Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by USB500

and who smuggled those hentai DVDs, by the way? >_>

Not me

Originally Posted by USB500

Now if only Mai & her sisters have the free time....

*runs*

... and free time for... what?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Just saw episode 26 subbed
I know I shouldn't but....

Spoiler for BreakerS Epilogue:

Enforcer Maren:
After Riot Force 6 was dissolved, Maren returned to duty in the Interstellar Navigation Bureau.
But this time, she's not alone...


Agent's Aide/Knight Minawa Koji:
He became Maren's partner in the INB, their team work is highly valued among the Bureau.
The two are always seen together, there are even rumors that they plan on getting married.


Private First Class Minawa Yui:
Yui transfered back to the Air Force, and also became Nanoha's Aide.
She plans on becoming an Instructor like Nanoha, though some say it'll just be an excuse to make people cosplay...


Number 13 - Treize:
Being a fast learner, she quickly adapted to society.
While her sisters are still in rehabilitation, she chose to be with Erio and Caro in the Environment Protection Bureau and often visits Lutecia.
She is making progress in learning to express her emotions.

It doesn't spoil the end (except for that phrase ), so I guess it's okay to post it
*runs*

...

Koji-kun hayainda...


Damn, already planning to tie the knot and do the deed are we?

Originally Posted by haiz123321

No worries! By the power of The Dark God C2F, I WILL LIVE ONCE MORE

Chaos has ressurection powers now?

Originally Posted by hais123321

Which episode of SRW:OGW is this?

From the DVD Special Episode 26. No raws out AFAIK.

Spoiler for Here's some... exploitable scenes from the episode::

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Kha

Eep I forgot again!

*waits for the chibi to patrol away then gets out of Feign Death*

Oh so that's how the Primarchs are in your fanon. I'll take it. Now all that's left is to work out how the Grey-knights/Cleric-knights fit into the picture, then we can see if Master Chief can be made real or just remains a Robin Hood-type historical figure.

But if the old CKs are knights talented in championing the cause of the Light and the Seiou's grace who have received the gene-seed from the Seiou, wouldn't that make them Primarchs as well? Or does this even make any sense at all?

EDIT: Scratch that. How do you think the Cleric-knights fit in? Can they be Grey-knight like, or will they be "just another Paladin" class?

...

Now I really really wanna get this off the ground at least! And I got the PERFECT unison device for him!

"Do keep your head down. There's two of us in here now..."

Kha's ability to use anything never ceases to amaze me.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Just saw episode 26 subbed
I know I shouldn't but....

Spoiler for BreakerS Epilogue:

Enforcer Maren:
After Riot Force 6 was dissolved, Maren returned to duty in the Interstellar Navigation Bureau.
But this time, she's not alone...


Agent's Aide/Knight Minawa Koji:
He became Maren's partner in the INB, their team work is highly valued among the Bureau.
The two are always seen together, there are even rumors that they plan on getting married.


Private First Class Minawa Yui:
Yui transfered back to the Air Force, and also became Nanoha's Aide.
She plans on becoming an Instructor like Nanoha, though some say it'll just be an excuse to make people cosplay...


Number 13 - Treize:
Being a fast learner, she quickly adapted to society.
While her sisters are still in rehabilitation, she chose to be with Erio and Caro in the Environment Protection Bureau and often visits Lutecia.
She is making progress in learning to express her emotions.

It doesn't spoil the end (except for that phrase ), so I guess it's okay to post it
*runs*

Well it's a nice thing after all. A full circle for your characters gets a from me anytime. So good job FlameSparkZ.

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Hmm, I hope u didn't get the link for lyics and link for song mixed up

Doubt it.

might be the wrong song though..

No worries! By the power of The Dark God C2F, I WILL LIVE ONCE MORE

And you now live as a zombie under him.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You know... I shouldn't be saying this but...

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

I've got an idea... >.>

Spoiler:

For all of them...

Spoiler:

Be it Yui, Lutecia or Maren...

But I would need to collaborate with FSZ and Tormenk...

Why not?

A 3-man team is slightly tough though and whats with all those spoiler tags.

Oh wait. Not that.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You know... I shouldn't be saying this but...

Spoiler:

I've got an idea... >.>

Spoiler:

For all of them...

Spoiler:

Be it Yui, Lutecia or Maren...

But I would need to collaborate with FSZ and Tormenk...

...what?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

...

Koji-kun hayainda...


Damn, already planning to tie the knot and do the deed are we?

After what happened to them (read: will happen ) it's only natural

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Well it's a nice thing after all. A full circle for your characters gets a from me anytime. So good job FlameSparkZ.

Thanks

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Why not?

A 3-man team is slightly tough though and whats with all those spoiler tags.

Oh wait. Not that.

err...what? <----- clueless
*runs*

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Kha's ability to use anything never ceases to amaze me.

Kha is Kha afterall

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

After what happened to them (read: will happen ) it's only natural

Eeeeh...

So... what WILL happen?

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Temptation... Rising...

Must... Resist... Urge to... Rub it... In his face...!

Must... Rub... Something... In someone's... Face!!!

Go ahead & try! I am immune to your mockery!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Just because I've said some bad stuff, doesn't make me evil.

...and just because I've said some genius stuff, doesn't make me Einstein.





[Borat] NOT! [/Borat]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Wish I could stay and chat... But sadly, I'll be gone for about five days.()

Make sure there's mountains of backlog for me when I come back, okay?
Expect some new material when I return.

<jaw drops> 5 days?


...We're doomed.

Originally Posted by USB500

Spoiler for HOLY SHI-:

OUR SECRET WORLD
CHAPTER 1

Spoiler for wild fantasy:

Ginga and Cinque were holding hands in suggestive way, their night gowns barely covering their figures, beautifully created by the Hands of the Creator. Sparkles and bubbles could also be seen filling the room, as the two women continued holding onto each other, oblivious of what happened around them.

Cinque blushed. “I’m scared…” she murmured and clung onto Ginga. “What should I do? This is my first experience, so…”

Ginga giggled at the girl’s timidity. “Don’t be afraid, Cinque-chan,” she spoke and carefully held Cinque beneath her arms. “This is just between the two of us. No one will know. Right?”

“Gin-nee…” Cinque murmured and gasped when Ginga brought her onto the bed, covering them with the white blanket as they lay down together. “Gin-nee, what are you doing?”

“I told you I’d show you my secret world, didn’t I?” Ginga spoke and traced a finger down her nose.

“Gin-nee, you’re embarrassing me…” Cinque mumbled and shivered when Ginga ran her fingers down her spine. “Ah, Gin-nee, dame…”

“Don’t worry, I’ll be gentle…” Ginga whispered and brushed a strand of silver hair that was running down Cinque’s face. “Cinque-chan… you look beautiful…”

Cinque turned away from the former Number 13 in embarrassment. “Gin-nee, mou…”

Ginga giggled. She turned so she was looking down at her, reaching for her hands so they were holding each other in intimate proximity. “Let me admire the beauty just a bit closer…” she said and bent down.

“Gin-nee…” Cinque closed her eyes, her lips automatically parted as to accept the special gift.

Nove blushed in a sudden. She never thought she would face things like “secret world” ever since she was adopted into the TSAB. It’s not that she had frequently shared her intimate moment with Cinque (the thought made her blush again), but the moment Frieda and Gwendolyn mentioned the word “secret world” when they were having their lunch (and was overheard by Nove as she headed to the cafeteria) made her go wild in pure fantasy. “Who should I talk to?” she murmured and looked around her in anxiety.

“Well, well, if it isn’t Nove herself.”

She turned around. Being the only person present in the cafeteria, she felt slightly nervous when the Wind Talker Hikki and his Unison Device approached the table. “Can we sit here?” Hikki asked.

“Err… yes, sure,” Nove said.

The Master/Servant couple took a seat next to Nove and started talking to each other in Narulian language. Nove could not understand a word of the conversation, but took the time to observe the closeness between Hikki and Widuri.

“Can I… can I ask both of you a question?”

The couple stopped talking. “Yes? What will the question be, Nove-chan?” Widuri asked as she turned to her.

Nove gulped. She took a deep breath, nodded and braved herself to ask: “Do you have a secret world of your own?”

Silence. Neither Hikki nor Widuri was saying a world. The only reaction they did was to give Nove a very deep look of ‘huh’ as an answer.

“What do you mean by secret world, Nove-chan?” Widuri asked.

“Well, you see…” Nove said and fiddled with her fingers in embarrassment. “Just now I overheard Frieda and her friend talking about their secret world, and I was kind of… wondering…”

Hikki and Widuri looked at each other. Then they turned back at Nove and said in unison: “nope, we don’t understand what you’re talking of.”

“WRRYYY!!!!!”

Widuri squealed in a sudden and jumped into Hikki’s arms. “Hikki-sama, I’m scared!!” she cried out and clung onto him.

Hikki, instead, was not amused. “Zafira, will you stop doing that?” he mumbled.

The wolf-man grinned and brushed his thumb on his nose in arrogant manner. “The same cannot be said by the most intimately in love couple ever to live in the bureau,” he said (and made Hikki twitch in dismay and Widuri blush in greatness). “Besides, brother, real men never need to have secret worlds.”

“So do you know?” Nove asked.

“Of course I have,” Zafira bolstered. “As a matter of fact, I know the darkest side of Meister Hayate’s secret world. I was thinking of telling it to Hikki, but since you’re already here-” The wolf-man twitched in horror when he felt a murderous aura enveloping him from behind. “On the other hand, I should probably drop that suggestion,” he said and scrammed before Vita chased him around the cafeteria.

Nove became ever more confused. Hikki and Widuri were not telling, and Zafira was chased after before he could spill out the secret. “If no one is willing to help,” she pondered. “Then I have to do this on my own.” She later took a look on Hikki and Widuri, the former soothing the woman who was crying in his arms. “I wonder how their secret world would look like…”

“You’re so childish,” Hikki was heard saying, “just like when you fell sick after playing in the rain. Remember when I had to spoon-feed you?”

“Mou, Hikki-sama, you’re so evil…” Widuri mumbled and slapped his chest.

Nove blinked. “Playing in the rain?”

Spoiler for wild fantasy again:

“Widuri, say ‘AA!’!” Hikki said as he was spoon-feeding a bedridden Widuri with pudding. Lazily Hikki complied and ate the pudding. “Just because you’re a Unison Device doesn’t mean you have the immunity against the weathers. Now you fell sick.”

“Mou, Hikki-sama, you don’t have to be angry at me,” Widuri mumbled and ate the pudding.

“It’s because I’m your Master. Therefore I have the responsibility over you,” Hikki replied and gave her a spoonful of pudding. “Now, Widuri.”

Widuri sighed. “Haii. Aa-”

Hikki seized her lips, pressing his mouth onto hers in a kiss that was hard as it was devouring. Widuri gasped at the bold action, and moaned in both shock and pleasure as the kiss deepened. Slowly, they sank onto the bed, interlocked in each other’s arms as they shared the sweet nectar of love that came with their kisses.

“Hikki-sama, I’m so cold…” Widuri murmured. “Please… make me warm…”

“You don’t have to say it…” Hikki whispered and seized her lips again. “You don’t have to…”

Widuri responded fully to his passion, her body moving provocatively against him…

Nove blushed. “So they like playing in the rain and getting wet together…”

// to be continued //

Damn, the wild fantasies.... Ginga & Cinque, especially.....

*plugs nostrils*

Well, that was a good start. Just hope I won't have to go that far in describing the wild fantasies...

And I think Nove's been watching too much of those 18+ anime DVDs

<sighs; head in hands> Squash one pervert, and another takes his place - it's like trying to fight the damned Hydra.

Originally Posted by Keroko

He's starting to snap.

<grins> Just as planned...now, just a little more...

@LoweGear: Have you had the chance to read & digest all the stuff I sent you in my PMs?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

<jaw drops> 5 days?


...We're doomed.

We do have enough H4XXBusters here if that's what you're worried about

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

<sighs; head in hands> Squash one pervert, and another takes his place - it's like trying to fight the damned Hydra.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

@LoweGear: Have you had the chance to read & digest all the stuff I sent you in my PMs?

Actually rereading... It's a lot of stuff

[FieryAeon]

Originally Posted by USB500

And good luck on climbing Mount Backlog once you come back, okay? We'll prepare it high enough for you.

Spoiler for HOLY SHI-:

OUR SECRET WORLD
CHAPTER 1

Spoiler for wild fantasy:

Ginga and Cinque were holding hands in suggestive way, their night gowns barely covering their figures, beautifully created by the Hands of the Creator. Sparkles and bubbles could also be seen filling the room, as the two women continued holding onto each other, oblivious of what happened around them.

Cinque blushed. “I’m scared…” she murmured and clung onto Ginga. “What should I do? This is my first experience, so…”

Ginga giggled at the girl’s timidity. “Don’t be afraid, Cinque-chan,” she spoke and carefully held Cinque beneath her arms. “This is just between the two of us. No one will know. Right?”

“Gin-nee…” Cinque murmured and gasped when Ginga brought her onto the bed, covering them with the white blanket as they lay down together. “Gin-nee, what are you doing?”

“I told you I’d show you my secret world, didn’t I?” Ginga spoke and traced a finger down her nose.

“Gin-nee, you’re embarrassing me…” Cinque mumbled and shivered when Ginga ran her fingers down her spine. “Ah, Gin-nee, dame…”

“Don’t worry, I’ll be gentle…” Ginga whispered and brushed a strand of silver hair that was running down Cinque’s face. “Cinque-chan… you look beautiful…”

Cinque turned away from the former Number 13 in embarrassment. “Gin-nee, mou…”

Ginga giggled. She turned so she was looking down at her, reaching for her hands so they were holding each other in intimate proximity. “Let me admire the beauty just a bit closer…” she said and bent down.

“Gin-nee…” Cinque closed her eyes, her lips automatically parted as to accept the special gift.

Nove blushed in a sudden. She never thought she would face things like “secret world” ever since she was adopted into the TSAB. It’s not that she had frequently shared her intimate moment with Cinque (the thought made her blush again), but the moment Frieda and Gwendolyn mentioned the word “secret world” when they were having their lunch (and was overheard by Nove as she headed to the cafeteria) made her go wild in pure fantasy. “Who should I talk to?” she murmured and looked around her in anxiety.

“Well, well, if it isn’t Nove herself.”

She turned around. Being the only person present in the cafeteria, she felt slightly nervous when the Wind Talker Hikki and his Unison Device approached the table. “Can we sit here?” Hikki asked.

“Err… yes, sure,” Nove said.

The Master/Servant couple took a seat next to Nove and started talking to each other in Narulian language. Nove could not understand a word of the conversation, but took the time to observe the closeness between Hikki and Widuri.

“Can I… can I ask both of you a question?”

The couple stopped talking. “Yes? What will the question be, Nove-chan?” Widuri asked as she turned to her.

Nove gulped. She took a deep breath, nodded and braved herself to ask: “Do you have a secret world of your own?”

Silence. Neither Hikki nor Widuri was saying a world. The only reaction they did was to give Nove a very deep look of ‘huh’ as an answer.

“What do you mean by secret world, Nove-chan?” Widuri asked.

“Well, you see…” Nove said and fiddled with her fingers in embarrassment. “Just now I overheard Frieda and her friend talking about their secret world, and I was kind of… wondering…”

Hikki and Widuri looked at each other. Then they turned back at Nove and said in unison: “nope, we don’t understand what you’re talking of.”

“WRRYYY!!!!!”

Widuri squealed in a sudden and jumped into Hikki’s arms. “Hikki-sama, I’m scared!!” she cried out and clung onto him.

Hikki, instead, was not amused. “Zafira, will you stop doing that?” he mumbled.

The wolf-man grinned and brushed his thumb on his nose in arrogant manner. “The same cannot be said by the most intimately in love couple ever to live in the bureau,” he said (and made Hikki twitch in dismay and Widuri blush in greatness). “Besides, brother, real men never need to have secret worlds.”

“So do you know?” Nove asked.

“Of course I have,” Zafira bolstered. “As a matter of fact, I know the darkest side of Meister Hayate’s secret world. I was thinking of telling it to Hikki, but since you’re already here-” The wolf-man twitched in horror when he felt a murderous aura enveloping him from behind. “On the other hand, I should probably drop that suggestion,” he said and scrammed before Vita chased him around the cafeteria.

Nove became ever more confused. Hikki and Widuri were not telling, and Zafira was chased after before he could spill out the secret. “If no one is willing to help,” she pondered. “Then I have to do this on my own.” She later took a look on Hikki and Widuri, the former soothing the woman who was crying in his arms. “I wonder how their secret world would look like…”

“You’re so childish,” Hikki was heard saying, “just like when you fell sick after playing in the rain. Remember when I had to spoon-feed you?”

“Mou, Hikki-sama, you’re so evil…” Widuri mumbled and slapped his chest.

Nove blinked. “Playing in the rain?”

Spoiler for wild fantasy again:

“Widuri, say ‘AA!’!” Hikki said as he was spoon-feeding a bedridden Widuri with pudding. Lazily Hikki complied and ate the pudding. “Just because you’re a Unison Device doesn’t mean you have the immunity against the weathers. Now you fell sick.”

“Mou, Hikki-sama, you don’t have to be angry at me,” Widuri mumbled and ate the pudding.

“It’s because I’m your Master. Therefore I have the responsibility over you,” Hikki replied and gave her a spoonful of pudding. “Now, Widuri.”

Widuri sighed. “Haii. Aa-”

Hikki seized her lips, pressing his mouth onto hers in a kiss that was hard as it was devouring. Widuri gasped at the bold action, and moaned in both shock and pleasure as the kiss deepened. Slowly, they sank onto the bed, interlocked in each other’s arms as they shared the sweet nectar of love that came with their kisses.

“Hikki-sama, I’m so cold…” Widuri murmured. “Please… make me warm…”

“You don’t have to say it…” Hikki whispered and seized her lips again. “You don’t have to…”

Widuri responded fully to his passion, her body moving provocatively against him…

Nove blushed. “So they like playing in the rain and getting wet together…”

// to be continued //

Damn, the wild fantasies.... Ginga & Cinque, especially.....

*plugs nostrils*

Well, that was a good start. Just hope I won't have to go that far in describing the wild fantasies...

And I think Nove's been watching too much of those 18+ anime DVDs

I wake up and see this!! WIN!!!

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Just saw episode 26 subbed
I know I shouldn't but....

Spoiler for BreakerS Epilogue:

Enforcer Maren:
After Riot Force 6 was dissolved, Maren returned to duty in the Interstellar Navigation Bureau.
But this time, she's not alone...


Agent's Aide/Knight Minawa Koji:
He became Maren's partner in the INB, their team work is highly valued among the Bureau.
The two are always seen together, there are even rumors that they plan on getting married.


Private First Class Minawa Yui:
Yui transfered back to the Air Force, and also became Nanoha's Aide.
She plans on becoming an Instructor like Nanoha, though some say it'll just be an excuse to make people cosplay...


Number 13 - Treize:
Being a fast learner, she quickly adapted to society.
While her sisters are still in rehabilitation, she chose to be with Erio and Caro in the Environment Protection Bureau and often visits Lutecia.
She is making progress in learning to express her emotions.

It doesn't spoil the end (except for that phrase ), so I guess it's okay to post it
*runs*

W-W-What phrase?

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Not me

Might that be someone you know?

From the DVD Special Episode 26. No raws out AFAIK.

Spoiler for Here's some... exploitable scenes from the episode::

lol at the sight of people when the bunnies came out.

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

After what happened to them (read: will happen ) it's only natural

Sonotorida!

...what?

err...what? <----- clueless
*runs*

I'll leave it to him to explain since he was the one who brought it up, lest I misphrase something and confuse people again.

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

<sighs; head in hands> Squash one pervert, and another takes his place - it's like trying to fight the damned Hydra.

Overhead Title reads:

Outer-Canaan: Nest of the Hydra




When you have honey, you draw bees.

When you have garbage, you get flies.

I'll leave it to decide what is the case here.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Might that be someone you know?

Maybe... maybe not...

*hides stash*

Originally Posted by Tormenk

lol at the sight of people when the bunnies came out.

Their reactions = PURE WIN

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Overhead Title reads:

Outer-Canaan: Nest of the Hydra




When you have honey, you draw bees.

When you have garbage, you get flies.

I'll leave it to decide what is the case here.

More like...

When you have Bluecheesium, you draw Scrin

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Koji-kun hayainda...


Damn, already planning to tie the knot and do the deed are we?

NOT YEEEETTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*cough*

Not... Just yet...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Chaos has ressurection powers now?

*Wave hand*

No no, I don't...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

And you now live as a zombie under him.

DAKARA !

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Why not?

A 3-man team is slightly tough though and whats with all those spoiler tags.

Oh wait. Not that.

What are you talking about ?

But yeah, it'll be difficult Unless you guys have MSN messenger ?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

...what?

I'm skipping ahead of plan, I'll be focusing on Erio + Lutecia + Caro + Koji + Maren + Yui + One new non-destroyer OC of mine... Which reminds me...

*Drags LoweGear to create new OC*

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

After what happened to them (read: will happen ) it's only natural

You're going for the win

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

err...what? <----- clueless
*runs*

In any case, I'll sent both of you my plan in mind... The reason why I can't say it is because it's too -=[beep]=- , and I promise not to do -=[beep]=- ... >.>

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

When you have Bluecheesium, you draw Scrin

We need a bomb to draw in the full invasion then.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

NOT YEEEETTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*cough*

Not... Just yet...

0_0

Ok I know where this exactly is heading now.

What are you talking about ?

But yeah, it'll be difficult Unless you guys have MSN messenger ?

I'm talking about what you had in mind. And of course, I don't mind either way.

I'm skipping ahead of plan, I'll be focusing on Erio + Lutecia + Caro + Koji + Maren + Yui + One new non-destroyer OC of mine... Which reminds me...

*Drags LoweGear to create new OC*

<= anyway to make this bigger by 100 times at least?

Him too?

You're going for the win

Indeed he is.

In any case, I'll sent both of you my plan in mind... The reason why I can't say it is because it's too -=[beep]=- , and I promise not to do -=[beep]=- ... >.>

In any case, I'm looking forward to this.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Just saw episode 26 subbed
I know I shouldn't but....

Spoiler for BreakerS Epilogue:

Enforcer Maren:
After Riot Force 6 was dissolved, Maren returned to duty in the Interstellar Navigation Bureau.
But this time, she's not alone...


Agent's Aide/Knight Minawa Koji:
He became Maren's partner in the INB, their team work is highly valued among the Bureau.
The two are always seen together, there are even rumors that they plan on getting married.


Private First Class Minawa Yui:
Yui transfered back to the Air Force, and also became Nanoha's Aide.
She plans on becoming an Instructor like Nanoha, though some say it'll just be an excuse to make people cosplay...


Number 13 - Treize:
Being a fast learner, she quickly adapted to society.
While her sisters are still in rehabilitation, she chose to be with Erio and Caro in the Environment Protection Bureau and often visits Lutecia.
She is making progress in learning to express her emotions.

It doesn't spoil the end (except for that phrase ), so I guess it's okay to post it
*runs*

I wanted to do something like since I watched the raw! Now with the subs out... I'd might be ruining everything on all 3 storylines...

...unless I'm good enough to pull a GL prologue and keep you guys on your toes all season. If not... Hmm...

26 is still on tap... Maybe when I watch it, things will change...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Kha's ability to use anything never ceases to amaze me.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Kha is Kha afterall

Both me and my OC are masters of Tracing.

Which brings me to several proposed changes to lore running in the Play Test Realms for "Rebuilt of StrikerS":

~~~~~~

None of the Holy Belka can use their Holy abilities in mock duels or unjustified combats.

Unjustified combats means any battle not sanctioned by the Light. While that means logically being unable to commit murder using the Light, the gray area comes in defining what "unjustified combats" mean. This brings more emphasis to what the Light is, a santified power borrowed from a mysterious higher being. Logically you'd have to abide by his rules, not yours.

This nerf is deemed appropiate for the overpoweredness Holy can be, having incredible defences, recovery and dispelling power while not sacrificing much in the DPS department. It will also shift emphasis to the characters' currently redundant side skills like Kha's Whispers and Tracing and Sophia's archery and penchant for trinkets. With this nerf, I can return some of the DPS that the Holy magic system deserved without pushing power levels too high.

This is what makes teaching Holy Belka so difficult: Few have the knack to even command a spark of Light. Also, from the get-go, the trainee has to be thrown into supervised live combat instead of fakes or on each other. As such, the Holy Belka classes teach their young via hands-on assignments and attachments to currently active Knights. They are also given greater autonomy early on, with their Meisters serving as mentors when it comes to wielding the Light. This will be reflected in how the young Knight-sisters and Cleric-knights have so much more freedom and actual missions as compared to the Forwards.

As expected, this will give me more literary freedom, and some interesting challenges for the young Belka Knights.

The reason for using Chaos to overcome the lack of nuking of Holy remains.

While point DPS will be returned as sharper energy blades and guided attacks, widespread nuking power remains solely the realm of mortal and Chaos, and so Kha's disability will force him to use Chaos and unlock more of his progression to finding meaning.

Sophia is not blind.

Arguably the most drastic change to an OC of mine, and yet it doesn't seem to have much consequences. Megane came back alive and therefore turned everything upside down for Sophia's backstory that would tie her to Lutecia. It will make her Otome arcs look better. Also, by the way I've done Sophia so far, she's practically not blind, so what's the point? Might as well drop it. I'll deal with the "living with a disability" more in the DSGK storyline (working name "Clan'z").

At least that's the idea for the lore change. The PTR is still divided in the middle regarding this somewhat drastic change. What do you guys think?

Regional Guard is institutionalized as Saint Guard

Nothing new here, just a compiled announcement of the changes so far. It will thus appear that there isn't just 1 coy defending Midchilda from attack, and it will explore the degree of autonomy of the Belka SAR. Another shot at political drama.

Sak-chan and Sakura

Just to reinforce earlier announcements to allow for differentiation between Saint Saber Sakura Zaki and UD Sakurazaki. In time, there will be a further difference as Sakura prefers being called "Saber" like other Servants to come. Bastion likewise won't be using his real name but "Aniki" or his class name "Berserker".

New Skills!

Artei and Kaempfer have their skill trees revitalized! Look out for more "HWA-TAAAA!" yodels from "Kenshiro"! The degree of their deadzone shafting will be reduced! The skills of the "Schattenjaeger" mage class will be unvealed! And first Hero Class, Death Knight, is released!

New Endgame Content!

The Black Temple Sanckt Labyrinth, or what was once the grand Sanckt Alexei Church, will be open to all comers and Knights-to-be!

Other suggestions be it changes or petitions?

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Yeah I'm bored...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Overhead Title reads:

Outer-Canaan: Nest of the Hydra




When you have honey, you draw bees.

When you have garbage, you get flies.

I'll leave it to decide what is the case here.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

More like...

When you have Bluecheesium, you draw Scrin

I don't see Moderships flying around...

EDIT2:

Something for Keroko:

Originally Posted by Mirificus

Shop worthy?

Now why won't they do a grown up Erio?! Shiro is cool and all but NO FANART TO SHOP!!! Cos Erio seems destined to turn B4DA$$, but that's not Kha!!! T_T

/whine

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by kha

None of the Holy Belka can use their Holy abilities in mock duels or unjustified combats.

This brings more emphasis to what the Light is, a santified power borrowed from a mysterious higher being. Logically you'd have to abide by his rules, not yours.

This nerf is deemed appropiate for the overpoweredness Holy can be, having incredible defences, recovery and dispelling power while not sacrificing much in the DPS department.

I'm not sure it's that much of a nerf. Since the "higher power" here will be Mr. Creator, you. As the person setting up the fights, would you really put them in a situation where they need the Light but can't use it?

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

I'm not sure it's that much of a nerf. Since the "higher power" here will be Mr. Creator, you. As the person setting up the fights, would you really put them in a situation where they need the Light but can't use it?

That's true. They won't get themselves into that kind of situation unless:

1. They are fighting for selfish reasons, which then the auto-dispell procs.
2. The target isn't meant to be brought to justice, which rarely happens.

This will ensure that they have the might when they need to. Admitably this then opens the system to abuses from other angles, so I'm still tightening it up. I haven't applied the patch yet.

There will be situations in time to come, especially in the darker post-StrikerS arcs where that line between black and white is blurred. Spiral Nights and Spiral Dawn is one where this theme occurs quite heavily.

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by kha

They are fighting for selfish reasons, which then the auto-dispell procs.

Even that's open to exploitation. How and where do you draw the line between selfish and selfless reasons?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Kha

Eep I forgot again!

*waits for the chibi to patrol away then gets out of Feign Death*

Oh so that's how the Primarchs are in your fanon. I'll take it. Now all that's left is to work out how the Grey-knights/Cleric-knights fit into the picture, then we can see if Master Chief can be made real or just remains a Robin Hood-type historical figure.

But if the old CKs are knights talented in championing the cause of the Light and the Seiou's grace who have received the gene-seed from the Seiou, wouldn't that make them Primarchs as well? Or does this even make any sense at all?

EDIT: Scratch that. How do you think the Cleric-knights fit in? Can they be Grey-knight like, or will they be "just another Paladin" class?

...

Now I really really wanna get this off the ground at least! And I got the PERFECT unison device for him!

"Do keep your head down. There's two of us in here now..."

*Kha gets jumped by the corpse-camping Keroko-tan*

Well, I really wasn't planning to insert the entire gene-seed for armies thing in Legend of Ancient Belka. There is a limit to the amount of insertions we can do (While writing the Primarch background, I was initially planning to insert the chapters too, but I scrapped it because it made no sense.) and to be honest, it ruins the uniqueness of the Primarchs.

That it not to say we can't insert some form of Grey Knights, just... don't take the 'army of genetical super soldiers' aproach. Oh, and no high-tech Master Chief armor either.

Originally Posted by Kha

None of the Holy Belka can use their Holy abilities in mock duels or unjustified combats.

Unjustified combats means any battle not sanctioned by the Light. While that means logically being unable to commit murder using the Light, the gray area comes in defining what "unjustified combats" mean. This brings more emphasis to what the Light is, a santified power borrowed from a mysterious higher being. Logically you'd have to abide by his rules, not yours.

This nerf is deemed appropiate for the overpoweredness Holy can be, having incredible defences, recovery and dispelling power while not sacrificing much in the DPS department. It will also shift emphasis to the characters' currently redundant side skills like Kha's Whispers and Tracing and Sophia's archery and penchant for trinkets. With this nerf, I can return some of the DPS that the Holy magic system deserved without pushing power levels too high.

This is what makes teaching Holy Belka so difficult: Few have the knack to even command a spark of Light. Also, from the get-go, the trainee has to be thrown into supervised live combat instead of fakes or on each other. As such, the Holy Belka classes teach their young via hands-on assignments and attachments to currently active Knights. They are also given greater autonomy early on, with their Meisters serving as mentors when it comes to wielding the Light. This will be reflected in how the young Knight-sisters and Cleric-knights have so much more freedom and actual missions as compared to the Forwards.

As expected, this will give me more literary freedom, and some interesting challenges for the young Belka Knights.

You'd be better of borrowing Aeus' nerf bat and simply whack the holy spells themselves. These limits seem to be too easilly removed.

Originally Posted by Kha

Just to reinforce earlier announcements to allow for differentiation between Saint Saber Sakura Zaki and UD Sakurazaki. In time, there will be a further difference as Sakura prefers being called "Saber" like other Servants to come. Bastion likewise won't be using his real name but "Aniki" or his class name "Berserker".

So... what does that mean, exactly?

Originally Posted by Kha

Something for Keroko:

Shop worthy?

Now why won't they do a grown up Erio?! Shiro is cool and all but NO FANART TO SHOP!!! Cos Erio seems destined to turn B4DA$$, but that's not Kha!!! T_T

/whine

I already have a Loli Keroko, remember?

Spoiler for and in school uniform, too:

Thanks for the heads up, though.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You know... I shouldn't be saying this but...

Spoiler:

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I've got an idea... >.>

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For all of them...

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Be it Yui, Lutecia or Maren...

But I would need to collaborate with FSZ and Tormenk...

Chaos2Frozen. Time to snap: 17 hours, 49 minutes.

Darn, I was off quite a bit.

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Chaos2Frozen. Time to snap: 17 hours, 49 minutes.

Darn, I was off quite a bit.

Since the dude isn't here, I'll defend him on his behalf. It's not anything dirty at all. In fact, it's going to tie those characters in real nice together in a story.

Although I have no idea what he intends to do with Lutecia and Yui in between.. >_>

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Since the dude isn't here, I'll defend him on his behalf. It's not anything dirty at all. In fact, it's going to tie those characters in real nice together in a story.

Although I have no idea what he intends to do with Lutecia and Yui in between.. >_>

Oh come now, we all knew what he meant by that. Why do you think he went through that spoiler madness?

[Tormenk]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Oh come now, we all knew what he meant by that. Why do you think he went through that spoiler madness?

Nonono, he was just bringing up the idea. Although to reveal any more would be spoiler-ish right now.

Off to bed. *yawns*

[FieryAeon]

Because I was too bored...Therefore.

Spoiler for Typemoon doujin game:

Spoiler for RAWR 1:

Spoiler for RAWR 2!! For lack of better words -_-':

Spoiler for RAWR 3:

Spoiler for RAWR 4:

Spoiler for ok enough of the stupid noise -_-':

Spoiler for The extreme NSFW I mentioned earlier. Risque??:

Spoiler for Ok fine not like its that bad anyway:

Disclaimer: I will not take responsibility if extreme crack emerges from this thread onces again. *runs*