2008-01-29, 12:09 | Link #19042 |
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You should see him in combat. He claims to hate fighting and isn't a fighter... but fifteen years playing dodge the dissaster on a daily basis has left him with reflexes and quick thinking that will impress even the Aces. (Not that he's got any chance of winning.)
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2008-01-29, 13:38 | Link #19045 | |
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He reminds me of the unit officer of our company back in the army... that man could yell at someone for an hour or two in a row. It was the most feared penalty in the entire company, as he was not only scary as hell with extremely large vocabulary, but his voice was powerful enough to be heard in the neighbouring company, even futher if the door to his office wasn't closed... ...but still, i don't believe anything on this world could make signum turn any shade of purple, atleast not a man with a large vocabulary and the mood to use it
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2008-01-29, 14:01 | Link #19046 | |
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Ah, Marilyn I imagine sounds like Wanda Sykes. AKA Stella:
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2008-01-29, 19:22 | Link #19047 |
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Name: Ryotaro Nogami TSAB Rank: 2nd Lieutenant Gender: Male Age: 21 Birthday: August 06 MC 054 Place of Birth: Administered Planet 67 Height: 175 cm Weight: 70 kg Eye Color: Brown Hair Color: Dark Brown Mage Rank: B+ Magic Type: Mid-Childa Magic Color: Grey Magic Specialization: Physical Combat Specialization: Close- and Mid-range Combat Device Name: Den-O Device Type: Prototype Multi-Intelligent Device Device Primary Structure: Belt and Pass Device Storage Form: Black card with a silver circle and side-ways lambda symbol Device Appearance Spoiler for For Length:
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2008-01-29, 20:42 | Link #19048 | |||||||
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To be honest, I was sorta working off Episode 16... in retrospect you're quite right: I was working from a flawed paradigm as regards to cyber warfare. *sighs* I guess this falls under did not do the reasearch. -_- And yes, the OFM were out and out cheating; from what I've read of Red Cell excercises they pretty much went and cheated their way through the excercises. (Although on their final excercise at Point Mugu, one of the SWAT opfor was actually standing on a Red Cell operator's hand as said SEAL was lying low in the grass. If he'd just happened to look down...) Quote:
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*sighs* Crap, another case of did not do the reasearch. This is getting rather embarrasing Maybe I should have used nape of the earth flying.... Quote:
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So, Pt.3 is repercussions from the hot dogging, Lurch's first appearance, and pretty much a massive deconstruction of the whole thing. ...i guess I'll forget about the fanservice I was going to write in Pt.3. Thanks for the comments, TK! Sometimes, I guess we all need a kick in the ass to get back on the right track. *salutes* ...I hereby proclaim TK's Super Robot Mecha to be the HaxBuster! <.<
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2008-01-29, 21:47 | Link #19050 | |
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A lot of nodding to the MW examples as I read. Pretty much spot on to Hayate's case in relating her to a missile mech as well.
Adding in my two cents, evasion and movement will be points worthy of improvement. Hayate most likely doesn't have the speed or skills in flying like Nanoha or Fate so that leaves her vulnerable to lighter and faster threats. Example in point, that places her as a assault-class missile mech, lots of firepower and armor but vulnerable to lighter and faster opponents. They might not be able to take her down fast but they will be able to harass and wear her down, running circles around while she has difficulty in even getting a decent shot in. Or buy enough time for a supporting teammate to finish the job as well. Having a idea in how to move and break out of pursuit will be more benaficial than standing your ground while slugging it out in a in-efficient manner. Well in short I do support the idea of rather than jamplugging weak points for a overall better performance, spending time and resources to reinforce and support the strong points will be and is a better choice. Well done character profile porting a Rider here despite the crack. I'll say a faster and simpler henshin BJ set-up sequence as a suggestion since I'm pretty sure no one wants to be caught half-ready in a sudden firefight. Quote:
--- In other news, seems like the author public group is up for those interested in joining.
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2008-01-29, 23:10 | Link #19051 | |||||||
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Hopefully that'll make the Ginga/Tais ship a lot more feasible. As for Yui, she resembles a female version of EVA01/Razengan Overlord, but due to a bug in the Wizard pack software, Yui has the ability to use her flexi-screws normally meant for mounting Wizard packs to cannibalize enemy technology on the fly, like stealing Orga's sensor-suite helmet for better head protection and targeting, or snatching the Type-3's flight system to go airborne... Yeah so given the right ingredients, Yui might be able to bring the 3rd Impact. Quote:
I think I prefer the idea of Scagletti-tan than Voldy-tan. But Voldy-tan-trap is Anything more is gonna be a dead giveaway. Ok, what I can say for now (havenm't really sorted it out yet), is that Aurion and the tech crew will be fighting out from the Southfort's machine shop, then meeting the Intel group before heading for the parked Warthogs. PS: Yes you MC nutcases made me drop my cute Jipnees for the awesome but less armored Warthogs. I hope you guys don't mind me adding some plates and 5" glass windows as NOT EVERYONE WEARS MJOLNIR! Quote:
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I like this guy!!! XD Now we're gonna really assemble our army of metal heroes... Not that I mind. More details please.
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2008-01-29, 23:22 | Link #19052 |
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Not much. A thread was put up to push for the group some time ago and seems it has been implemented. Just saw a mod with the group title today. It's free to join for all like the other groups like Artists and Graphic Designers.
For those remotely interested about any details, here's the thread. http://forums.animesuki.com/showthread.php?t=59991
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2008-01-29, 23:27 | Link #19053 | ||||
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As to standards of efficiency... -_- Haxbusting is showing that chapters 1 &2 of Joint Training are fail and showboating and designed to make them look like bigger pricks to RF6. Of course, one of the subthemes of JT was OFM/RF6 friction anyway... Quote:
Besides, real men are so gar, they can drive Warthogs and dance around the gunfire (lol, jk)
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Mitsuru? Well, yeah. Fuuka just didn't click with me somehow... Quote:
EXCUSE ME, Mr. Napoleon-Bonerhead. With your oh-so-superior-to-all memory, you should realize that I made Aurion MONTHS before I even heard of Negima! How can I base him of someone I don't even know? similarities notwithstanding, Aurion's attitude framework is entirely my own idea. That's it. Congratulations, Reiji, for once again unintentionally insulting me and my OC's. As a creator, I find your statement very derogatory. I'll say it this once, Aurion's, or any of my OCs' character attitudes are the element that I take pride in the most. If you say something like, "You just based him of this-and-that.", I'll take it very personally. I DO NOT WANT my more unique characters to be based on somebody by attitude because of copypasta. I may do copypasta for every other elements, but my characters' individual personalities are strictly my own(except when I do reference port-over characters like Brevis, Cressida, Vinson or Liana). When you see similarities with characters from other series, it's strictly coincidence since I NEVER thought of any character other than my own individual OC's when I made them. Hope my point got accross. And BTW, sorry for the lengthy spiel. I'm sure you meant no harm. But I won't keep silent if I get affronted either. Intentional or not. Quote:
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You have my deepest thanks for this lengthy piece of advice!: I'll concede on almost every point here. With this, I've decided to change some events in the main story. And believe me, they got better! Though I might be a bit jaded on a few points that might raise your eyebrow, since I'm introducing some off-chance situation training here... But since you mentioned it, I might just scrap the setting of that scenario and opt for a more fitting setting for that particular excerise in device system testing... And it's not like there're several closed-space fights in the entire story, really. But still, I think I might just put in some flair to it... hopefully. Thank you, Tk. The next scenario's conceptualization got several times clearer and easier to execute for me because of you verbal tirade! I'll get to work on it after my exam tomorrow. I've finally managed to crawl out that little idea-jam! Thanks again! Quote:
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2008-01-30, 00:28 | Link #19055 | |
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2008-01-30, 00:41 | Link #19056 |
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Well, no new posts and no backlog-busting from me, but I do like to spoil you people with new evil teaser of Tears of Northern Wind:
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So, yeah, in the latest chapter, Halcyon's defence program goes berserk and overtakes her, the Aces (actually, only Nanoha and Armstrong have the capability of fighting Halcyon) are in deep trouble before Hikki jumps in to save the day. He rescues Halcyon from the defence program monster's domination and renamed her. I can't guarantee when I will post the full chapter, but I'll make sure it happen. And, yeah. The hint of Hikki/Nanoha is there. |
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Backlog busting quickly, I better get my current chapter of SearcherS done quickly; I've lagged on it for too long.
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2008-01-30, 00:51 | Link #19058 | ||||||
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Indeed. snkkt. That's pretty hilarious XD YES. NEED MOAR KAMEN RIDER!!!!! Quote:
Speaking of Third Impact, my original ending for Alpha would involve a version of Third Impact (using Vivio as the Rei in this case), but I decided that the crack would outweigh the actual story so I dropped it. Quote:
Now, if you want Armor... as it so happens, I know what kind of armored mobile platform you need. Spoiler for Ladies Like Armored Plating:
Is it bad that I lol'd? In other news, Alpha, like the shorts before it, will have a soundtrack as well, using songs from Ace Combat 5: The Unsung War, Ace Combat 6: Fires of Liberation, Rebuild of Evangelion 1.0: You Are (Not) Alone, Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children and Halo 3. Furthermore, it will feature songs by Japanese artists AN Cafe, Nobodyknows+, Nana Mizuki, UVERworld, JAM Project, Utada Hikaru, and English songs by Breaking Benjamin, Avenged Sevenfold, Nightwish, Godsmack, and Fort Minor. And I'm changing the length. 26 Chapters as opposed to 52. A much lighter and focused read.
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2008-01-30, 01:29 | Link #19059 |
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Okay, I'm skipping around a bunch, but I wrote the very end of the battle I wanted to do. Essentially Crash was egged into a timed, team mock SURVIVAL battle with Nanoha and Fate. If his side could last the designated combat time with Nanoha and Fate, he'd win.
Crash's partner is the test vehicle E.D.I. 'Tinman.' (A, not yet introduced, STEALTH homage. Will be explained in detail when I get the intro scene written.) By the point I post below, EDI is already out of the fight. This fight sequence will be 'the VERY BEST' Crash can manage against the Aces. The end of the scene leads directly into the Angry Mechanic scene. Spoiler for Battle climax:
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