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MeisterBabylon · 2011-08-19, 06:22

Poor Collins. That's what you get when you paint tentacle rape Tyranids.

*cues Bad Company theme*

I don't know. I'm satisfied to just keep churning out profiles, got a few more after all.

The problem comes when I'm writing. Long story short, my writing makes a Kamachi chapter run through a machine translator look professional. Can't even compare to Kyon or the rest here. So its hard to be proud of what I do make these days...

blitz1/2 · 2011-08-19, 23:43

Flere hasn't updated his fic in two weeks, I hope everything's ok.

Mr.Kyon · 2011-08-19, 23:51

Quote:

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Can't even compare to Kyon or the rest here.

Since when am I a benchmark for quality writing?

>////<

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Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Flere hasn't updated his fic in two weeks, I hope everything's ok.

Well I zapped him with a shot of my Holy Crack.

It takes time to recover.

Isn't that right, honey?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-08-20, 00:25

@Kyon: There's a reason why marines yell FOR THE EMPEROR!!

Flere821 · 2011-08-20, 01:12

I took a break from writing when NT2 came out, but now that it's translated I'm back working on my current chapter. Expect it in a week or so.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Well I zapped him with a shot of my Holy Crack.

It takes time to recover.

Isn't that right, honey?

... You sure it's a good idea to call me that when you already have Chaos2Frozen? Some people might start getting ideas >.<

And for some reason being called that by the 'Holy Crack Emperor' makes me feel like I'm slowly being tainted by a grimoire...

Or Angra Mainyu.

TkMacintosh · 2011-08-20, 11:43

Because this hit me at work I had to write it down and get it out of my head...

So by going by the fanon rumor that Aogami Pierce is the 6th level 5, I started to think on what ever it could be and started going over the abilites of the other level 5's.

Accelerator has Vector Control, Kakine has Dark Matter control, Misaka is Electro Master, Mugino is the Meltdowner, Misaki is a telepath, and Gunha is a Gemstone...

So I figured the one thing that would be missing is...servant summoning.

So when thinking on that....it kinda makes sense for Aogami to have servant summoning...especially when they're fetish based.

So making sure not to make it TOO overpowered, but still strong enough to be considered a threat, I figure it's best make it a mass summoning.

So Aogami is able to summon up to 100 servants that are somewhere between level 2 and 4 (maybe?).

The only reason he doesn't use his power often is because when he summons them...he cannot touch them...AT ALL. As long as they stand still, they incorporeal. The only way for him to touch them is if they attack...which could also explain his fighting being very good...wanting to enjoy his fetish based servants, but only through battle.

...Maybe it doesn't make much sense when I type it out. I don't know.

Basically in the end:
Aogami Pierce: Able to summon limited number of fetish based servants to do battle.

Servants, while not moving, are not capable of being touched. The servants only accept battle related commands, so when they fight, they are corporeal. They do not talk beyond battle cries.

Ilidsor · 2011-08-20, 12:12

^ I thought the sixth level 5's power was 'Tidal wave'. I don't remember where I heard that though.

TkMacintosh · 2011-08-20, 13:19

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Originally Posted by Ilidsor

^ I thought the sixth level 5's power was 'Tidal wave'. I don't remember where I heard that though.

Let's say that Aogami summoned a maid-based servant...he summons roughly a 100 of them...tells them to attack, they start to brandish various weapons from their outfits or cleaning materials....

They rush you all at once...Wouldn't you consider THAT a Tidal Wave....of people? :3

Ashaman · 2011-08-20, 13:58

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ilidsor

^ I thought the sixth level 5's power was 'Tidal wave'. I don't remember where I heard that though.

I named him Tidal Crush in one of my fics.

If that is where you got it from, please stop taking my fanfics so seriously

if not, never mind

Mr.Kyon · 2011-08-20, 14:00

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ashaman

I named him Tidal Crush in one of my fics.

If that is where you got it from, please stop taking my fanfics so seriously

if not, never mind

Seems you've reached the point where "When I say it, it must be canon," right?

SuzushinaYuriko · 2011-08-20, 17:21

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Originally Posted by Tempy

Howdy folks.

I'm a relatively new guy when it comes to writing stories in this series, but I do have the first chapter of something I recently got through finishing. If you folks don't mind, I would love if you could check it out and possibly give me feedback? It's a bit on the serious side, with action and dialogue.

As a word of warning, however: it's got a handful of OCs, so do read through it all before passing judgment. So, without further ado:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7301515/1/In_Bad_Company

Oh hey, I read that. I liked all the details you put in there. Also, Roanapur is from Black Lagoon, right?

Tempy · 2011-08-21, 02:12

Hmm. Only one response. Slightly disheartening.

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Originally Posted by yukirosuzuka

Oh hey, I read that. I liked all the details you put in there. Also, Roanapur is from Black Lagoon, right?

Yes.

Drifting Wolf · 2011-08-21, 02:57

^ @ Tempy: It can sometimes take a while for a fic to receive recognition or reviews. To Aru section doesn't have a ton of people on it, after all.

Mr.Kyon · 2011-08-21, 16:40

Hey, remember that time where I did a SchoolAU? Yeah...

TkMacintosh · 2011-08-21, 18:11

Well...I figured now would be a good time to mention this but....

Ch 2 of "A Certain Adult Film" has been written and is being beta'ed by StormWolfex.

After I get his comments, opinions, and corrections, I'm going to run the corrected version through another forum for one last run before I post it to FF.net...

So expect it within a week or two.

Ashaman · 2011-08-21, 19:12

Excellent.

Is TFF the other forum?

MeisterBabylon · 2011-08-21, 19:14

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tempy

Hmm. Only one response. Slightly disheartening.

Chaos and MB jiiiiiiiiiiii at Tempy.

I discovered Space Marine. All writing time has disappeared. Dx

TkMacintosh · 2011-08-21, 20:12

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ashaman

Excellent.

Is TFF the other forum?

What other forum would I use? :3

Mr.Kyon · 2011-08-21, 21:48

TFF? Enlighten me gentlemen.

TkMacintosh · 2011-08-21, 22:20

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Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

TFF? Enlighten me gentlemen.

Hmm....best to let TV Tropes do the talking....

The Fanfiction Forum now on TV Tropes.

Sadly, registration is closed due to some twits avoiding bans and creating troll accounts.

2011-08-19, 06:22	Link #1901
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	Poor Collins. That's what you get when you paint tentacle rape Tyranids. cues Bad Company theme I don't know. I'm satisfied to just keep churning out profiles, got a few more after all. The problem comes when I'm writing. Long story short, my writing makes a Kamachi chapter run through a machine translator look professional. Can't even compare to Kyon or the rest here. So its hard to be proud of what I do make these days... __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-08-19, 23:43	Link #1902
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	Flere hasn't updated his fic in two weeks, I hope everything's ok. __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2011-08-20, 00:25	Link #1904
MeisterBabylon ~ Your Smile ~ Author Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: 346Pro Age: 38	@Kyon: There's a reason why marines yell FOR THE EMPEROR!! __________________ 白露型駆逐艦の４番艦、夕立です。第三次ソロモン海戦では、けっこう頑張ったっぽい★？

2011-08-21, 16:40	Link #1914
Mr.Kyon I crack you up Join Date: Dec 2010 Age: 30	Hey, remember that time where I did a SchoolAU? Yeah... __________________ *The One Who Has Snuffed God's Crack.* *Believer of the Great Sumeragi.* One Does Not Simply Make Touma A Good Protagonist ~ The Truth. "Kyon has set his 'enemy that must be defeated' to be 'bad writing' of the world. The more there is, the stronger his Holy Crack " ~ Chaos2Frozen.

2011-08-21, 19:12	Link #1916
Ashaman Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Age: 34	Excellent. Is TFF the other forum? __________________

2011-08-20, 11:43	Link #1906
TkMacintosh Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2010	Because this hit me at work I had to write it down and get it out of my head... So by going by the fanon rumor that Aogami Pierce is the 6th level 5, I started to think on what ever it could be and started going over the abilites of the other level 5's. Accelerator has Vector Control, Kakine has Dark Matter control, Misaka is Electro Master, Mugino is the Meltdowner, Misaki is a telepath, and Gunha is a Gemstone... So I figured the one thing that would be missing is...servant summoning. So when thinking on that....it kinda makes sense for Aogami to have servant summoning...especially when they're fetish based. So making sure not to make it TOO overpowered, but still strong enough to be considered a threat, I figure it's best make it a mass summoning. So Aogami is able to summon up to 100 servants that are somewhere between level 2 and 4 (maybe?). The only reason he doesn't use his power often is because when he summons them...he cannot touch them...AT ALL. As long as they stand still, they incorporeal. The only way for him to touch them is if they attack...which could also explain his fighting being very good...wanting to enjoy his fetish based servants, but only through battle. ...Maybe it doesn't make much sense when I type it out. I don't know. Basically in the end: Aogami Pierce: Able to summon limited number of fetish based servants to do battle. Servants, while not moving, are not capable of being touched. The servants only accept battle related commands, so when they fight, they are corporeal. They do not talk beyond battle cries.

2011-08-20, 12:12	Link #1907
Ilidsor Angelerator Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Canada	^ I thought the sixth level 5's power was 'Tidal wave'. I don't remember where I heard that though.

2011-08-21, 02:57	Link #1913
Drifting Wolf Senior Member Join Date: May 2011	^ @ Tempy: It can sometimes take a while for a fic to receive recognition or reviews. To Aru section doesn't have a ton of people on it, after all.

2011-08-21, 18:11	Link #1915
TkMacintosh Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2010	Well...I figured now would be a good time to mention this but.... Ch 2 of "A Certain Adult Film" has been written and is being beta'ed by StormWolfex. After I get his comments, opinions, and corrections, I'm going to run the corrected version through another forum for one last run before I post it to FF.net... So expect it within a week or two.

2011-08-21, 21:48	Link #1919
Mr.Kyon I crack you up Join Date: Dec 2010 Age: 30	TFF? Enlighten me gentlemen. __________________ *The One Who Has Snuffed God's Crack.* *Believer of the Great Sumeragi.* One Does Not Simply Make Touma A Good Protagonist ~ The Truth. "Kyon has set his 'enemy that must be defeated' to be 'bad writing' of the world. The more there is, the stronger his Holy Crack " ~ Chaos2Frozen.