Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Mr Coin]

Originally Posted by Kireen

As they say, ask and you sahll recieve.

Spoiler for Report 06&07:

Report 06: Lightning.

Once Yuuno Scrya woke up the next morning, feeling what was probably going to remembered as the most terrible headache recorded in history, he almost immediately noticed that something was different from usual as he could feel his arm trapped between very warm and soft.

Opening his eyes to scan his surroundings, he immediately recognized where his arm was placed.

Peacefully sleeping beside him, and hugging him like a human sized teddy bear, was probably one of the most beautiful women he knew, looking absolutely adorable as she continued to sleep with a goofy smile on her face.

Sadly, the librarian could not continue to admire the scene in front of his eyes as the woman, probably alerted by his movement, suddenly opened her eyes, immediately letting out a cute squeak as she registered who was her bedmate.

‘Chrono’s little sister can’t be this cute!’ The librarian screamed in his mind as he watched Fate trying to cover her naked body with the blankets as her face started to slowly assume the same coloration of her eyes.

“G-g-good morning Y-Yuuno.” She greeted him once she was able to calm down a bit after taking few deep breaths, blushing again under his stare.

“Ah, good morning Fate…” He replied, realizing that he was still staring, and immediately turning his eyes away from the other blonde. “Sorry…” He awkwardly apologized rubbing the back of his head.

“I…I should be the one apologizing…” The enforcer muttered in a small voice, making Yuuno wonder about what she was talking about, his memories form last night were quite hazy. “I should have not taken advantage of your condition last night…I should have not blurted out my feelings for you…”

As he heard those words, Yuuno’s memories hit him like a sudden lighting, making him remember what happened the previous night.

At some point, after going out from the pub, he found himself divided from his drink buddies, and not knowing what else to do he decided to wobble toward his apartment, and finding himself lost after few minutes since he was not familiar with that area of Cranagan.

Then, as if fate itself wanted for them to meet exactly in that place, he met Fate, who was running an errand for her adoptive mother.

Seeing her childhood friend in that condition, the kind enforcer immediately decided to help him, and at some point during their walk toward his home, seeing that as her chance, she mastered her courage and declared her feeling for him.
What happened next could be easily guessed just by taking a quick glance at the condition of the room.

“No, don’t be.” The librarian interrupted her. “I’m sorry that I didn’t notice before…I guess that I was being dense.”

And speaking of being dense, Yuuno thought that maybe he owned some apologies to Nanoha, he had been as bad as her, thinking for all these years that the burgundy eyed enforcer was trying to cockblock him when, instead, she was trying to get his attention.

*

“This is Cupid-1 to Titania, main mission objective achieved.” A certain blue haired mage reported in front of a communication window. “Mission accomplished.”

“Good work you three!” The teal haired ring leader congratulated with her task force in a cheerful tone. “I can’t wait to see my new grandchildren.”

“Wait, wait, wait… are you telling me that this was all planned from the start?” Cupid-3, the sniper of the team, asked in a shocked tone.

“Obviously, who do you think I am?” The team leader snorted with a smug grin on his face.

“Harlaowns… never let you guard down around them.” The last member of the task force muttered as he let out a huge sigh.

Report 07: Duel.

The first thought that crossed Yuuno’s mind that morning, curses toward Chrono aside, was that the pillow he was currently using was not his own.

Still in a mostly dazed stated, he unconsciously moved up one of his hands, finding himself squeezing something round shaped, warm and soft, yet firm.

The young librarian immediately opened his eyes once he heard a soft moan near his ears, finding himself in a situation he would have never imagined to find himself into.

Looking up his green eyes locked with a pair of familiar blue ones, but the usual stoic expression of the person whose ample breast he was using as a pillow was not there, in its place there was a small satisfied smile. That was also probably the first time in which he had seen Signum with her hair untied.

“Scrya.” She greeted him with a simple nod of her head. “It looks like you still have some energy in you after our last night duel.” She added, making him notice that he was still squeezing her other breast.

“S-Signum?” He asked, immediately retracting his hand and crawling away. “Duel?” He then asked with a puzzled expression on his face.

“I have to admit that to possess an excellent sword.” The Blazing General of Fire started her explanation.

“…” Her words only added more confusion in the rebooting mind of the young man.

“Who would have thought that in your condition you could have put up such a fight…” Signum continued her story with a hint of admiration in her tone. “I surely didn’t expect to find such a fine opponent after a rescued you from those three idiots.”

“Eh?”

“I would have never imagined witnessing such a brutal, yet elegant display of swordsmanship.” The leader of the Wolkenritter continued her tale, fixing a hungry gaze toward her confused bedmate. “Your technique and endurance were praiseworthy.”

“Ehm…Signum…?” Yuuno was starting to feel a little scared of her gaze; he was starting to feel like a piece of meat in front of an entire pack of wolves.

“Had I know that you were such an amazing swordsman I would have taken you way before.” The pinkette continued her rant ignoring the scared librarian. “Scrya, from now on I claim you as my sword, and I shall be yours.”

“W-what?”

“Now, get ready, our battle shall resume.” Signum finally declared, moving to stand on top of him, hungrily licking her lips in anticipation of the carnage that was going to begin.

“SOMEONE HELP MEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”

Somewhere else three knights gave a stiff salute toward the sky as the soul of a certain chief librarian started its jurney toward a better place.

Don't know who'll be next yet...

Also, a FExNanoha crossover with Chrono as the protag.... Please take all my money!

So Yuuno misinterpreted Fate's Yandere tendencies for Nanoha just because she's too shy to actually show her advances to him. However, if Yuuno actually made a move on Fate, will she be Tsundere just to hide her embarrassment?

Fate to Yuuno in Ferret mode: "I-I-I'm going to pet you so- *Blush* T-T-That d-does not mean that I like you or anything!"

or

Fate to Yuuno after the trial: "T-T-T-Thank you for defending me on court-- *Yuuno gave her an infectious grin that made her smile like a star. But that vanished when she imagined perverted images of a sexy Yuuno in leather shirt and pants trying to kiss her as a reward for helping her out* and D-Don't look at me that way. *Pulls down the hem of her skirt as an adorable blush starts to form*, y-y-you P-Pervert!"

Yuuno: *Sweat-drop* "...Ehh?"

Hehehe, Signum's words of battle~ and Yuuno, You will be missed. But don't worry though, the author's life giving powers, can make you alive again just to repeat the morning cycle.

Originally Posted by bhl88

XD I got Report #5 XD

Spoiler for Report #8: EX rank pleasure:

The next morning Yuuno squirmed around the bed with his eyes closed. His head hurt and it seemed like he couldn’t move around due to the pain in his head.

He was sure that this was going to be his worst hangover, not the first, definitely not the last, but he doubted that anything else could top this one. The only thing he felt was that he felt good, but that he also couldn't move his arms and legs. He opened his eyes to find his arms and legs in a cast.

"Good evening, Yuuno-kun.", a blonde nurse said.

Yuuno moaned out: "Shamal.... what happened last night...."

Shamal put a finger on her cheek while trying to voice out what happened last night: "Last night, Dearche-chan and Yuri took you here. Yuri was apologizing and Dearche was sorry too, in an indirect way. She said: 'I-It's not like I'm worried for Y- I mean, the mongrel!'"

Shamal also added: "Also, you received several second-degree burn marks, your hips are dislocated, two fractures in in your arms, a head impact.... and a 9% BAC..."

Yuuno said in a matter of a fact: "What ha-", as the door opened up. Dearche and Yuri came in, each with a blush on their faces, with Dearche looking away. Yuri said, with a cheerful smile: "Let's do it again!"

Dearche whispered while looking the other: "T-thanks for allowing me my way.... i-i-i-t was enjoyable being o-on top...", as she held the dark book in hand. Yuuno asked her, "Can you say it again? I coul-". Dearche stopped him: "Enough! Just take a good rest!" as she stormed outside with a blush on her face.

Yuuno sweatdropped at her attitude with a smile, "Yare, yare, she never changes."

Yuri smiled: "By the way, what do you mean by 'It feels so good! Please thrust-'", at which Yuuno interrupted her.

Yuuno said: "Please, forget about it....", to Yuri's confusion.

(Yeah, I think magic doesn't work on fractures, and the damage was major XD)

Yuuno nearly died from her 'extra hands' XD. Doing it with Yuri while drunk is too dangerous... (I'll allow someone to redo Report #8 XD)

I'm not that Familiar with Yuri but what are her extra hands?

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Haa... want to write one myself, but I'm afraid of my inherent flaw: horrible grammar and illogical plot

Oh well, at least I'll try to be coherent

Spoiler for Report 09:

He might be cunning, he might be clever, he might be deceptive.

But Chrono Harlaown is a loyally prideful of a man, something like cheating is beneath him.

When his mother encouraged him to romance his former schoolmate and current subordinate, indirectly manipulating the events behind the curtain, he countered with his own gran master plan.

He succeeded, said subordinate is happy with someone else, he's a free man.

...or at least, that's what he thought. He had climbed the stair of military and political position so high that it began to take a toll on his freedom, with the numbers of obligation he had to fulfill, romantic option become somewhat constricted.

Apparently, his brain came from her mother, but he has nowhere near her ability to balance logic and empathy.

He looked aside, and banged the back of his head to the wall, regretting what he'd done.

Strand of golden hair, it's curly nature tempting Chrono to stoke it gently, intimately. Oh, he had done far, far more than that, but back then, he's wasted as hell.

Wait, it's not curly

"What. The. Hell."

He wanted to scream, such broad back is nothing exactly what he remembered. The touch on smooth, fair skin. The curve, the works. No, it's definitely not a man, but what the hell-

"FERRET. WAKE. UP!"

Chrono kicked his bedmate so hard that the entire room shaken off, the poor, sleeping man hit the wall with a resounding *THUD* echoing throughout the hotel's corridor.

"Oh, man, I feel like scrubbing myself off my skin. Is this my karma for betraying my mother's expectation?"

No, calm down. He assured himself, this is not what happened, unless someone tampered with his mind-

Verossa.

Man won't be this bad normally, but everyone is tanked to near death in the gala last night. If that's the case, Chrono won't get his revenge multiplied, for sure.

Not the time to whine.

"Ugh, my head..." the blond haired man muttered as his eyelid stretched, revealing a set of jade colored iris "What the-"

"I don't think THAT happened, or at least, not with two of us" Chrono hastily noted, his last scrape of dignity fought hard to kept his voice as neutral as possible.

"...Don't think so, but I don't remember anything after that vintage your mother brought..." the man nodded in agreement, while still struggling with his hangover.

"Well, either my memories are twisted by denial or someone responsible for this prank... best guess?"

"Something like this, it would be you, or..."

They rolled their eyes aside and chided, synchronously "Ero cosplay mistress of the night sky"

Following it, is a prolonged silence, at least until "So... friends forever?"

"The way you put it is creepy, are you not confident enough with your sexuality?"

"I am in a state of panic, right now, Yuuno, so QUIET"

"Okay" Yuuno decided not to press further, because sure thing Chrono's mind is screwed, never ONCE he called Yuuno by his first name, usually just ferret or Scrya.

Muffled laughter caught both men's ears, and they swiftly reacts. With enhanced strength and reflex of typical elite mages, they flipped the giant king-sized bed smoothly, revealing a pair of half-naked nubile young women underneath.

"Oho, the minx is the perpetrator" the young Admiral Harlaown smugly smiled "But who could have thought High Cardinal of major religion would conspire with her"

"Because it's fun?" was the reply

"You want fun? We can have some fun"

"STRUGGLE BIND"

It's such a complex arrangement that only best of the best can execute, the symmetry, the strength, the aesthetical value born from mind of skilled mages, with sufficient amount of perversion injected into their brains.

The thrill, the expectation, but most of all, the surprise caught Carim Gracia and Hayate Yagami. Both of them failed to react with proper response (not that Hayate is able to), and thus, both of them are put on a very humiliating, very sensual position.

"While I am somewhat interested with kinky roleplay, I think this is a little too soon"

"You only made it worse"

"Okay, I knew that... VITA! SIGNUM! ANYONE! HELP US NOW!" Hayate sent a telepathic distress across the entire Cranagan, to each of her knights.

"People reap what they sow!" came the reply.

And thus the Saintly Knight Carim Gracia found her inner, sinful demon, whereas the ero mistress learned the hard way that the meek one is dangerous on the bed.

Oh, god. Yuuno raise your shields and Chrono better prepare Teleporter High.

Originally Posted by bhl88

Except when Yuri felt so good, she used her other hands... nearly killing the poor guys XD.

Handjobs can kill mortal man.

Originally Posted by Andarkoshi

[grins] Time to drop a little Bomb!

Sette for Fate/Stay Nanoha.

Spoiler for Sette for Fate/Stay Nanoha:

Hehe the thing is that in this verse Sette is a clone of certain person... specifically Emiya Shirou himself! Yup she is Shirou's female clone.

Jail was very fascinated with Shirou's abilities and magecraft and hoped to gain access to them by cloning Shirou. The problem was... that it was a big failure. Since Shirou's magic was born from a completely different school of magic plus a set of very crazy circumstances, Sette just wasn't able to replicate it.

Jail deemed her a failure but didn't say it to her face. While insane and ruthless he does love his daughters and won't ever hurt them on purpose.

But Sette knew, she might have overheard them or Quattro told her. In the end Sette made a decision. She allowed Quattro to erase her personality and went through hellish training with Tre in order to make up for being a failure.

Sette's basic personality is very much like Shirou's. Kind, wishes to help others, has little sense of self-value and is incredibly protective of her sisters.

Also Jail managed to (with some moderate success) recreate one of Shirou's weapons, Kanshou and Bakuya as Sette's slaughter arms.

I'm funding this really badly now! Shirou-ko or not!

And ,thanks to you, your muse shook my mind like a thunderstorm, and this was the result

Spoiler for The origin of Sette:

One day, Sette started an conversation with her father.

"If Uno, Due, Tre, and Quattro got their DNA from you? While Nove got her's from an respected public servant. Can you tell me where you got mine?"

"Oh that, if memory serve me right,your DNA came from unadministrated world... What was the serial number of that world again! Ah! World #97."

Sette's eyes seemed to dampened despite being her stoic self, could it be that the world that her genes originated from was the cause of her inability to cast magic, "Unadministrated... That world does not even produce mages."

In order to cheer the cyborg, Jail gave her a grin. With maddened eyes, he spread his arms to his sides to show how grandiose his lecture would be, "Sette, Sette, Sette, Don't underestimate the world just because it lacked the proper environment to produce powerful mages. Powerful mages like The Ace of Aces - Takamichi Nanoha, The Living Lost Logia Yagami Hayate, and The Legendary Unicron, A.K.A The Strongest Admiral of TSAB History - Gil Graham, and his cat familiars -The Leise twins came from this humble world."


A new sort of light sparked in the Cyborg's eyes, "That only means that I inherited my genes from a powerful person?"

"Yes, of course, I handpicked the best DNA the Dimensions could offer. There is no doubt that your genes are special"

The news made the strange light in Sette's eyes grew brighter.

It appears that Sette is finally progressing to show her emotions, The doctor noted happily.

"Takamichi Nanoha?" Sette laconically said.

"Excuse me?"

"Did I inherited my genes from Takamichi Nanoha?" Sette again said.

"Ah... No"

"Yagami Hayate?" Sette pressed on.

"Wrong again"

"Gil Graham"

"Nope!" The doctor said loudly.

Sette paused for a moment.

"...Kitties?" She said with a small and neutral voice, not the voice she'd use, which had the force of the diaphragm like Tre would.

"Wrooooong agaaaaiiin!" The doctor sang even louder.

So I was no good after all, Sette glumly thought.

The doctor's grin vanished, as the light in her daughter's eyes disappeared returning to its original dimmed and hollow state of emptiness. It's as if he had kicked a tiny squirrel squeaking for acorns.


Redeeming himself, the doctor said, "Emiya Shirou"

"Huh?" The puzzled cyborg said.

"You have the genes of Emiya Shirou." The doctor said.

The cyborg's brain was trying to get remember the name that she heard, but the name and identity "Emiya Shirou" did not ring a bell .

Since the name raised questions, Jail sprang up from his arm-chair with ease, feet on his seat. His posture was those of an duel-swordsman, "Trace on!"

...

And nothing happened.

Sette blinked at the odd display.

"When I was trying to establish a base in UK, I taught him the basics of defense law when I spend my time working as a professor at the University of Cambridge." He finally said.

A Law student... Was I created by Doctor all along just to be a lawyer in order for him to get away with all the crimes he will be doing. No, it can't be, there must be a reason why I trained intensely under Tre to be the perfect weapon.

She then came to an uneasy reflection.

Then, I was trained to be the perfect battle lawyer? Or maybe... how about the beauty of the battlefield that Tre told me about, if my training end shortly because of my weak affiliation for magic. I will be hitting the books and live as a nerd all my remaining life, studying defense law?

Speaking of books and nerds...


If the Doctor really changed her training in the future.

She could imagine her creepy sister, Quattro scooting next to her with a creepy smile on her face.


No...

Quattro offered to change her hair into dorky braids...

No...

Quattro would start pestering her to wear those weird glasses her's. She would obey just to stop the annoyance.

No!

The two of them would be standing with each other in entwined arms, wearing matching T-Shirts with a print of "best sister in the universe" and arrows pointing at each other. As she soullessly listen to Quatrro chant to just how she much love her and how they will be best best best best best best sisters, together forever and ever, because the other sisters could suck saggy tits for all Quatrro cared - like that person even cared in the first place.

NO. NO. NO. NO. NO. NO!

And she would force read her that dreaded vampire series with those poor excuse of sparkly-vampires-that-could-turn-sustainable-power-source-A.K.A-solar-energy-into-electricity-that-could-benefit-everyone with real vampires that could kill in cold blood!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

It appears that explaining for too long for the important part to come out is a bad idea, The Doctor thought in fright when he felt his stoic daughter's aura of death coming in like a Tsunami.

"...And he is an powerful mage who practiced mage-craft in secrecy." He said quickly hoping to placate his daughter, as he kicked his legs in the air, unceremoniously landing his rear on his seat.

He watched silently, when her daughter regained her posture, thought much more proud then he last time saw her active for years.

"And he can create swords out of thin air," he added.

Though not fully noticeable, the doctor could see a ghost of a smile on her face and eyes were wider, full of life and wonder. It's like a child getting her first gift on christmas eve. Ah, Sette can't get this adorable! The doctor said as he embraced her.

"How did you obtain his DNA?" She asked softly.

"Oh, that part was easy." The doctor said, as he gently pull himself off at arm-length.


"Easy? There was no long battles of sword and magic?"

"Yes!"

"If you killed him off that easily, that does not make him powerful...not unless you ambushed him, like you did to Zest?"

"Silly Sette," laughed light-heartily "Even if I have both the power and resources to do those, I did not murder him, because he is both my student and my precious friend. It's a shame that I might never see him again"

"...Then what did you do"

Doctor Jail smiled brightly.

"Well, what I did was simple, I inquired for his sperm in the nearest Sperm Bank that Shirou went to every month when he's out of funds for his tuition fee... and ...Ah Sette, hello Sette? Oh dear, I should not have said it" The doctor said, as his daughter turned cold and rigid, her soul seemed to die from the inside.

And yes, Shirou's first choice was Law. According to Type-moon...

[bhl88]

Originally Posted by Mr Coin

I'm not that Familiar with Yuri but what are her extra hands?

No comment on Report #5?

[Sunder the Gold]

Law?

"Fighting evil by moonlight~; prosecuting by daylight~

"With his swords he does fight~; he is the one called Kamen Sword~"

[Andarkoshi]

Mr Coin

I feel so proud for inspiring that bit XD

Hehe funny thing is that even though Sette can't use Shirou's magecraft she inherited his other talents. Specifically she is a SUPREME Chef and... A Great Lover!

This Shirou lived with Rin (or Rin and Saber) for ten years and Rin was VERY demanding. It was a matter of survival for Shirou to develop and Sette inherited that talent (Fate has it too but she has her shyness and innocence that suppress them so you need to get her drunk but when you do... Ho boy Nanoha always zones out and starts to smile happily whenever she remembers)

But... things tend to blow up in her hands. She wants to become a good repairwoman like Shirou, the thing is that Shirou uses his magecraft to analyze things he repairs. Sette doesn't have that so...

Incidentally, Jail Wanted to have Shirou's body and DNA so he sent Due to get him. She seduced him in a bar where he was drinking after a particularly nasty operation and dragged him off to bed... Due... was never the same again. She couldn't bring herself to kill Shirou when he slept.

***
Teana almost jumped out of her skin at the small explosion that came from the living room. She ran there and then stopped with a sigh.

Sette sat on the floor with her usual expression, though there was a hint of a kicked puppy in the way her lips dropped and her eyes filled with tiny tears.

"I just wanted to fix it"

She said with a hint of sadness in her voice as she glanced down at the still smoking piece of electronics in her hand.

With a gentle smile the redhead petted Sette's head to show her that she is not angry or anything and retrieved a wet towel from the bathroom. She used it to clean Sette off of the sooth that covered her completely.

... Mhm...

Shirou glared at the dead apostle in front of him, his hands itching to grasp his trusted steel. His hand thrust forward as he called out.

"OBJECTION!!"

A moment passed as nothing happened.

"Erm I mean Trace On!"

[Kireen]

Originally Posted by Mr Coin

So Yuuno misinterpreted Fate's Yandere tendencies for Nanoha just because she's too shy to actually show her advances to him. However, if Yuuno actually made a move on Fate, will she be Tsundere just to hide her embarrassment?

Fate to Yuuno in Ferret mode: "I-I-I'm going to pet you so- *Blush* T-T-That d-does not mean that I like you or anything!"

or

Fate to Yuuno after the trial: "T-T-T-Thank you for defending me on court-- *Yuuno gave her an infectious grin that made her smile like a star. But that vanished when she imagined perverted images of a sexy Yuuno in leather shirt and pants trying to kiss her as a reward for helping her out* and D-Don't look at me that way. *Pulls down the hem of her skirt as an adorable blush starts to form*, y-y-you P-Pervert!"

Yuuno: *Sweat-drop* "...Ehh?"

It was more like trying to have him spend ore time with her by dragging him away from Nanoha, but that also works...

[Kireen gains a new ability] Oh, looks like I now have the power to revive my protagonists...Meh, someone wanna exchange for something more usefull, like changing channel without using the remote?

LOL at Shirou Wright, maybe we now know who his real father was.

[Lhklan]

Originally Posted by Andarkoshi

Mr Coin
Incidentally, Jail Wanted to have Shirou's body and DNA so he sent Due to get him. She seduced him in a bar where he was drinking after a particularly nasty operation and dragged him off to bed... Due... was never the same again. She couldn't bring herself to kill Shirou when he slept.

... Die you Eldritch Abomination. *Pull out Jeweled Sword*

On a side note, I'll probably just post small snippet for the FE/Nanoha cross, namely support conversations, battle dialogue and etc.

[Mr Coin]

Originally Posted by Andarkoshi

Mr Coin

I feel so proud for inspiring that bit XD

Hehe funny thing is that even though Sette can't use Shirou's magecraft she inherited his other talents. Specifically she is a SUPREME Chef and... A Great Lover!

This Shirou lived with Rin (or Rin and Saber) for ten years and Rin was VERY demanding. It was a matter of survival for Shirou to develop and Sette inherited that talent (Fate has it too but she has her shyness and innocence that suppress them so you need to get her drunk but when you do... Ho boy Nanoha always zones out and starts to smile happily whenever she remembers)

But... things tend to blow up in her hands. She wants to become a good repairwoman like Shirou, the thing is that Shirou uses his magecraft to analyze things he repairs. Sette doesn't have that so...

Incidentally, Jail Wanted to have Shirou's body and DNA so he sent Due to get him. She seduced him in a bar where he was drinking after a particularly nasty operation and dragged him off to bed... Due... was never the same again. She couldn't bring herself to kill Shirou when he slept.

***
Teana almost jumped out of her skin at the small explosion that came from the living room. She ran there and then stopped with a sigh.

Sette sat on the floor with her usual expression, though there was a hint of a kicked puppy in the way her lips dropped and her eyes filled with tiny tears.

"I just wanted to fix it"

She said with a hint of sadness in her voice as she glanced down at the still smoking piece of electronics in her hand.

With a gentle smile the redhead petted Sette's head to show her that she is not angry or anything and retrieved a wet towel from the bathroom. She used it to clean Sette off of the sooth that covered her completely.

... Mhm...

Shirou glared at the dead apostle in front of him, his hands itching to grasp his trusted steel. His hand thrust forward as he called out.

"OBJECTION!!"

A moment passed as nothing happened.

"Erm I mean Trace On!"

Hmm It's possible that Due could seduce him while she disguised herself as one of his lovers just to gather his DNA. But it's dubious to say that Due will not kill him after that night - since she's a cold heated assassin(Not to mentioned, she was also partly responsible for Quatrro's twisted personality). Not unless you created a possible background story that could actually come to the point when Due developed feelings for the Faker.

And how? How in the world did Jail get to know Shirou? You need more details on that one... You can use my idea if you want.

Wait, Shirou is Fate's father in this story...again... I thought this was another universe. I thought it was supposed to happened in HF... This is confusing!

And modern human's survival skills were inherited from the early humans beings. Thought much more enhanced than humans, cyborgs were no exceptions since their physical and cognitive abilities were based on them. And I don't find Shirou's talent for survival to be really prominent. Not unless you want Sette to inherit Shirou's tolerant and benevolent nature that made him survive his 10 year relationship with his lovers , one with with a bi-polar disorder and another who called him her sheath.

Originally Posted by Lhklan

... Die you Eldritch Abomination. *Pull out Jeweled Sword*

On a side note, I'll probably just post small snippet for the FE/Nanoha cross, namely support conversations, battle dialogue and etc.

You should not harm animals that way... you need to handle those ingredients for delicate dishes like sushi and stuff.

I don't know what is FE but I want to see how this is going with Chrono as the protagonist. I bet the hidden boss and big bad of this story is going to be evil Kyon...

@Kireen and @Sunder

Phoenix Wright and Emiya Shirou are both partners that prosecute Dead Apostles and evil doers in the power of the phantasm moon. With Jail Scagliette on their side, nothing can stop them now.

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUN.


Defense Lawers - The movie...

Type moon Edition!

Coming soon...

On 2013

[Andarkoshi]

Originally Posted by Mr Coin

Hmm It's possible that Due could seduce him while she disguised herself as one of his lovers just to gather his DNA. But it's dubious to say that Due will not kill him after that night - since she's a cold heated assassin(Not to mentioned, she was also partly responsible for Quatrro's twisted personality). Not unless you created a possible background story that could actually come to the point when Due developed feelings for the Faker.

And how? How in the world did Jail get to know Shirou? You need more details on that one... You can use my idea if you want.

Wait, Shirou is Fate's father in this story...again... I thought this was another universe. I thought it was supposed to happened in HF... This is confusing!

And modern human's survival skills were inherited from the early humans beings. Thought much more enhanced than humans, cyborgs were no exceptions since their physical and cognitive abilities were based on them. And I don't find Shirou's talent for survival to be really prominent. Not unless you want Sette to inherit Shirou's tolerant and benevolent nature that made him survive his 10 year relationship with his lovers , one with with a bi-polar disorder and another who called him her sheath.

Naaah it's really a bit of a crack idea, Shirou just WAS that good in bed that Due couldn't kill him XD

Yeah this is Fate/Stay Nanoha Shirou, meaning he ran around the TSAB space for some 20 years and Jail took some interest in him.

Rules again, This is A STORY I'm making her inherit what I want her to inherit for the sake of MORE FUN! Also while somewhat self-sacrifical Sette is nowhere near as suicidal as Shirou. Her lack of self-value comes from her thinking of herself as a failure and trying to make up for that.

[Kireen]

The HF route /Nanha crossover was an idea of mine, but I'm still struck at the technical side of things, making both type of magic coexist is a real pain inthe rear.

The only thing I have for now is an half written prologue that involves Shirou vs Shiro and a ton of halfassed theories

[Andarkoshi]

Originally Posted by Kireen

The HF route /Nanha crossover was an idea of mine, but I'm still struck at the technical side of things, making both type of magic coexist is a real pain inthe rear.

The only thing I have for now is an half written prologue that involves Shirou vs Shiro and a ton of halfassed theories

Remind me please, this was Shirou who saved Sakura or failed to save her?

[Kireen]

Failed to save her, living in a fake body and trying to find happiness to grant her last wish, accepting some odd jobs (both mundane or not) because old habits are hard to die.

And also as a major plot point he categorically refuses to call himself a magus after seeing what their mentality can cause.

[Andarkoshi]

Originally Posted by Kireen

Failed to save her, living in a fake body and trying to find happiness to grant her last wish, accepting some odd jobs (both mundane or not) because old habits are hard to die.

And also as a major plot point he categorically refuses to call himself a magus after seeing what their mentality can cause.

A broken Shirou who lives only to fullfil Sakura's last wish, that's pretty sad T_T

[Kireen]

He's not that broken, Taiga and Rin managed to get him back on his feet (and it involved lots of kicking), and he also had more than ten years to recover a bit. Let's say that he's partially broken, in search of something to fill the hole left by Sakura in his heart...like an adoptive daughter.

[Andarkoshi]

Kireen

I can imagine it took a lot of kicking... So here it's Shirou being Fate's adoptive father? Yes I can imagine him being very kind and protective towards her.

You know this makes me think... A switched perspective, instead of Shirou becoming her adoptive father, Sakura becoming her adoptive mother. Normal End Sakura who awaits Shirou's return finds a hurt blond girl one day and takes her in.

novalysis

She is his clone, not child.

[Kireen]

Yeah, that's the idea, Shirou becoming the kind, protective and badass father of Fate, and maybe a paternal figure for Hayate too.

As for the Sakura idea, it's nice, but i still prefer having Shirou the action man around.

[Andarkoshi]

Originally Posted by Kireen

Yeah, that's the idea, Shirou becoming the kind, protective and badass father of Fate, and maybe a paternal figure for Hayate too.

As for the Sakura idea, it's nice, but i still prefer having Shirou the action man around.

That would be pretty sweet too... then again I wonder if Shirou can take the kind of perversity Hayate is capable of dishing out XD

So essentially this Shirou re-learnt his magecraft because of his new body and is quite badass right now huh?

I'm not suggesting that idea or anything, just thinking out loud XD There are some nice parallels between Sakura and Fate which would make for a sweet story as Sakura tries to comfort and help Fate after the whole thing with Precia.

[Kireen]

He managed to survive a debt from Touko Aozaki, he can take the little queen of cospaly head on if needed.

And, no Shirou never forgot his magecraft, and he also have a part of Archer's soul marged with his own, so his powers are pretty much the same, the problem is that once he's low on prana his body tends to become sluggish, so he needed to learn few new tricks over the years.

[Andarkoshi]

Originally Posted by Kireen

He managed to survive a debt from Touko Aozaki, he can take the little queen of cospaly head on if needed.

And, no Shirou never forgot his magecraft, and he also have a part of Archer's soul marged with his own, so his powers are pretty much the same, the problem is that once he's low on prana his body tends to become sluggish, so he needed to learn few new tricks over the years.

What's the exact background? How did he fail? What exactly happened?

I might have worded it wrong. The way I understood it was that in Heaven's Feel after he got a new body he had to re-learn his abilities because the new body was Not technically his. Like after a stroke I think when a person needs to re-learn how to walk or move a hand. But that's a technicality so don't trouble yourself with this.

[Kireen]

I posted a rough idea few pages back, but to sumarize he didn't manage to use Rulebreaker on sakura in time, fought Avenger together with Rin, and managed to defeat it thanks to Sakura managing to get control back for few seconds and by destroying his body to use Excalibur/Caliburn/whatever holy weapon he could trace, together with the greater grail. Illya saves him before sacrificing herself to seal the grail definitively.

Eventually get a new body made from Touko, and yes, he needed a bit of time to get used to it, but since it was it's soul that was transfered, his magic circuits together with Archer's ones still remeber how things work. He later gets a body more suited for combat from Touko, but not for free.

As for the Archer part, when Illya saved Shirou, the faragment of his essence that was left on his arm merged with Shirou's soul, giving him access to his arsenal and experience, and sometimes memories from the other routes, triggered from some events (EX, uppon earing Dearche speak he'll have flashes about Gil in UBW and Fate). That also made him a bit more sarcastic than what he originally was.

[Lhklan]

@Coin
It's Fire Emblem.
Well, while I would really like to write it, Nanoha's lack of male characters make it hard to do, since one of the most interesting - to me - thing about it is the support system.
Basically, if you have 2 characters stand next to each other on the battlefield for a number of time their bond would develop and support each other.