2008-07-23, 14:25 | Link #2961 | |||||
Adeptus Animus
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I don't believe I'm exagerating when I say that my OC's are among the most popular of the thread. Some characters are even well know outside this thread, with people writing stories about them or loving them without ever having set foot into this thread. Heck, Syn/Vivio is currently the most popular Vivio pairing in the OC thread! The most important thing to remember when writing characters, and more importantly, the stories involving those characters, is that people come to these forums because they love Nanoha. As ironic as it may sound, they like to read about the cast of Nanoha. What this means is that you don't want to write stories about your OC's, you want to write stories about your OC's interacting with the CC's. If you only place OC's in a story then eventually all the names will blur and the characters will become faceless. There is far less interesting to read because there is far less familiarity. If you write stories with the CC's in it, then people will recognise the places and people, they will have something to hold on to when reading your story. Do note that all the well known OC's in this thread have intricate ties to CC's, either profesional, or personal. Quote:
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Your OC's would have been Mary Sues, if not for the background that makes them so intriguing. You give them backgrounds that are deep, mysterious, or simply make you laugh. You try to overpower a character, yet give her a background that supports whatever power comes close to that point. You make a character with a cliche emo background, yet give her all sorts of personality quirks that make her interesting. Mary Sues have backgrounds that are without creativity, have powers without justification. And quite frankly, are usually quite crappy characters. You simply are too creative. To be honest, I still don't see why you are worried about the fact that you couldn't make a Mary Sue. I never made a Mary Sue myself, and I am perfectly happy with writing the way I do, with wild abandon. There are times when great deals of backgrounds for a character just come to me, like how my recent conversations with Jimmy_C sparked all sorts of different scenarios for my AMG OC to work with, or hom my mind is swirling with new ideas for my Negima OC. Writing with wild abandon doesn't mean you need to be able to create Mary Sues. Mary Sues have nothing to do with the abillity to write with Wild Abandon. Last edited by Keroko; 2008-07-24 at 05:49. |
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2008-07-23, 19:02 | Link #2962 |
He Who Smites Shippers
Join Date: Mar 2008
Age: 36
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@Dk: What Kero said.
Now I may make Mary Sues without intending to every now and then but if I set out to actually try to make a sue, he/she'd probably come out looking more like a parody than anything else. Characters are kinda funny like that; for me at least, they never come out quite how I'd originally intended them to be, mainly because I keep switching ideas in the middle of the design. Just recently I switched Alex's character design from Gilgamesh over to a recolored Riku from Kingdom Hearts, then switched again to Mao from Disgaea 3 because Riku's bishonen appearance was rather at odds with Alex's simple-minded-thrill-seeker-blood-knight personality.
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2008-07-23, 19:28 | Link #2963 | |
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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KURAE!!! *bashes Eva with the [Murderizer's Murderizer of Relentless Murderizing]*
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2008-07-23, 21:15 | Link #2964 |
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Speaking of KHRACK... Mobile Fighter Lyrical Vivio
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Well, is this KHRACK WORTHY? dkellis, its funny. I mean, your character is the anti-sue that the children's shows like to promote. With abilities that are hacks, but WORK. Sort of like the good guys on TV shows. Sure they have hacks, but they work, without the audience going "HAX!". That is the key to writing fun and entertaining fiction. |
2008-07-23, 21:16 | Link #2965 |
Black Dragon
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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Well, not posting here for a while XP
Now, the thing ahead is my Biorenders Project XD I will prtesent my OC in Renders showing the main info of them, I'll be glad if ghagskull could link the post ahead to page 1 I'll keep posting my OCs as usual and linking them to the post ahead
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2008-07-23, 21:51 | Link #2966 | |||||||
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Sky of stone, floor of flame.
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From what I've gathered, this was basically an attempt to create a generic? Can't say I think so. I find Lumina an entertainingly creative creation, and not at all overpowered. *raises hand* BTW Kha, I hit 70 tonight. You've got some catching up to do! Quote:
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I have no idea why anyone would want to "get yelled at," but I for one prefer to stay off the firing line... Then again, I'm not exactly on the radar myself. *shrug* You, assuming you're not lying just to get a rise, are one lucky, bloody, son-of-a- *struggles to find an appropriate word, and settles for blowing something up* Quote:
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I'm gonna be honest with you. Why do you want to make a Sue? Is there some reason you feel the need to be able to make a generic? Moreover, why is that inability a bad thing? We're out to create things with flair and originality. From my point of view, intending to make something generic and happening to make something original is not a curse but a blessing. I also think you're looking at this from the wrong angle: How are writing spontaneously and thinking "with wild abandon" mutually exclusive? Determining whether a character is a Sue is subjective anyway. One person's Sue can be another's new wave. If you really tried, I imagine you could make something as utterly contrived as most of the garbage out there, but why do that when you can make originality on a whim? Just my two cents, take it as you will. *tosses two pennies at dkellis*
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2008-07-23, 22:13 | Link #2967 | ||||
Love Hina?
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Kangaroos live in my backyard =P
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2008-07-24, 01:18 | Link #2968 |
~ I Do ~
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Just to add on, I did learn that Sues are also have a lot of "been there, done that" and its not of the cliche kind, but the overpowered cliche kind.
Case study: putting Batman, Ironman, Centurions, Swat Kats, Variable Fighters, Paladins and Gundam into one package, then have an author with lesser literary skill and little originality who is rushing for time at the helm. Said author also lacks a sense of humor and finesse in language, but has instead a flair for the ludicrous. Never mind said Sue's power levels were matched to the Aces, and would've resulted in a long dragged-out fight. Never mind the versatility was this Sue's way of being unique in the face of the short-lists that everyone else has. Verdict passed was Incorrigible Sue created by a William Hung, sentenced to life of purgation in holy fire, or at least lampooned in every scenario possible at every possible chance given by the thread. Without considering that the Sue was just a reflection of the other Sues called Aces. Sues reflect an inability in the author, and those around the thread, not a flaw in the character. So if you are able, you yourself wouldn't be able to stand having created an atrocity and would've made the necessary changes to avoid so, there in by cushioning the impact. Also, changing standards also hamper the evaluation. Take Incorrigible Sue again. This character was born during the Wild West, and rose to notoriety, but due to the setting, this villainous creation of abominable gaiety was just as popular as the honest sheriff or the fair maiden in the New World town being terrorized. Then out of the horizons roars Master Chief along with a brevity of tanks, astride the three big guns of Sense, Sneer and Spam, running over everything in sight. The residents of the New World town welcomed the new colonists, but with the insipious nature of the invasion, the other White Devil demolished the town and replaced with a squeaky clean metropolitan, and the villain was boned the hardest. Notice that the word Sue only appeared physically recently. Edit: Geh turned into a rant. You could say the wake up call was much needed, but meh. See why the rush? Not to mention I'm racing with a guild officer to 70 in the Shock Troops.
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2008-07-24, 03:43 | Link #2969 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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He kinda answered in his rant. From what I could gather, he was sort of having the impression that his characters are not being noticed unless 1. They are so overpowered that it is obscene; being a supernova whereas Hayate could be at most The Sun, 2. Related to everyone and having done everything in canon with little to no justification.
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2008-07-24, 05:53 | Link #2970 |
~ I Do ~
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"Trace, on." Kha intoned, mana tearing through his arm and ripping clear the circuits within. They glowed through the etches on his flesh, all the way to his outstretched finger, where a swirling ball of condensed air jostled and spired.
"Flower of Wind ~Weapon Stripping~" ... ... ... NO O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies from Khrack Attack*
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2008-07-24, 06:16 | Link #2972 |
~ I Do ~
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IN THE TOTALLY WRONG SENSE!!!!!
...wait. I had this attack a while ago didn't I? Earlier chapter, previous thread maybe...? But I don't recall... Now why is there this sense of de javu...? "Wang Liu Meng": ... Oh and yes, I finally learned the power of Yue. No wonder she gained quite a fan-club while I was in the force (and cut off from scanlated manga. <_<) Amongst other news, I've settled for totems as Kouya's Artificer Weapon (). Works well in representing the 5 elements, and because he can wear them as armor, they also have functions in worgen form. But most use would come in humanoid form, most notably stacking the 5 totem segments together to form a long hollow tube that works like a magical bazooka. I'm a genius!
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2008-07-24, 07:16 | Link #2973 | |
Love Hina?
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Earth, Fire Wind Water and Heart? By your powers combine, I am CAPTAIN PLANET! |
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2008-07-24, 07:27 | Link #2974 | |
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But you made me realize that the first 4 are essentially the WoW elements, and you can tell by now Kouya's a Shaman... That leaves the explanation for Heart... *imagines Kamo telling Kouya off about not using his 5th element, which leads to some perverted conversation about Keroko* Khrack senses tingling. You'll pay for this, Captain Planet. <_<
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2008-07-24, 07:57 | Link #2975 | |
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物語は、もう、おしまい……?
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: In the Horizon
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And given Kouya's bestial connections (unless I got stuff mixed up again ), this should work well for him (and you ).
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2008-07-24, 10:20 | Link #2979 | |
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After digging WoWwiki, I found this 5th Element: "The Spirit of the Wilds The Spirit of the Wilds is most nebulous and complex of the spirits of the wilds. In fact, no one is entirely certain of what the Wilds represent. It seems to embody the living souls of all living things, from the most humanoids, to animals to plants and even stones. The Wilds is by far the best friend and greatest enemy of the shaman; the Wilds can heal broken bodies and even restore beings to life... but only if it suits the balance. It is the Wilds that can make the shaman think he is a god - and show him that he's still mortal." See what I highlighted. Now link that to the embodiment of the living souls of pretty much everything. What is the seat of the soul? The Heart. And what else apart from time can heal all wounds? Love. With this brainwave, I might be twisting the concept to my means (), but it sure smells like a "power-up" twist for Kouya, something along the lines of: "Any accomplished shaman could call on the spirits of Earth, Fire, Wind and Water; but master the 5th element, and you will become a master in your own right." And he then discovers what it means, and what it entails to command this power to the fullest. Sure gives me a lot of room for the "Ai no Chikara" symbolism that I'm so fond of as an author. Once again, thanks for this brilliant heads-ups! I got quite a few ideas out of this, and while I'll retain the mention of the 5 elemental spirits as they are, I'm also going to take a combination as a basis for the Negiha 5th element. After all, "Every world has its own elements, its own powers to call upon." Even more so, with the twisted world of Negiha. What do you all think?
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2008-07-24, 10:51 | Link #2980 |
物語は、もう、おしまい……?
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I'm working on a shamanic/elementalist system myself, so a suggestion I would make, or rather echo from Drek'thar's teachings to Thrall, is that the shaman does not "master" the elements as how one would master a beast (which they are far from being). Rather he honors them and proves his worthiness for their assistance. For another Warcraft example, Thrall's initiation into the shaman's path was a humbling experience; instead of feeling puffed up by the powers which he was allowed to call on, he found himself humbled by their presences.
Also, you might like to take into consideration that the forces of Nature might not necessarily share human morals and sentiments. The Spirits may sympathise with the shaman's lost of a loved one, but do not expect them to break or bend the rules just because he begs them to do so. Even G-D's miracles work under the laws of physics. My 2 cents =3
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