2008-03-12, 13:18 | Link #2262 |
Sleep beneath the flowers
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Lording above all of humanity >;3
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We totally need more WoW-themed randomness amirite? And I wish I could foreshadow effectively. Dunno how long until I update anything on my end either. I just... Haven't been able to get motivated to write... *sigh* EDIT: I still feel tempted to play the WoW card game
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2008-03-12, 14:02 | Link #2263 | ||
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2008-03-12, 15:08 | Link #2264 | |||
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And the card game is fun :3 Quote:
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Spoiler for NINJA!!!:
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2008-03-12, 15:14 | Link #2265 | ||
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They just don't have tournaments for it and my brother wouldn't wanna play with me so... @__@ Quote:
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2008-03-12, 15:15 | Link #2266 | |
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Anyway, on topic: This is an idea for a small series of shorts. Fate's POV, canon timeline, senior year in school. Spoiler for Week, part 1:
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2008-03-12, 15:46 | Link #2267 | ||
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Had a feeling that the RH one was going to be a tease as soon as we realise that the door was locked lol. Was still a good read though, and I can just imagine how flustered Fate would be after New idea sounds good, except that Nanoha sounds a little bit too upbeat still for someone who is supposedly shocked. Still a good premise though me thinks editness: no. I take that back. She can't really do much else in that situation but smile to try comfort her. |
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2008-03-12, 16:45 | Link #2268 | |
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The new series of shorts interests me but I feel like I've seen the premise before (Fate (sometimes Nanoha) confesses she's gay and likes Nanoha (sometimes Fate) Nanoha (or Fate) has to think about it) so it's going to be what comes next that decides it for me. |
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2008-03-12, 17:21 | Link #2269 | |
sitting on NxF bench
Join Date: Jan 2008
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looking forward to more little offtopic: did I read here somthing about an IRC -channel for Outer Cadia or I'm imagine things? when I don't imagine things, then I ask next, is there also an IRC channel for the FF-thread? |
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2008-03-12, 17:24 | Link #2270 |
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There is an IRC for the OC-thread, yes. It was done to keep the random chatter that has a tendency to apear in the thread to a minimum, and avoid that the risk of the thread being locked for off-topicness. I myself don't use it, can't spare the time, really. But seeing how the Fanfic thread is far less... ehm... sensitive to random chatter, I don't think its really necissary, don't you?
Besides, I'd hate to think people will start voting on my fics on a source I have no access to. |
2008-03-12, 18:07 | Link #2271 | |
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and IRC is always fun*I'm on a chanel, only occupied by me, don't found others or they don't have time or feel like join the channel --> more fore me^^* btw can you tell me the data for the channel? #name #which server thank you |
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2008-03-12, 18:31 | Link #2272 | ||
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It's the OC channel, so please show respect to the topics discussed and remember that you are a guest in their channel ^^ but have fun!
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2008-03-12, 18:49 | Link #2273 | |
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Now I have to find out, how it works, but I thought it would be only to add one channel*sigh*(I use atm a IRC script, therefore I asked^^) it seems, nobody can get everything |
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2008-03-12, 19:26 | Link #2274 | |
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LOL And be careful, the discussions we Outer Cadians have can be quite...intense :3
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2008-03-12, 20:49 | Link #2275 |
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Aheheh.. sorta done a one-shot
First time at it so I'm not really sure how well I done. I guess you could call it romance, but more along the lines of friendship.. omg this thing is hard to place haha. Anyway, how bout giving it a read and letting me know what you think? :3 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4128040/1/ |
2008-03-12, 22:23 | Link #2276 | ||||
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and like this sentence, the parts where Nanoha recalled what Yuuno told her, there were a lot of 'told's and 'that' which made it a little difficult to read and no doubt for Nanoha to say. so might want to consider changing things up a bit more with sentence structure variations and maybe trim down a bit on what Yuuno said. or not have Nanoha recount everything Yuuno said and just talk about her feelings/reflections. ok. done with the criticisms. I like your way with words, especially in the descriptions. The entire piece flowed nicely using Fate's POV. And seems like Yuuno has some interesting insights into Nanoha’s feelings. Though it might be the NanoFate goggles again. Overall, this was a pleasant one shot to read. Had a very natural slice-of-life kind of feel to it. Anyways, I hope people won’t hate me for saying this but since Fate and Nanoha is together in most fics, it seems like there’s temptation to give Hayate someone too. But without build up, I personally have trouble seeing Hayate with Yuuno. They barely even talked to each other throughout StrikerS and A’s. What’s wrong with leaving Hayate single? Last edited by Kourin; 2008-03-12 at 22:48. |
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2008-03-12, 23:09 | Link #2277 | |||||
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2008-03-13, 00:33 | Link #2278 | |
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And ah yeh, I guess that I had planned to confused people a little about the confession things. Felt like giving people a tease lol Regarding the Yuuno x Hatate thing though, in this fic I found it necessary for Yuuno to have someone he supposedly liked to increase the emotional impact on Nanoha. The thing is though that I had originally thought about putting Chrono, but then scrapped the idea because it seemed a bit random and hilarious in my mind, and it was meant to be a serious atmosphere. And so, with out many serious candidates otherwise, except pulling an OC out of my butt, I decided it would have to be Hayate. Not only is she the right age, she was in an ideal kind of relation to Nanoha for the implications to affect her... and I'm rambling again. lol Anyway, thank you very much for your critique, it is very much appreciated. I'm glad you found my awkward writing enjoyable haha |
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2008-03-13, 01:36 | Link #2279 | ||
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P.D. If i have Yunno in front of me, I strike him right in his Face
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