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demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 09:55

Depends on who the armor is for.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-24, 10:00

The Alterverse is more or less the equivalent of Unlimited to Extra/Altered Fable in Muvluv terms

They desperately fight aliens, even gamebreaking system like their equivalent of I.S. can only do so much because it was too late to be game changer (Think Susano'o). Their earth is destroyed and the very few survivor is scattered in Mirrorverse.

demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 10:01

Kabuto, definitely kabuto. Screw the timeline. Hyperclock up the disaster away.

Fireminer · 2013-10-24, 10:13

No, no. Make it Decade/Kabuto/W!

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-24, 10:18

Not what I had in mind then.

I meant whether it's bulky but still visibly humanoid (KamenRider, Halo etc) or unholy abortion of gundam/schoold girl (Strike Witches, I.S., Vividred operation etc)

Hmm

Perhaps a combination of both

Fireminer · 2013-10-24, 10:21

Pss... Gundam then!

What would happen if you add "Ichika" and "Lust" together?

demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 10:21

Just go gundam. Gundam is always the answer.

Tempest35 · 2013-10-24, 10:26

Meh good writer - bad writer...all water. I consider myself okay at it. Sometimes I fubar and out comes random-ness. Still if you like your writing as is, no need to ask for help is there? I actually like Zero's unedited writing. It has more feeling to it. I just hope that my proofreading doesn't kill that at anytime. T^T

demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 10:28

I ask for help because I'm not happy about how it's turning out.

Fireminer · 2013-10-24, 10:30

I ask for help simply because me and my brother almost never agree on fanfiction field.

Hope that could change with Paradise Lost.

"It's better to rule in Hell than to serve in Heaven" - Satan

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-24, 10:32

^ Amen

As for gundam rule

Perhaps more like super robot wars?

Will chuck out a draft soon-ish

demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 10:36

Throwing in crude jokes just because isn't very... Normal inwriting isn't it?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-10-24, 10:40

You lost me

demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 10:45

As the last draft shows, the Sephirot is an organization. I was thinking of adding a ton of characters to make the org feel diverse. A pair of twins would be working there. One introduces herself as Sally Mayflower, the other comes along and says that Sally Mayflower isn't the real name.

It's Debra Swallows.

The twin sister introduces herself as Rachel Swallows.

wavehawk · 2013-10-24, 11:01

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Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Seriously... How did it even come to that? Starscream...? Ichika...? Those words just don't click! o.O

- It's 3am on a work night and I can't sleep. I am not a sane person in my waking hours, and I am even less so right now. Be glad I'm NOT writing anythign like this.

What I AM writing, or considering--is finishing my previous fic story. The problem I am having is that the [Ren] stories were always meant to be side-stories EG they don't affect the LN/Anime plot in any way. That was the original concept. Now, due to new ideas (plus me being VERYNOTHAPPY with the wash-rinse-repeat cycle of the LNs at the moment), I'm thinking of doing EXACTLY what my detractors accue me of always doing: Railroading the entire story using my OC.

Jesus, this is just driving me up the wall. A lot of ideas like [Ren] and Charlotte having a heart-to-heart (or more like [Ren] making Charlotte feel miserable because of all the girls after Ichika, she's the one who ought to know better). Might work, might not work. Will definitely be followed by outpourings of hate from 'experts'.

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

It's Debra Swallows.

The twin sister introduces herself as Rachel Swallows.

- So, what is the average speed of an unladen swallow?

...C'mon, I had to make that snark!

demino_hellsin · 2013-10-24, 11:36

Basically she really hates her name due to certain... implications. It does not help that she is very attractive. Racehl doesn't have a problem with it >.>

blitz1/2 · 2013-10-24, 16:14

@Zero: Anna and Alya aren't part of Louise's faction though.

I might have to create MORE ocs for that. I plan on creating one for South Korea and North Korea as well as Canada and Mexico.

Fireminer · 2013-10-24, 17:40

Weird...

Thinking about a 9-shots, which the whole academy become a castle in front of a full scale invasion that lasted a week...

StratoSpear · 2013-10-24, 17:50

Quote:

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- It's 3am on a work night and I can't sleep. I am not a sane person in my waking hours, and I am even less so right now. Be glad I'm NOT writing anythign like this.

What I AM writing, or considering--is finishing my previous fic story. The problem I am having is that the [Ren] stories were always meant to be side-stories EG they don't affect the LN/Anime plot in any way. That was the original concept. Now, due to new ideas (plus me being VERYNOTHAPPY with the wash-rinse-repeat cycle of the LNs at the moment), I'm thinking of doing EXACTLY what my detractors accue me of always doing: Railroading the entire story using my OC.

Jesus, this is just driving me up the wall. A lot of ideas like [Ren] and Charlotte having a heart-to-heart (or more like [Ren] making Charlotte feel miserable because of all the girls after Ichika, she's the one who ought to know better). Might work, might not work. Will definitely be followed by outpourings of hate from 'experts'.

Guess that's one of the things we have in common.

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Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

Basically she really hates her name due to certain... implications. It does not help that she is very attractive. Racehl doesn't have a problem with it >.>

Speaking of which, one of my own cast has issues with her name so she puts up a front until someone gets too personal.

Fireminer · 2013-10-24, 20:04

Yeah... Name could be a confuse thing indeed. But all could be fixed with a mask and cool persona!

Meteor with Uranium raining down from the sky?

2013-10-24, 10:00	Link #47422
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	The Alterverse is more or less the equivalent of Unlimited to Extra/Altered Fable in Muvluv terms They desperately fight aliens, even gamebreaking system like their equivalent of I.S. can only do so much because it was too late to be game changer (Think Susano'o). Their earth is destroyed and the very few survivor is scattered in Mirrorverse. __________________

2013-10-24, 10:18	Link #47425
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Not what I had in mind then. I meant whether it's bulky but still visibly humanoid (KamenRider, Halo etc) or unholy abortion of gundam/schoold girl (Strike Witches, I.S., Vividred operation etc) Hmm Perhaps a combination of both __________________

2013-10-24, 10:26	Link #47428
Tempest35 Awe of She Author Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Orlando	Meh good writer - bad writer...all water. I consider myself okay at it. Sometimes I fubar and out comes random-ness. Still if you like your writing as is, no need to ask for help is there? I actually like Zero's unedited writing. It has more feeling to it. I just hope that my proofreading doesn't kill that at anytime. T^T __________________ "Focus entirely on me, you ordinary soldier."

2013-10-24, 10:32	Link #47431
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ Amen As for gundam rule Perhaps more like super robot wars? Will chuck out a draft soon-ish __________________

2013-10-24, 10:40	Link #47433
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	You lost me __________________

2013-10-24, 09:55	Link #47421
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Depends on who the armor is for.

2013-10-24, 10:01	Link #47423
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Kabuto, definitely kabuto. Screw the timeline. Hyperclock up the disaster away.

2013-10-24, 10:13	Link #47424
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	No, no. Make it Decade/Kabuto/W!

2013-10-24, 10:21	Link #47426
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Pss... Gundam then! What would happen if you add "Ichika" and "Lust" together?

2013-10-24, 10:21	Link #47427
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Just go gundam. Gundam is always the answer.

2013-10-24, 10:28	Link #47429
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I ask for help because I'm not happy about how it's turning out.

2013-10-24, 10:30	Link #47430
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	I ask for help simply because me and my brother almost never agree on fanfiction field. Hope that could change with Paradise Lost. "It's better to rule in Hell than to serve in Heaven" - Satan

2013-10-24, 10:36	Link #47432
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Throwing in crude jokes just because isn't very... Normal inwriting isn't it?

2013-10-24, 10:45	Link #47434
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	As the last draft shows, the Sephirot is an organization. I was thinking of adding a ton of characters to make the org feel diverse. A pair of twins would be working there. One introduces herself as Sally Mayflower, the other comes along and says that Sally Mayflower isn't the real name. It's Debra Swallows. The twin sister introduces herself as Rachel Swallows.

2013-10-24, 11:36	Link #47436
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Basically she really hates her name due to certain... implications. It does not help that she is very attractive. Racehl doesn't have a problem with it >.>

2013-10-24, 16:14	Link #47437
blitz1/2 Tenshi's Defense Squadron Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Fighting against those who oppress the system	@Zero: Anna and Alya aren't part of Louise's faction though. I might have to create MORE ocs for that. I plan on creating one for South Korea and North Korea as well as Canada and Mexico. __________________ hai, hai. Onii-chan has his work cut out for him.

2013-10-24, 17:40	Link #47438
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Weird... Thinking about a 9-shots, which the whole academy become a castle in front of a full scale invasion that lasted a week...

2013-10-24, 20:04	Link #47440
Fireminer Lumine Passio Author Join Date: Jul 2013 Location: Hanoi, Vietnam Age: 18	Yeah... Name could be a confuse thing indeed. But all could be fixed with a mask and cool persona! Meteor with Uranium raining down from the sky?