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Deathkillz · 2007-07-12, 11:10

yep saphyre they look way better

for the misuzu one though i think you should make her colours a bit softer cause it looks rather burnt now as it is :/

update on mine ~

new dawn one ^.^

and improved versions of my others ~

2 x day

1 x night

suggestions welcomed ^.^

Skyfall · 2007-07-12, 11:40

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Originally Posted by Sephi

Now this is much better

*thumbs up*

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Originally Posted by DKZ

I really like this one. Not much to comment on, because i find it very nice as it is

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Originally Posted by DKZ

Was never a fan of excessive brightness, and our Feito-chan suffers from exactly that. The whole cloudy area behind her is too bright, making it look like a big mesh of light instead of a cloud imo

The font is nice though.

Deathkillz · 2007-07-12, 13:19

lowered the brightness...any better? :X

Skyfall · 2007-07-12, 13:24

It definitely is

Though i would decrease it a wee bit more in the area directly behind her (around her outline... near the left side specifically )

Aoie_Emesai · 2007-07-12, 15:17

Very nice there Deathkillzzzz ^_^

Looks much nicer without the sun glaring down on us ^_^

denkikoiji · 2007-07-12, 17:16

ok it looks like im going to do a banner ^_^ ill get mine up once im done ^_^

Daniel E. · 2007-07-12, 17:23

Fourth one!

Now I need to decide wich banner should I discard. >_< !

Then it's up to fix the remaining three!

Aoie_Emesai · 2007-07-12, 17:36

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Originally Posted by Daniel E.

Fourth one!

Now I need to decide wich banner should I discard. >_< !

Then it's up to fix the remaining three!

Heheeh ^_^ well... you got 15 days to choose ^_^

Daniel E. · 2007-07-12, 18:19

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Originally Posted by Aoie_Emesai

Heheeh ^_^ well... you got 15 days to choose ^_^

Knowing myself, I'll probably leave everything until the very last minute.

saphyre · 2007-07-12, 20:44

Did a few minor adjustments with the colors/brightness etc.

Ayu Version 3:

Misuzu Version 4:

denkikoiji · 2007-07-12, 22:46

ok i got them done now ^_^ idk if there that good i never made a banner b4 but here they are:

Spoiler for banners:

saphyre · 2007-07-12, 22:57

@denkikoiji

As you can see, you need to fix your sides so it matches with the gradient :P.
As for the banner itself, imo, change the font and size of the text maybe... Doesn't really fit in. There are probably too many birds, also rotating the birds horizontally on the right would probably make it look better.

***CrowKenobi*** · 2007-07-13, 00:50

denkikoiji your Sia banner inspired me to create my own!

(must feed the beast!)

What do you think, sirs?

If I keep this one, which one of my completed banners shall I drop?

Ice Climbers · 2007-07-13, 01:00

For some reason I can't see the banners at all (well the newer ones), is imageshack down or something??? (or is it just me ><)

When I copy the link it comes out as a GIF image that is 1 x 1 pixel in size o_O

JOJOS'STAR · 2007-07-13, 01:41

I can see that some people encountered the same problem as me with the night gradient.

It is pretty difficult to find good source with subject that aren't "spooky" or horror like for the last halloween banner contest. I just felt like reminding everyone that the topic is sky. ^^

Ice Climbers · 2007-07-13, 01:55

Fixed up my previous Ayu banner:

How does it look??

denkikoiji · 2007-07-13, 04:12

ok ^_^ ill try it again and change it up a bit ^_^ to the expectations ^_^ so ill get the next v2 of my first banners redone ^_^

ok i did 3 new banners all one type but there all different ^_^ well her they are:

Deathkillz · 2007-07-13, 06:03

^ oh very nice

though a tip from me would be to work on some blending as the pics just seems slapped on without much care >.< also if you look at the right sides...ive never seen clean cut clouds in my life

@ ice climbers ~ your link is broken :/

denkikoiji · 2007-07-13, 06:12

lol my brush did it !!! ill just have to erase it lol ^_^ can i get some tips on blending ? or a link lol not that grate at it lol

saphyre · 2007-07-13, 06:19

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Originally Posted by denkikoiji

can i get some tips on blending ? or a link lol not that grate at it lol

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2007-07-12, 11:10	Link #181
Deathkillz ~ You're dead ^__^* ~ Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: uk, England Age: 34	yep saphyre they look way better for the misuzu one though i think you should make her colours a bit softer cause it looks rather burnt now as it is :/ update on mine ~ new dawn one ^.^ and improved versions of my others ~ 2 x day 1 x night suggestions welcomed ^.^ __________________ Siggy: hohohohoho~ \| AnimeHistory welcome to our blog ~ \| Summer2009 early review Under the radar series Summer2009: Kanamemo, GA Geijutsuka Art, NEEDLESS

2007-07-12, 13:19	Link #183
Deathkillz ~ You're dead ^__^* ~ Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: uk, England Age: 34	lowered the brightness...any better? :X __________________ Siggy: hohohohoho~ \| AnimeHistory welcome to our blog ~ \| Summer2009 early review Under the radar series Summer2009: Kanamemo, GA Geijutsuka Art, NEEDLESS

2007-07-12, 13:24	Link #184
Skyfall Lost in my dreams... Join Date: Jun 2006 Age: 37	It definitely is Though i would decrease it a wee bit more in the area directly behind her (around her outline... near the left side specifically ) __________________

2007-07-12, 15:17	Link #185
Aoie_Emesai ♪♫ Maya Iincho ♩♬ Artist Join Date: May 2004 Location: Unnecessary Age: 37	Very nice there Deathkillzzzz ^_^ Looks much nicer without the sun glaring down on us ^_^ __________________ How to Give / Receive Criticism on your work / Like to draw? Come join Artists Alike Visit my Deviantart Or Blog ~A Child should always surpass his/her parent, Remember.

2007-07-12, 17:16	Link #186
denkikoiji Oniai loveru! Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2007 Location: South Dakota! Age: 35	ok it looks like im going to do a banner ^_^ ill get mine up once im done ^_^ __________________

2007-07-12, 17:23	Link #187
Daniel E. AniMexican! Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Monterrey N.L. Mexico	Fourth one! Now I need to decide wich banner should I discard. >_< ! Then it's up to fix the remaining three! __________________

2007-07-12, 20:44	Link #190
saphyre Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Australia Age: 36	Did a few minor adjustments with the colors/brightness etc. Ayu Version 3: Misuzu Version 4: __________________

2007-07-12, 22:46	Link #191
denkikoiji Oniai loveru! Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2007 Location: South Dakota! Age: 35	ok i got them done now ^_^ idk if there that good i never made a banner b4 but here they are: Spoiler for banners: __________________

2007-07-12, 22:57	Link #192
saphyre Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Australia Age: 36	@denkikoiji As you can see, you need to fix your sides so it matches with the gradient :P. As for the banner itself, imo, change the font and size of the text maybe... Doesn't really fit in. There are probably too many birds, also rotating the birds horizontally on the right would probably make it look better. __________________ Last edited by saphyre; 2007-07-12 at 23:08.

2007-07-13, 00:50	Link #193
*CrowKenobi* One PUNCH! Administrator Join Date: Dec 2005	denkikoiji your Sia banner inspired me to create my own! (must feed the beast!) What do you think, sirs? If I keep this one, which one of my completed banners shall I drop? Last edited by CrowKenobi; 2007-07-13 at 16:14. Reason: revised banner/tweaked text

2007-07-13, 01:00	Link #194
Ice Climbers Retired Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Princeton University	For some reason I can't see the banners at all (well the newer ones), is imageshack down or something??? (or is it just me ><) When I copy the link it comes out as a GIF image that is 1 x 1 pixel in size o_O __________________ Last edited by Ice Climbers; 2007-07-13 at 01:18.

2007-07-13, 01:41	Link #195
JOJOS'STAR Senior Member Artist Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Montreal Age: 43	I can see that some people encountered the same problem as me with the night gradient. It is pretty difficult to find good source with subject that aren't "spooky" or horror like for the last halloween banner contest. I just felt like reminding everyone that the topic is sky. ^^ __________________

2007-07-13, 01:55	Link #196
Ice Climbers Retired Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Princeton University	Fixed up my previous Ayu banner: How does it look?? __________________

2007-07-13, 04:12	Link #197
denkikoiji Oniai loveru! Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2007 Location: South Dakota! Age: 35	ok ^_^ ill try it again and change it up a bit ^_^ to the expectations ^_^ so ill get the next v2 of my first banners redone ^_^ ok i did 3 new banners all one type but there all different ^_^ well her they are: __________________ Last edited by denkikoiji; 2007-07-13 at 05:55.

2007-07-13, 06:03	Link #198
Deathkillz ~ You're dead ^__^* ~ Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: uk, England Age: 34	^ oh very nice though a tip from me would be to work on some blending as the pics just seems slapped on without much care >.< also if you look at the right sides...ive never seen clean cut clouds in my life @ ice climbers ~ your link is broken :/ __________________ Siggy: hohohohoho~ \| AnimeHistory welcome to our blog ~ \| Summer2009 early review Under the radar series Summer2009: Kanamemo, GA Geijutsuka Art, NEEDLESS

2007-07-13, 06:12	Link #199
denkikoiji Oniai loveru! Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2007 Location: South Dakota! Age: 35	lol my brush did it !!! ill just have to erase it lol ^_^ can i get some tips on blending ? or a link lol not that grate at it lol __________________