2008-03-09, 11:52 | Link #2121 | |
Fading in-between
Join Date: Jul 2007
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I didn't find anything inappropriate there Edit: Page claim. Yay! This claim goes to various flavors of cookies |
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2008-03-09, 13:21 | Link #2122 |
Floater
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Frosty Hill
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I slapped the Mature ratting on it as a safety buffer. Right now it seems a little bit on the teen side but mature themes are on the way. Fate is not done with Princess and there will be some action between them (got some holes to patch first...). Now before anyone asks, I will limit myself to how explicit i will be in the story. Something that can be used for growth might pop in but i do not intend for this to turn into smut.
I will come on later and comment on the few stories that have been posted but there are things to do. Also next part of L!F will take some time to write up... *Bows* thank you for the cookies. Edit: Momo Chan... you gave me an idea.. Edit #2: @ Sam the Onion's little project... Still likening it. The only thing i can say is that given what we know now, It would be wise to assume that Aren and the knights complement eachother as far as their magic schools are concerned. I eagerly await what tricks they have up their sleeves and how they can go all out against any opponent. @Evil Rick... I have to say those little shorts where interesting. If you got more of these little snip bits i hope you post them up. Last edited by Junkedcat; 2008-03-09 at 16:11. |
2008-03-09, 17:12 | Link #2124 | |
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2008-03-09, 17:16 | Link #2125 | |
Adeptus Animus
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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Beyond that though, nice calm day. |
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2008-03-09, 17:46 | Link #2127 |
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
Age: 38
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Writing some OC crack Essentially, it's a big barfight between OCs.
Sample line: "So, you guys are Rim Advance Force eh?" asked Franz, smiling unpleasantly. "I guess that makes you...rimjobbers."
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2008-03-09, 18:03 | Link #2129 | ||
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Frosty Hill
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2008-03-09, 18:09 | Link #2130 | |
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Spoiler for you should have written that. I shouldn't have written this:
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2008-03-09, 18:52 | Link #2132 |
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Slow going is slowwww ~ Drama is hard to write well ;-;
My chappy isn't writing itself like I want it to *sobs* Sata-chan, your Fate-chan is too nice for this world, y'hear me? D: And Landscaper Fate is hot. No buts or ifs. Sounds like she's gonna get whipped though lol :x |
2008-03-09, 20:35 | Link #2133 | |
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Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Frosty Hill
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Anyways finally some SbtB comments Spoiler for !:
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Join Date: Sep 2007
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Don't check for two days and already backlogged. >.<
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Junkedcat [Landscaper Fate] : I'm still not quite sure how to take this fic. To me they just don't feel like Fate or Nanoha. Just a face to a character so far. It's not to say that I don't like what is written, I actually like what you have of the story so far. Quote:
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2008-03-10, 01:34 | Link #2136 | |
Black Dragon
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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In that comic, a bunch of superheroes known as "The New Warrioes" and four villans destroy a city in a battle killing lots of inocent people, most of them childs, after that, the Nations approve a law called, " The law of Superhuman registre", in wich the superheroes must reveal theyr identity and work for the gobern, to avoid another incident like that, Some superheroes like Iron Man agree with that law, but others like Captain America refuse it, so a war between Superheroes Start... You can try something similar but with mages
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2008-03-10, 02:32 | Link #2137 |
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Finally finished the chapter. It took a bit out of me lol
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4099527/4/ How about giving me some comments? Thanks guys :3 |
2008-03-10, 03:06 | Link #2138 | |
Black Dragon
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Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: In the Netherrealm, thinking who to betray next...
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Your tring some Fate Point of View eh? I really like it, congragulations Amigo
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2008-03-10, 03:24 | Link #2139 |
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
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Earth vs TSAB... Kagerou and I tried something similar with Erusia.
Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Essentially: 20 years prior to StrikerS the TSAB stumbled on a planet that had spent the last century reverse-engineering TSAB tech from a patrol cruiser, and was fairly beefed up. (Erusia had Halo-era gear. PLus laser canons. And powered exoskeletons.) First Contact went well, negotioations, not so. In MC0052, over a translation error (The Erusians believed the TSAB had evil intentions and wished to Enslave them) the Erusians killed the TSAB negotiating party and the TSAB withdrew they 6-ship fleet (after gettin 4 ships blown up) and prepared a punitive expedition, which arrived back over Erusia on June MC0055. It took the TSAB 7 hours to destroy Erusia's 400-ship fleet. It took Erusia about 2-3 years to fall to the TSAB. 5 years after the war began, the TSAB was in control of both Erusia AND its sister planet Sotoa, with only isolated pockets of resistance remaining. And this was despite the Erusians having a good number of mages to fight back with the TSAB.... Incidentally, this is where Sergeant Major A.J. Ivanovich *cough*HaloJohnson*cough* picked up his nickname of Mage Hunter. The TSAB vets of the war still shudder on hearing that nickname. Especially the survivors of the battalion he drove off with an entire crate of plasma grenades... Things were mostly in favor of the TSAB, though they did suffer defeats; the Erusian city of North Point, for instance, was hastily reworked into an urban warfare nightmare and sniper haven; TSAB companies and battalions that went in kept getting ambushed and cut to pieces... so long as the Erusian Resistance had ammo. They had 3 years to prepare, and already had a crapload of supplies (Erusia was very heavily militarised), but the supply situation favored the TSAB. In the end the TSAB pretty much completed occupation of Erusia, in a senario very similar to that of Iraq - but on a planetwide scale.
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