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crazyhorse · 2008-07-03, 23:59

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Originally Posted by Endrance

Heres another i just started on i cant decide on which to use....

This one..?

or this one?

C+C greatly appreciated

First one, yeah the render is too blurry and the animation is jerky, like the snow goes up and down instead of falling to the ground. Second one I think if you should put like an orangey overlay over the render or something to make it blend more into the background because right now it just looks too plastered on. I love the backgrounds of both though

Evil Rick · 2008-07-04, 00:22

Seasons uh? Okay, now it's time to get to work

KholdStare · 2008-07-04, 01:00

Well, might as well up this up for thoughts.

Comments?

Evil Rick · 2008-07-04, 01:02

This is my first entry:

C&C?

KholdStare · 2008-07-04, 01:15

Because your background (which is really pretty) is so smooth and blended, the characters (er...Nanoha and Vita?) just stand out like they're being pasted on there. Maybe you should reduce contrast and sharpness on the characters at least, but I can see this working out.

Coe · 2008-07-04, 03:17

I'm kinda leaning twords something like this.

KiNA · 2008-07-04, 03:23

Its oversized tho ^^

Coe · 2008-07-04, 03:24

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Originally Posted by KiNA

Its oversized tho ^^

I know >< I'm trying to fix it, thats just a rough edit, lol.

KiNA · 2008-07-04, 03:25

Bunnies gonna eat them if you keep them in the signature slot ^^

SweetSpring · 2008-07-04, 04:34

(this is not my final) guys what do you think about this? (C&C appreciated)

konstargirl · 2008-07-04, 06:18

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Originally Posted by bigdave

lol yup i was trying to get the word out but i guess i didn't do such a good job ^^;;

Well in that case I'll join. Well hope you find members. Say are you like doing a touhou one too because seems like some of use might do a touhou one this time too. Not saying all though.

@Endrance: I think the fall sig is find without animation. Just change the quality of the text because the back and test quality looks quite poor.

I really like the first one though.

@SweetSpring: Keep it like that.

I don't think it needs any fixing up.

Faeyice · 2008-07-04, 14:48

^Original.

^Modified version.

Which one is better? C&C please. <3

Eps~ · 2008-07-04, 14:59

Prefer the second one ^_^ The only thing i would modify is the font, Autumn can't be seen well. Other than that, it's splendid.

crazyhorse · 2008-07-04, 15:04

The second one is nice, but I feel that it could use less sparkle/glowy thingys. They seem too clustered on the right.

Cyz · 2008-07-04, 17:05

My take on the theme.....hm, spring?

^ Winter?

SweetHoney · 2008-07-04, 17:44

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Originally Posted by Cyz

My take on the theme.....hm, spring?

^ Winter?

I like the winter one better

crazyhorse · 2008-07-04, 18:30

Me likes the winter one too. It gives off a really calm feeling

Although I feel that the spring one is more original...decisions, decisions..

Eps~ · 2008-07-04, 18:37

Tough choice, but I'll have to go with spring, the colous are beautiful

Marina · 2008-07-04, 18:43

Spring! I vote spring! Reasons are posted on your thread Cyz

SweetHoney · 2008-07-04, 20:06

Final Entry

2008-07-04, 00:22	Link #62
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	Seasons uh? Okay, now it's time to get to work __________________

2008-07-04, 01:00	Link #63
KholdStare ISML Technical Staff Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Phoenix, AZ Age: 35	Well, might as well up this up for thoughts. Comments? __________________ Kholdy's MAL, ISML Chat, Saimoe Blog, Saimoe Wiki

2008-07-04, 01:02	Link #64
Evil Rick Black Dragon Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...	This is my first entry: C&C? __________________

2008-07-04, 01:15	Link #65
KholdStare ISML Technical Staff Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Phoenix, AZ Age: 35	Final Entry Because your background (which is really pretty) is so smooth and blended, the characters (er...Nanoha and Vita?) just stand out like they're being pasted on there. Maybe you should reduce contrast and sharpness on the characters at least, but I can see this working out. __________________ Kholdy's MAL, ISML Chat, Saimoe Blog, Saimoe Wiki Last edited by KholdStare; 2008-07-04 at 20:21.

2008-07-04, 03:17	Link #66
Coe Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Pennsylvania Age: 33	I'm kinda leaning twords something like this. Last edited by Coe; 2008-07-04 at 03:31.

2008-07-04, 04:34	Link #70
SweetSpring Garden of Tsubaki Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2006	(this is not my final) guys what do you think about this? (C&C appreciated)

2008-07-04, 14:48	Link #72
Faeyice it's animal, unbelievable Graphic Designer Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: U.S.A	^Original. ^Modified version. Which one is better? C&C please. <3 __________________

2008-07-04, 14:59	Link #73
Eps~ Busy busy busy Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Slovenia Age: 36	Prefer the second one ^_^ The only thing i would modify is the font, Autumn can't be seen well. Other than that, it's splendid. __________________ My Graphics Workshop

2008-07-04, 15:04	Link #74
crazyhorse Procrastinator Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: California Age: 33	The second one is nice, but I feel that it could use less sparkle/glowy thingys. They seem too clustered on the right. __________________ Click to Visit my Works

2008-07-04, 18:30	Link #77
crazyhorse Procrastinator Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: California Age: 33	Me likes the winter one too. It gives off a really calm feeling Although I feel that the spring one is more original...decisions, decisions.. __________________ Click to Visit my Works

2008-07-04, 18:37	Link #78
Eps~ Busy busy busy Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Slovenia Age: 36	Tough choice, but I'll have to go with spring, the colous are beautiful __________________ My Graphics Workshop

2008-07-04, 20:06	Link #80
SweetHoney ~Nanchatte Renai Scanlator Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Australia Age: 30	Final Entry __________________ Last edited by SweetHoney; 2008-07-11 at 23:10.