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Nikki FM · 2007-05-13, 18:12

Yeah, my friend and I decided to venture into making a little comic out of a story we created for fun. So far we only have two pages finished, but I'd like some critique. My friend, Becca, draws the characters. Then it's scanned and I do all digital cleanup, screentoning (which I've never even gotten close to doing before now) and text. The story's a combined effort. Anything you want to critique, we're ready for it.

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One thing I have realized is that the text is a little big. I'll probably size it down from here on.
Also, consider that we're only a couple 15 year old kids. Heh. We put all the time we can into this, which isn't much.

If you're interested, future pages will be posted on Becca's deviantART account.
http://eighty-eights.deviantart.com/

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Nikki FM Yuu-ichi! Yuu-ichi! Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Nova Scotia Age: 32	Destiny Forgotten Yeah, my friend and I decided to venture into making a little comic out of a story we created for fun. So far we only have two pages finished, but I'd like some critique. My friend, Becca, draws the characters. Then it's scanned and I do all digital cleanup, screentoning (which I've never even gotten close to doing before now) and text. The story's a combined effort. Anything you want to critique, we're ready for it. Page 1 Page 2 One thing I have realized is that the text is a little big. I'll probably size it down from here on. Also, consider that we're only a couple 15 year old kids. Heh. We put all the time we can into this, which isn't much. If you're interested, future pages will be posted on Becca's deviantART account. http://eighty-eights.deviantart.com/