2011-11-29, 05:36 | Link #10381 |
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@ Hawke - It's just that she exhibits signs of one in the story you have: Disregard of authority, willing to steal or hack to get what she wants, mad scientist tendencies and a constant snarker. She looks like a type 2 (Snark knight) anti-hero so far, and that's not counting what Meister said about her. Tony was more of a type 3 (Good is not nice) in his appearances.
@ Senpai - I'll just have her say the reason's personal in Shadow. It's not like anyone has the guts to force her to spill or anything. Though that'll start rumors, she probably wouldn't care and neither does Irish. Utsuho and kanzashi are gonna have headache's though Charles gender bends in yours but she's still a female in Shadow. The explanation is the lack of time they had and they couldn't afford to have her recuperate for months after the operation. I still need to know if she can justify it as an injury or not since I've seen hard bandages before.
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2011-11-29, 05:40 | Link #10383 | |
I am no one
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EDIT: Cecilia and Rin, the first is resentment and the second is feeling of superiority
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2011-11-29, 05:42 | Link #10384 |
Some say I'm the Reverse
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Well, Ange didn't go through the same thing her dad did, so she's still got a lot of growing up to do. If you recall, Tony wasn't exactly an angel before his accident (depending on which version you're using--Ultimate, classic, movie, animated, etc).
One other thing: Ange is generally disinterested in guys. Her interest in Ichika doesn't come easy, definitely...
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2011-11-29, 05:49 | Link #10385 |
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@ Stratos and Senpai - I thought of Irish's concept before I knew of Jak's OC's. Besdes, Irish doesn't hate women, he hates IS pilots. You don't see him acting like a misogynistic bastard in the story and he says males would be no better than the females if they were the pilots.
Besides, only Jak's OC's seem to hate women in general and they have excuses. EDIT: Only Cecilia shows signs of this in the story. Females in canon seem to think of their superiority casually as seen when Ichika asked Cecilia about the Handicap. @ Hawke - Most female OC's are disinterested in guys Pretty funny considering this is a harem series.
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2011-11-29, 05:56 | Link #10389 | |
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Thinking of coming up with another OC that resents Inami's position as an instructor in the ISA... but I'll have to think about it. As of now, while the story is set to be Tsurugi's arc... Spoiler for Stuff:
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2011-11-29, 05:56 | Link #10390 | |
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Rin also definitely look down at guys (except Ichika, cos y'now...he's special ), she doesn't share Cecilia's resentment however. @Stratos: While that may work, it makes not much sense considering Ichika is a stated as I.S.A. STUDENT. Inami does not, they have no excuse using Ichika as reasoning. But of course, ultrafeminist doesn't need to be reasonable cos we portray them as 'evil'.
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2011-11-29, 06:01 | Link #10391 |
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@ Hawke - My internet was probably too slow for me to see that day
@ Senpai - Huh? I've never seen Rin act like that, where did you? Nad don't say Dan, he's the butt monkey and everyone treats him like that. @ Stratos - Students wouldn't hate on him, though they'll probably comment that it's really odd. Or are you planning to make your own feminist group? Because if that's the case, they should be hating on Ichika too.
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2011-11-29, 06:06 | Link #10393 | |
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2011-11-29, 06:09 | Link #10395 | |
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@ Senpai - Yup, now I see it. Though it's also focused on "adults who flaunt their authority" among other things.
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@ Hawke - Now I see, she doesn't look like her dad or mom though
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2011-11-29, 06:14 | Link #10398 | |
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Not exactly feminist... Let's just say they prefer Ichika due to him piloting an IS and thinking that Inami(and the non-IS Minerva) is nothing but a fake copy of him.
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2011-11-29, 06:18 | Link #10399 |
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@ Stratos - Which adds some moral grayness to the situation. I'm interested to see if you'll go with the "lectures her about her mistakes" route that most people take in stories like this or go for something unique. Same applies in Shadow, good thing Irish is an anti-hero and doesn't care about reasoning.
Going to a hotel, I'll see if I can log on or not. Ja ne!
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2011-11-29, 06:22 | Link #10400 | ||||
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*shoots backwards through the hangar door, then crash* Riz: ANGE?! Ange: I know I set the inertia canceller to turn off while firing a repulsor blast, but that was not supposed to happen... *giggling from outside* Karon: That was AWESOME!! Ange: *shrugs* At least she liked it... Oh yes. Ange just builds 'em and Karon just wrecks 'em. Quote:
All that about Rachel and Ange was a future plot point. Her interest in Ichika doesn't come easy, in fact, it might not even be the whole point of her kidnapping Ichika, but rather in drawing out a certain someone. Though I'd just write on about this short because its good WAFFy crack for once. IKaron is quite a lot of drama from me. Quote:
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