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Old 2012-02-03, 06:18   Link #20701
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^ Oh my, Yuriko...

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Old 2012-02-03, 06:19   Link #20702
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@'Demi - No, I suggest not doing that

Side note - Beautiful? Does this work: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...swap-gun-hair_

That's as far as you can go before it gets too ridiculous and he must've had sex change.
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:21   Link #20703
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There are only few actually. .

Slash wound on the waist? now that's another story.

There are larger artery that directly connected to the kidneys. harming that will cause a heavy bleeding that means cauterization is impossible. Slash attack might not strike that, but the resulting wound and bleeding still considered nasty, unless it's a very small cut.
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:23   Link #20704
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@ Senpai - I guess I'll go for slashing Still, it doesn't matter that much since you know what happens to him at the end
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:39   Link #20705
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Eratas, are you trying to turn me into a beast with those pictures?
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:45   Link #20706
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Too bad thats a guy

On aside note, the hell, why I write about breast?
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:45   Link #20707
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Hmm... Should I cameo Irish in Vandam? It's a unit that everyone's fighting over after all. Hmm...............

Edit: ...he's wearing a schoolgirl uniform too... maybe...
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:48   Link #20708
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@ Box - Please, you don'r need any help in that regard.

@ Senpai - What do you mean write about breast?

@ Meistah - What exactly do you mean? Is it a new IS unit that's good? You said everyone's fighting for it.
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Old 2012-02-03, 06:54   Link #20709
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Cecilia finding the reason Houki isn't eager about being naked in front of other girls... and damn it sound like a pair of lesbian...

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Old 2012-02-03, 07:00   Link #20710
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Vandam isn't that good, it starts off at the beginning of G3 ranks after all. But it was made by a brilliant creator who said that this one unit could cause the evolution of MPIS via the Invent System.

Even if its just a scrap of intel on the unit, other countries would kill for such a device. Which is why it occurred to me that Tatenashi might send Irish in to grab intel. He then turns his attention to the Kingdom of Ea for being the embodiment of everything he hates.
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:01   Link #20711
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@ Senpai - Can you write out the dialogue? Maybe I can fix it.

@ Meitah - ....Why does he have to do this in a schoolgirl uniform? You'd think sending a guy to grab intel why while he's in a skirt is detrimental.
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:02   Link #20712
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I'll finish it in ten, maybe fifteen minutes.
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:07   Link #20713
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Just the dialogue is enough
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:12   Link #20714
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I'm rewriting from scratch actually, so it goes like Cecilia monologuing about Houki's muscular body... and Houki staring at her breast commenting that foreigner has it easy

Seems like less of les-yay and more like awkward moment between girls...
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:13   Link #20715
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@eras: Lyon would be more like this only blonde

Why would it be a bad idea for Ichika to lose his left hand?

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Old 2012-02-03, 07:17   Link #20716
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@ Senpai - A girl being jealous of another's body is normal. Kanzashi does it as well.

@ Demi - Lolz Well, some people are just born naturally effeminate. You have to take note that this has to go away at some point due to hormones.

Side note - Cause people complain, that's why. Besides, you said he replaces it with the Setsura cannon, which looks like a megaman ripoff. Lastly, is it really vital that he lose his hand? If not, it just looks pointless.
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:24   Link #20717
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Ichika's self esteem would take a lot of damage, remember that hands are a treasure for a swordsman. Getting them cut off is fate worse than death.
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:26   Link #20718
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@ Demi - Then do what you want. I'm giving the excuse that his hormones are still suppressed, so he doesn't go through puberty yet even if he's 14. Besides, that guy there's wearing a wig

Most likely, yeah. Again, why is this required? Does losing his hand provide some awe inspiring metaphysical change in the story as opposed to keeping it?
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:31   Link #20719
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well... other than this is serious business and making it a point that even if you have plot armor, you're not exactly going to get off unhurt?
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Old 2012-02-03, 07:34   Link #20720
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You can do that without cutting off his hand Besides, you're seriously gimping Ichika since he needs both hands to use that Sword and cannon of his.
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