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Tempest35 · 2014-04-01, 23:14

Aaaaaaaaaaand DONE!!!

*whew* Take it away Blitz. This should be good enough for FFNET.

blitz1/2 · 2014-04-01, 23:18

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Originally Posted by Zero-2

He's the "Messiah" of the Gundam franchise. What do you expect?

I could only think of 3 people who could beat Kira 1 on 1: Amuro, Heero and Setsuna.

BTT, what do you think is Tabane's true goal in introducing IS? What does she want to achieve in all of this?

If it's pilot wise, considering how hax Kira or how close he is to canon-sues, it's hard to beat Lacus dust.

Heero = no...No way. THe way he pilots is simply like a 1st generation biological CPU with the use of the Zero system but without the drug withdrawal symptoms.

Amuro is well...more like causing a shitstorm with UC elitists clashing with church of Jesus Yamato. (imo, Sven is more naturally skilled than those 2 in a better written manner)

Setsuna = Too hard to analyse.

@Tempest: YAY! Send it away! xD

ZeroXSEED · 2014-04-01, 23:21

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Originally Posted by Zero-2

BTT, what do you think is Tabane's true goal in introducing IS? What does she want to achieve in all of this?

There's no true goal

Just look at the latest volume, everything is because "LULZ"

blitz1/2 · 2014-04-01, 23:22

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

There's no true goal

Just look at the latest volume, everything is because "LULZ"

Lulz and yuetsu. She only does it because she believed it would make the world more "exciting"

Tempest35 · 2014-04-01, 23:28

Here you go. Should be able to DL it.

blitz1/2 · 2014-04-01, 23:33

The blue strikethroughs were from the initial ideas right? The one that we decided that we shouldn't have Chifuyu kill the men? And also, for the last few pages, are we going with the POV idea. Because using that structure, I would use the same for future chapters.

And after all your hard work, you don't want to include your own comments at the end of the page for the audience? xD

Fireminer · 2014-04-01, 23:35

What if... This is all a plan to cut Chifuyu from the society? You see, people only see the Brunhilde now. Ichika's flaws in both of his fighting and Byakkushiki will get him die someday.

And when that time has came, Tabane will be the last crutch for Chifuyu to live.

demino_hellsin · 2014-04-01, 23:35

I just realize how bad it would be to use a custom unit.

The protagonist uses his custom gunpla to escape from his deranged friends turned terrorists who attacked ISA. He wonder why his former friends didn't send their own custom units and instead sent out swarms of Geara Doga despite knowing those suits would never succeed. He later learns the error of his ways when he sees some of his normal friends on TV excitedly telling the news anchor his name, address and class registry as they recognized his one of a kind gunpla. Not only 1 but 2 units too so his identity can't be covered up.

ISA and the various governments get into a shitstorm to see who can get to him first

blitz1/2 · 2014-04-01, 23:36

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

What if... This is all a plan to cut Chifuyu from the society? You see, people only see the Brunhilde now. Ichika's flaws in both of his fighting and Byakkushiki will get him die someday.

And when that time has came, Tabane will be the last crutch for Chifuyu to live.

....I don't see the connection?

ZeroXSEED · 2014-04-02, 00:11

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

What if... This is all a plan to cut Chifuyu from the society? You see, people only see the Brunhilde now. Ichika's flaws in both of his fighting and Byakkushiki will get him die someday.

And when that time has came, Tabane will be the last crutch for Chifuyu to live.

Fireminer · 2014-04-02, 00:13

Duh! That is the ultimate form of yandereism! Turning the world upside down just to have your lover in the palms.

That, and Madoka even attempt to eat Ichika's flesh. Just for the sake of "Having him inside her".

Tempest35 · 2014-04-02, 00:22

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

The blue strikethroughs were from the initial ideas right? The one that we decided that we shouldn't have Chifuyu kill the men? And also, for the last few pages, are we going with the POV idea. Because using that structure, I would use the same for future chapters.

And after all your hard work, you don't want to include your own comments at the end of the page for the audience? xD

I got lazy mid-way and switched from Madoka's POV to a 3rd person. It's more of so you can see how I would do the POVs if we went that route. To help me out, I'd just need what the character actually says pre-written and I can flesh out thoughts and reactions.

As for what to do about the blue strikethroughs - they are not to be included of course, but I didn't want to just delete all of that writing.

It is just awesome to think of Chifuyu cutting through peons with Yukihira, turning their blood into vapor...

Muaahaahaahaahaa...Or you can include that part later in the afterward or a 'what could have been' if Chifuyu went all KILL KILL KILL...

Argh now I got the picture of Chifuyu as Satsuki and Madoka as Ryuuko... ...*nosebleeds*

Comments for the readers? Pfft, ain't nobody got time for that... :P I do need to get better at depicting the other girls though - writing about the Orimuras at this point is too easy for me.

Just tell them that I wave 'hi' as I type frantically on my other stories, lol.

Rokumonsen · 2014-04-02, 00:39

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

That, and Madoka even attempt to eat Ichika's flesh. Just for the sake of "Having him inside her".

That's a little bit lewd to me.

I just wish Izuro would do some backstories. Like a detailed narration of the two global conflicts before Alaska Treaty.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-04-02, 01:15

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Duh! That is the ultimate form of yandereism! Turning the world upside down just to have your lover in the palms.

That, and Madoka even attempt to eat Ichika's flesh. Just for the sake of "Having him inside her".

Now you're trying too hard

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Originally Posted by Zero-2

I just wish Izuro would do some backstories. Like a detailed narration of the two global conflicts before Alaska Treaty.

There ARE global conflicts? Sauce plox

Fireminer · 2014-04-02, 03:22

Question: What would you do if you are a male and Ichika is a female?

Houki: I'm just happy to be with Ichika.

Cecilia: Make Ichika my maid.

Rin: Open up a restaurant with Ichika.

Charlotte: Having children. Really cute little Ichika and Charlotte running around.

Laura: Marry Ichika in front of my unit.

Chifuyu: Laugh at the girl while hugging my Ichika-flesh pillow.

Madoka: Having Ichika inside me... Or is it the opposite?

wavehawk · 2014-04-02, 04:32

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Say, anyone have any idea how would an IS of India like?

- BuraKaWani combo?

Akisa Akimune · 2014-04-02, 07:06

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Duh! That is the ultimate form of yandereism! Turning the world upside down just to have your lover in the palms.

That, and Madoka even attempt to eat Ichika's flesh. Just for the sake of "Having him inside her".

@Fireminer...
Read that; https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9305821...hood-Redux-Ver

blitz1/2 · 2014-04-02, 08:12

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Originally Posted by Fireminer

Duh! That is the ultimate form of yandereism! Turning the world upside down just to have your lover in the palms.

That, and Madoka even attempt to eat Ichika's flesh. Just for the sake of "Having him inside her".

I would like a crossover between IS and pupa.

Fireminer · 2014-04-02, 08:41

Well, there is no catergory of Pupa on FF.net, so I can't do it.

ZeroXSEED · 2014-04-02, 09:11

Mirrorverse 7 progress 4300 words, 500-1500 more to go

Oh and thanks miner for the fixed CR chapter, already posted it.

2014-04-01, 23:14	Link #51441
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Aaaaaaaaaaand DONE!!! whew Take it away Blitz. This should be good enough for FFNET. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2014-04-01, 23:28	Link #51445
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Here you go. Should be able to DL it. __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2014-04-01, 23:33	Link #51446
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	The blue strikethroughs were from the initial ideas right? The one that we decided that we shouldn't have Chifuyu kill the men? And also, for the last few pages, are we going with the POV idea. Because using that structure, I would use the same for future chapters. And after all your hard work, you don't want to include your own comments at the end of the page for the audience? xD __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2014-04-02, 09:11	Link #51460
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Mirrorverse 7 progress 4300 words, 500-1500 more to go Oh and thanks miner for the fixed CR chapter, already posted it. __________________

2014-04-01, 23:35	Link #51447
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	What if... This is all a plan to cut Chifuyu from the society? You see, people only see the Brunhilde now. Ichika's flaws in both of his fighting and Byakkushiki will get him die someday. And when that time has came, Tabane will be the last crutch for Chifuyu to live.

2014-04-01, 23:35	Link #51448
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I just realize how bad it would be to use a custom unit. The protagonist uses his custom gunpla to escape from his deranged friends turned terrorists who attacked ISA. He wonder why his former friends didn't send their own custom units and instead sent out swarms of Geara Doga despite knowing those suits would never succeed. He later learns the error of his ways when he sees some of his normal friends on TV excitedly telling the news anchor his name, address and class registry as they recognized his one of a kind gunpla. Not only 1 but 2 units too so his identity can't be covered up. ISA and the various governments get into a shitstorm to see who can get to him first

2014-04-02, 00:13	Link #51451
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Duh! That is the ultimate form of yandereism! Turning the world upside down just to have your lover in the palms. That, and Madoka even attempt to eat Ichika's flesh. Just for the sake of "Having him inside her".

2014-04-02, 03:22	Link #51455
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Question: What would you do if you are a male and Ichika is a female? Houki: I'm just happy to be with Ichika. Cecilia: Make Ichika my maid. Rin: Open up a restaurant with Ichika. Charlotte: Having children. Really cute little Ichika and Charlotte running around. Laura: Marry Ichika in front of my unit. Chifuyu: Laugh at the girl while hugging my Ichika-flesh pillow. Madoka: Having Ichika inside me... Or is it the opposite?

2014-04-02, 08:41	Link #51459
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Well, there is no catergory of Pupa on FF.net, so I can't do it.