2007-05-07, 07:03 | Link #101 |
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I. WILL. NOT. CHANGE. MY. CORNER!
Anyway, your last few siggy seems to be very different from you older creation (Read: you dont suffer "I need to put something, somewhere" much anymore) Style experimenting? To be honest, when I see landscape as sig BG, I kinda imagine Jayson's (aka K.Yamato) work Regarding sig dimension .. I suffer the same How the hell am I supposed to put my render at such tiny height as well when I started playing with sig creation .. for me, even 500x160 is too small... Now when I see 500x160 sig, I go OH SHI- ! A giant Could do with bigger sig filesize tho
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2007-05-07, 10:35 | Link #102 |
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Second the siggy size thing.
----------------------------- Oh noes now I have to conffess something >_< I liked Klash's old style better.. The I have no idea how to do this (this = "emptiness" *cough cough*) look.. These new ones smell of external rather then internal inspiration and feeling. Like one of those feel-good-when-you-look-at-me sigs I sometimes use. Want moer Kla-shi-ri But don't mind what I say... I'm temporarily ill with uncurable coffee sickness.
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2007-05-07, 11:13 | Link #104 | |
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2007-05-19, 12:31 | Link #106 |
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^ go ahead, it is yours i will update its status
good timing, i've just finally got the inspiration for some sigs -__-" (almost 2 whole weeks, guess my mind was awfully drained with sola) Reckless "tomoboyish" subaru, from nanoha strikers. well, i didn't want to copy paste the 3 ol' sigs, so "new gen"... so, the first thing to say : i hate nanoha animator crew, the amount of official artwork is near to NONE. and since there isn't any serious and faithful fanart (or maybe i wans't able to catch it, due the insane number of NXF material ), choice of the day : screencap -__-" so, enjoy the jagged edges, and weird blending ~~ like sola, and A's set, i will probably do the whole set of the 4 rookies,a nd maybe "BONUS ADULT SET" for the 2 lov... i mean, weapon of mass destruction ladies.
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2007-05-19, 14:54 | Link #107 |
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imo even with the tweek it seems to be that subaru is still too "dull" ~ in fact the whole sig just screams dullness to be frank (no to be taken personally ofc) ~ i think the main reason behind that has to be the colours used...everything looks fairly "flat" with hardly any tones of shadow or luminating points...being monotoned just makes the sig looks too 2D which isnt a good thing >.<
also you should back the BG sign stick out more! ~ probably would work better if you messed around with the contrast or hue options (in fact try doing it for each different layer to see what effect fits best ^__^) and lastly...its too long! :O but just make the the text in the middle a bit larger and to help you on your way with the sigs these pics may come in handy
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2007-05-19, 16:00 | Link #108 |
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1. It's not dull but more like dirty.
Her jacket should be pure white, or at least far whiter then it is now. =) 2. The text should be either animated or tweaked a little. 3. The background should be brighten up and all the colors should also be tweaked towards more visible spectrums. ( I'm really curious what's suppose to be in the BG =) ) 4. Miss knuckle could use a zoom in, lots of dull space IMO. The top part is has more detail, hidden by the current zoom level. ---------------------------------------------- Q. When do you add the text, before or after you sample it down. =)
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i'm just afraid i will end in some similar result than your signatures if i use the same source too bad that except subaru, they are a bit too passive, but better this than the horrible screencaps... Quote:
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well animated... i don't even make bearable animated avi, so signature... huho i tried a bit how it would look, but the huge quality drop makes me give up instantly. Quote:
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if i zoom even a bit better, you will notice that the pic is rather blurry. Quote:
well then, after the demolishing, but fair and square, and accurate critics, here is the V2 (hoping this IS an improvement, though i have doubts...)
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2007-05-20, 00:17 | Link #110 |
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The mid text really sux .. SERIOUSLY. .. Dont match at all IMO, with the rest of the sig. Crop out the left side from the mid of her... and move her to the right if you dont want popout .. less empty space, and the left side is full of random dont match the sig stuff anyway <.<
As you can see, I'm in a very bad mood today =_=
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2007-05-20, 00:23 | Link #111 |
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^ - i like random... random is so.... random... chaos FTW!!!
wow... these guys really are brutal.... i feel for ya klash, *sniff... they tore up my first couple sigs something fierce too... though u've been here a lot longer than i have.... i rather like the sig... its creative, and looks like u put some time into it... i would comment something else on the sig, but i'd rather this particular post stay 100% positive... n e wayz, nice stuff man.... keep it up, and don't let a few critques stir u up, everybody has different tastes... |
2007-05-20, 03:28 | Link #112 | |
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2007-05-20, 04:47 | Link #113 |
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I like Version 2. =) Nice Job!
------------------------------- Okey so maybe it could use some extra tweaking, but I think that's something you should just take in as feedback for future projects.
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thus, it would ring a bell to those who watch the series, but it would rather look weird and hideous for the rest. i'm still hesistating to use a simplier and more "straight tech" font for this. Quote:
as for the crop, well, i didn't feel that amount of empty space, i might try to move the belka sigil a bit ^^" (but i would like to stay with 500 length, but sounds like it will be hard ) Quote:
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hum hum... touché, though i'm not THAT blunt (i hope so ) but yeah, this is the best way to improve ourselves (this signature isn't the most "modified", i feel there is a much patched up sig around i've made XD) Quote:
i don't think this will be the permanent V of this sig anyway (i will probably change some features). don't worry, i've noted most -if not- all the critics as usual, which will prevent me to do the same mistakes with the next 3 StrikerS sig ^^" (i hope XD) EDIT : well, V3 is here, and i think it is way smoother with the commented changes. but i'm still a be reluctant for the length change
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2007-05-20, 11:23 | Link #115 |
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much like Sola set, guess i should do Strikers rookies set, before i got owned by my usual uninspiration process ~~
As announced, this set will probably have the same structure, just like Nanoha A's sigs. I'm really displeased that i couldn't find any good teana pic (i think she is the least covered of the 4, which is really a waste ~~) , so, i got her with a kinda passive stance here >_> i think i avoided the same mistakes of subaru V1/2, but can't tell due the big difference in hue
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2007-05-20, 11:47 | Link #117 |
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"Professional" is exaggerated : i don't think it is worthing praising with simple unicolor scheme ~~ (at least, without constrat, it's kinda too simple :x)
meh... the funny thing about "color match" is basically reminding me of the usual sentai scheme : heros are wearing civil clothes of the same color of their battle costume... (or in certain extent : lots of chars are wearing clothes (or having hair color ) of the same color of their element, duh...)
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2007-05-20, 15:16 | Link #118 |
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Wow the new ones really pro. Way to go Klash.
Simple?.. is that your way of saying: it's too perfect. --- I'll still give you points for random dumb luck tho'. The reason why it looks so good is because the circle in the background resembles very well some Victorian decoration (as long as you don't focus on it), which IMO is the best theme for gunslinger girl there. You also used a brown, it gives the illusion of furniture. I figure you just eye-pickered the color of her hair, but its still the best color. Lucky you. xD
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but as for the color, i picked a certain orange/brown, which fits the magic circle color and teana's hair color, not really at random for this one (i spend a lot of time on the BG color... sheesh, the beginning was rough ~~) Quote:
i guess i will have to think about it *breath* well, sounds like i finally got a good pace for "set". here is the third StrikerS signature, chibi 1, Erio : The structure is basically the same, but i changed the interface lines, which would give some difference between star and lightning squads. also, i interverted the personal "elements" (it is at the bottom instead of top for Erio and Caro) side note : "Geschwindigkeit" means "speed" in german last one won't be really easy, since i will have to struggle between searing pink, and sweet pink... (which, obviously, isn't really a fine color to manipulate with some tech aspects...)
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