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ganbaru · 2009-04-02, 12:27

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Originally Posted by Adrestea

Shame you couldn't use the paper eating girl, I really liked those. D:
Out of the above, I prefer the first, something doesn't look right with the rest. Maybe you could try adding a texture or two to the background to make it look a bit more interesting, Belladonna has a few I think might fit.

Also, what program are you using? I think I know why your text always turns out pixely, and how to fix it, but I'll need to know what you're using to be sure.

I don't have anything yet, I really want to enter this month, but at the moment I have zero motivation. D:

The ''paper eating girl'' sig are more like my everyday sig than SOTM sig so it's maybe a good thing. For the texture thing, I really don't know what my program ( Adobe Photoshop Element7) can do for this.

Honestly I don't know yet if I will keep going on one of those way. I might try to go toward キノの旅, there is alot of tought peoples

Spoiler for spoiler from the novel:

and there is even more good text, but on the visual side, it could be more difficult.

Ice Climbers · 2009-04-02, 12:43

Coke counts right D:?

//hides back into his lair

ganbaru · 2009-04-02, 12:45

Again the trick of the bar ?

Usami Haru · 2009-04-02, 14:05

Yes? No?

Not AS Safe though D: (Animating sigs for Animesuki is frustrating

)

vandakiara · 2009-04-02, 14:48

ok based on everyone's feedback *thank you so much everyone ~<3* I've made a v4 of the moo sig x)

working on a v2 of the other sig too... although I think the moo sig is the one I'm going to submit in the end x)

ok now, v2 of the Disgaea sig:

feedback is much appreciated

Endrance · 2009-04-02, 15:18

i wonder if this counts.

LKK · 2009-04-02, 17:31

Version 1.

I was going for a hot, lazy summertime feel. I don't want it to look busy, but I'm worried that it's too plain nonetheless. C & C?

Ice Climbers · 2009-04-02, 17:54

Quote:

Originally Posted by ganbaru

Again the trick of the bar ?

What do you mean by again

I only did this once before lol, not like its a regular thing

Faeyice · 2009-04-02, 18:02

Edit: Not sure if I'm going to have enough free time this month to work on this anymore, so I'm just going to put this as my Final Entry.

Gah, I spent wayyyyyyyyyy too much time on this. 8D; Originally, the text *did* say 'à la mode' and under that, it said 'SOTM 09'. ....But, one of the effects completely screwed it up... ;__; C&C would be really appreciated.

Evil Rick · 2009-04-02, 20:28

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Originally Posted by Katocchi

Yeah that failed ..

EDIT : add Text .. :3

Don't like the text's font either the color D:

Quote:

Originally Posted by White Manju Bun

A theme with BAD ASS GUYS AND NO KAMINA-SAMA YET?!?!

ahem...ok vers one

C&C?

Not bad but looks like if something were missing :?
I mean, the area on the left side looks a bit empty, maybe that's the perfect place for the add of a text

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Originally Posted by ganbaru

@Cierra exept boosting the cuteness , I don't see what you coyld do more.
@Katocchi The text feel strange.
@White Manju Bun you got plenty of room for a text

I am not sure about keepping my sig in the same way it was Wich bone is best? C&C appreciated.

Edit I forgot those 2:

None

ganbaru, insteda of just pasting a simple image as bg, try to create a bg that focus the atention on the render, the ones you picked distrac the atention a lot

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

Coke counts right D:?

//hides back into his lair

Although it looks good and looks creative there is a problem that I'm seing

I don't see food, I don't see a though girl and I don't see any fluffy creature

Maybe they're there but I canot see them

Quote:

Originally Posted by Usami Haru

Yes? No?

Not AS Safe though D: (Animating sigs for Animesuki is frustrating

)

The idea of the animation is hrad to catch, well, at least I don't catch anything >.<

Quote:

Originally Posted by vandakiara

ok based on everyone's feedback *thank you so much everyone ~<3* I've made a v4 of the moo sig x)

Looks really cute! Kawai! XD

Quote:

ok now, v2 of the Disgaea sig:

feedback is much appreciated

I still sense it pale and not very atractive, I stick with the moo one

Quote:

Originally Posted by Endrance

i wonder if this counts.

Yeah, though guy and girl plus fluffy creatures

The animations is good, the problem I see is that kind of white line who's separating the render of the 2 characters from the animated ones, it doesn't look good

Quote:

Originally Posted by LKK

Version 1.

I was going for a hot, lazy summertime feel. I don't want it to look busy, but I'm worried that it's too plain nonetheless. C & C?

The text is not that good ;?

Quote:

Originally Posted by Faeyice

Gah, I spent wayyyyyyyyyy too much time on this. 8D; Originally, the text *did* say 'à la mode' and under that, it said 'SOTM 09'. ....But, one of the effects completely screwed it up... ;__; C&C would be really appreciated.

To be honest, I cant's see what's there

Marina · 2009-04-02, 21:06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Although it looks good and looks creative there is a problem that I'm seing

I don't see food, I don't see a though girl and I don't see any fluffy creature

Maybe they're there but I canot see them

To clear up confusion, she's holding a coke drink, so the entry is valid

Katocchi · 2009-04-02, 21:34

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adrestea

I'll no doubt get shot for this, but I prefer it without the text. If you keep the text, you might want to work on the wording, 'anyone don't want to play with me' sounds a bit odd, maybe remove the don't and keep it as 'anyone want to play with me' and add a question mark.

I put that words because She's cry .. thanks for the input .. I'll change soon .. :3

Evil Rick · 2009-04-02, 22:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by Marina

To clear up confusion, she's holding a coke drink, so the entry is valid

The thing in her hand is a coke?

It doesn't look like

I though that it was a... uhmmm... never mind

Katocchi · 2009-04-02, 22:45

How about now ??

Evil Rick · 2009-04-03, 00:19

Quote:

Originally Posted by Katocchi

How about now ??

Looks a LOT better

KholdStare · 2009-04-03, 00:37

Quote:

Originally Posted by Solace

It's cuter when Solace speaks in third person.

Wow...this post made me...never mind.

KiNA · 2009-04-03, 02:29

:x

1st try .. 1st version.

Evil Rick · 2009-04-03, 02:43

Quote:

Originally Posted by KiNA

:x

1st try .. 1st version.

Good thing you showed the icecream... otherwise my twisted mind would be visualising other... things

Ehemm... the animation is really good, but the text's font doesn't convince me at all, looks to rude for an icecream if you get my point

KiNA · 2009-04-03, 02:45

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Good thing you showed the icecream... otherwise my twisted mind would be visualising other... things

Hentai yaroo~

yea.. thats the idea..

And the font was just a temporary holder until I can think of more ecchi quote

.. and I still got 20Kb to burns

Cierra · 2009-04-03, 02:59

Quote:

Originally Posted by KiNA

:x

1st try .. 1st version.

and I was just about tryin a second draft with Moka >.<
I loved the angle u picked and I'm sure that u gonna fix the text too since u have 20kb to burn

2009-04-02, 12:43	Link #62
Ice Climbers Retired Graphic Designer Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Princeton University	Coke counts right D:? //hides back into his lair __________________

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ganbaru books-eater youkai Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Betweem wisdom and insanity	Again the trick of the bar ? __________________

2009-04-02, 15:18	Link #66
Endrance ~Rock ☆~ Graphic Designer Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In The Farplane	i wonder if this counts. __________________ Endrance's Sigs

2009-04-02, 17:31	Link #67
LKK Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Virginia, USA Age: 62	Version 1. I was going for a hot, lazy summertime feel. I don't want it to look busy, but I'm worried that it's too plain nonetheless. C & C? __________________ Avatar: Hazuki of Natsuyuki Rendezvous / Signature: flowers from Natsuyuki Rendezvous

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Faeyice it's animal, unbelievable Graphic Designer Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: U.S.A	Edit: Not sure if I'm going to have enough free time this month to work on this anymore, so I'm just going to put this as my Final Entry. Gah, I spent wayyyyyyyyyy too much time on this. 8D; Originally, the text did say 'à la mode' and under that, it said 'SOTM 09'. ....But, one of the effects completely screwed it up... ;__; C&C would be really appreciated. __________________ Last edited by Faeyice; 2009-04-03 at 19:07.

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Usami Haru Mr. Broshido Graphic Designer Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Chile Age: 31	Yes? No? Not AS Safe though D: (Animating sigs for Animesuki is frustrating )