2012-08-06, 06:34 | Link #35221 |
I am no one
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Memorze has only two I.S., two of them was with Len and Lun. However, their conventional weapon alone is enough to slow down potential assault temporarily. Spartan environment helped too.
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2012-08-06, 07:54 | Link #35233 | |
I am no one
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Not enough tension, someone can help spicing it?
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2012-08-06, 08:21 | Link #35236 |
I am no one
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I dunno, maybe it's because I read [Heavy Object]. It's lacking actual romance and being a war story probably the cause of influence, negating what I gained form humorous stories like [Blade Dance].
(It's an LN written by the author of Index BTW) I also feel it lacks the punch, hence I need someone help me directly about it.
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2012-08-06, 08:47 | Link #35238 | |
Just another Idiot
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THE DATA CAME FROM SPAM MAILS ALL OVER THE WORLD! LOLOL!!!! But serious, this is all to keep himself sane from thinking too much. However, you are right: Energy to Matter Hard Light is not a joke..... The technology actually work on Quantum Physic level.... something which lots of intelligent character would like to point out the impossibility of such technology... There is no limit on the nanomachine because once they run out of energy to maintain their form, they will decay over time quickly... you can only violate Physics for that long.....
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2012-08-06, 08:48 | Link #35239 |
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@zero: exactly. it feels like a war story or a report. The scene suggests teen sexual hormonal tension then sudden dispersion followed by what should be a punchline. All I gleaned was a nice infomercial on the facilities of ISA compared to regular facilities.
@age: actually the nanomachines cam remain stable but they just need more energy to stabilize material bonds. doing as you described would be pointedly inefficient as the material formation would follow a similar energy curve for chemical reactions. basically you have the choice between investing resources to finishing a structure or finish the structure half-way then hold it up till it has served its purpose then let it fall. Assuming matter really is just compressed massive amounts of energy. the impossibility of energy becoming matter is because you are focusing it. the natural tendency of energy is chaos so forcing it to a focal point would also require energy. basically forcing something that naturally scatters into a bundle that requires a lot of effort to bundle. Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-08-06 at 09:00. |
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