2011-03-10, 11:37 | Link #47 |
Quietly Lurking
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Join Date: Mar 2010
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I think there's too much yellow in the sig. Also the lighting is very confusing. You generally only want to have one source of light. So try burning and doding some areas in the bg and on the render. Also the wavy lines behind the text is distracting so I would get rid of those.
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2011-03-10, 21:30 | Link #49 | |
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well, here are the next version V3 I think of adding border, but meh... I got no idea
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2011-03-10, 23:17 | Link #50 |
Kaiba
Join Date: Jul 2010
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still a little bright, maybe put a cooling photo filter on soft light over it? Also perhaps do some burning and sponging to make areas darker, and some around the light source and then make the light source more clear...does that make sense? and yes a border would be good
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2011-03-11, 05:16 | Link #53 | |
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and yes, I put shadow here and there to accentuate the (now) single light source here are the fourth version v4 as there are still many days left till deadline, I'm still open for constructive criticism and suggestions especially since I'm not satisfied with the border
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2011-03-11, 07:37 | Link #54 | |
Kaiba
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2011-03-14, 11:26 | Link #59 |
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Join Date: Aug 2010
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Ah, ok.
Then it should be set out like this: SOTW [Entries] ---------------------------------------------- Theme: ---------------------------------------------- Max size: 500 x 160 ---------------------------------------------- SOTM Rules ---------------------------------------------- 1) You are only allowed to enter 1 sig (make it count because once entered you cannot edit your sig so make sure you do that before hand.) 2) Judging is done in a list, this is a democracy (CANNOT VOTE FOR YOURSELF!) 3) Ripping will be disqualified 4) No Flaming 5) No paying people for votes IF PAYING FOR VOTES (OR GIVING SOMEONE ANY SORT OF BRIBE) IS FOUND OUT YOU WILL BE BANNED BOTH THE PAYEE AND RECEIVER 6) Remember, this is mostly for fun and the leaderboard, so HAVE FUN!
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2011-03-14, 11:43 | Link #60 |
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Join Date: Dec 2007
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Actualy, animation is allowed
5) Some do give cookies to thoses than voted for them. It seem than peoples belive than it wouldn't influence the result... 7) Using old signature is allowed. Signature don't have to be made only for the SOTM ( many use them as regular signatures. )
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