2013-04-22, 14:14 | Link #41723 |
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[Sighs] Thanks a lot for the help guys...
TWSIF: the angel with metal wings A new crossover with Silent Hill. |
2013-04-22, 14:27 | Link #41724 | |
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See? I said too much Tech/Lore gushing is bad, this first chapter is nigh unreadable (I made this mistake in the past too). No, it's not even a chapter, it should be something around a reference put on the end of a fic. Or something
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2013-04-22, 14:36 | Link #41726 |
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Yeah, I was specifically referring to that fic, not you. Sorry if you got it wrong.
As for the new arc, it started with CC met the OC, as I understand it. It's a good time to switch POV, I believe, and why it's possible to pull it. Unless you're referring to the new novel...
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2013-04-22, 14:45 | Link #41727 |
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Did you even finish reading the first arc?
Anyway, yes, I'm taking Vol. 8 into consideration now that it'll be out later this week. Hopefully the translation will follow soon. Other than that, I originally planned to have the 2nd arc tie into Vol. 5-7. Or 8 now... Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2013-04-22 at 15:03. |
2013-04-22, 15:02 | Link #41728 |
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Then you jump directly to scene where Kaoruko OF ALL PEOPLE is involved.
I can't help you if you didn't ask CLEARLY what you want, and give me the CLUE where and what to talk about, and the way you respond to my answer not helping at all. If you want me to read your fic first so no one can read spoileriffic part on this forum, fine, I'll finish it and post something as soon as possible, expect distilled review very soon.
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2013-04-22, 17:49 | Link #41733 |
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@Jak
I apologize, I rarely check an author's profile and went straight for the fic, so I can't tell if there's anything changed. Anyway, I've read the Silverbacks from chapter 8. I can tell it's a sufficiently well paced climax, the closure is ended with Silverbacks realized their limitation and decided to work alongside CC. And then Tabane kick in, much like in novel. Again, what I can find here, you can put some focus on canon characters, while keeping the usual progress, slowly revealing the boys' backstory and whatnot. I don't know what turned you off during V8 run, but safe to say you always have the freedom to make a slight change, that's if you really want to. @ Tempest Yeah, I.S. characters hardly have a good childhood. :/ Between the bullying, the kidnapping, and the shit that happens in junior high, they both changed a lot. And the Orimura Twins is hardly the worst, Laura don't even KNEW what is a proper childhood because she never had one. Ichika is genki boy back then, and Madoka is extremely shy. Post kidnapping and during school crisis, they're both bitter and cold, the only difference is that Ichika have it inside as inner demon he consorted with, whereas Madoka is wearing it as exterior mask to keep herself from looking vulnerable.
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2013-04-22, 17:55 | Link #41734 | |
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2013-04-22, 17:56 | Link #41735 |
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Yeah, or at least tolerate them so long as the CCs don't get in their way.
Spoiler: I also remember that Tezla never actually want to put entire I.S. system down, just specifically Phantom task
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2013-04-22, 18:24 | Link #41738 |
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...again, anime logic never fails. Giving such OP powered suits to children who have been traumatized in one way or the other and expect them to be 'good'. ... no wonder Chifuyu has such 'idiots' in her class, lol
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2013-04-22, 18:29 | Link #41739 | |
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As for Tezla's "propaganda", all I can say is that it's just a front. And what I asked about my profile, I meant the avatar. My bad. |
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2013-04-22, 18:38 | Link #41740 |
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@ Tempest
Really, it's easy to forget considering how little Izuru actually put on exploring that idea in favor of Ichika's idiocy and everyone's different kind of idiocy, blend it with very stereotypical harem formula and shonen hijink. He's damn well backstory maker and world builder, which is the reason why I liked I.S. despite all my complains. So many thing can be done in fanfiction that Izuru has yet to explore, he already provided all kind of ideas that we, fanfic writers, could easily expand. @ Jak Sure thing
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