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1. Bash a character for illogical reason. 2. Unable to accept that their idol has flaws. *Loads sentry gun* Quote:
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My Ichika also have no problem hitting girls if they went overboard (just look at chapter 8)
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2011-10-06, 01:53 | Link #2262 |
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I just realize I contradicted myself, what with driving the 2 men nuts then not getting much out of them. I suppose we could substitute Fab and Max with someone else, I did have plans for 2 rather loud men to appear, namely the Prince of Brunei and a certain lucky fighter pilot.
And suddenly, shoujo manga OC reverse harem with an OC girl who doesn't notice them. Like Ichika. Lol! The I-type acts up regularly due to its complexicity and that complexicity combined with the inherent weakness of IS shields to plasma makes the I-type very vulnerable to large currents. If Irish and Kyuukai remotely detonate and drop a power grid tower on top of the unit, it would overload the system and force it into lock down to protect the pilot while it reboots. This would force Karon to use the manual override and emergency power to crawl out. But with minimal shields and no tactical systems online, she'd be much more vulnerable.
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2011-10-06, 02:46 | Link #2265 |
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Huh? I'm not talking to anyone, just mumbling by myself.
As for yer post, having Irish dropped whole power grid would be Crowning Moment of Awesomeness. Even Ichika would went HOLY SHIT for that stunt.
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2011-10-06, 02:50 | Link #2266 |
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@ Zero- I'll post the school festival and apology draft later, please read and review them.
Irish is also one of the best hackers in the story barring Tabane since the IS core functions imprinted in his mind as a kid he could probably distrupt one for a minute or two at most. @Meister- "Karon's speech backfires" Karon: Every IS has life. Irish: Life? Those things. Karon: That's right! Those cores are sentient, it's not their fault they get bad pilots. Irish: So what you're saying is that the IS have no choice if they kill? Karon: That's right! Irish: THen I'll kill the pilots then. *shrug* Karon: ...What? Irish: If the IS has no choice then the pilot's obviously to blame. Karon: Thats not wh- Irish: Thanks for telling me. Kill the user, not the machine. *Walks away* Karon: Hey wait! That's not what I meant! |
2011-10-06, 03:09 | Link #2267 | |
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Karon: Irish-kun! Don't dwell on the past, I understand your suffering- Irish: I have NO past and I'm not suffer anything except hatred for THEM-
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2011-10-06, 03:18 | Link #2268 |
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I think she'd reply, "Then what's so different between you and the people you intend to stop?"
I'm sure he agree that he's no different. The next part depends on whether you let Karon sense that shred of humanity in him. Like Accel had a side to him that Last Order sensed and he later proved to exist. Either way, she'd be pestering him for the rest of the day. @zero: When in doubt, c4. =D
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2011-10-06, 03:29 | Link #2271 | |
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Karon: If you kill them you would be just like them, and the neverending cycle of revenge would never, ever stop. *GLOMPS* Irish: The stop me... Karon: (Glimpse) Irish: One cannot achieve their dream if they stay quiet unmoving. Karon: And what exactly your dream is? Irish: Eradicating I.S. from the history, and myself... Karon: BAKA! *SMOOCH*
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2011-10-06, 03:42 | Link #2272 | |
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Besides, he's gynophobic so that smooch would make him faint. |
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2011-10-06, 03:49 | Link #2273 | |
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Karon intend to use the kiss to calm him, but he just faint in response...therefore, NO VIOLENCE involved in capturing Irish, after the SHIT Kyuukai pulled just to trace and follow him... that would be very ironic Then again, REAL Irish (the one you propose at first concept draft ever) would just stab her by the time she glomps him...
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2011-10-06, 03:59 | Link #2276 |
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@Zero- Irish really became more lighter and softer as I put more Ideas and wrote more drafts didn't he? Too bad i just kept making his backstory more depressing He still wont hesitate to kill people and pull out weapons in public but he does have less psychotic tendencies. The original concept was even DARKER than what I was using ;D
@Jak- Irish did a variation of this when he was a kid. Shortly after every kill he would pull out his knife and start stabbing all over the corpse while either laughing or muttering his brothers name. He stopped doing it after Joshua taught him not to, will include this in a flashback chapter. He will lapse back into this behavior at some points in the story, particularly when encountering phantom task members and those who abused him in the camp. |
2011-10-06, 04:09 | Link #2277 | |
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That was only a part of it and the rest will be shown later on. |
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2011-10-06, 04:33 | Link #2279 | |
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And as for the brutalizing; maybe my OCs would do that too when given the chance, but on the IS. Especially Eric. He would do exactly what's in these videos if possible. Brutalize Method 1 Brutalize Method 2 (This one had a chainsaw bayonet on the gun) Brutalize Method 3 and 4 (skip to the last 2 in the video.) |
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