2011-10-06, 06:51 | Link #2302 | |
Some say I'm the Reverse
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DAMMIT I NEED TO REWRITE AND I GET YOU GUYS WRITING OVER ME AAAAUUUGHHH
I will strangle you guys writing Sacred Twins, because you MADE me write this!!! Quote:
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2011-10-06, 06:52 | Link #2303 | |
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The next step is getting him to live to keep Joshua company, but that's Tatenashi's job.
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2011-10-06, 06:55 | Link #2305 |
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@ Meister- He'd still tell her to shut up He already keeps his past a secret and her seeing it probably just pissed him off more
They're NOT trying to make him destroy IS violently! He's ordered to do a mission stealthily while Tatenashi distracts the opposition.Most of his missions are intel gathering and recon, sometimes he sneaks into bases and the like but that's mostly it. Like I said, It's his pathological hatred for the IS that's distracting him. FRACTURE would prefer that they do missions with no casualties whatsoever but he tends to ignore this and destroys as many inactive units as he can even when it's not related. Wait...How did Erika stop him? He would've thrown a chaff grenade at her and kept running It's stupid but he's not the most careful guy in the world when he's already been exposed. The suit also gives him advanced reflexes so he would've flipped under Erika's unit. Though at that point the painkillers would have run out and he'd turn into a ragdoll due to the pressure, he's screwed at that point. Also, He doesn't trust the IS machinery so do you think he'd trust it to keep Joshua alive? He'd probably tell her no even if she offers him the chance. He'll keep working for them to keep Joshua safe then maybe choose to continue working for them to help keep the world safe or start a new life and leave it all behind. it depends on where I take his character development. Maybe I'll write a draft on what you posted earlier by tomorrow, how does one beat Karon's mech again? I need accurate info to make the draft. @ Zero- Amnesiac! Irish acts completely different from regular Irish if you look at the draft. It's not just his human side but also his immature and childish side, that's why he's way more open about liking Tatenashi. @ Stratospear- Nice mech drawing! Gotta wonder how hot it is in that thing though and I'm surprised at how thick it is. Is it because it has no shields and needs more armor? @ wavehawk- Another great fic from the dark writer himself! Your capacity to turn anything to grim dark is truly awe inspiring Can you teach me o great master? Last edited by Eratas123; 2011-10-06 at 08:09. |
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Some say I'm the Reverse
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2011-10-06, 07:12 | Link #2308 | |
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It has thick armor but Inami won't be suffering from heat buildups since the Minerva has a passive ventilation system using the round things on the sides of the head, the shoulders, elbows and the sides of the knees. Also, there are exposed parts of his body like the neck, above the elbows and above the hips. To guard those exposed areas, the Minerva does have a spherical shield AND the AD barrier, only it's less powerful compared to typical ISes. Due to this, the Minerva's shield attenuates faster than the IS' under consistent hits. Hence why during Chapter 2 of the fanfic, it sustained physical armor damage to protect Ichika after the shield wears out after tanking multiple hits.
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However, I don’t people will let him off easily (or FRACTURE for that matter) for trying to steal classified information from the ISA. In a world without an IS war, that might be a lesser crime, but in your world where the heads of state know of such a war, classified IS data ending up in hands beyond their control probably amounts to treason or something of that calibre. The last time someone thought a country was illegally making weapons of mass destruction, there was a pointless war. Moving Joshua to ISA would solve the part where Irish has to keep working for FRACTURE, or anyone, for his treatment. Moving himself there might be a big step, but if he’s apprehended by authorities, that’s the safest place in the world for him. Because I believe FRACTURE would like to make sure their secrets stay secrets, permanently. That would also allow Karon to back her words up with her claws. Quote:
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FRACTURE might get a tad nervous that their rather unreliable operative is now given a lifeline, and that might come to bite him as paranoia sets in. I suppose that because of her talking, Irish uses the chance to refuse and escape. But I do think the incident is enough to leave an impact for him to think about it. Each meeting should effect something. In the meantime, Karon manages to annoy her instructors and commanders for her rash actions, yet refuse to file a proper report, put herself (and her IS) out of action for a few days, and piss off some of her more militant feminist classmates in one swoop. It would be lovely to try and cover every aspect of the fallout. Like a true Vandam pilot! @Stratospear: That helms reminds of Vandam I-type's
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2011-10-06, 09:40 | Link #2311 | |
I am no one
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I & Blitz took the responsibility as a whole, please send some sort of formal protest. (Reading Yahoo mail about new Review in the Sacred Twins) Oh, there's one. @Stratospear I'm sorry being late to respon, but the sketch is incredible! Oh, I envy you...
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2011-10-06, 11:07 | Link #2313 |
I am no one
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Some sort of Combat-specialist I.S. / Mass-Produced I.S. (if I'm not wrong) made for his space-something OCs.
MeisterBabylon has a habit of mixing influences of various media, though especially from Gundams. This may confuse a new reader (like me). Once you understand though, his 'Fanon' is quite compelling.
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2011-10-06, 17:01 | Link #2314 | |
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Spoiler for Armor Design(s) 1:
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The armor Alpha Squad uses are not really going to change their size and height that much. It'll add about 2-3 inches or 4 to their size. Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2011-10-06 at 18:19. Reason: Had a little issue on choosing which images to use. |
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2011-10-06, 17:28 | Link #2315 | |
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Now for some Clarifications: 1. FRACTURE isn't an evil organization so they will let Joshua go. In fact; they'll let Joshua go at about halfway through Irish's story and he'll already be offered to stop working for them. At that point though he'll already knows about the duplicate core manufacturing so he'll choose to keep fighting with them willingly. Joshua would be sad that Irish didn't choose a normal life but proud that he's using his skills to help rather than pointlessly destroy. Irish will mellow out more at that point now that he's not being forced to do things and that Joshua's safe. 2. The reason they're not decommissioning Irish is because the units he blows up are from enemy bases so it's no skin off their nose if they're gone, Irish wouldn't be as stupid as to try and blow up his own sides units and he still does mission objectives anyway. It's just that theirs more explosions than they thought there would be 3. Irish also doesn't try steal IS academy secrets, why would he? He already knows how to demolish units so he wouldn't try to get anymore blueprints. Like I said, he doesn't want to risk Joshua's health by doing something that might piss of FRACTURE. 4. The war happened previously and right now the world is okay. The war is something the three protagonists are trying to prevent from happening in the first place in each of their scenarios. 5. How would he get a power line? The fight takes place in IS academy and I haven't seen any power lines there at all. 6. Militant female classmates? That class must be really down the toilet if that's the case Maybe I'll do a scene where the three male leads are challenged to something and the penalty for losing is...deadly...to say the least. 7. How does Maximillian deal with a class of militant man-haters? Must suck to be him 8. Why would Karon try so hard to persuade Irish? She might've seen his past but I doubt that's enough to risk his life for him by taking a bullet for him? Last edited by Eratas123; 2011-10-06 at 18:31. |
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2011-10-06, 18:31 | Link #2316 |
The Third Runner
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Since we're throwing around drafts: here's a draft for a part of a later chapter.
Of course its Ichika X Maya. Open the spoiler to read! Spoiler for IchikaXMaya:
And I think that is where I'll end it. Wait for the complete version! This going to be either Chapter 4 or 5!
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2011-10-06, 19:31 | Link #2318 | |
I am no one
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*Nosebleed* BLITZ! MEISTER! WE'LL TAKE CARE OF AT THE VERY LEAST ONE PATIENT OF HEAVY BLOOD LOSS DUE TO THE SUDDEN INCREASE IN NASAL CAPILLARY PRESSURE! NO! DON'T MIND ME! I CAN TAKE CARE MYSELF! CALL PARAMEDIC~! But seriously, VIVA TABOO RELATIONSHIP... *THUD*
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2011-10-06, 19:40 | Link #2320 | |
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