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Old 2012-08-03, 22:21   Link #21
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File 8 and 9 have been translated
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Old 2012-08-04, 03:35   Link #22
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10 is too.

I really liked this one.
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Old 2012-08-04, 04:43   Link #23
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In addition, it looks like all of the titles have been translated... "Would You Like Something from the Human Face Series?", I'm guessing that's the Cyborg Skin frying pan story

"A Girl Arrived as Collateral on an Unpaid Loan" erm hem....

"Let's Think Up a Romantic Language of Flowers Meaning" Kamachi? Romantic?! DOES NOT COMPUTE!!!! It's a troll ! It's definitely a troll!
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Old 2012-08-04, 12:06   Link #24
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10 is too.

I really liked this one.
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In addition, it looks like all of the titles have been translated... "Would You Like Something from the Human Face Series?", I'm guessing that's the Cyborg Skin frying pan story

"A Girl Arrived as Collateral on an Unpaid Loan" erm hem....

"Let's Think Up a Romantic Language of Flowers Meaning" Kamachi? Romantic?! DOES NOT COMPUTE!!!! It's a troll ! It's definitely a troll!
Yeah, if you look at File 10, I'd like to think of it as romantic, but Kamachi loves to write romance stories like a troll, screwing with flags every single time (the plot in 10 shows how much Kamachi loves trolling with these in every other series of his), and the end of it somehow makes me shudder...
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Old 2012-08-04, 12:51   Link #25
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So far, the ones I'd consider to have the best story potential are 04(Ninja's), 08(Time Nodes), 09(Hell) and 10(Destiny).

08 is good, but would rapidly become way too complicated. Its already at a point whch streches my ability to comprehend.

04 looks interesting enough.

09 seems fairly cliche, and I get the feeling it could rapidly become tiresome, though obviously that depend on what happens next.

10 is my faviourite so far, and the one I thnk would make the most interesting story - but obviousluy Kamichi would have to dial back his romance trolling. It also reminds me of Iris Zero a little, what with the abilty to see absract concepts in regards to others.
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Old 2012-08-04, 20:03   Link #26
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11, 12, and the midpoint are out.

What was up with the guy in eleven? He looks at two beautiful girls belonging to him as misfortune?

So is anybody actually taking the survey? I think I might just to see if it leads to anything.
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Old 2012-08-04, 20:15   Link #27
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I'm sort of two minded about it- to me I separate them into an interesting concept and something that can be a whole story by itself.

I like the concept of the moe computer software as well as an inter-dimensional dating service and the Casket story But so far the only one I think could be a whole story by itself is the Modern Ninja.
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Old 2012-08-04, 20:39   Link #28
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I think the Santa one could be made into a story. It could be like Heavy Object, where each chapter is it's own story. Maybe throw in a love triangle between Santa and the reindeer.
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Old 2012-08-04, 20:50   Link #29
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Maybe throw in a love triangle between Santa and the reindeer.
That's got to be the weirdest, most awkward thing to say when taken out of context.
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Old 2012-08-04, 21:10   Link #30
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...Whoops. I really hope that nobody read that before reading the chapter
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Old 2012-08-05, 02:53   Link #31
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What was up with the guy in eleven? He looks at two beautiful girls belonging to him as misfortune?
Well, lets put it this way.

He's obviously in a pretty poor financial position, so these two girls are a drain on his already pretty thin wallet.

The older 1 spends most of her time complaining and demanding things, while my first impression of the younger one is that she's rather manipulative.

Its out right said in the story that while princess No.1 is good looking, she's not attractive (if that makes sense) and he has no desire to screw her.

So basically he's forced to look after a couple of teenagers with no apparent redeemable features.
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Old 2012-08-05, 14:44   Link #32
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Number 13 is out. Demons sure do like their cons.

EDIT: 14 is out too and it genuinely creeps me out.

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Old 2012-08-06, 08:08   Link #33
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1) Computer Virus - Haha! What a way to kick start the book! Definitely putting his best foot forward. It's a good concept for a one shot, but at the same time there is potential to expand it into a full story by include other kinds of computer program... I would love to see what Steam or UTorrent would be... I'm guessing the latter would wear an eyepatch and a pirate hat


2) Consult with Us - The first of many oneshots that puts a twist into a common trope and destroy the illusion of such fantasies... Good concept for a one shot, but if made into a full story it could easily get washed up in the ocean of Romcoms.


6) 385D - Urgh, I'm going to place this in the same as "Any Means Necessary", there's no enough information to know what to think of this story. It would be interesting to see Kamachi try his hand in writing a mystery thriller, but it's hard to judge if he's capable of it from this oneshot.


8) Time Lodes - Don't really like this one either; I'm just not feeling the concept... Though I wouldn't be surprise if this was the by-product of writing for the first Index game... Either way, he should probably not attempt to build on time travelling concepts...


9) Matters of Hell - Now THIS is a brilliant idea Out sourcing Hell to private contractors This is something that can be build upon for lolz... And they've only covered Buddhism; I would love to see the Inferno dealing with private contractors to maintain their various circles


10) Destiny Arrow - Another satire attempt at a common fantasy It was a fun read, but the concept isn't unique enough to stand on it's own as a real story.


11) Unrepaid Loan - Same as above, this time destroying the illusion that the girl is not going to be a 'desirable' companion But more importantly... You could tell he had originally planned this fate for Kamijou-san !



P.S - Is it me? Or is Kamachi getting more 'daring' in his writing ? There's a noticeable spike in sexual undertone here...

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Old 2012-08-06, 18:35   Link #34
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File 14: Yeowch. I'd dread to see appliances with human parts.

File 15: This must be what happens behind the scene in a prank show...

File 16: Is this Kamachi's way of questioning why the Demon King vs Hero premise always go like how they're told?

Damn, I like these lines from File 16:
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File 17: The word "ears" appeared in this chapter so many times I don't know what am I reading anymore
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Old 2012-08-07, 02:59   Link #35
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File 19: I don't known what to say anymore.
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Old 2012-08-07, 03:21   Link #36
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File 18: Using sushis to save the world. Whoo.

File 19: I can just say this: Badass Policemen > mahou shoujos, super sentais, Kamen riders and what have you.
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Old 2012-08-07, 06:45   Link #37
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At this rate, js is more than likely to be able to finish this book by the end of this week...

That leaves two and a half chapters of Intelivillage, I actually wouldn't mind if he stops at volume 3 of Heavy Object, but I would prefer if he stopped at volume 4 instead

In any case, he should be able to finish at least one of either before Waltraute comes out next month
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At this rate, js is more than likely to be able to finish this book by the end of this week...

That leaves two and a half chapters of Intelivillage, I actually wouldn't mind if he stops at volume 3 of Heavy Object, but I would prefer if he stopped at volume 4 instead

In any case, he should be able to finish at least one of either before Waltraute comes out next month
Considering the chapters seems to span only a few pages in print at most compared to his other series in which each chapter takes you long enough to scroll half a page per day on the screen, yeah...

At any rate, my faith in Kamachi-ism just leveled up. Policemen > your Mahou Shoujos, Riders, Sentais and what have you, understand!?
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At any rate, my faith in Kamachi-ism just leveled up. Policemen > your Mahou Shoujos, Riders, Sentais and what have you, understand!?
Oh come on it can't be that awesome...


*Skip ahead to read chapter 19*


AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME! FUCK IT ALL! THIS is the winning concept right here ! If there's any one of these that Kamachi intents to pick one of them to become a real story, THIS IS IT! This beats the modern ninja idea hands down !

Dear lord thats the most awesome piece of satire work that I've ever seen...
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Oh come on it can't be that awesome...


*Skip ahead to read chapter 19*


AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME! FUCK IT ALL! THIS is the winning concept right here ! If there's any one of these that Kamachi intents to pick one of them to become a real story, THIS IS IT! This beats the modern ninja idea hands down !

Dear lord thats the most awesome piece of satire work that I've ever seen...
Let's start going to the Kamachi-ism shrine and do this in honor of that:
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