2011-12-07, 09:16 | Link #11701 |
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@ Stratos - Static characters are boring. Yes, Inami couldn't have known she was innocent so he's being irrational about being angry at himself. This just makes him more human since human beings, especially hormonally addled teenagers, act irrationally at times. It's part of growing up and moving on. Almost all our fics follow this: Senpai's has Ichika and Dan being blood knights due to rage, Rain's has Kyuukai angsting about killing and cursing more than he should, and mine has the three protags unwilling to let go of their past mistakes and keeps influencing them.
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But this actually passes. oO Too bad these things can't fly... wait. Quote:
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It's the manliest of IS Man Frames. Its so manly it even has MAN in its name! /Powerthirst It is also my protagonist's choice of device in [Magical Lyrical Nanoha], and it would be really confusing should I crossover... ...so in the mean time, I'd avoid Planet 193 carrying an army of Sankt Kaiser Panzerin, unless I can't avoid it. Quote:
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~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~ http://www.sonymusic.co.jp/Amusement/gunbike/cast.html And we have a winner! The lead design for the Pisces Stratos system!! And as the years pass, we'll have PS1, PS2, and then PS3!!! And not forgetting the version which can transform into a suitcase - Pisces Stratos Personal!!! This is my "sub-IS" system, which really is just an IS frame without a core and less a LOT of gizmos. It uses IS Condensers to power the suit, and so must be recharged by other IS. It is about late G1 in terms of strength, but can be mass-produced and both men and women can fly it. But due to weight limits, only children can fly it. Adults would drain the battery too quickly. ...why does this sound like some God King Brave anime now?!
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2011-12-07, 09:33 | Link #11703 |
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@ meistah - Here's a few: http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/zi.../01-full-f.jpg
http://www.kent.net/robotech/mecha/rdf/mini-mac.gif http://farm1.static.flickr.com/40/12...bcd194aef3.jpg http://static.hlj.com/topimg/tamnatf09/tamnatb48s.jpg How about these?
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2011-12-07, 09:36 | Link #11704 |
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That's a whole lot of Destroids and a Monster you found me...
I'd also have Mospeada to fall back on come to think of it. But I'll stick to Gunbike as its a trike, and trikes are rare these days. So the Pisces Stratos system is as you see in my post above. Thanks nonetheless!
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2011-12-07, 09:50 | Link #11706 |
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Okay I'll spoil: Remember when I said he's leaving at the end of second year, and Louise takes over as Club Advisor? He pulls a [Big Damn Hero] in Season 6 (3rd Year) astride a PS3. But the PS plays increasing roles starting from S3, while being tested at ISA. The PS2 will feature prominently in S4 and S5, and S6 with the release of PS3 will set the stage for the climax in the last ST@RS season, #7! The ace piloting the PS1 is a potential love interest for Karon. Irish, better look out. Or learn to ride that thing.
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2011-12-07, 09:56 | Link #11707 |
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@ Meistah - Why does Max leave? Is his contract terminated or something? Usually, valuable personnel are kept, especially considering the fact that he has knowledge about ISA that a lot people may want.
Does Browining briefly go fangirl before realizing who he is? That'll be a funny scene: Her going from impressed to trolling once she sees his face Side note - I thought Karon was a chaste/celibate idol and you didn't want me pairing Irish with her? I was going to drop the IKaron festival draft since you said so a few pages ago.
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2011-12-07, 10:10 | Link #11709 |
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@ Meistah - Ah~ So it was more like a student teacher course, then? That explains his young age and somewhat unprofessional personality then.
I was expecting it to be a bit like a "nasked rider reveal" actually But that works too, and maybe he'll actually get some respect from his former group mates instead of the constant flack he gets Side note - Then do you mind if I just make the festival draft more platonic? Majority of the scenes can be seen that way and I'll just take out the romantic bits.
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2011-12-07, 16:59 | Link #11711 |
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@ Meistah - Thanks All I have to do is edit out the kiss scene, anyway. Most of the festival is just her dragging him around to let hik have some fun.
@ Senpai - Can you tell me some of Ichika's abnormal traits like his faster reflexes or other superhuman abilities?
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2011-12-07, 17:42 | Link #11712 | ||
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Twins!Madoka: Fast recovery, innate flexibility, nocturnal vision (can see in the dark), Mnemonists (unusual ability to recall long lists of information), natural compass (gravitation and magnetic related) Quote:
As for his body, well, he has rather quick fatigue and injury recovery (part of his innate power) so a momentary power boost (such as that punch injured Laura or him containing Shenlong's punch) is no problem. Still his body can only go as fast as he utilize and train them (as Houki noted in chapter 1, he has extremely swift movement but he has too much waste movement). It's up to how efficient he used his body limitation.
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2011-12-07, 18:23 | Link #11713 |
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@ Senpai - So his body has the required secondary powers to withstand it then? Ayumu from Kore wa Zombie Desu ka has super strength but packs the secondary powers to use them so his arms get ripped of when he uses them. Good thing he's a zombie.
Also, how do you think I should have the other characters in Shadow find out about Irish's gynophobia? Serious or comedic moment?
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For example, Ichika has fast regeneration and recovery, but due to the nature of his nerves (being reinforced and super fast) he should feel more pain than normal human do. This is mitigated by the fact that injured part has their nerves shut off periodically, making the pain feels like pulsing jolt (once each few second) than continuous pain. Both, at first it's played for laughs, and then reality ensues...
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2011-12-07, 18:44 | Link #11715 |
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@ Senpai - So it's a double edged sword then? In a regular fight, its a real pain in the ass and sometimes he can do better without it. In a prolonged fight to the death, its extremely helpful since the effects last longer. That about right?
I know how to play it for laughs, but how do I do that for reality? Him spazzing ain't exactly the most serious or dramatic situation.
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2011-12-07, 18:51 | Link #11716 | |
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Really? Just make him looks like someone that almost died due to blood loss, they also spazzing out...
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Maya or Tatenashi, pick your poison. EDIT: going to school, see ya.
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2011-12-07, 19:18 | Link #11719 |
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@ Senpai - See ya Senpai!
Questions for when you get back - Does anybody find it odd in Sacred Twins that Ichika's so hardy? I would question if my friend suddenly regenerated a cut in less than 5 minutes. How do you think each would react? Maya might start panicking, but I doubt Tatenashi will do the same.
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