2013-12-21, 20:15 | Link #49401 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 17
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Ok, no Wing Blade. But Unlimited Blade Work?
... Nah, Chifuyu herself is way cooler than that. All we need to do is dyed her hair white and... Chifuyu: And What? ... Wr... Wrinkles (Run) I must say, Chifuyu could be quite a badass grandmother. |
2013-12-21, 20:52 | Link #49402 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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<----haven't watch it yet.
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2013-12-21, 20:54 | Link #49403 | |
~ Your Smile ~
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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At least I'm now certain in the direction I'm taking.
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2013-12-22, 00:29 | Link #49408 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Edit: My lack of vocabulary, words-acrobatic skill is showing. Wished that my brain is a little more developed when I took literature class for the first and the last time. More Edit: Even if that did not help improve my skill, at the very least I would know why people claim Shakespeare is one of the greatest writer when I can't make a head or tail out of Romeo and Juliet.
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2013-12-22, 00:55 | Link #49409 | |
Fear the Spear
Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Osaka Castle
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@age: I suggest you should get a Thesaurus. It would help you a lot.
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*sounds the battle horn* MINIONS! ASSEMBLE!
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2013-12-22, 01:37 | Link #49410 |
Some say I'm the Reverse
Join Date: Jul 2006
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You can type 2000 words an hour and it's all meaningless if you don't actually have a story to tell. Forget about word count at the moment and just cook up the story. Add bits and [ieces to it as you do. Sometimes you'll have an idea that doesn't work out but is too good to throw away. You can come back to that later in another story.
Get an outline of what you want but then toy with it. whatever works. Don't try to fill space with words that don't really do anything for you, the story, or the reader. Use descriptives, brign the reader into the story with it, but don't overdo it. EMERGENCY TEMPORAL SHIFT
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2013-12-22, 02:27 | Link #49411 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Thesaurus doesn't help if you don't known how to use the word in such a way that it helped you with the story(hence Words-acrobat). Believe it or not, written language actually have tone of voice.. Which, unfortunately, I found myself mostly "tone-deaf" when I am writing a story. The solution to rectify this problem is obviously by having more writing experience. = Loading tube 1 and 2 with Neutron torpedo
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2013-12-22, 02:44 | Link #49412 |
Some say I'm the Reverse
Join Date: Jul 2006
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Like right now. I've just written a few hundred words for my fic and stopped because NONE OF IT FITS in IS. It fits more in a Doctor Who episode---it's good and I like it, but it does NOT belong in IS (so there goes another idea down the drain).
It'll turn up elsewhere someday, be sure of that. But not in my Is fics. Or even my Muv-Luv fics. It might turn up in a Tokimeki memorial fic if I can figure out how to get it to somehow and somewhat work (possibly by kidnapping Russel T Davies)
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2013-12-22, 03:24 | Link #49413 | |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Yea I know it should be painful (with all the Mary Sue and what not) what once you know what others are used to reading, you can give them something new.
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2013-12-22, 03:31 | Link #49414 |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
Age: 17
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Done it! Finally update my brother's Code Geass fic! - Don't ask why he wasn't the one to do it. Now nothing stand between me and my OWN writing!
Saying about writing, I wonder why I never could writing in a normal way, but instead of it, my works are filled with a Stage Plays-Tone. |
2013-12-22, 06:35 | Link #49415 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Except for Writer block and your brother suddenly show up with another Story?
= I have been trying to create new interesting Epithet to describe the Loser and Slacker. Just in case anybody forget: Losers/Legacy Losers are males who devote their sex drive into progression of science. They wanted to left behind their achievement as a big "F-U" to others who leave their gene. The term came from the certain nation "A" President who called them the "Evolutionary Loser". Loser is more or less an American exclusive term while Legacy is more commonly used by Europe nation but they both means the same thing. = Slackers Exactly what is on the tin. Slackers are men who are extremely unmotivated to do anything, other than things which interest them. Unfortunately that include dating and marriage (because "they are a bunch of lazy bum who find it too much of a hassle". Not that it matter since their salary are not going to attract any female anytime soon.) Notice that the phrase is in quotation, unlike Loser, Slackers don't really mind having a girlfriend or marriage, they just find it not worth their time, effort or/and money. Slackers are very passionate about things which they find worth their time and effort but lack motivation to do everything else. Slacker has a policy of "it is not my problem until it will be/is my problem". Slackers are usually the ones with 2d girlfriends. According to them, 2d girlfriends gave as much love and support as real women (to illustrate how grave the male-as-second-class-citizen situation has actually become over the ten years) So why bother dating real woman when 2d girls provide the same thing but request less? = Common trait: Most Loser and Slackers hate other males, either out of jealously or just due to past history of being bullied(by male and female) for not being man enough. Both group hate each other due to having different approach to their failing in life. Legacy hate Slacker for not working hard to improve humanity while Slacker hate Losers because they(loser) don't hesitate to bash/insult/taking pot-shot at/shame them whenever possible and also for working hard but the latter part is mostly an excuse to keep up their slacker image. ====== Here is the Epithet I come up with for both. Note: These are joke on males' expense anyway so it's okay? How it work in story: E.g.: ???: I am a Loser (those who leave the greatest wealthy) if my achievement means nothing for the society, then it is worthless to me. Nemo: But I am a Slacker (Unchained) not a Loser (Dumb virgin). ???: Then show the world the combined power of Loser (those who choose to be legends) and Slacker (Lazy bum). Usually people in the story can tell if they are using the term positively or negatively. (think of the Epithet as tone when they used the words) Positive: Legacy: (Those who leave the great wealth), (Those who chose to be Legends), (they who make into history), (Flipper of Societal norm) Slacker (Unchained (by Society)), (those who choose their own path), (They who decide their own fate) Quote:
Common: Two-dimensional fetish perverts (most loser are not like that but not like people can tell the differences), Failure of life, Evolutionary losers, basement dwellers, Stupid nerds. Loser (Stupid Virgin), (Whiny Brats), (Sexless numb-skull), (Those who can't find a girl), (Whose who prefer Consolation Prize), (second prize). Slacker (Unmotivated), (Fail), (Couch Potatoes), (Pervert), (lazy bum) ====== Edit: How to tell which convention you are in (since they both held on the same day): Loser-con (Motto: Where great mind gathers): Well dressed men talking about complex stuff which can cause brain explode for normal people. No female are there because they don't wanted to be associated with them. Bring a reference book on quantum physics, you might have to use it. Events consist of exhibition and presentation on latest breakthrough in scientific research. Slacker-con (Motto: Bring a pillow): A small group of casually dressed guys who don't even comb their hair (or bath in extreme cases). You can either play computer/video/board game or just sleep through the day. It is a small event because most Slacker are basement dwellers prefer to "attend" the convention at home anyway.
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2013-12-22, 06:39 | Link #49416 | |
Lumine Passio
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Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
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2013-12-22, 06:54 | Link #49418 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Legacy (Saint/Sage of Wisdom) Slacker (Hermit/Monk) Dude, if you are male, it ought to because those groups are actually based on real life group of people. *cougH*MGTOW*cough*HerviboreMen*cough* Also the sad state of males which Ichika did not show the reader. Edit: What keeping Nemo from being true Slacker is due to his Gamer Spirit/TAMASHI. Possibility a trait which he share with a rival except that he doesn't give it a term. He describe the desire as a flame while his rival (Wapanese/Japanophile) just out-right call it out.
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2013-12-22, 07:40 | Link #49419 | |
Lumine Passio
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Location: Hanoi, Vietnam
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2013-12-22, 08:31 | Link #49420 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Some questions:
I take it that Ichika is wearing the jacket and also.... About Chifuyu's Closely and motherly eyes? I don't quite get what you are trying to say here: Is she being stern yet motherly or her normally stern eyes look soft?
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