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Old 2009-10-29, 18:18   Link #18121
Satashi
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OMG, yes! Mind you, "Spinel Heart" was one of my favorite Satashi fics anyway, but that was one of the funniest bits ever!!!!
which part? @_@ I've written so many I forgot what you're referring too? @_@

[EDIT] oh wait I remember now :3...how on earth did you remember that!?

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Old 2009-10-29, 19:17   Link #18122
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That Kitty Fate is making the wheels in my head turn.
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Old 2009-10-29, 19:33   Link #18123
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So apparently, all the recent images from Triangle Heart (thanks again, Raiser!) are enough to make my BtBR bunny feebly stir.

... Here's hoping it actually produces something sometime soon!
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Old 2009-10-29, 19:54   Link #18124
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which part? @_@ I've written so many I forgot what you're referring too? @_@

[EDIT] oh wait I remember now :3...how on earth did you remember that!?

[EDIT] Page claim for Kitty!Fate
I dunno about Dezo, but I remembered because I have an excellent memory for things I enjoyed. Spinel Heart was one thing I enjoyed.

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So apparently, all the recent images from Triangle Heart (thanks again, Raiser!) are enough to make my BtBR bunny feebly stir.

... Here's hoping it actually produces something sometime soon!
I can so picture Miyuki and Shinobu cheering you on in the sidelines, while Vivio's off in the corner muttering about how she's still a virgin. >.>

*fleez, but is shot*
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Old 2009-10-29, 20:01   Link #18125
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I can so picture Miyuki and Shinobu cheering you on in the sidelines, while Vivio's off in the corner muttering about how she's still a virgin. >.>

*fleez, but is shot*
You're the one who said it, RD, not me.

...

I didn't do it!
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Old 2009-10-29, 20:42   Link #18126
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Okay everyone, it's October 29th, and you all know what that means!

TWO DAYS BEFORE HALLOWEEN!

As I was reading around this thread, I couldn't help but notice that one genre that this board is lacking on is HORROR stories. While I do admit the awesome battle scenes that people write and some slasher stories *cough* Wallachia *cough* do contain suspense that makes me jump up and down with joy. I have come across many stories that deal straight up with the unexplained. Knowing this, I have made an attempt to inject some Halloween spirit into this board! Beware though, I'm afraid I still don't have the skills of dialogue writing down pat yet, so this story may seem more narrative than anything else. Don't be shy though! Read and Review please, and ENJOY!

P.S. I heavily recommend you play the music as you read, it really helps!

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The music helps, I'll certainly say that. Descriptions read fine, though there was some repetition in using Shamal's name when she or her would be fine, and there was some creepiness going on. I like it.
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Old 2009-10-29, 20:57   Link #18127
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The music helps, I'll certainly say that. Descriptions read fine, though there was some repetition in using Shamal's name when she or her would be fine, and there was some creepiness going on. I like it.
Yeah, I was kind of uncomfortable with that too, but I was more paranoid of using the word "she" and "her" TOO much. I guess I overcompensated. Thanks for the review though!

P.S, props to Satashi for coming up with the story title format!
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Old 2009-10-29, 20:59   Link #18128
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Yeah, I was kind of uncomfortable with that too, but I was more paranoid of using the word "she" and "her" TOO much. I guess I overcompensated. Thanks for the review though!
try referring to her as "the woman" "the girl" "the blonde" "the doctor" ect?
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Old 2009-10-29, 21:03   Link #18129
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And now another Lutecia-short! With Vivio! .... Those have been surprisingly rare from me, lately...

Anyhoo!

Spoiler for Winter Wind:


...

Hold on, this is fluff! What happened to my angst?!

Spoiler for Author's Notes:
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Old 2009-10-29, 21:14   Link #18130
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And now another Lutecia-short! With Vivio! .... Those have been surprisingly rare from me, lately...

Anyhoo!

Spoiler for Winter Wind:


...

Hold on, this is fluff! What happened to my angst?!

Spoiler for Author's Notes:
Aww, this is so cute! Good to see some fluff from you after all the ANGST you've written lately, young lady

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Spoiler for For RadiantBeam's eyes only.:
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Old 2009-10-29, 21:28   Link #18131
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And now another Lutecia-short! With Vivio! .... Those have been surprisingly rare from me, lately...

Anyhoo!

Spoiler for Winter Wind:


...

Hold on, this is fluff! What happened to my angst?!

Spoiler for Author's Notes:
<3 you.

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Old 2009-10-29, 21:30   Link #18132
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<3 you.

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You win an Internet cookie.

Haha, Vita probably just saved Lutecia's life right there. I <3 it, Shiny. :3
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Old 2009-10-29, 21:30   Link #18133
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And now another Lutecia-short! With Vivio! .... Those have been surprisingly rare from me, lately...

Anyhoo!

Spoiler for Winter Wind:


...

Hold on, this is fluff! What happened to my angst?!

Spoiler for Author's Notes:
.. I love you i-i

My day sucked, but reading this totally cheered me up The world needs moar ViCia!

Spoiler for Lutecia's double meaning:


Oh.. in random notes, when I was reaching the end, my mom entered in my room and asked me what I was doing and I was like... "eh... studying... ".. Good thing she doesn't know a word of english...

Edit: D: Got ninja'd by TheShinySword
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Old 2009-10-29, 21:36   Link #18134
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I love you shiny!
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Old 2009-10-29, 22:06   Link #18135
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And now another Lutecia-short! With Vivio! .... Those have been surprisingly rare from me, lately...

Anyhoo!

Spoiler for Winter Wind:


...

Hold on, this is fluff! What happened to my angst?!

Spoiler for Author's Notes:
Everyone else already guessed the line, so I won't bother . For some reason, I found Lutecia's comment about not being able to do that for Vivio very long due to their heights really adorable!

Loved the last exchange, but a bit of a question: if this is prior to their confessions, why would Nanoha be upset? Friends can do that kind of thing for each other (minus the UST though ).

And at #5 in the Author's Note....I took Vivio's growing taller than Lutecia as "so now we can tell physically who holds the whip in the relationship" J/K, I took that as symbolism that Vivio's increased in maturity beyond her years to be closer to Lutecia, who's much older.
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Old 2009-10-29, 22:08   Link #18136
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Loved the last exchange, but a bit of a question: if this is prior to their confessions, why would Nanoha be upset? Friends can do that kind of thing for each other (minus the UST though ).
Nanoha has UST radar when it comes to her little girl. Plus, she more or less knows that Vivio views Lutecia as more than a friend at this point.
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Old 2009-10-29, 22:18   Link #18137
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Nanoha: The ability to sense whenever my adorable little girl is even in the slightest danger from perverts who think she's cute. That is a mother's 6th sense. The power to know when my little girl likes someone is also an essential factor. After all *glint* I need to know who my prime targets are.
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Old 2009-10-29, 22:19   Link #18138
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Nanoha: The ability to sense whenever my adorable little girl is even in the slightest danger from perverts who think she's cute. That is a mother's 6th sense. The power to know when my little girl likes someone is also an essential factor. After all *glint* I need to know who my prime targets are.
Lutecia: ....
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Old 2009-10-29, 22:35   Link #18139
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Nanoha has UST radar when it comes to her little girl. Plus, she more or less knows that Vivio views Lutecia as more than a friend at this point.
LOL, I totally agree. My mother has this incredible skill of just knowing when I like someone, or when someone likes me .

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Nanoha: The ability to sense whenever my adorable little girl is even in the slightest danger from perverts who think she's cute. That is a mother's 6th sense. The power to know when my little girl likes someone is also an essential factor. After all *glint* I need to know who my prime targets are.
Vivio: ....I'm going to die a virgin

(@RadiantBeam: ............)
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Old 2009-10-29, 22:44   Link #18140
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I'm really sick right now but I had just enough strength to finish this one-shot. The idea came to me when I woke up this morning from a dream which was strange since I don't normally remember my dreams. When I do remember it's when I'm getting sick or when I'm already sick.

Again, I'm not feeling well so there WILL be mistakes. I will hopefully come back when I get better so until then, enjoy this one-shot from me.

Oh! Before I forget. This one-shot is dedicated to Satashi for updating a lot of AlternativeS for us. Keep up the good work! :3

Enjoy!

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