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[SmokinFerret88]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Accept responsibility!

You know, with that avatar, that seems like the first thing he would say after the hair-flip bit. XD

[demino_hellsin]

...Kamiijou seems to be popular with "younger" girls right? As imossible as it may seem. Kinda imagine a scenario where Touma's getting crowded by these younger girls. Mugino gets slightly jealous and irritated that Touma is likely a lolicon. The rest of ITEM sees it as a chance to make fun of Mugino and she's goaded into wearing clothes styled for those far younger than her...

Possibilities:
Pink and white gothloli dress.

Sleeveless sundress with ribbon sash and matching ribboned hat.

Twintails and denim overalls?

Urgh... Yeah... Brain is confused.

[TkMacintosh]

...Or if you really wanna test the limits....Japanese Kindergarten outfit.

...What the HELL did I just put down and WHY did I just say that?

........I need to go wash that out of my head.

[rubix22]

Being a worker at a daycare center where characters are held after a failed(successful?) de-aging experiment. Komoe is finally an adult.

[demino_hellsin]

oddly enough, I think Mugino in Birdway's dress would work except for the huge difference in bo-

*dies a horrible horrible death*

[SmokinFerret88]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

...Kamiijou seems to be popular with "younger" girls right? As imossible as it may seem. Kinda imagine a scenario where Touma's getting crowded by these younger girls. Mugino gets slightly jealous and irritated that Touma is likely a lolicon. The rest of ITEM sees it as a chance to make fun of Mugino and she's goaded into wearing clothes styled for those far younger than her...

Possibilities:
Pink and white gothloli dress.

Sleeveless sundress with ribbon sash and matching ribboned hat.

Twintails and denim overalls?

Urgh... Yeah... Brain is confused.

Okay, this is the next of project snippet; so I'll go ahead and hop on this now.

Originally Posted by TkMacintosh

...Or if you really wanna test the limits....Japanese Kindergarten outfit.

...What the HELL did I just put down and WHY did I just say that?

........I need to go wash that out of my head.

......
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....
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Yeah, um....yeah....no.

Here's some bleach, it should help you in washing that out of your head.

[allfictions]

In Memoriam chapter 15 is up https://m.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/15/

[Loremaster]

Chapter 5 for the Certain hidden Level five rewrite is also done.
https://m.fanfiction.net/s/9986081/5/

[MrTerrorist]

Originally Posted by allfictions

In Memoriam chapter 15 is up https://m.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/15/

Thanks.

Spoiler for ch15:

My God. This fanfic more darker than canon since Kiyama's kids died!
I wonder how the author is going to include Erii Haruue and Therestina since what linked both of them was the Kiyama's kids?

[Shockz]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Thanks.

Spoiler for ch15:

My God. This fanfic more darker than canon since Kiyama's kids died!
I wonder how the author is going to include Erii Haruue and Therestina since what linked both of them was the Kiyama's kids?

Spoiler:

Erii was rewritten as one of the kids in Kiyama's class. She's in the list of names, and appeared, albeit briefly, in that last chapter. Therestina is...unlikely to appear at all according to my current plans, and certainly not in the same role she took in canon.

[demino_hellsin]

Spoiler for just my insanity:

Sunlight lit the abandoned parking building in dimlight. The rays filtered through floating dust and particulates frokm the scattered construction materials left after discontinuation of the structure's completion. Footsteps echoed out with each passing second, a pace that was slow and haunting in its pace. Steps that were taken with deliberate intention of letting one's presence be known. These were the steps of a confident hunter.

"Oh my. I didn't think you'd come."

"I couldn't exactly say no after the lovely invitation."

"You mean these?"

White tendrils exposed themselves to what little light was available. Entwined within them were a pair of severed arms and a right leg cut from the knee.

"Yeah.", came the bored drawl from the hunter. "but I remember it being a bit rounder.". He threw something towards the one who invited him. It bounced off the black asphalt, rolling as it lost the kinetic force keeping it in motion. The object presented itself as an eyeball while it stared at its sender.

"Ah, yes. How could I forget. Silly me."

Another pale tendril snaked its way from the shadows. It enveloped the eyeball and lifted it up in scrutiny.

"Such a lovely tint to it. Don't you think number 1?"

"Cut the crap trash.", spat academy city's number 1 esper. White hair and scrawny build, the telltale black and white shirt that only he seemed to wear. The one feared as the invincible accelerator.

An amused hum sounded from the shadows, "Why are you so agitated? Could it be you care about these two?".

"AAAAGGGGHHH!!!!!"

"NNNGGGGGAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!"

Two voices screamed from the darkness. Accelerator could make out two shapes. One of a short haired brunette girl of 12 in a woollen dress, the other was of the same age with long raven hair in a straight hime cut in a punk tank top and leather pants. But something was very wrong with these two. Blood was slattered about them, on the walls and on the ground. The girl in a blood-stained woollen dress was missing her right arm and right eye. The hime cut punk girl was missing both arms and a hole in her flank large enough to fit a pingpong ball, the edges of red encroaching on porcelain skin. Fatal wounds to be sure, but they were alive and well. Each opening that would have bled them to death was covered by a white tendril. Inexplicably, like living things, these unearthly tendrils pulsed with a heartbeat.

Accelerator spared them a glance, then scoffed. "Who the hell are they that I should care?"

"Hmm... I was sure you would feel at least some attatchment to those who share your powers."

"Pffft! Kukuku...kahahahaha!-hahahaha! What the hell are talking about you little shit? Share powers? Are you sure you know what you're talking about dumbass?"

...

Pale eyes stared at the cackling albino. "The Dark May Project."

Those words cut through the obscene laughter, silencing it immediately.

"The Dark May Project is a large scale experiment to recreate your Vector Control abilities. This is done by integrating your personal reality into theirs. Modifying their thought patterns into yours. Am I not wrong? In a way, you are responsible for them because you granted their abilities. Isn't it natural that you would feel some attatchment to them?"

A few moments of silence passed. Save for the labored breathing of the girls struggling to survive, no sound was made. Then Accelerator sighed, "You really are a dumbass aren't you? If you want to play the villain then do it right. Responsibility has nothing to do with it. If you want to kill them then do it. I don't care if they live or die. Hell when I came, I assumed they were dead.".

"Then you came to avenge them?"

"Wrong again dumbass. Let me teach you something. A grade A villain knows exactly how his victim ticks, and you clearly get an F for that. For the answer key, I repeat: I don't give a damn.", Academy City's strongest esper stepped forward. "Responsibility because I gave them my power? You have it the other way around, they should feel responsible because they have fragments of my power. Even if it's fake, the power of the Accelerator is absolute. I honestly have to thank you. If you had killed them, then I wouldn't be able to kill them myself for shaming my name."

"Then maybe I should correct that?"

The pulsing tendrils began to bulge and vein out. Both girls that lay on the ground snapped awake screaming. Their wails not nearly as haunting as the blood beginning to ooze between the cracks of their wounds and the tendrils.

"You have my thanks number 1. If it weren't for you, I would have never mastered my dark matter to this level. At least that much I'm willing to say."

"Tch.", the powerful albino tipped his head arrogantly at this paltry show of force. "Leaving out the part where I tore you limb from limb? How so very like you trash."

"it is as you say.", the speaker stepped into the dim sunlight. "You did tear me limb from limb. I cannot deny that either.".

The figure in the shadows became visible. His face finely formed. One could even say it was of a handsome young man. And perhaps once upon a time they would not be wrong. His hair was long, reaching just above his shoulder blades but fanned out in an ordered chaos of feathery spikes. His build was slight, only a little broader than that of the number one esper of academy city. But in the city of espers, physical strength meant nothing. What mattered was power. And this being's power was called Dark Matter. This person who had invited the number one esper was Kakine Teitoku, rated the number 2 level 5 of Academy City.

But despite the telling features, Accelerator had to raise a brow at the teen opposite himself. "The hell's wrong with your face?"

A valid question. As right now, the number 2 esper in academy city's face looked like it was split in two and then stitched back together. But if one looked closer, it was not only two pieces nor was it only his face. If one observed him properly, the boy looked like a patchwork quilt. Some of him had patches of healthy fair skin, others were a stark white. These white parts did not cover only skin but also his insides if pale insides of his mouth was any indication. The upper fraction of the head sparing only the right cheek and jaw, the dominant region of his right pectorals and lung, the left leg and connecting joint to the pelvis. All these were white.

Kakine snapped his eyes into a glare. "You said it yourself. You tore me limb from limb. And for a genius you don't even wonder how I could survive"

"It doesn't matter if you survived or came back from the dead.", Accelerator bent his neck in a sickening satisfying crack. "I'll just keep killing you till you're dead.", he said with a mad grin.

The glare had changed to a confident smirk. Dark Matter tilted his head back in challenge, "You have no idea what you're dealing with."

"Neither do you desite how many times I remind you."

A sickening crack and a splorch of crushed guts, the punk girl known as Umidori Kuroyoru screamed in utter agony as Kakine smiled darkly. "Well there goes her uterus."

Accelerator's eyes narrowed, "What?"

Kakine spared him a glance. "Her reproductive system. I just destroyed it. Though I doubt she'll ever get to use it."

Red eyes watched the screaming girl who was now practically foaming at the mouth as spittle and blood poured out with sick juices from her stomach. Such was the pain this 12 year old was going through. But other than the tendrils attached to the girl's wounds, none else made contact with her much less attack inside.

...

"So that's it? That's your little trick?"

The Dark Matter user's grin widened, "Praytell what trick is that?"

"Some evolution. You can use your dark matter as bio-organic mass now to supplement lost limbs and organs. That's the reason you're still alive, that's the same reason you can keep those two rejects there alive for so long or hurt them from the insides."

Clap clap clap

"Bravo. You figured it out. Only, there's one small thing I'd like to correct.", Kakine flicked his fingers. The odd stark white digits extending from his hand flinging a similarly pale mass.

These masses fell on the ground in flecks. They remained still for a few moments before beginning to shake. They grew in volume at an exponential rate. Their white uickly overruning the black asphalt before the masses reached upwards to form something. Six masses had formed, and six visages stood. Each one looking exactly like Kakine Teitoku, only pure white.

"Clones?", Accelerator grunted in disappointment. "If that's all you've got then this'll be over before-"

CRACK!

Accelerator jumped back to a knee. A white fist forcing a crater into the location he had just been occupying. His own pale hand clawing at the asphalt to blast shrapnel at the offender. But his AIM field flickered. Unidentifiable masses approaching at inhuman speeds. Accelerator pushed down with his legs, exploding upwards. His hand met the cieling in less than a second and his ascdent stopped as the force was willed to crumble the concrete above within a set radius around him. Something broke through his personal perimeter and Accelerator found himself face to face with an ivory colored Kakine.

BANG!

Accelerator slammed against the pavement hard. The number one recovered too slow as two more Kakines came in a simultaneous strike to decapitate him with a kick and disembowel him with a fist made of spikes.

"Tch."

He tapped the floor again, redirecting the force once more to rush up as shrapnel in specific locations. Both attackers were repulsed as they had been effectively ripped to shreds by the jet black mixture of rock and tar.

"Not bad.", Kakine watched from the sidelines. His six dopplegangers crowded around him. Each one disfigured one way or another, wether it was from having rocks fallen on them, or shot into them at speeds of an assault rifle's bullet.

Academy City's number one esper observed them. Slowly, he stood up, eyes guarded, looking for any signs of attack from the Kakines. "So they're not clones.".

The master of Dark Matter chuckled arrogantly, "They never were. They're me. As I am them. Spare bodies you might say. I control them as if they were my hands or my feet."

"But that's not how the human anatomy works. The brain only has enough faculties to control one body. Managing so many at once is-"

"Who said I was limited by the human anatomy?", the number 2 paused to let that sink in. "My Dark Matter has the ability to supplement lost limbs and organs. It can even recreate the human body perfectly."

One white Kakine stepped forward as another Kakine produced a sword of dark matter. The second Kakine cut the first Kakine right across the chest. The sound of steel cutting bone was heard as the wound was spread open by the wounded body itself. It exposed its insides, lungs, heart, stomach, major arteries. All of them beating as a system.

The semi-organic Kakine spoke, "Inside myself, I don't possess only one brain. I possess three.".

If he was intimidated, Accelerator didn't show it.

"Those three brains allow me enough calculating ability to control these six other bodies. And within them are a single brain with enough calculating power to do this.". He snapped his fingers. And with a slurp and pop, the Kakine which had been cut open regained its original form. "So you see, as long as I have dark matter I can regenerate infinitely. In fact, so long as dark matter exists, I cannot be destroyed. One could go so far as to say dark matter is Kakine Teitoku's existence."

"It seems you're a bit hard at hearing. I told you already. It doesn't matter if you regenerate, ressurect or whatever. I'll kill you till you stay dead.".

SPLURT!

"Guh gukha."

"Well I suggest you hurry. It seems I've found miss Kinuhata's spleen."

SPLAT!

"AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!"

The brunette screamed. She screamed in agony, in pain. She screamed at the blunt yet burning sensation emanating from her back.

"Hmm... It seems I was mistaken. It was her kidney I got. She can manage with one don't you think?"

"You can crush her heart for all I care.".

This time, it was Accelerator that took the charge. His intent clear. He would silence that insolent second-rate. He would rip Kakine limb from limb again and cell from cell if need be.

Ting!

The clear sound of a bell. Resounded within the parking sstructure. And with a bang, a torrent of emerald light tore clean through the wall to Accelerator's right. It engulfed him from Kakine's sight and lit up the area bright as day. The light continued to pour for a few seconds before it stopped in a grandiose explosion.

"What"s this? A little get together and I wasn't even invited?", a young woman's voice spoke. "I'm quite hurt about that.".

Hair the color of red tea and a simple yellow dress were her most striking features the brown jacket over her shoulders only served to give her an odd aura of toughness. On her full lips was a thin smile, one she only reserved for times when death would be on her hands. She stepped through the entrance made by the light which was big enough to accomodate 3 trailer trucks, let alone a young woman.

"What are you doing here Meltdowner?", Kakine Teitoku asked the number 4 level 5 of Academy City esper.

"Well. I heard that you were holding a little soiree here. I decided to crash the party. By the by? I'll be taking my subordinate over there with me when I decide to leave."

A ghostly smile formed on Kakine's face as well. "I do believe it's the host who can say when the party is over."

"It won't make much of a difference when he's dead.", Mugino Shizuri smiled sweetly. She held up her right hand, the long sleeve around her right arm ripped apart as the limb began to shift and fold. The insides of the flesh colored apendage exposing steel and wiring of a highly advanced prosthesis. It continued to shift and fold until it was only a few inches in length from her shoulder. Where her arm should've been, an arm made purely of emerald light extended into terrifying claws that looked like they could rip one's face off if they didn't disintegrate matter on contact. The color of her right eye faded aaway, iris, sclera and all. Instead it began to glow a pale green befitting that of a machine.

"That arm and that eye... So the stories were true. You did lose to some no name level 0s."

Mugino closed her eyes. "Yes, I did. But don't worry. I properly killed all of them. I was even kind enough to grant one of their wishes to not die like trash. I made sure not to leave even ashes, let alone bodies to be dumped into an incinerator.". A sickeningly serene smile reached all the way to her eyes.

"You seem calm."

"Rage only gives way to an uncontrollable power. Just like you, I learn from my losses. By staying calm, I can optimize the output of my Meltdowner and give it a stable form like so."

Mugino pointed a lone claw of energy at the half-human boy and fired a large blast of emerald light easily 3 or 4 feet in diameter.

"I do not lose to anyone.", Kakine muttered with narrowed eyes. "I am merely set back."

The beam slammed into the number 2. Amazingly, Meltdowner's beam did not run him through. Instead, the beam could not advance past him. It was being blocked, something unheard of.

Mugino paused her warning shot and stared at the amorphous mass of white before her. "Looks like those pissants in the lab coats were wrong. Something can block my Meltdowner after all."

"Nothing is unblockable Meltdowner. Given a thick enough barrier, anything can be stopped. Even your electron beam cannon."

"What was that? 10 or 20 kilometers?"

"2000.", Kakine muttered with a grimface.

"Making enough dark matter to expand into that kind of volume. You really are something number 2. Too bad you lack the offense."

"Naive."

The mass of dark matter before Kakine shot forward. Molding itself into a lance mid-air, its intent was clear.

"Try harder.", Mugino drawled, non-chalant as her energy arm shot up to catch the offending appendage. "I'm part machine so some of my reflexes are a bit more... Instantaneous.", the girl with the prothesis grinned.

Kakine grunted and the lance grew roots from its shaft. All of them formed into smaller lances in an attempt to turn Mugino into a pretty pin cushion.

Emerald light shot up from all around Mugino. Each one was a pinpoint blast meant to destroy the individual lances. The two powers met and Kakine snapped his fingers, signaling his dark matter lances to explode into unstable matter.

The master of dark matter watched the smoke clear away from his opponent. He was not surprised to see a sphere of green enveloping the place where the young woman had been standing. It cleared away with a shimmer to reveal the girl barely worse for wear.

"Your shield can repel matter. But I highly doubted it could repel force."

"Don't mind it.", Meltdowner flicked errand strands of hair away from her face. "I need at least some form of handicap to make things interesting."

"Why yo-!?"

Kakine turned his attention from the young woman to the two girls he had been torturing. Only they were no longer in pain, nor were they attatched to his dark matter. Instead, Academy City's number one esper was kneeling in front of them. He huddled the two together and had his hands on each one's forehead.

"Purge confirmed. All dark matter destroyed.", Accelerator muttered before standing upright. He sent the two other level 5s a glare, particularly to one Meltdowner. "If you wanted to save the brats, you could've just aimed for that piece of shit from the start, Robo-bitch."

"Is that any way to talk to the person that made you a hero?"

"Made me a hero? Don't bullshit yourself. All you did was give me an errand."

"One that you embraced oh so willingly."

"I should've just killed you."

"I would have just countered the same way if you reflected my beam back at me."

"Rrgh! Silence! What is this!? The two of you are in alliance?"

"HAAAHHH??"

Two level 5s echoed from either side of the number 2.

"You gotta have something wrong in that fucked up brain of yours to assume such a thing.", Accelerator pointed at his head with his hand mimicking a gun.

"I didn't have much of a choice. If I wanted to save Saiai, I needed someone who could cleanse her of your dark matter.", Mugino scoffed.

"But that coordination couldn't have been possible without some sort of communication. Neither of you spoke, nor was there any form of transmission. How?"

"Idiot. We were talking right in front of you."

"What?", Kakine glared at the Meltdowner.

"It was a trick second-rate. One that's a lot more entertaining than the one you have. Remember that electrons have two spins. Positive and negative. When Number 4 over there shot me with her meltdowner, she made sure particle electrons were still existing inside. They spun both positively and negatively. From my AIM I can detect these spins. By alternating between positive and negative, she was able to mimic one of the oldest means of long distance communication."

...

"Don't tell me... Morse Code."

"Bingo.", Accelerator rushed forward with a kick to the ground. His signature cackles following him as he thirsted for blood.

"Guh!", Kakine stepped back, dodging the wild swing of Academy City's strongest. Seeing the albino off balance, he charged in with a counterattack of a dark matter lance made with material properties Accelerator's AIM had yet to identify.

"Too bad number 1. But this is where our contract ends."

Green light swallowed the top two espers before dark matter met flesh. Kakine Teitoku jumped away from the stream with a corroded shield moments before the light exploded.

Kakine landed on a knee and surveyed the damage which had been wrought. To one side was Meltdowner, her energy hand outstretched from firing that large scale beam. And his direct adversary had yet to emerge from the dust, no matter how clear it was to him that the albino could easily survive such a juvenile attack.

"Kukukuku! You've really done it now! What the hell is with that half-assed defense!? Shooting your beams at the beams being deflected back. What the hell!? Kakakakaka!"

Mugino Shizuri pulled back her energy arm and sighed, "I'm still alive aren't I?"

A strong wind howled within the ruined building. It whipped up dust and debris, disheveling the hair of the number 2 and 4. It was a wild and ferocious gust.

"Let's fix that!", declared the Accelerator as the dust obscuring him from view dispersed explosively. Moments after which the dust was sucked back in to the albino's back, forming two long strands which resembled wings. "Kekekeke! This is getting interesting. Let's properly start round 2!"

-----

Shokuhou Misaki opened her eyes. The 5th level 5, Mental Out also known as the-

"Queen.", a girl spoke before the blonde girl with starlit irises.

"I have located the other level 5s.", Shokuhou stood from the cushioned seat that acted as her throne.

"Shall we send one of your proxies?"

"No. There is no need to waste resources. You may as well drop a sugarcube in the ocean in the effort of sweetening it. Sending a level 4 into that world of monsters is no less than a meaningless suicide."

"Then what shall we do?"

...

"Send scouts. Make sure they do not get caught in the battle. They will act as my eyes and my ears. Level 4s are strong, but to a level 5, the world and its inhabitants may well be toy blocks to be toppled over."

"I understand."

The girl turned on her heel and left through the shadows of the dark room.

Misaki sighed, her face one of weariness. One face she covered with strength before her subordinates and cheer for everyone else. She stepped down from her throne, walking along the aisle before her. The facility's automated motion detector system signaling lights to activate as she passed them with each step. The lamps on either side, as she continued her steps, glowed hypnotically. She reached the center of the hall which was a much larger tube which lit up as well. Mental Out smiled sadly as her gloved hands traced the engraved identification plate at the machine base of the tube.

"Dolly", she read wistfully.

Inside the tube was a young girl. Only 12 years old with short brown hair. Her body carved with scars from numerous experiments and life-saving operations. This was Dolly, the first human clone/designer baby. Misaki's first friend within this cloning facility.

"Don't worry, I'll find a way to heal you soon. Until then, you don't need to worry about a thing.", Misaki spoke to her comatose friend, floating inside the cloning vat.

Immediately, the lights of the whole room lit up. It exposed the insides of the tubes, each one holding a massive brain. Those tubes were labelled "Exterior" followed by numbers indicating the day these cloned brains were cultured from their source cells.

Misaki returned to her throne. Her fatigue was not only emotional, it was well and truly physical. Exterior was a bettery of cloned brains, "her" brains, which she used to augment her already powerful telepathic abilities. With this augmented power, it was easy for her to throw a mind scan on a world wide-scale without the assistance of her remote. The limitations to that however was she only knew their position. Without actually delving into their mind, she could not tell what they doing nor would she have any idea of the situation her target was in. As troublsome as it is, those three level 5s she had been spying on were ones she could not read due to the nature of their powers. She needed to send in people who she could control.

Beep beep

Misaki looked down to her celphone. It was a text from one of her clique. It seemed the scout had arrived on location. She flipped the phone shut and took one last look at Dolly.

"Aleister Crowley.", the name of Academy City's chief superintendent. The man who supposedly built Academy City from the ground up with access to all the accumulated knowledge known to man at his fingertips. "If I can surpass the 4 above me. Surely, that great man will grant me an audience."

Misaki would be able to find a cure for Dolly. It was at best, a foolhardy attemtp at saving a clone who had a limited lifespan from the start. But they were friends.

With that resolve in her heart, Misaki once more activated exterior.

I think I went too far somewhere...

Ugh... My muse went away half-way through writing. My life sux!!!!

[SmokinFerret88]

Deminio, I don't think you went too far anywhere...really, I don't.

That was a delectible read; so don't beat yourself up about it. Fact, sometimes you gotta go out of your comfort zone to make something worthwhile. And I've gotta say, as the certified Mugino expert here, you did well with her here. Great job, and keep up the good work man!

Now that I've made that comment, here's something I have for Jacob Prier and Threefold Truth.

Spoiler for Threefold Truth:

Threefold Truth (三谛Sandai) – Modeled after the Tendai School of Buddhist teachings, in which monks use the philosophy for the sake of meditation in order to achieve enlightenment. While the normal principle is still used for such purpose, Threefold Truth is actually a spell used for healing and cleansing the body of any and all harmful magic effects that continue to ravage the body. The Idol Theory behind this spell is based on the belief that all things are void, all things are temporary, and all things in a middle state between the two. By process of elimination, the caster can identify the temporary portion (i.e. the ailments or injuries a person sustained) and effectively ‘void’ it and thus cure or heal the person in question.

This process can be draining on the caster(s) mana and time consuming depending on the severity of the injury as it also takes a bit of preparation to set up the ritual necessary to perform it. Nevertheless, the results are substantial even by most standards; making Buddhist monks some of the best magic healers in the magic-side. Jacob Prier, who works on behalf of these monks, undoubtedly knows this spell himself and can even perform it on himself.

It's not the original concept I had, but I actually gave it something that is nonetheless interesting. There's actually a reason for him to have this spell on his person, one that you'll see once I get around to what I plan to do with him.

If you look closely...you can see how this spell can be altered for a different purpose. It's pretty obvious, so you don't need to look very hard honestly.

[demino_hellsin]

I've had to tone down Kuroyoru and Saiai's torture by a lot.

Thank God I kept out gory details.

Mugino felt kind of off to me. I reasoned that in this universe, she's learned to calm down instead of just flying off the handle. She's not any nicer like in later parts of the LN but she can control her impulses for violence now, especially after killing Shiage.

Kakine is basically NT Kakine while Accelerator gets the best of both worlds by having his pre-LO brain and awakened wings at once.

Misaki gets multile exteriors lined up to act as her own ersonal Cerebro.

As for Jacob Prier... Sounds like a slow acting Imagine Breaker with a wider application though I can't tell if it's battleworthy.

[omega253]

So, I just got an idea from something off what Kenju said in the NT9 thread.

Spoiler for Idea put into spoiler tag because it has slight references to NT9:

After all of Gremlin stuff is over, Othinus lives with Touma because she is weakened and people want the Imagine Breaker near her in case she tries something. She remembers what he said about all that RPG stuff he was shooting off in their fight and asks him about.

In response, Kamijou gets an idea. An evil, evil idea.

A while back, he'd bought a game that reminded him of his dying over and over again in the fight against Othinus. He decides to explain RPG's by having her play that game.

The game in question? Dark Souls.

Basically, Othinus (who is completely clueless about video games) is about to play something that has made many players throw down their controllers in frustration, despite their expertise.

And Kamijou is instructing her with a slight amount of sadistic glee at seeing the Magic God fail at something as mundane as a video game.

[Traitless]

What if...
The Kamijou "bloodline" you could say, had a specialty.
That was, specialize in Punching/Fists, and for some reason that I do not have time to explain, Projectile-Launcher-type weapons, eg. Bow, RPG(Too deadly xD), guns, etc. The Imagine breaker in this fanfic world is given a power up, that is to be able to materialize objects. The object will be near-invisible, just so that the person could see a rough outline of what it is. But the user has to have enough knowledge in the object he/she is trying to make. So say Touma is trying to make a bow and arrow. He will have roughly know the weight and feel to it, and the materials needed for it.

There is also a limit to how much he materialize, which is 4 to 5 objects. I don't really know , too little and it sounds a little UP in 'my' world. Too much and its very, very OP.
Imagine Touma in a near-invisible mecha suit with Rocket Pods attached to his shoulders, a jet pack, and fists that have barrels on the knuckes that can shoot out bullets as fast as a heavy machine gun. Waaaaay too OP.

Anyways, the near-invisible projectile that comes out, though, is counted as part of the world and is 'natural'. Don't know how to say that in a way but whatever. The negating effect is still there as the projectile is coated with IB, but with reduced negating speeds, just to balance its power.

The projectile itself is hard to explain in both scientific and magic terms. Even Touma himself does not understand the logic behind it. But what is known is that when it hits a person or animal, the projectile has instructions that are sent to the nerves/mana of that particular person.

Example: A bullet that Touma shot out hits an esper's leg. As the bullet passes through the leg, it makes no marks, bulletholes, hell rip in the the clothing even, and contacts the nerve. The nerve, fooled that it was cut off, shuts down, thus cutting off connection with the others attached. The cells and muscles are also fooled in the process, tightening up and freezing in place, fearing that they might leak out the body. The nerve sends a message to the brain that the leg was shot, sending signals across that particular body. Which in turn is actually pain, causing.. Well, you know, pain.

Lots of shots = Too much pain = Unconciousness, though not always if that person has unusually high pain tolerance

If you're thinking, "What if it was a shot to the heart/brain?". If shot to the brain, it is instant unconciousness, unless you're Accelerator Shot through the heart, well, all I can say is that you'll be alive for a few seconds, but the result will still be the same. Unconciousness.

Can it kill? When hit in certain parts, probably. Haven't thought about it because of EXAMS :|

That's pretty much all of my idea, and I have been working on a pilot chapter for awhile, showcasing this exact ability, but I haven't touched it this weekend because of damn exams. >
Haven't thought about it in a while too because you know, EXAMS >
Anyways, yeah. Any recommendations to this, either to tone down, tone up, are welcomed.


PS: The story will follow the canon timeline, maybe add some of my own arcs that have other people chasing him.

[allfictions]

Originally Posted by Traitless

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Okay...but...

Why?

Why this power? Why does it do what it does? Why did you decide to change IB's nature? Will it be related to an element of the plot later, or is it just random/to make it look ''cool''? Is it magic or science? If not, do we have an inkling as to where it came from or how the Kamijou developped it?

Essentially, my interrogations can be summed up for me as to why you decided to change the story in this way, and not another.

[Traitless]

I don't know, honestly.

I guess it just popped out in my mind, my mind likes the idea, and...

Yeah.

It is pretty much a random power that I add to IB, and I would like to see if the canon story would be real easier, which I think (and it would by an unknown percentage) it would be.

And then there are other stories that usually pop out in my mind too, but their really not that interesting when I think about it.

But there is no time to think this weeks because I have to fight my greatest enemy...


EXAMS!

[LevelSeven]

how is it with the idea that magician and scientist will work together, not the whole side, only a illegal group,

they start their plans: of course: controlling the world.....

to be able to do that they menage to steal the clone technology of AC and the research papers of Aureolus for his ars magna,

their plan: overpowering every army and every country (AC included) with high-level Espern and Saints......
like 200 clones of kanzaki, aqua (as GRS member), vento (with divine punishment), terra (EoL), fiamma (with right hand and holy right), Ollerus (as impure majin) than index clones (even the pendex mode),
clones of valkyries and saints too...... not normal magician becasue they have enough normal humans without needing to clone them.....

they clone the espers: they use the legacy of izzard and menage to create Level 5's,
Accel, Kakine, Mikoto, etc. even gunha....

and they could clone touma + IB, BUT wih the difference that they used magic and science, that means one touma can only negate AIM and another one can only negate MANA, and rare examples can negate Telesma.......

they have limitations which makes them overall weaker than the original BUT 1000 of them is still nearly impossible.....



the overall goal of the story would be to stop the people behind this plan and the masterminds of this illegal organization called 'Pitch Black' (i like the name).......

im not sure if this is a actual plot but it would be interesting to see how the chars form now would survive against their more powerful clones......

[demino_hellsin]

I am very much in doubt of how any of that works. The saints I can probably buy. But the espers and IB might not work the way you imagine them to. Even with Aurelious' ability in play.

[Loremaster]

Certain hidden level Five; Chapter 6 is out.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9986081...Fated-Memories

Feels, feels everywhere. Though my attempt at it, so probably not to good. But if anybody read the old version, then it's comparable to chapter 6 Hollow reunion. Anyway hope you enjoy.