Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[ZeroXSEED]

A mission hardly sanctioned and very risky, it's literally the Orimura go "Fuck this we're saving her". Authorities knew that deploying them is risky, their political value outweigh their battle value after all.

[Tempest35]

'Risky', eh? They'd lose all three Orimura in a raid when only one got captured? So nice to see the world as statistics - damn politicians. I thought that the threat of an Orimura would be enough to cause most governments to at least reconsider their original plans if faced against them.

I can see Chifuyu silently wanting to build a sort of legacy, their name passed down like the Guan Family of Shu for badassery (among other things).

Well, if it's one thing Orimura can generally hate is when politics mix in with their battles. I'd love it if all three of them were pulled 'into the office' so to speak where some bigwigs try to dress them down for their crazy behavior, and then they get a verbal ass-reaming from not Chifuyu, but Ichika and Madoka. Chifuyu just puts the icing on the cake by putting her arm around each of them and just says, "I stand with my family." Heartwarming and Awesome all around - yay~ I mean, what are they going to do - punish them? All Chifuyu has to do is threaten to 'relocate' - XD

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Tempest35

'Risky', eh? They'd lose all three Orimura in a raid when only one got captured? So nice to see the world as statistics - damn politicians. I thought that the threat of an Orimura would be enough to cause most governments to at least reconsider their original plans if faced against them.

Fun fact, until they found Chifuyu and Ichika left by themselves, the government is fifty fifty on doing the raid. They really, really don't want to risk the current status quo.

When they found, Prime Minister figuratively shat brick and as soon as possible send as much support as he could before the rest of cabinet caught in the unrest.

This result in a major battle never seen since WK incident, only involved I.S. in the sky, and ordinary power armor on the ground.

US Armed Force also owed Ichika because he saved Silver Gospel during V6 run, so they send covert Ops to retrieve the Orimuras.

Originally Posted by Tempest35

I can see Chifuyu silently wanting to build a sort of legacy, their name passed down like the Guan Family of Shu for badassery (among other things).

Well, if it's one thing Orimura can generally hate is when politics mix in with their battles. I'd love it if all three of them were pulled 'into the office' so to speak where some bigwigs try to dress them down for their crazy behavior, and then they get a verbal ass-reaming from not Chifuyu, but Ichika and Madoka. Chifuyu just puts the icing on the cake by putting her arm around each of them and just says, "I stand with my family." Heartwarming and Awesome all around - yay~ I mean, what are they going to do - punish them? All Chifuyu has to do is threaten to 'relocate' - XD

Ho-hah

Can I use this scenario? So yeah, by this point, Chifuyu is no longer Jackass we knew and love (although she still act frigid all the time)

[Dark_Meddler]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Sound like typical machine growth though

How fast it develop anyway?

The usual, grows every time the pilot fights and will either become more of a virus/ parasite than anything if the pilot continues using the in an unhealthy mental state

[ZeroXSEED]

What about potential threshold?

[Tempest35]

Sure, go for it. :3 I live to drop plot bunnies

"Orimura-san, control your siblings! They do not know just what we went through to save you all!"

Up until now, Chifuyu stood off to the side, arms folded watching the entire thing like it was nothing. Honestly, I was getting upset that she was doing nothing while Madoka and I tried our best to tell these guys off without partially deploying our IS.

"You know, I have been in this situation before. It was right after I rescued these two with the help of the German government. I remember because after that, my IS was 'revoked' and I couldn't pilot one again under the IS Act since I used it for my own selfish reasons. I had to endure that alone but you know what, I'd gladly go through it again any number of times, no matter what. So, I'll repeat what I said back then to you all now." She walked up behind us put a hand on each of our shoulders. Just what was she doing?

"Ichika, Madoka, forgive your foolish oneesan. I worked so hard to have you two not repeat the same 'mistake' I had made, but I forgot - it was never a mistake to save you guys. IS be damned - you were my family before IS, and you'll be my family after it." She gave us the most gentle and happy smile I have seen on her since I could remember before looking back up at the shocked faces of the Cabinet.

"I stand by my family."

Yay, now to sleep, work tomorrow~ And yeah, I just made up a reason why Chifuyu hasn't been flying around since I imagined that they might have had to 'punish' her in some fashion. Taking away her 'IS license' seemed like such a thing to do but I don't know the canon enough to make that an official thing or not.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

More or less yeah, been on etrian odyssey binge. :|

Spoiler for out of topic:

There is samurai there, but it's kinda just there. the landsneckt is still more reliable despite the ronin's higher dmg output. :/

Spoiler for out of topic:

I traded my old Landsneckt for new one.... He is supposed to be my Secondary Damager but kind of falling short (read about the RuneMaster below to find out why I feel the need to retired him). Trying to level him up to party's level.

Meanwhile, once my Runemaster hit certain level (training her is a serious pain but worth the effort). She basically do most of the killing now.....I think she is the most important member of the party (next to the Landsneckt and Fortress). If she is down, there is absolutely no doubt that everybody will just go down with her.

I think because the rest of the party member has low damage output. I retired my Landsneckt because he is falling short on damage output.

He was supposed to take out the weakened Enemies once the Runemaster goes down but kept failing to do so.

Also the irony: My medic is unreliable when it come to constant healing compared to my dancer but he is kind of my emergency healer (heal only when the party's HP fall below 50%).

My front line people are just meat shield trying to hold on as long as possible without dying themselves.

Front Line consist of that Landsneckt, a very reliable Fortress(until he ran out of sp anyway), A Dancer who is a refresh and front row healing machine (because those monster who inflict status effect is a serious pain to deal with).

Dancer is sometime swap with Nightseeker who turn out to be useless (enemies are immuned to blind) so I don't usually bring him along....

The only good thing about him is his Shadow Cloak and Sand-attack.
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Question: what kind of Relationship do you expect an OC has with the canon cast?

Fellow Students? Teacher? Mentor?

Edit: Reworking on Nemo. I wanted him to be at the lower end of the social ladder.

[ZeroXSEED]

Most of them there is, probably fellow student.

[Eratas123]

Afternoon everyone

[DarkJak2050]

This ought to be an interesting crossover. At first glance to say the least...

Infinite Terminator (The Terminator)

[Eratas123]

Oh dear......

[ZeroXSEED]

*Facepalm*

I don't know, Termies aren't that agile, as durable as they are. Maybe few second longer life than squishy human...

Whatever

[Eratas123]

Who else here has updated their story?

[ZeroXSEED]

Not yet, I think.

[DarkJak2050]

I'm still cleaning up Phase 1 on mine, before I can post the Prologue for Phase 2.

Even though I have 3 chapters of Phase 1 left, they're the longest I've written so far; 10,000+ words.

By the way, you think "Phase" is a good label for an arc? Like how "Act" is used in plays.

[ZeroXSEED]

Yes

Sound like a battle/execution plan or something

[Eratas123]

Making the new chapter for "Dark of Zero". After this I'll be updating my IS fics.

Maybe if I'm bored I''ll make an IKaron draft. Nothing else to do nowadays.

[agetreme]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Who else here has updated their story?

I felt excited about the new IS design but I can't feel the muse for the past three days!

Admittedly, I had a tingling feeling for a stereotypical shoujo story (A girl with five soul-mates or something like that). Feels like typing everything about it out and be done for this week.

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[Tempest35]

...oh dear, that doujin did NOT help me... But I'm going to work so I can't write smut on their computers. However...

:3 *insert scary Tabane look #12*

[ZeroXSEED]

On Sacred Twins

I GIVE UP!

It's not even a quarter of the way through! I can't take it anymore. No more grammatical stuff for me, I'll just...read the overall thing.

Ok, scratch that, I'll skip to chapter 4.

So yeah. You've got a great style, your grammar sucks [but you knew this!], and you need a better plot.

That's it.

I loled so hard I hurt my backside rather than stomach

First review in another forum, in fact.