, no, Touma-oniichan! Pardon me for the intrusion, Touma-oniichan! Touma: ------------------------------ Touma: ... Get out. Saiai: Onii-chan... Hamadzura: Touma-oniichan... Touma: I DON'T WANT TO HEAR "ONII-CHAN" FROM YOU! DO YOU WANT TO BE SENT FLYING AGAIN, HAMADZURAAAAA!!!! (T/N: He sounds like Accelerator in this manner of speech, what's with the mix of Katakana into his sentences...) Hamadzura: At least please allow me to be with Saiai, Touma-oniichan... Touma: ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING, YOU BASTARD!!!! Saiai: Calm down, Onii-chan. Other people are going to hear you, you know? Touma: THAT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS!!!! ----------------------------<--snip> Mugino: I'm back. Touma: Welcome back Nee-chan... you're late aren't you? Mugino: Yeah, well, today's quite the busy day indeed... Touma: More underground jobs? Mugino: Yeah. Touma: Nee-chan, please don't get injured anymore. Mugino: ...Sorry, Touma. I made you worried... ----------------------------- (Probably someone else wrote this, doesn't seem to be connected to the previous ones. Probably the previous one isn't even connected to the first either) Touma: Well then, see ya~ Himegami: Fufu. Mugino: .... Touma: I'm back-- Mugino: Tooouumaaa~~ Touma: Uwa! What is it, onee-chan!? Mugino: That black-haired girl, is she your girlfriend...? Touma: !!! You saw!? No, no! Just a friend! Mugino: Ah, I see... hugs Touma Touma: Wa-- Nee-chan? Mugino: Touma, you're mi---my brother aren't you... Touma: ??? What, isn't it obvious...? Mugino: (My Touma... I won't give him to anyone else...) ------------------------------- (Dinner) Mugino: Ah, that was tasty. Thanks for the meal-- Touma: Nee-chan, please bring the plates over here-- Mugino: What a bother, I don't want to do it. Touma: Really now... can't you just do this simple common housework... Mugino: You know, Touma, who was the reason that you can live in this house, and who was the reason you can enjoy such livelihood? Touma: ... My Level 5 Onee-sama's scholarship, yes...? Mugino: Yes, yes. So with that said...? Touma: ... I'll just do the dishes then... Mugino: Please do~ Touma: ... Damn it. ------------------------------- Touma: Oh yeah! But I do have a complaint after all! Mugino: And what would that be~? Touma: It's thanks to me Nee-chan can enjoy dinner! Cleaning, washing duties too, it'll be troublesome without me! At least show some concern about me! Mugino: Well then, if Touma were to get out and loiter around in the streets...? Touma: ... The usual would be fine. >_> Mugino: ... But certainly if it's not because of Touma, everyday life over here would be difficult... Touma: Eh? Mugino: As always, thank you, Touma. Touma: Nee-chan, you're always the same... that's unfair you know. Mugino: Fufu <3 -------------------------------- __________________ I like to run portable on my dude, so I ran while running runs in my portably portable, dude-like dude. --- This line over here is a placeholder. ----

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kaizerknight01 Extra Superior Otaku Join Date: Sep 2008	was listing to this bgm http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hNEcBbzX2m4&NR=1 Spoiler for short fanfic: Facing a seraphim like being, a certain spiky haired student name Kamijou Touma, his body is covered in wounds, his right arm completely covered blood and its flesh shows sign of dying . Touma with all of his strength and will struggles to stand on his two feet, and a thought ran into his mind “What the heck I was fighting or? What is cause that I am willing to risk my life for ?” He remembers the faces Misaka Mikoto , Misaka Imouto , Index and all the friend and allies that he met in his so called second life. As the seraphim opens all of its wings, focused a large beam of energy towards Touma, something like a invisible force field blocks it and finally negates it . The angle like being was stunned by this development. Touma “ I pity you …… Even with such power you’re beings without a cause or freewill...” Mass of energy from up into his right hand covering the whole length of his right arm Touma yells “ Till this hand grabs hold of victory , there no way you can stop me!!” begin to dash forward. Then Index shouts at Touma . Index “ Touma !!! Where my food ? I am starving !!! Wake up !!!!!” With this Kamijou Touma panicky awakes up “index?? What ?? What the I thought I was fighting the final boss …. Index with an angry glare “ Touma want me to bite you on your head and shatter your illusions ?” Touma “FU KOU DA !!!!!!”

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Flere821 Lurker Join Date: Aug 2010	I've recently got into the 'My little sister can't be this cute' novel series, and I have a question - has there been anyone trying to write a fanfic that put sis-con sargeant Motoharu into that setting? I for one am interested in just what kind of snarking Kyousuke can give to Motoharu Or maybe even Maika dragging Kirino down the forbidden path... slaps self in face before really going off the deep end

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all_flying Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: City of Heroes	I've make a fanfic already. Still unfinished tho, looking a way to connect between the story. Anyone interested, please enjoy http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452408/...ace_and_Vortex And please review it. I take any critiques, thought, suggestion, or excoriation (by any means of course)

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SuzushinaYuriko SHSL Lurker Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Academy City	http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6452999/1/Days_of_Darkness Finally got around to reading this. Nice job, Chaos, it's pretty interesting. __________________

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Master Assassin Portable Dude Mk. II Artist Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights. Age: 35	Oh great. To think this did not happen yet... I'm so laughing over myself for this. Spoiler for D:: A fanfic of Touma/Laura Somehow Laura ended up being in Academy City (not stated for what reason, although Aleister knows about her presence but decides to let it slide) and encounters Touma on his way to the usual convenience store (Index currently at Komoe-sensei's). The two met there and Touma helps Laura pay for her items (as she can't use her currency there), and since Laura already found out who Touma is, demands that she visits his house much to Touma's surprise. While at Touma's dorm, Laura commented at how small the house is, before Touma later remarks her weird Japanese. She later snapped and went to charge at Tsuchimikado next door after hearing him from Touma's room, much to the surprise of Tsuchimikado. Touma went to stop her (and invokes his IB because Laura was about to release some sort of magical energy in her anger), after much trying to hold her back she was accidentally thrown onto the bed by Touma (in a position you'd know of... so to speak)... and at this time Laura's heart went fluttering over that incident. (Badump badump, goes Laura.) Index got back and knocked on the door, and all at a bad timing (Touma accidentally grabbed Laura's chest while in that compromising position), which prompted Tsuchimikado's intervention for Laura to escape from the verandah. From her escape, Laura expressed a desire to see him again. Of course, Aleister got wind of this too. Later, back in England Laura makes a request to secretly send Touma to Necessarius's HQ to Aleister. Aleister, seeing Laura hugging a poorly handmade doll of Touma, understands and agrees to it. To cut the story short, Laura awaits Touma's arrival excitedly (much to the shock of Stiyl) and tries to woo him (date etc you know the drill) during his three-day stay there, but fails. Let's just say that she failed to woo him whatsoever (much to her tsundere-ish disappointment), and that's where the story ends. The ending was kind of abrupt, I wished the author could do more but meh. Not going to push it too much. At least it was a fun read __________________ I like to run portable on my dude, so I ran while running runs in my portably portable, dude-like dude. --- This line over here is a placeholder. ----

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SuzushinaYuriko SHSL Lurker Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Academy City	That's a great idea. DO IT! __________________

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Flere821 Lurker Join Date: Aug 2010	Lol, I sincerely doubt Kyousuke will go to one of those meetings of his own will... good idea nonetheless Though just as a heads up: Spoiler for Some info on Kyousuke - LN spoilers ahead: He does like Ayase (well, the appearance anyway - he finally knew better to try and go for a yandere) who's the same age as Kirino, and he almost always goes for long, black-haired characters first in the H-games Kirino gives him. Not to mention as of the latest LN volume of OreImo (Vol7) He's supposedly a couple now with Kuroneko. Hopefully you can incorporate some of those into your skit - it's a shame really that Maika doesn't have long hair though, just think of how Motoharu will react to Kyousuke's actions then xD