2012-06-08, 05:23 | Link #32042 |
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Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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Well, personal I.S. are either Super Prototype or Ace custom. From what I gather from canon, giving hand-held weapon is easy, it's changing body parts and function that's very complex (just look at Kanzashi). So yes, it probably quite rare, if even allowed.
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2012-06-08, 09:23 | Link #32048 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Then write the place. Time can be said, but it'd be odd for characters to go:
"Well, here we are, inside the hot springs situated at the Inn in Kyoto at the mountains for our fieldtrip at midnight." "Dude, we're here with you, no need to tell us."
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2012-06-08, 09:45 | Link #32050 |
~ Your Smile ~
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Join Date: Dec 2008
Location: 346Pro
Age: 38
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*unburrows*
Heyz. Just popping in and out. Diablo 3 and school work eating all my time. My latest grab is about that SHOOTiNG ST@R movie I wanted to write. Just went back and managed to dig out all the posts relating to that topic and dumped it into a google drive file. Maybe when the games lighten, I may find my inspiration, and I will return...! Until then, me lurker. *reburrows*
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2012-06-08, 09:46 | Link #32051 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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People really don't care about the country. You might as well label it as generic "Countryside", "City", "Wasteland" etc etc.
In FI I labeled the flashback as "French Countryside" and no one cared. @ Meistah - Everybody loves Diablo:/
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2012-06-08, 10:15 | Link #32055 |
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Look, I'm gonna tell it to you straight: 99% of people don't care about that. What they care about is dialogue, how detailed a story is, description of the ongoing scene etc etc. No one will care if you write the most detailed and epic description of the setting if the story is poorly made or so underdetailed you can't tell if the characters are happy, sad, kissing, fighting or whatever.
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2012-06-08, 12:10 | Link #32057 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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I already did, you stubborn ass:/ Did you somehow miss the post that say you can make the location vague or just have the character mention where he is if needed? Just choose a damn location and be done with it. Unless you're planning to have the story be significantly altered or have specific areas like Tokyo tower play a role, just say "City in Japan" and be done with it.
Off topic: Oh haha, someone put Zero x Eratas in the tags:/ Real nice you guys.
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2012-06-08, 14:04 | Link #32058 | |
the "Z" is for "Zeta"
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Location: Portugal
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It might prove to be useful reference material Never touched it, and probably never will. In my case, my time is being consumed by Sword Girls, Accel World, Sword Art Online (coming very soon), and...other things Ah, so busy and yet, so unorganized
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2012-06-08, 14:28 | Link #32059 |
電波オタク
Join Date: Jun 2012
Location: Slytherin Common Room
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Uh...hey. I'm pretty new here, but I thought this thread seems awesome and I hope that I can get some help on this. (I apologize if I just crash in at the wrong moment and break the ongoing conversation above.)
For quite some time I've been jotting down loads of notes and plans for this IS fanfic I want to write, but just didn't have the time to really sit down and spill out the story. Luckily, I managed to get a collaborator to share a bit of my burden, and for now I only uploaded one prologue chapter. I guess it won't hurt to share the fruits of our discussions here to gather more opinions that I and the collab might have missed out, or correct any misconceptions I have made. I only watched the anime and I didn't really read the light novels/manga, so most of the plot and stuff will be heavily based on the anime and very, very little connection with the light novel/manga. ^^; The title of my fanfic is "Byakuya no Tsubasa" (lit. "Wings of the Midnight Sun"). Spoiler for Summary:
Spoiler for OC Profile:
I'm sorry for the huge chunks of text... I've seen numerous IS fanfics that feature at least one male IS pilot, so I thought maybe I can veer off this somewhat cliche idea with a non-IS pilot male OC. Anyway, I know my story idea sounds kinda (for the lack of a better word) ...ridiculous? ^^; Sadly I have very limited knowledge on mecha stuff, so I try to make up for that with the Eden idea. Hope no one thinks too harshly about me on this. Having said that, I did try to create a new weapon for Ichika... Spoiler for Ichika's New Weapon (?):
So...yea. ^^; Any constructive comments or suggestions of how I can improve are much appreciated. Also, please pardon any grammar mistakes/language errors - truthfully speaking, English isn't my first language...
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